~*~Ajao kisi din...

Minha Shah · **~*~Ajao kisi din... -** 25th June 2008, 07:11 AM

~*~ Ajao kisi din k meri sans thami hai

anchal main phool bharkar teri rah taki hai

is ishq k alam ne muje qaid kar diya........

jism-o-jaan main ab bhi teri mehak basi hai~*~

Love Neha · **up to date work really -** 28th June 2008, 03:17 PM

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Originally Posted by Minha Shah

~*~ Ajao kisi din k meri sans thami hai

anchal main phool bharkar teri rah taki hai

is ishq k alam ne muje qaid kar diya........

jism-o-jaan main ab bhi teri mehak basi hai~*~

beautifuL minha very very beautifuL muje herat hai tumhare itne ache stanza pe abhi tak koi comment nahi diya kisi ne
i think log yahan nam dekh kar comment dete hain
aur tum new ho so wese really its up to date yar buhat khubsorat hai
tumne acha kia k muje kaha k main tumko comment karon agar tum nahi kehti aur main b nahi dekh pati tu muje dukh hota k main ne aik achi takhliq ko ignore kar diya

likhti rehna i will wait 4 u sweety

Minha Shah · **thanks for reply here -** 3rd July 2008, 08:35 PM

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Originally Posted by Love Neha

beautifuL minha very very beautifuL muje herat hai tumhare itne ache stanza pe abhi tak koi comment nahi diya kisi ne

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Originally Posted by Love Neha

i think log yahan nam dekh kar comment dete hain
aur tum new ho so wese really its up to date yar buhat khubsorat hai
tumne acha kia k muje kaha k main tumko comment karon agar tum nahi kehti aur main b nahi dekh pati tu muje dukh hota k main ne aik achi takhliq ko ignore kar diya

likhti rehna i will wait 4 u sweety

ji hosakta hai kahiin koi kammi reh hi gai hai
ainda koshish karongi ke mujh se koi ghalti na ho

acha agar loog naam dekh kar comment dete hain tu main koshish karongi k itna acha likhoon k loog badal jaeen ye meri khuahish hai

ji neha ji zaror koshish karongi dobara

thank u neha ji

sunita thakur · 4th July 2008, 10:07 AM

Minha....accha laga aapko padna...ahsaas acchey haiN aapke....behtar hoga agar aap es sher ko aage badao....

god bless u

Love Neha · 4th July 2008, 10:17 PM

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Originally Posted by Minha Shah

ji hosakta hai kahiin koi kammi reh hi gai hai
ainda koshish karongi ke mujh se koi ghalti na ho

acha agar loog naam dekh kar comment dete hain tu main koshish karongi k itna acha likhoon k loog badal jaeen ye meri khuahish hai

ji neha ji zaror koshish karongi dobara

thank u neha ji

hmm kami tu koi na koi reh hi jati hai lakin wo fan pare anmol hote hain jo aik dam hi dil ko choo lain

ALLAH tumko kamyab kare (amin)

thats like a good friend har insan ko try karte rehna chahiye aik na aik din success qadam chomti hai i believe it really damn sure

ur weLLcome sweet heart

Minha Shah · 6th July 2008, 07:15 AM

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Originally Posted by sunita virender

Minha....accha laga aapko padna...ahsaas acchey haiN aapke....behtar hoga agar aap es sher ko aage badao....

god bless u

thanks sunita ji ji main try karongi ke isee agee barha sakoon bas apki duaeen chahiye hain

Minha Shah · 6th July 2008, 07:20 AM

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Originally Posted by Love Neha

hmm kami tu koi na koi reh hi jati hai lakin wo fan pare anmol hote hain jo aik dam hi dil ko choo lain

ALLAH tumko kamyab kare (amin)

thats like a good friend har insan ko try karte rehna chahiye aik na aik din success qadam chomti hai i believe it really damn sure

ur weLLcome sweet heart

yes ye tu hai
ji thanks neha ji

Love Neha · 10th July 2008, 08:20 AM

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Originally Posted by Minha Shah

yes ye tu hai
ji thanks neha ji

mino ji weLL come but apko ane ko kaha tha na main ne u stupid larki ghar pohoncho foran

aur han nice stanza i m saying now as ur deeds too

love u honey

collection · 10th July 2008, 06:57 PM

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Originally Posted by Love Neha

hmm kami tu koi na koi reh hi jati hai lakin wo fan pare anmol hote hain jo aik dam hi dil ko choo lain

ALLAH tumko kamyab kare (amin)

thats like a good friend har insan ko try karte rehna chahiye aik na aik din success qadam chomti hai i believe it really damn sure

ur weLLcome sweet heart

kami kahan hai please explain kerien ...

saath me koi sujhao bi de diya karien takeh seekhne ko kuch mile

Minha Shah · 10th July 2008, 09:22 PM

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Originally Posted by Love Neha

mino ji weLL come but apko ane ko kaha tha na main ne u stupid larki ghar pohoncho foran

aur han nice stanza i m saying now as ur deeds too

love u honey

didi sorry na ajaongi acha suno di dekh rahi hoo tumko kiya comment mila hai

love u too

Minha Shah · **thanks 2 u... -** 10th July 2008, 09:27 PM

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Originally Posted by collection

kami kahan hai please explain kerien ...

saath me koi sujhao bi de diya karien takeh seekhne ko kuch mile

actually main apko iska reply dedeti hoon main ne hi minha ko kaha tha k kami hai but usne muje kaha tha k sab sahi hai tu main ne kaha tha k mujhko ziada replies nahi milee tu koi kammi hii hogi tu neha di ne kaha hai ke haan kammii tu har jaga reh jati hai...

this is the reality aur kuch nahi wese b wo meri didi hain i mean my cousin so its very personal

aur apka b thanks

Love Neha · 10th July 2008, 11:40 PM

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Originally Posted by collection

kami kahan hai please explain kerien ...

saath me koi sujhao bi de diya karien takeh seekhne ko kuch mile

band ki akhri satar main wazan bhari par raha hai alfaz main jhool hai kiyon k uska wazan ziada hai

any way mino apko bata chuki hai that whats the prob

ap har jaga ja kar mujhse sawaL kiyon kar rahe hain?

agar apko lage main ne beja ghalti nikali hai tu mujhe bataen sabit karen k asa kuch nahi jo main keh rahi hoon

rijaan · 12th July 2008, 09:11 PM

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Originally Posted by Minha Shah

~*~ Ajao kisi din k meri sans thami hai

anchal main phool bharkar teri rah taki hai

is ishq k alam ne muje qaid kar diya........

jism-o-jaan main ab bhi teri mehak basi hai~*~

wery nice bahoot khub likha hai aap jaise koi ter dil ke par nikal kar chala gaya lekin aap ne ek line jo likhi hai ye wali,,,, is ishq k alam ne muje qaid kar diya ise thoda aur khayalat ke andaj me likh na tha but well dun aap bahoot khub likha hai......., mai aap ko kuch rep de raha hu shayad aap ko bi pasand ayenge... pasand aye to pls rep dena jarur mai aap ke rep ka interjar karunga..........,

Mujhse wo judaa naa ho jaaye,

Jindagi kahin Be-mazaa naa ho jaaye,

Mazaa aata hai pyaar karne mein,

pyaar mera kahin khafaa naa ho jaaye,

Shahar ki Be-chiraag galiyon mein,

Gum kahin manzil ka rastaa naa ho jaaye,

Aaj uunse kuch maang hi loon yaaron,

Wo kahin kal Be-wafaa naa ho jayae

IS JAHAN MEH PATHAR KE INSHAAN REHTE HAI,

SABHI EK DUSRE KO SHAITAN KEHTE HAI,

BAHUT DUNDA MAGAR NAHI MILA

LOG JISE BHAGWAN KEHTE HAI

Matlabi hai yeh duniya,

Yahan kaun kiskahota hai,

Dhooka bhi wahi deta hai

Jis pe bharosa hota hai.

Lehar aati hai kinare se palat jaati hai

Yaad aati hai dil mein bas jaati hai

Dono mein faraq itna hi hai lehar bewaqt aati hai

Aur tumhari
yaad har waqt aati hai......

Hum me thi na koi baat

Yaad na tum ko aa sake

Tumne hame bhoola diya

Hum na tumhe bhula sakee...

Thanx..

rijaan007@@yahoo.com > rijaan007@rediffmail.com

collection · 07:38 PM

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Originally Posted by Minha Shah

actually main apko iska reply dedeti hoon main ne hi minha ko kaha tha k kami hai but usne muje kaha tha k sab sahi hai tu main ne kaha tha k mujhko ziada replies nahi milee tu koi kammi hii hogi tu neha di ne kaha hai ke haan kammii tu har jaga reh jati hai...

this is the reality aur kuch nahi wese b wo meri didi hain i mean my cousin so its very personal

aur apka b thanks

thanks for reply , ager yeh appka very personal problem hai to app ise personal message me solve kiyon nahi ker lety ? kisi ko tanqeed kerne ka mauqa bhi nahi mile ga

collection · 13th July 2008, 07:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Love Neha

band ki akhri satar main wazan bhari par raha hai alfaz main jhool hai kiyon k uska wazan ziada hai

any way mino apko bata chuki hai that whats the prob

ap har jaga ja kar mujhse sawaL kiyon kar rahe hain?

agar apko lage main ne beja ghalti nikali hai tu mujhe bataen sabit karen k asa kuch nahi jo main keh rahi hoon

yeh bilkul perfect hai , appne kaafia check kiya hi nahi aur direct beher matlab wazan check kerne lagi , yeh bhi theek hai , nahi appne bilkul sahi ghalti nikaali hai , main to khud bhi seekh raha hon is liye socha app jese achy shayron se hi kuch na kuch pooch liya jaaey
thanks for reply

Love Neha · 16th July 2008, 01:49 PM

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Originally Posted by collection

yeh bilkul perfect hai , appne kaafia check kiya hi nahi aur direct beher matlab wazan check kerne lagi , yeh bhi theek hai , nahi appne bilkul sahi ghalti nikaali hai , main to khud bhi seekh raha hon is liye socha app jese achy shayron se hi kuch na kuch pooch liya jaaey
thanks for reply

ur weLL come collection ji
any time

rijaan · 27th July 2008, 07:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Minha Shah

~*~ Ajao kisi din k meri sans thami hai

anchal main phool bharkar teri rah taki hai

is ishq k alam ne muje qaid kar diya........

jism-o-jaan main ab bhi teri mehak basi hai~*~

mind bloing kya likha hai aap ne realy bahot khub likha hai mai apne sabi friends grup me ye shear karunga muje bahot acchi lagi aap ki shayri aise hi likhti raho...., mai aap ke lie ek sher arj kar raha hu shayad aap ko bi jarur pasand aaye, to pls jarur rep dena..........,

Door sahi Majboor Sahi
Yaad tumhari aati hai
naam wahan tum lete ho
awaz yehan tak aati hai

mayank p soni · 10th August 2008, 05:31 PM

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Originally Posted by Minha Shah

~*~ Ajao kisi din k meri sans thami hai

anchal main phool bharkar teri rah taki hai

is ishq k alam ne muje qaid kar diya........

jism-o-jaan main ab bhi teri mehak basi hai~*~

woh aaye na aaye hum intazar kiya karte hai kaafir hai woh fir bhi hum unhishe mahobbat kiya karte hai puchhe jo koi hale dile kato palko men aanshu dile men gum chhupakar mushkura diya karte hai anjaan nahi hum unki bewafai she firbhi unhishe hum wafa ki umeed kiya karte hai bhalehi pyaar bhari nazroshe na shahi nafrat bhari nazro she kabhi kabaar vo bhi humara didaar kiya karte hai

rizi_humtum · 10th August 2008, 05:49 PM

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Originally Posted by Minha Shah

~*~ Ajao kisi din k meri sans thami hai

anchal main phool bharkar teri rah taki hai

is ishq k alam ne muje qaid kar diya........

jism-o-jaan main ab bhi teri mehak basi hai~*~

bohat khoob minha shah ji kya baat hai.bohat khoob andaz hai kisi ko bulane ka sach main app ne jo sentence likhe hain waqai main kamal k hain..

or main neha ki bat se zehmat hon.meri ye adaat nahi hai k kon naya hai kon purana hai.muje jis ki post achi lagti hai main usko lazmi comment deta hon app ki post main ne abi dekhi hai es lia abi he comments de raha hon.

Aao sath main duniya ko bant le hamari
asmaan ap ka sitare hamaray
suraj apka roshni humari
chalo ese karo sub kuch ap ka
or app hamaray.

ye humari friendship k lia tha ap ko acha laga to bataiye ga.ager bura laga to be,ok apna khayal rakhna.or ayse he post kerte rahen.....

rizi_humtum · 10th August 2008, 05:54 PM

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Originally Posted by mayank p soni

woh aaye na aaye hum intazar kiya karte hai kaafir hai woh fir bhi hum unhishe mahobbat kiya karte hai puchhe jo koi hale dile kato palko men aanshu dile men gum chhupakar mushkura diya karte hai anjaan nahi hum unki bewafai she firbhi unhishe hum wafa ki umeed kiya karte hai bhalehi pyaar bhari nazroshe na shahi nafrat bhari nazro she kabhi kabaar vo bhi humara didaar kiya karte hai

bohat mazrat chahta hon mayan p soni ji app apni pic change karo gy.bohat bayanek pic hai.plz meherbani ker es ko change ker den.bura laga to sorry muj se ye pic dekhi nahi ja rahi thi es lia main ne ye kaha hai...