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Aah nahi nikali - 13th May 2015, 12:00 AM
Ki Vo qatli kar gaye dil se ek aah hi niklee
Unki is gustakhee pe wah wah hi niklee.

Dile nadaan tau bechain hai milne ko abhi,
Unke ek deedar ki man se chah hi niklee.

Kasam teri bin tere yuN jee na paoonga ,
Haseen wadion meiN pyar ki fiza hi nikli.

Log kehte kafir maiN ab ibadat nahi karta,
Tere sajde mein teri salamti ki dua hi Nikli.

Vo kehte hain chandni per gayi madhamm,
Tere gesuon mein chipi ek khiza hi nikli.

Suraj ab mujh ko dekh ker muskurata hai ,
Hamdam dil meiN dard ki intehah hi nakali


khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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15th May 2015, 01:08 PM
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Ki Vo qatli kar gaye dil se ek aah hi niklee
Unki is gustakhee pe wah wah hi niklee.

Dile nadaan tau bechain hai milne ko abhi,
Unke ek deedar ki man se chah hi niklee.

Kasam teri bin tere yuN jee na paoonga ,
Haseen wadion meiN pyar ki fiza hi nikli.

Log kehte kafir maiN ab ibadat nahi karta,
Tere sajde mein teri salamti ki dua hi Nikli.

Vo kehte hain chandni per gayi madhamm,
Tere gesuon mein chipi ek khiza hi nikli.

Suraj ab mujh ko dekh ker muskurata hai ,
Hamdam dil meiN dard ki intehah hi nakali
Bahut achchi peshkash sanjay jii..
ishq me gustakhiyon par bhi waah niklna lazmi hai......
Likhte rahein...


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acchi koshish pesh ki hai sanjay saahab....... bahot khoob.... kuch ek kaafiyaa ko durust karne ki zaruurat ab bhi baaki hai........... likhte rahiye....koshish karte rahiye

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15th May 2015, 09:53 PM
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Ki Vo qatli kar gaye dil se ek aah hi niklee
Unki is gustakhee pe wah wah hi niklee.

Dile nadaan tau bechain hai milne ko abhi,
Unke ek deedar ki man se chah hi niklee.

Kasam teri bin tere yuN jee na paoonga ,
Haseen wadion meiN pyar ki fiza hi nikli.

Log kehte kafir maiN ab ibadat nahi karta,
Tere sajde mein teri salamti ki dua hi Nikli.

Vo kehte hain chandni per gayi madhamm,
Tere gesuon mein chipi ek khiza hi nikli.

Suraj ab mujh ko dekh ker muskurata hai ,
Hamdam dil meiN dard ki intehah hi nakali
Sanjay bhai khoob ehsaas hue, yunhi ehsaas-e-dil bayaan karte rahiYe...

Wah chah se aapne qaafiya baaki sheron mein alag kar diya, ek baar qaafiye par dubaara nazar daalein to subhanallah mazaa aa jaaye.


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Bahut achchi peshkash sanjay jii..
ishq me gustakhiyon par bhi waah niklna lazmi hai......
Likhte rahein...

Madhu ji , kalam ki tareef ke liye main apka abahri hun .YuN hi hunsala badate raheiN aur bazzm ki raunak badate rahein , kabhi 2 rep points bhi dete raheiN

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31st May 2015, 07:32 AM
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acchi koshish pesh ki hai sanjay saahab....... bahot khoob.... kuch ek kaafiyaa ko durust karne ki zaruurat ab bhi baaki hai........... likhte rahiye....koshish karte rahiye

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Shoaib bhai ..shukriya . Rahi kafiya ki baat kabhi kabhi likte likhte kalam idhar udhar bhatak jaati hai aur main technicalities se pare chala jata huN..koshish karunga ki galti kam se kam ho..

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31st May 2015, 09:07 AM
Very nice sanjay jee......ehsaasosn ko bakhoobi vyakt kiya hai aapne


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wah sanjay bhai khoob apne ehsaason ko shabdon me piroya hai
bahut khoob

duaon ke saath

radhe radhe

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Sanjay bhai khoob ehsaas hue, yunhi ehsaas-e-dil bayaan karte rahiYe...

Wah chah se aapne qaafiya baaki sheron mein alag kar diya, ek baar qaafiye par dubaara nazar daalein to subhanallah mazaa aa jaaye.
Shukriya janab jo aapne humara kalam bareeki se para aur kami pe raushni daali

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Very nice sanjay jee......ehsaasosn ko bakhoobi vyakt kiya hai aapne

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wah sanjay bhai khoob apne ehsaason ko shabdon me piroya hai
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duaon ke saath

radhe radhe

Rajinder ji yeh tau aapka badappan hai , verna hum kahan tareef ke kabil haiN.

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