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main tujhe vo taare la kar dunga -
10th July 2014, 10:09 AM
Vo jo timtimate hain door aasmaaN mein,
Main tujhe vo taare la kar dunga,
Jaanta hun tera ek se man na bharega,
Main tujhe vo saare la kar dunga,
Ab to hans de too bhi jaldi se,
Main tujhe vo taare la kar dunga,
Rakhega too jis jis pe ungli,
Main tujhe vo saare la kar dunga,
Kya rakha hai in chabhi wale khilono mein,
Kuch der chal ke ye ruk jaayenge,
Khelna too ab chaand aur taaron se,
Main tujhe vo saare la kar dunga,
Too tod bhi dena inko jee bhar ke,
Too baant bhi dena inko doston ko,
Hona na too kabhi pareshaaN,
Main tujhe vo saare la kar dunga,
Vo jo timtimate hain door aasmaaN mein,
Main tujhe vo taare la kar dunga,
Jaanta hun tera ek se man na bharega,
Main tujhe vo saare la kar dunga,
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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10th July 2014, 10:22 AM
Khoob pahchana ek bachche ke dil ko...tera ek se man na bharega main tujhe vo sare lakar doonga.....bahut badiya.
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10th July 2014, 11:27 AM
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Originally Posted by aru
Vo jo timtimate hain door aasmaaN mein,
Main tujhe vo taare la kar dunga,
Jaanta hun tera ek se man na bharega,
Main tujhe vo saare la kar dunga,
Ab to hans de too bhi jaldi se,
Main tujhe vo taare la kar dunga,
Rakhega too jis jis pe ungli,
Main tujhe vo saare la kar dunga,
Kya rakha hai in chabhi wale khilono mein,
Kuch der chal ke ye ruk jaayenge,
Khelna too ab chaand aur taaron se,
Main tujhe vo saare la kar dunga,
Too tod bhi dena inko jee bhar ke,
Too baant bhi dena inko doston ko,
Hona na too kabhi pareshaaN,
Main tujhe vo saare la kar dunga,
Vo jo timtimate hain door aasmaaN mein,
Main tujhe vo taare la kar dunga,
Jaanta hun tera ek se man na bharega,
Main tujhe vo saare la kar dunga,
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bahot khub Aru ji
i can very well relate to each line
thnx for sharing
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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10th July 2014, 11:43 PM
sneh dulaar aur maasoomiyat se bhari is rachna par apaar prem umad aata hai Aru ji .... bahaut bahaut si daad aur mubaarakbaad is par !!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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11th July 2014, 12:23 AM
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Originally Posted by aru
Vo jo timtimate hain door aasmaaN mein,
Main tujhe vo taare la kar dunga,
Jaanta hun tera ek se man na bharega,
Main tujhe vo saare la kar dunga,
Ab to hans de too bhi jaldi se,
Main tujhe vo taare la kar dunga,
Rakhega too jis jis pe ungli,
Main tujhe vo saare la kar dunga,
Kya rakha hai in chabhi wale khilono mein,
Kuch der chal ke ye ruk jaayenge,
Khelna too ab chaand aur taaron se,
Main tujhe vo saare la kar dunga,
Too tod bhi dena inko jee bhar ke,
Too baant bhi dena inko doston ko,
Hona na too kabhi pareshaaN,
Main tujhe vo saare la kar dunga,
Vo jo timtimate hain door aasmaaN mein,
Main tujhe vo taare la kar dunga,
Jaanta hun tera ek se man na bharega,
Main tujhe vo saare la kar dunga,
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good one Aru ji. ...................................
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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11th July 2014, 02:28 AM
Arvind Jii,,
Aik khoobsorat nazm k liye dherooN daad qabool kijiye,
DuaooN k saath,,
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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11th July 2014, 02:11 PM
laaazzzzzwaaaaaaaaab
aru bhaaiiiiiii bahut hi khubshurati se aapne apne dil ki baat rachnaa ke zariye yahaN kahi hai... ati uttaaaaaaaaammmm
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16th July 2014, 11:15 AM
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Originally Posted by aru
Vo jo timtimate hain door aasmaaN mein,
Main tujhe vo taare la kar dunga,
Jaanta hun tera ek se man na bharega,
Main tujhe vo saare la kar dunga,
Ab to hans de too bhi jaldi se,
Main tujhe vo taare la kar dunga,
Rakhega too jis jis pe ungli,
Main tujhe vo saare la kar dunga,
Kya rakha hai in chabhi wale khilono mein,
Kuch der chal ke ye ruk jaayenge,
Khelna too ab chaand aur taaron se,
Main tujhe vo saare la kar dunga,
Too tod bhi dena inko jee bhar ke,
Too baant bhi dena inko doston ko,
Hona na too kabhi pareshaaN,
Main tujhe vo saare la kar dunga,
Vo jo timtimate hain door aasmaaN mein,
Main tujhe vo taare la kar dunga,
Jaanta hun tera ek se man na bharega,
Main tujhe vo saare la kar dunga,
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bahot khoob Aru jji........... bahot hi khoob manodashaa chitrit kii hai aapne... mubaarak ho
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17th July 2014, 11:38 AM
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Khoob pahchana ek bachche ke dil ko...tera ek se man na bharega main tujhe vo sare lakar doonga.....bahut badiya.
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Thanx a lot madhu ji.,aapki daad sar aankhon pe....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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23rd July 2014, 04:19 PM
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bahot khub Aru ji
i can very well relate to each line
thnx for sharing
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thanx pari for.liking and appreciating........u can correlate it very well.....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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24th August 2014, 04:20 PM
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sneh dulaar aur maasoomiyat se bhari is rachna par apaar prem umad aata hai Aru ji .... bahaut bahaut si daad aur mubaarakbaad is par !!
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Thanx zarra jee....aapka saath yun hee bana rahe.....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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good one Aru ji. ...................................
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Thanx a lot zainy jee............................
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3rd August 2015, 01:34 PM
bahut hi sunder likha h aru bhai.....
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nice effort aru ji............................................
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