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23rd November 2009, 05:54 PM
DostoN bahot dino baad aaj mehfil me kuch pesh kar rahi huuN....ummid hai aapko meri yeh koshish pasand aayegi...Padhiye aur izhaar-e-Khayaal zaroor farmaaiye...
YakeeN apni mohabbat ka dilauN kaisey Jo ruuth jaaye tu mujhse tou manauN kaisey Meri waffa ko samajhta hai bewafai tu Bata dey rasm-e-mohabbat nibhauN kaisey Tera hi naam sunati hai dil ki har dhadkan Sadayen dil ke dhadakne ki sunauN kaisey Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy" MaiN aise phooloN se khwaboN ko sajauN kaisey Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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23rd November 2009, 06:02 PM
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Likhte rahein aur apna khayaal rakhiyegaa, ok...? With blessings  Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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23rd November 2009, 06:10 PM
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umda bahot umda...iss ghazal main sangeet pirooya ja sakta hai aur behad asardaar banegi composition..aam aadmi bhi samjh aur mehsoos kar sakta hai.. (aur meri nzar main aam aadmi bahot khaas hota hai gar uska dil jeet liya to kya kehne) very good..keep writing...god bless. saare sher pasand aaye mujhe...i liked d simplicity... aapka dost, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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23rd November 2009, 06:14 PM
Zainy Ji...Namaste ! aapki rachna ki khushbu se har ashaar mehak raha hai....kahi dil ki tarap ko bhi dikhat hai aaphi yeh ghazal....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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23rd November 2009, 07:52 PM
Zainy Ji...Namaste ! aapki rachna ki khushbu se har ashaar mehak raha hai....kahi dil ki tarap bhi dikhai deti hai....jo mann ke taaron ko jhankrit karti hai..... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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23rd November 2009, 08:12 PM
Zainy Ji,
Bahot khoob likha hai, Tahe dil se mubarak baad kubul kijiye Rashid Quote:
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23rd November 2009, 09:14 PM
Wah Wah,,
Boht Khoob,,, An out-standing creation Zainy Jii,, Maqta boht achaa laga mujhe,, Likhtey rahiye ga,, HSN tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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23rd November 2009, 10:23 PM
bahut khoob ZAINY...............
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23rd November 2009, 10:31 PM
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Zainy jii, Aaj aapko pehli martaba padha hai, aur padh ke bahut achha laga. Bahut khubsoorat Ghazal kahi hai aapne, dil ki gehraiyoN se wah wah! Nikal rahi hai.... Bahut khoob! Waise to sare sheyr hi badhiya bane haiN lekin neeche wale 2 mujhe khaas pasand aaye: Tera hi naam sunati hai dil ki har dhadkan Sadayen dil ke dhadakne ki sunauN kaisey Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy" MaiN aise phooloN se khwaboN ko sajauN kaisey Aise hi likhti rahiye...... Duaon ke saath ijaazat, Vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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23rd November 2009, 11:16 PM
Dear Zainy
bahut accha likha hai....vaise to poori gazal acchi lagi par yeh 2 sher khaas rahe. YakeeN apni mohabbat ka dilauN kaisey Jo ruuth jaaye tu mujhse tou manauN kaisey Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey kush raho diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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23rd November 2009, 11:35 PM
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Very good Zainy, esp these two Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy" MaiN aise phooloN se khwaboN ko sajauN kaisey magar yeh samajh nahin aayaa Meri jafa ko samajhta hai bewafai tu Bata dey rasm-e-mohabbat nibhauN kaisey किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं |
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24th November 2009, 02:41 PM
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I think yeh mis-type ho gaya hai "wafa" ki jaga "jafa" type hogaya.. Coz jafa also means bewafai.... tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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24th November 2009, 02:45 PM
zainy Jee aadaab.........
AApki gazal dekhker bahut achcha laga......... Kafi khoobsurat khayalon se less hai aapki yeh gazal....... Daad di na jaye to beshak gazal ki tohin hi hogi......... Behad khoob alfaaz aur adaygii se saji aapki is gazal ke sabhi sher ek se badhker ek lage.... Har sher per daad ......... Khoobsurat gazal per dil se daad kabool kijiye... Ek mistake nazar aayi thi aap ne door kar dii....... "Wafa ko Jafa kiya tha jo aapne" Quote:
Khush rhaiye...... Khuda Hafez........ 
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24th November 2009, 06:06 PM
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Danny ji mujhe khushi hai keh aapko meri ghazal pasand aayi,4th sher tou mera bhi favourite hai.... yuhi saath dete rahiye. shukriyah Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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25th November 2009, 10:43 AM
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pradhyuman ji... bahut din baad aapka deedaar ho raha hai ! kaise haiN aap ? zarra nawazishoN ki maiN hamesha se hi aihsaanmand rahi huN !aapko ashaar achhe lage meri khushnasiiibii !jis andaaz se aapne meri ghazal ki tareef ki hai, woh bhi dilchasp hai... ..mujhe khushi hai ke aapko meri yeh adnaa si koshish pasand aayi...yuN hi hausla afzaayii karte rahiye ! apna khyaal rakhiye ! Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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25th November 2009, 01:22 PM
Zainy..
namaste! kaise hoN aap? baRe dinoN baad aapki peShkaSh paRhne kaa mauqaa milaa.. qaabil-e-taareef rahiiN aapki yeh koShiSh.. umdaah ehsaas! yuuNhi liKhate raheN aage bhee .. bazm ki raunaQ baRhaate raheN... ! daad! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN aapka Dhaval bhaa'ii |
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26th November 2009, 12:32 AM
Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey ahem ahem .............. pahle to apne dil ki raza jaan jayiye fir jo nigaah-e-yaar kahe maan jayie kateel ji ne kaah hia humne dohraa diya man nahi bhara aur likhe ... itni kanjoosi theek nahi hai ji |
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26th November 2009, 02:42 PM
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Aapka bohat bohat shukriyaH naresh ji..aap meri ghazal per aaye aur meri ghazal ko pasand kiya.... aapne tou kuch zyada hi tareef kar di hai meri is ghazal ki, koshish karungi ke aagey se aur bhi accha likhuN.. yuhi saath dete rahiyega Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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28th November 2009, 02:40 PM
Zainy jii
Aap tou Masha-Allah bahot khoob likhti hain.............................................. ..... dil se daad haazir hai.......................................... Aise hi achhi achhi ghazlon se mehfil ki shaan badhati rahiye........................ khush rahiye Apka dost fezan . . Koi Aisa Kamaal Ho Jaye Zindigi Be-Misaal Ho Jaye
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30th November 2009, 03:20 PM
Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy" MaiN aise phooloN se khwaboN ko sajauN kaisey Bahot khoob ehsaaso-khayalaat hai jainy.. likhti rahen. allah hafiz shaad. |
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30th November 2009, 07:01 PM
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ek sher aapki hi tarz par.. khoob hota hai mere dil manzar yeh bhi pyaas aankhon ki pyaalon se bhujhaaon kaisey.. yunhi likhte rahiyeGaa.. Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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30th November 2009, 09:19 PM
Zainy jii...
kaise hain aap? Ek lambhe arrse baad aapne kuch pesh kiya ... aur har sher dil ko chu raha hai.. puri ki puri ghazl pasand aayii ... umeed karti hu ab aap ese hi mehfil saajaatye rahye ... Take care aapki mandeep ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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5th December 2009, 11:35 AM
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Bohat bohat shukriyah Rashid saheb......yuhi saath dete rahiye... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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5th December 2009, 11:43 AM
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Hassan saheb..... Aap ko yahaaN dekh kar behad khushi huyii.. aap ne Kalaam ko padhne ke liye waqt nikaala aur isay saraaha is ke liye tah e dil se shukriyah..'Inshallah'!!.. koshish jaari rahegi... yuhi saath dete rahiyega.. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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5th December 2009, 11:45 AM
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THANKS LAMHA............................... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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7th December 2009, 04:38 PM
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vikram saheb sabse pehle tou maiN aapka is bazm meiN shirkat karne ke liye shukriya adaa kar duuN aur khush-aam-deed aapko yahaaN dekh kar behad khushii huii hai aapne Ghazal pasaNd farmaaya hai, shukriyah maiN iNtehaa'ii shukurguzaar huuN aapka yahaaN aane ke liye aur meri hauNslaa-afzaa'ii karne ke liye, ummiid hai aap yuuN hi aage bhi saath dete raheNge Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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21st December 2009, 09:26 AM
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Aapka bohat bohat shukriyaH Sunita di...mujhe khushi hai ke aapko meri ghazal pasand aayi... yuhi saath deti rahiye.. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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21st December 2009, 09:31 AM
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SHUKRIYAH MAYOOS SAHEB, Aapko meri ghazal pasand aayi, zehnaseeb.... jis sher ki aap baat kar rahe haiN, usme thodi si typing mistake thi, jo maine theek kardi hai, plzz check... once again thanks for honour........... yuhi saath dete rahiyega............. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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21st December 2009, 10:43 AM
Zainy G ............... bahut aache... me kisi ek sher ko aacha kaise kahu samajh nahi aa rahi ... mujhe to apki puri ghazal hi dhamakedar lagi
 (๏̯͡๏) (๏̯͡๏) Hasratein dilo ki chupaye nahi chupti hai, dard juba par bankar bayan sab karti hai..... ***************************** Dard ki mehfil me ek sher hum bhi aarz kiya karte hai.. Na kisi se marham Na duaon ki Ummed kiya karte hai.. kayi chehre lekar log yaha jiya karte hai....... hum in aasunao ko ek chehre ke liye peeya karte hai.... |
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22nd December 2009, 03:21 AM
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Bhut khoob aapke matle ka jawaab nahi ghazal ke saare hi aashaar daad ke haqdaar hai qubool keejiye aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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13th July 2010, 09:25 PM
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Shukriyah sameer sahab.................................. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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13th July 2010, 09:27 PM
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Mujhe khushi hai ke aapko meri ghazal pasand aayi Dhaval bhai.... yuhi saath dete rahiye.............. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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13th July 2010, 09:31 PM
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Shukriyah Vikas bhai, Ji koshish tou rehti hai ke zyada se zyada likhuN per waqt ki kami ki wajah se kayi ghazaleiN puri nahi ho paati.... Mood change ho jaata hai tou ghazal bhi adhuri hi reh jaati hai........ yuhi saath dete rahiye Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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8th December 2010, 01:58 AM
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Bohat bohat shukriyaH Fezan sahab..... Yuhi saath dete rahiye....... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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8th December 2010, 02:02 AM
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Shukriyah Sameer sahab,, Der se reply de rahi huuN,iske liye maafi ki talabgaar huuN.... ummid hai aap sab meri masrufiyat ko laparwaahi ka naam nahi denge, Yuhi saath dete rahiye. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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8th December 2010, 02:07 AM
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Shukriyah Anu ji... Aajkal kahaaN ghayab haiN aap? Sdc per nazar hi nahi aate...?? Aate rahiye, Sdc per aap jaise acche shayer aur khadadaan ki kami mehsoos hoti hai Aur aapka sher waqay lajawaab hai...bohat khoob DuaoN ke saath Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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8th December 2010, 01:05 PM
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Zainy Ji........ Boht Acha Laga Aap Ko Parhna.... Boht Achay Khayalaat Ko Boht Achay Alfaaz Me Piroya Hai Aap Ne.... ALLAH AAP KO KHUSH RAKHAY Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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8th December 2010, 04:49 PM
bahut khoob...........................................
Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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8th December 2010, 09:49 PM
Meri waffa ko samajhta hai bewafai tu
Bata dey rasm-e-mohabbat nibhauN kaisey Bahaut khooooooooooooooob Zainy ji Her sher laajawaab hai puri Gazal dil ko chooo gai .....................................
Dil jalaa ke poochhte haiN badii masoomiyat se woh. Shamaa ka hi kyuN muqaddar hai raat bhar jalnaa. Dr. Imtiaz Nazish |
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26th October 2011, 04:37 PM
Zainy Ji ... Sa-Parivaar Haardik ShubhkaamnaayeN ... Happy DiwaaLi .. !
DiwaaLi Parv Ke Mauqe Par ... Ummeed Kartaa HooN ... Jald Aapki Nayi Peshkash Hume PaDhne Ko Milegii ......... !!! YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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