dharmyudh

brijbhan singh · 09:09 PM

Hindu muslim k dange ho rahe hai jara si bat pe
ye dharmban kisne phenka h dharmanirpekshta ki bisat pe

jo mnate the abhi tak sath me id or holi
vo 2 kadam bhi ni chalte hai sath me

lahoo hi lahoo ka pyasa hai
kisko sukun milta hai is khuni barsat me

muslimo ko gaddar or hinduo ko kafir kaha jata hai
kya bigada hai ek duje ka ram rahim or ashfak ne

khud ko na bkhsa usi ke dar pe ladte ho
kalank ho tum insaniyat ki jat pe

brij sochta hai nastik ho jata hu
bcha to rhunga is jhagde ki fasad se

Madhu 14 · 12th November 2015, 09:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by brijbhan singh

Hindu muslim k dange ho rahe hai jara si bat pe
ye dharmban kisne phenka h dharmanirpekshta ki bisat pe

jo mnate the abhi tak sath me id or holi
vo 2 kadam bhi ni chalte hai sath me

lahoo hi lahoo ka pyasa hai
kisko sukun milta hai is khuni barsat me

muslimo ko gaddar or hinduo ko kafir kaha jata hai
kya bigada hai ek duje ka ram rahim or ashfak ne

khud ko na bkhsa usi ke dar pe ladte ho
kalank ho tum insaniyat ki jat pe

brij sochta hai nastik ho jata hu
bcha to rhunga is jhagde ki fasad se

waaah....bahut khoob khayaal pesh kiye..ek sanvedansheel shayr ke dil se nikla kalaam.....daad qubool kijiye...
(Ho sake to Thoda font size bada rakhein to padhne me aur bhi asaani hogi )....

Likhte rahiye aur bhi achcha......

brijbhan singh · **dhanyawad -** 12th November 2015, 09:30 PM

[QUOTE=Madhu 14;488779][B]waaah....bahut khoob khayaal pesh kiye..ek sanvedansheel shayr ke dil se nikla kalaam.....daad qubool kijiye...
(Ho sake to Thoda font size bada rakhein to padhne me aur bhi asaani hogi )....

Likhte rahiye aur bhi achcha......
madhu ji dhanyawad apni kimtisalah ke liye par mujhe pta nhi h ki font kse bde kiye jata hai

Qasid · 12th November 2015, 09:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by brijbhan singh

Hindu muslim k dange ho rahe hai jara si bat pe
ye dharmban kisne phenka h dharmanirpekshta ki bisat pe

jo mnate the abhi tak sath me id or holi
vo 2 kadam bhi ni chalte hai sath me

lahoo hi lahoo ka pyasa hai
kisko sukun milta hai is khuni barsat me

muslimo ko gaddar or hinduo ko kafir kaha jata hai
kya bigada hai ek duje ka ram rahim or ashfak ne

khud ko na bkhsa usi ke dar pe ladte ho
kalank ho tum insaniyat ki jat pe

brij sochta hai nastik ho jata hu
bcha to rhunga is jhagde ki fasad se

aapke jazbaat padhkar aapni kuch rachnaayein yaad aa gayi...khayaal ek hi alfaaz mukhtalif hain....ek nazar daaliyegaa

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=78409

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=73381

brijbhan singh · 13th November 2015, 07:13 AM

dhanyavad mast ji mera sath dene ke liye or apni anmol rachnayen padne ka moka dene ke liye