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phooljaan se manda tak ka safar -
10th February 2006, 02:09 PM
Phooljaan se manda tak ka safar
Manda baramde ke otae par baithi thi . hath mai kaichi aur paper tha… n janae kyun kaat rahi thi. Mai paas gayi.. aur pith par hath ferte kaha, “ kaisi ho? Kya kar rahi ho? Lag n jaaye kahi kaichi … samhaal ke.. jara” manda mushkuraai.. “ didi.. aap aa gayi. Mai paper ko gol kaat rahi hu. Gol ho hi nahi raha . aap kaat do na.. aao yaha baitho na paas mai” mai manda ke paas baith gayi. Hath mai kaichi aur paper lete huae maine akha , “ thik se kaat nahi paayi mai to gusaa to nahi karogi na?” “kya didi aap bhi…” manda mushkura kar boli. Maine gol aakar mai paper kaat diya… manda ko dete huae pucha .. k dekho ab thik hai?” oongliyo se paper ko tatol kar dekhti rahi manda aur fir kaha, “ haan bilkul thik hai” maine pucha, “ kya karogi ab iska?” “didi.. paise rakhne ka batuwa banaaungi.. to ooske base mai yah paper daalne se thhoda kadak rahega na . is liye. Mai manda ki soch se khush hui. Manda kuch tumhare bare mai bataaogi? Mere puchne par manda ne mera hath pakad liya.. aur kaha .. didi… soonogi ? aur manda ke sath mai ooske waqt mai chal padi. Jab manda ne kaha ke pahlay ooska naam ‘phooljaan’ tha.. ‘phooljaan’ naam soon kar mera dhyaan gaur se ooske chehre par gaya.. meri nazar dundhne lagi ek aisa chehra jis mai phool jaisi jaan ho. Par gaore rang ke sath sapaat chehre ke alawa kuch nazar nahi aaya. Ek pal ko chaand ki mahezabin bhi yaad aa gayi.. mahezabin ko ooska naam puchne par who kahti – ‘abbu ki jaan’ . par west bangaal ke kisi chhote se shahar mai rahti phooljaan shayed apne abbu ki jaan n thi… hoti to bhari baarish mai.. tapte bukhaar mai bilakhti 5 saal ki phholjaan ko ooski maa k sath aspataal tak chhod kar kahi chala n jaata.. aspataal mai kamra n mila… maa roti rahi.. aspataal ke baramde mai .. 3 din lagataar behoshi se aalam mai phooljaan murjhati gayi… dr. ne bedarkaari se kah diya k yah ladki to mar gayi hai.. maa sar par hath rakh kar foot foot ke rone lagi. Tabhi phooljaan ne halke se aankhe kholi.. aankh khuli to sahi par is bukhaar ne .. ooski aankho ki roshni le li thi.. phooljaan andhi ho gayi thi. Ooske abaa aaye the oose lene . fir kai jagah par ilaaj k liye le kar bhi gaye par aankh ki roshni wapas nahi aayi. Oose Dumb and Deaf school mai daakhila mila . padhne mai tez thi. Par hath se sparsh kar k padhne ko humesha sust ho jaati.. ooski kaabiliyat dekh kar principal ne Oose puchha… mumbai jaaogi ? aage padhne ? aur yuwaan ho rahi phooljaan mumbai aayi. Yaha sanstha ke aashram mai rahti thi or aage padhti thi. Ab ooska padhna yaani .. sirf padhna nahi tha… sath mai khud ko aage badhane ki taiyaariya thi.. jivan ke sangharsh mai kaise hasna yah sikh rahi thi yaha phooljaan . chhutiyo mai ghar gayi thi .. waha ja kar niraash ho gayi. Ghar mai abaa nahi the . oose kaha gaya ke abba mar gaye… par oosne muje kaha k didi .. abba mare nahi the .. mujse sab juth kahte rahe.. muje pata chal gaya tha abba humae chhod kar chale gaye the kisi aur ke paas.. ghar ki garibi .. maa ki bismaar haalat .. phooljaan ne tay kiya .. ab mumbai mai hi rahegi.. yaha nahi aayegi… abbaa ki yaad jahan se jaati nahi thi yaha par. Wapas aa kar oosne sanstha ke oopri se baat ki. Muje aage bhi yahi rahna hai… muje koi kaam chhaiye… Aur ek production co. mai naukri mil gayi .. kaam tha… box mai saaman rakh kar warranty card daal kar box pack karna. Teen saal ki is naukri mai phooljaan ki pagaar 450 rs. Se 900 rs. Hui. Sath mai kaam karte ek saahab ne kaha k, “phooljaan shadi karogi ? ek ladka hai meri nazar mai..” Aur Phooljaan ki shadi ho gayi.. Maharashtriyan vitthal se shadi kar ke phooljaan ab manda ho gayi. Vithhal bhi andha tha. Chhota mota kaam who bhi karta tha par jyada kamata nahi tha.. par manda ghar ko samhaalne mai achhi rahi. Khud ke aur pati ke pagaar se ghar chala leti thi. Aankh ki kami har jagah takleef deti thi par chlna rooka nahi tha… sanshta walo ne bhade ka ghar bhi le kar diya tha. Ghar ke sare kaam nipta kar kaam par jaati aur wapas aa kar raat ko fir se ghar ke baki ke kaam mai joot.ti manda ki kamar kaam se nahi jhooki kabhi par vithhal ki maar se jhukne lagi thi… aise mai manda maa banne wali thi par bachaa janam le oos se pahlay ander hi mar gaya.. dr. ne oose teen mahine aaram karne ko kaha tha… manda ne muje kaha tha.. didi, sabse badi galti meri ab ho gayi thi ke maine kaam se resign de diya tha.. kyuki tabiyat sath nahi de rahi thi. Par 2 mahine mai hi thik ho gayi manda… par ab kya karti bina naukri ke … kuch to pahlay se aadat thi khud jine ki to ab ghar mai bina kaam ke maan vidroh sa kar raha tha aur pati ki chhoti pagaar mai ghar cahlana bhi mushkil sa ho gaya tha… har roz ke jhagde maar piit… manda maansik taur se bimaar hoti gayi. Kuch arsa yunhi bita… kahi n kahi se 500 rs ki naukri jutaa paayi… . par khush n thi.. “itne pagaar se kya hota didi ?” muje kahne lagi. Ab manda ek ladke ki maa bhi ban gayi. Amol naam rakha tha bache ka . sabse khushi yah thi oosko k amol dekh sakta hai. Ab garibi ne aur bhi jhaanse mai liya.. oos par vithhal ki maar.. manda maan se asthhir hone lagi… aur ek din who khush ho gayi. Vithhal ne oose kaha k aaj woh oose kapde khareed ke dega. Oose le kar vithhal yaha le aaya.. aur bina bataaye chalaki dikha kar manda ko mahila aashram mai chhod kar chala gaya. Haan aaj manda mahila aashram mai hai 1 saal se. amol ke liye tarasti manda pagal ho gayi hai . raat raat bhar jaagti hai … so nahi paati… kyuki oose amol ki aawaje sone nahi deti … muje manda ne kaha , “ didi… amol ko samor [paas ] ki building mai band kar k rakha hai . oose bahut maarte hai waha… oosko acting sikhate hai bikh maangne ki … wo raat ko rota rahta hai… mai kaise so sakti hu? Maine ooska hath mere hath mai liya… sahlaati rahi.. aage manda ne kaha k “ vithhal ne kaha tha ke christmas par ghar le jaayega par le nahi gaya.. ab to mai thik hu. Vithhal hi juth bolta hai ke amol ghar par hai. Mai jaanti hu amol yahi samor ki building mai hai. Is mahine ab shayed vithhal aa kar le jaaye muje. Yaha achha nahi lagta hai didi…. Mai kisi se baat nahi karti yaha. Didi aap fir kal aaogi mere paas? Mujse baate karne ? kal to nahi aa paaungi par jaldi hi fir aaungi ka wada kar ke mai manda ke waqt se baahar niakl kar kahdi hui. kai waqt ke tukde aise bhi hote hai.. jinse aap baahar niakl kar bhi baahar nahi ho paate. manda ki didi - meena  |
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10th February 2006, 02:20 PM
Maa aapne jo likha wo bhi padha.. jo nahi likha wo bhi padha
kuchh safar kaha shuru kaha khatm.. ye khatm hote bhi hai ki nahi... pata nahi.... |
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thanks for the link meena ji,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
kahaaniyaana jaldi main padhti nahi coz mujhe har kahaani main jo dukh hota hai wo tod jaata hai ...............main kisi ke kaam nahi aa sakti aisa feel hota hai ....................aksar har kahaani main mhilaa hin tadapti dikhti hai ........................... kooi bhi varg ki mahilaa ko le lo har sirti na jaane kis kis dukh se guzar rahi hai ..........jitna bhi wo sangharsh kare ........dukh ke din khtam hin nahi hote .....jaise khuda ko mhilaao se kooi dushmani ho gayi ho............... yaa khuda sadiyoun se parichaa le rahe ho kab khatam hoga kab hum bhi aapko bhaayegain kismat dete ho unko jo julm karta ho kab khtam hoga ye julm kab wo insaan banegain kabhi toh ek baar stri ka roop le kar aao kab aayegain or humaare dard ko bhi kabhi samjhegain khuda ka darza dekar humpar julm karte hain wo khuda nahi humko kab insaan wo samjhegain.................... aab kya kahoo meena ji ...........jahan itne ladies uchahiyouno ko chuu rahi hai wahi na jaane kitni ladies aaj bhi pareshaan hai .............ji tod struggle kar rahi hai .................par fir bhi kahin na kahin wo apno ke haatoh hin dukhi rehti hai ........................... main kabhi aashram nahi jaati ....coz mujh se dekha hin nahi jaata kisi ka bhi rona dhona but haan koshish karti hoon ,,,,,,,har taywahaar main ya jab bhi ghar se bhahar nikalti hoon apne saath fruits ya mitaahi ya apni beti ke chote ho gaye kapde saath rehta hin hai taaki kabhi kisi ko kisi bhi tarh thodi si khushiyaan de sakoon ...........jab wo bachche thanks aunty kehte hain ...........ek muskaan chaa hin jaati hai ........... ek choti si kahaani bataati hoon ek baar ek mochi ko aawaaj di maine tab main jaipur main rehti thi .......wo aaya thand ka samay tha kaam toh jyaada nahi tha bas beta ka school bag ka kahin se silna tha ...............main chaay pi rahi thi maine usse poocha chaay pioge wo bola nahi abhi pi ke aaya hoon ..................thand itni thi ki wo thiithoor raha tha .................bola agar aapke paas kooi kapda ho toh dijiyega ........................main jhatt se gayi or apne hubby ka t shirt or ek jeans pant jo naya sa hin tha par unko tight ho raha tha .................or mujhe pata tha wo nahi pehnegain abb so maine utha ke usko de diyaa .......................jab vicky aaye toh wo ussi pant ko dhoondh rahe the .....................toh main bas has pade .......................meri hasi se wo samjh gaye ki fir issne kutch gadbad kiya hai .............................fir maine unko bata diya .........toh bole mere hin kapde kyoun tumko dikhta apne de diyaa karo .....................maine jhatt se bola aare wo ek ladka tha mere kapde kaise pehnata ......................or fir wo hass pade .................................. toh .....main bas itna hin kar paati hoon ..................sach aaj tak kabhi aanaath aashram nahi gayi ...coz ..............darr lagta hai .............bahut darr lagta hai ...........................nahi dekh sakti kisi ko bhi bilakhta ..................toota haara huaa .................... aap jo karti hain wo sach main ek achcha kaam hai ..........khuda aapko khushiyaa dain .................har khushi aapko dein............. main toh bas itna maanti hoon har insaan ko kam se kam itna toh karna hin chaahiye ....................ek choti si khoshish har insaan ko karna chaahiye ...........................apne hisse ki ek roti se kisi kka bhookh mita sakain ...................itna bhi kaafi hai ...........................hai na meena ji ....................................... baaki sab khuda pe hai .............................bye tc .................................................. .........................chandsi |
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10th February 2006, 03:59 PM
Meena Didi
bahot khushi hui ye jan kar ki aap bhi ak aisa kaam kar rahi he jisme kisi ko aswasan milta he, aaj ki is yug me kisi ko fursat nahi hoti, is tarha ke koi bhi kaam karne ki, magar aaj me ak request karna chahti hu un sabhi se jo ye padh rahe he, koi baat nahi agar aap kisi ko kuch de nahi pate, ya kisi ko dene ke liye aap ke paas kuch nahi, bas sal me sirf ak din aur uska bhi sirf ak hour aap kisi aise person ko de sakte ho jise uski sabse jyada jarurat ho, shayad koi gift itni khushi nahi degi, jitni khushi use aapse bat kar ke milti he, fir se ak bar sabhi ka dhyan is baat par dorne ke liye bahot bahot shukriya..  Jindgi Tujse Har Ek Sans Pe Samjhota Karu,
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10th February 2006, 04:45 PM
Didi,
Sach kaha aapne.... baahar aakar bhi baahar nahi aa paate.... aise me kitna helpless mehsoos hota hai naa...jab chaahkar bhihum kucch kar nahi paate.... Bass yehi praarthna rahegi ke use apna beta mil jaaye..... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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10th February 2006, 04:52 PM
Meena Ji
Saadar Pranaam! Abhi tow aapki katha ko maine save kar liya hai, itminaan se parhkar hee shaayad koi pratikriya bahaar aasakey. Vipin 
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10th February 2006, 04:55 PM
Meena ji...
Kitna dard hai duniya mein, magar kahin na kahin uska marham bhi hota hai.. Sab ko dukh hai..jo dukh mein bhi khush rahe woh hi bhagwaan ko paata hai kyonki dukh aur sukh dena uske hi haath mein hai aur jaise woh hame rakhta hai, hame khush rehna chahiye.. Daya.. dayalta, jisme doosro ke dard ko mehsoos karne ki shamta hai woh hi us bhagwaan ko pyaara hai, aur aap mein unki shristi ke liye apoor pyaar bhara hua hai jo ke achhi baat hai. Prarthna hai ke hum sabhi dukh mein khushi dekh sake aur sabko ek matar pyaar kar sake Aapka Varinder chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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10th February 2006, 05:00 PM
main bhi chandsi ki baat se sahmat hoon duniya itni aage aa gayi hai fir bhi kyu ladies abhi bhi suffer kar rahi hai
umeed hai ki ye sab jaldi hi theek ho jaye .aap achha kaam karti hai aapse baaten karke hi sahi kuch to dard kam hua hoga manda ka aur aise dard se kabhi bahar nahi aa sakte kash hum log kuch kar paaye in sabkeliye shrdh 
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10th February 2006, 05:20 PM
meena dost
apni tehreeron se hamesha aise aise moti chunti ho tum jo talkh to hote hain mager haqeeqat se pur hote hain. muashre ke saasooron ko apni tehreeron se sab ki nazron mein ujaager kerti ho tum. is mazmoon mein bhi tum ne aisa hi kiyaa hai, aisi kahani , aisi haqeeqat;;;; mager mein bohat achchi tarah jaanta hoon ke hamare muashre mein yeh sab ho raha hai aur hem sab is shaqqaqiyet mein shaamil hain, hem sab in saanihaat aur in waaqeyaat ke zimmedaar hain, kaash aisa na ho, kaash is duniyaa mein aisa na ho. meena aap ki is tehreer ki taareef kerne ko dil naheen chahtaa mager aap ne jo kaha yeh haqeeqat hai, aur hamein is se nabr-aazma hona hai aur is ke khaatmei mein apna kirdaar adaa kerna hai. God hemsab ke maded kare. musharrafhusain |
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10th February 2006, 05:29 PM
kya kahoon kuch kehne ko ji nahi kar raha................. badme kuch bolunga
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10th February 2006, 08:29 PM
Kuch der ke liye Manda ke waqt par main bhi chal padhi...Uski Didi badi saralta se, apne jazzbaaton ko qaabu mein karte huye...aisee kayi sachhaayion se hamein awgat karaati hai...lekin mujhe malum hai ki Uski Didi ke man mein kaise utaar chadhaav thapede maarte rehte hain...aur Manda ko bhi Didi ke sone ke dil ki pehchan na hoti tau wo dil ki na keh paati...
meri meena aisee hi hai wo kya hai uska andaaza use hai hi nahin gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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12th February 2006, 04:04 PM
meena menda ka hath kabhee na chorana us ko sath chahiye tumhara use ek baar jeena sikha do us ko achha bura samjha do use vithal se jeetna sikha do bas ek baar
Anil kahanee main har kadam pe tum sath theen menda ke mujeh bhee laga har pal main bhee waheen hoon wah bahut achha kahan dil khjud se sawal karne laga parh ke |
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12th February 2006, 09:02 PM
yaa khuda! sadiyoun se _ho rahi aazmaaish humaari
kab khatam hoga_ kab hum bhi aapko bhaayegain kismat dete ho unko jo julm karta ho kab khtam hoga ye julm _kab wo insaan banpayegain kabhi toh ek baar stri ka roop le kar aao kab aayegain_ kab humaare dard bhi samjhpayegain khuda ka darza dekar, humpar julm karte hain wo khuda nahi humko_ kab insaan wo samjhpayegain.................. ..................thanks....meena ji . ====aapke iss tarah ke lekh se kam se kam kaii log pryaas karne ka toh jaroor sochegain.............aapka likhna vyarth nahi jaayega ..........likhte rahiye .........hum sab ki aankhe kholte rahiye ...................bye and tc . |
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