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20th March 2005, 06:46 AM
Hi everyone,
Meri pyaari behan Garima roz kehti hai kahani sunao kahani suano.. Mein usse yehi keh pata ki mujhe nahi aati.. Thoi si udaas ho jaati hai woh magar phir bhi bhai hoon..behan ki har icha ko puri karna chahta hoon.. to usse vaada kiya hai ki aa ek kahani jaroor likhoonga uske liye... Umeed hai pasand aayegi usse bhi aur aap sab ko bhi... The story begins... Everyday I go for a Morning Walk in the park near my place. One day I was walking through the park. It was a beautiful day. The sun was just out and it was nice and warm. Everything was just perfect. As I walked on the path which was covered by the trees on either side I saw my friend. She was looking at something with eyes wide open. I was very curious to know what was she looking at. I went near her and asked her what was she looking at. She pointed towards a beautiful flower. I looked towards it and smiled. I asked her if she wanted it and if yes why did she want the flower. She said to give it to a friend. I said I can't give it to her. She was a bit sad and asked very innocently why? I said the flower is beautiful as long as it is on the tree on which it grows. We might pluck the flower and then maybe gift it to someone. The person will take the flower and maybe even smile which will make us happy. But if it remains here on its shrub it will attract more and more people. Anybody who will see these flowers will smile. The fragrance of the flowers will spread far and wide mesmerising more and more people as the smile spreads around from one person to the other. So I will let the flower grow where it is right now. She smiled. I smiled at myself and started walking again on my path. Hoping to meet people and learn new things. |
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20th March 2005, 07:48 AM
rohin,
phool wahi achhe lagte hai jaha woh kali se phool banae.. oosko dekhne matr se hi jo sukh milta hai oos sukh ko simmit n kar ke sab ke liye rahne diya.. achhi soch hai...  good morning... coffee ke sath...di |
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20th March 2005, 08:12 AM
dear rohin
a great story sahi kaha apne phool dalli par hi ache lagta hai....tor kar nahi. dil bhi aisi hi hai...dil khush hi ache lagtey hai.....hamesha congratulations for being able to write such a sweet and amazing story. its so simple yet meaningful that makes it special as its coming from u, ur hands and hrtLuv Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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20th March 2005, 12:40 PM
dear rohin,
first of all i make assure tht this time i wrote ur name correct. anyways rohin again if i write anything u wud always say tht me buttering u.bt the problem is tht without doing tht i cannot live as its really gud to read ur thoughts. well as usual i m again saying the same thing u are masters n u can really write well in all fields. well today i wud love to say tht u are a GOD GIFTED CHILD in this world n i m proud to be ur friend. keep flowing ur thoughts buddy. as usual love reading ur thoughts. awesome story written by u.the way u express ur feelings n the way u take care of others feelings i have no words left to praise u. touch wood. may god bless u with his finnest glitters. A flower's fragrance declares to all the world that it is fertile, available, and desirable, its sex organs oozing with nectar. Its smell reminds us in vestigial ways of fertility, vigor, life-force, all the optimism, expectancy, and passionate bloom of youth. We inhale its ardent aroma and, no matter what our ages, we feel young and nubile in a world aflame with desire. - Diane Ackerman In my garden there is a large place for sentiment. My garden of flowers is also my garden of thoughts and dreams. The thoughts grow as freely as the flowers, and the dreams are as beautiful. - Abram L. Urban keep writing buddy. its gud to be a part of this site so tht i can read urs n pulkits thoughts. all the best dear. |
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Re: Morning walk -
20th March 2005, 01:11 PM
Bahut accha lagaa padkar Rohin.....really...an inspiring story.......har cheez ki apni ek sahi jagah hoti hai.....so y to hv complex abt anything...hum jahan hain theek hain....ho sakta hai hum issi jagah ke liye baane ho.....hmmm...really an inspiring thought...Good !!...I liked it!!
Keep writing!!! TC Kuch nagme gaa kar chale gaye kuch aahe bhar kar laut gaye, Wo bhi ek pal ka kissa the mein bhi ek pal ka kissa hoon, Kal tumse juda ho jaaonga jo aaj tumhara hisa hoon[/color] |
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20th March 2005, 01:17 PM
 Bhaiya,first of all thanks aapne mere liye kahani jo likhi mujhe to padhane ke pahale hi ye pasand aa gayi thi. padhane ke baad kahati hoo really too good. sach me aap bahoot bahoot achha likhate ho. waise ek baat kahoo ye kahani achhi honi bhi chahiye thi kyunki mere liye likhi hai na thanks a lot with lots of love ur's sis Garima |
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20th March 2005, 01:54 PM
respected bhaiya,
kahani to bahut achhi hai so nice ...magar very bad aap ne mere liye ek bhi kahani nahi likhi  mahima Mahima- mahima khatm na ho jisaki wo dhara bane kabhi... mahima khatm na ho jisaki wo aasmaan mile kabhi... mahima khatm na ho jisaki us samaan ki talaash me.. |
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Kya khooshboo hai... |
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Kya khooshboo hai... -
21st March 2005, 01:50 AM
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aapko vichar ache lage . Thanks Aur coffee hmmm.. Lets get the morning started up...Nescafe Thanks Rohin |
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21st March 2005, 01:52 AM
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Hi Priya, Phool ki khushboo ko sambhal kar rakhna apne dil mein... Aur woh phool jo tumhare chehre par muskan dega woh sabke chehre par bhi muskan layega.. Thanks Rohin |
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21st March 2005, 01:55 AM
Hi Jasleen,
Tumne mera sahi naam liya to meine socha mein bhi le leta hoon... Thanks for adding your invaluable thoughts to the post. Thanks Rohin |
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Re: Re: Morning walk -
21st March 2005, 01:57 AM
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Sahi kaha aur sahi samjha.. Thanks for reading it Rohin |
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Re: wow -
21st March 2005, 02:00 AM
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padhne ke pehle kahani pasand aa gayi...hmm... Well yeh kahani ki prerna bhi tum hi ho... Tum hi to aajkal phoolon ke peeche padi hui ho...lol.. haan mein writer theek thak he hoon. Ur Big B Rohin |
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21st March 2005, 02:02 AM
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Pehle choto ka number aata hai right ...hmm... alti ho gayi ... Theek hai agli kahani tumhare liye... Ur Big B Rohin |
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21st March 2005, 11:07 AM
bhaiya,
big b to amitabh bachhan hai magar aap to mer bhaiya ho na right? Mahima- mahima khatm na ho jisaki wo dhara bane kabhi... mahima khatm na ho jisaki wo aasmaan mile kabhi... mahima khatm na ho jisaki us samaan ki talaash me.. |
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21st March 2005, 11:10 AM
Arre Big B means Big Bhaiya...
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21st March 2005, 11:14 AM
mughe pata hai mai to bas magak kar rahin thi?
right?  Mahima- mahima khatm na ho jisaki wo dhara bane kabhi... mahima khatm na ho jisaki wo aasmaan mile kabhi... mahima khatm na ho jisaki us samaan ki talaash me.. |
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21st March 2005, 11:49 AM
VEry Cute Story Rohin...Short, Sweet and as usual... ur stories have a lesson...
Its a beautiful thought.... Hope to meet new people, learn new things....Well Said... Likhte Raho... Aur mere liye bhi koi story likhann.. main bhi to tumhara bhai hoon LOL.... Doo keep Writing bro.. and TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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21st March 2005, 12:37 PM
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Hi Pulkit, As usual my story have a lesson? The one before this was i think the Love story ... Us mein se bhi kuch seekha kya?? Haan haan aa rahi hai ek aur novel aane wali hai... Abhi Abhi to likhna shuru kiya hai... thanks Rohin |
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hi! -
21st March 2005, 01:47 PM
oh..wow..ek aur NOvel aa rahi hai kya?..thts gr8!
rohin...yar tum itna smoothly kaise likhte ho...kahani chhoti si thi par cute thi..carrying a beautiful meaning! nice1tc komal |
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21st March 2005, 03:00 PM
Hi Komal,
Haan aa rahi hai ek aur Novel... Bus Ek aur Kavita ya sher likhoonga phir bus wahi likhoonga.. Aur kuch nahi jab tak woh khatam na ho jaaye I am glad u loved this short story...Umeed hai kahani yaad rahegi Thanks Rohin |
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21st March 2005, 03:59 PM
hey Rohin.
seriously if i hadnt read this post of urs i would have missed out on some really amazin thots, and a lesson to be learnt. its really really good, amzin, inspirin, touchin, and the best short n a story with a very cute moral to it. n as usual i am always outa words abt ur posts. n off course waitin for ur next post eagerly. thnk god i dint miss this one. waitin for ur next story tht u said u had in mind!!! keep it up buddy. uv always done a gr8 job, n ur a really good riter, n off course my best n fav shayar too!! good luk n best wishes always!!! really amazin stuff uv given us all!!! tc |
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21st March 2005, 04:03 PM
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I am glad u read it... Yes wait for the next one... Hope you will carry the moral of the story... Thanks Rohin |
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22nd March 2005, 08:23 AM
So i ll let the flower grow where it is right now...
This last line...superb! loved it... Rohin... tell more stories mesmerize your friends... paras di gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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22nd March 2005, 10:29 AM
Thanks Paras di,
I hope to let the smell spread thanks Rohin |
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Re: Re: wow -
22nd March 2005, 04:19 PM
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BIG B mujhe to ye kahani pasand aani hi thi, afterall mere liye likhi thi na.hmm mai phoolo ke pichhe jaroor padi hoo lekin kahi se todati nahi hoo ab to aur nahi todungee kahani ke pichhe aapka sandesh jo mila. aapne kaha ki kahani ki prerana mai hoo to fir meri ye bhumika banati hai ki aapke sandesh ko sir aankho par rakhoo. phoolo ke saath jhumate hue ur's sis |
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7th December 2005, 11:26 AM
nice
veryy good and inspiring story do keep sharing ~*~ EK SHAYAR Anjaan~*~ 
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15th November 2009, 11:28 AM
thanks abhishek for being inspired
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