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13th November 2006, 09:36 AM
Aadab doston,
Is thread mein main meri shayri post karunga.. is ummeed ke saath ke aap sab ko pasand aayegi. To shuru karta hoon, Kaun kahega use, ke naacheez hai woh Toote hue dilon ka tabeej hai woh Hai sailaab-e-jawaani ya dariya ki tarah wo khud hi na jaane, kya cheez hai woh -Ziyaad. |
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13th November 2006, 12:46 PM
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Aapko padhna aajkal pasand padne laga hai. Jaisa ki mai pehle bhi ke chuka hu... Aapka andaaz hi nirala hai. Likhte rahiye... Intzaar rahega. Waqt ki kami hai warna, aapke saath ek mushayra-e-guftgu karne ka man. Ye alfaaz sirf isliye istemaal kiye, taaki mushayre ke saath kuchh guftgu bhi ho jaye. -Aapka rafique.. Aman |
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13th November 2006, 01:22 PM
Tuze main koi aur naam du,
ye mumkin nahi hai mere liye Ha, tere muqable ka koi gar mile muze to use tera naam zarur dunga. -Ziyaad Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. |
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13th November 2006, 01:26 PM
Chaahat teri, zehen pe chhati hi jaa rahi,
Surat teri dilon me basti hi jaa rahi, Tera pyar mile ab, ya tera gham mile muze, aadat tere khayaal ki badhti hi jaa rahi.. -Ziyaad Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. |
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13th November 2006, 01:28 PM
aurr aap ka shukriya aman ji, aap jaise log muze aur inspire karte hai.
agar mauka mile to aap se zarur mulaqaat hogi. muze bhi bahut acchha lagega aap se milke. |
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Dil ko Choo gai -
13th November 2006, 05:56 PM
Aapki Shayri mujhe bahut achee lagi or aap ke alfaaz bhi bahut achee the yakeen maniye dil ko choo gaye aap isee tarah likhte rahiyega mujhe aap ke Shayri ka intezaar rahega.
Best of luckD  Aapka naya dost Shaan |
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Dil ko Choo gai -
13th November 2006, 06:05 PM
Aapki Shayri mujhe bahut achee lagi or aap ke alfaaz bhi bahut achee the yakeen maniye dil ko choo gaye aap isee tarah likhte rahiyega mujhe aap ke Shayri ka intezaar rahega.
Best of luckD Aapka naya dost Shaan |
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13th November 2006, 11:20 PM
tah-e-dil se shukriya, shaan ji. padh ke acchha laga ke aap ko pasand aaya.
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13th November 2006, 11:24 PM
ye ghazal aur ek sher maine pehle bhi is forum pe post kiye the par, ab is thread me post karunga firse taake ek hi thread me jo bhi mera likha hai wo bana rahe.
Ab yehi dua hai ke meri dua ka kabhi asar na ho Is Dil-e-nadan ki wajah se duniya me koi kasar na ho Dhundhta chalu khushi ko par aisa kabhi manzar na ho Main kisi aur ka gham banu aur muze koi khabar na ho Kaarwa mere saath chale ye laazim nahi hai lekin Manzil jise na mile kabhi aisa koi safar na ho Teri yaad qayamat tak mere dil ke saath rahegi Kaandhe pe mere shayad kabhi tera sar na ho Ek raaz ban chuki hai daastan-e-zindagi meri Ye raaz hi reh jaaegi; khabar tuze agar na ho Mar jaaun main Ziyaad; aisa bhi jo din aaye Ke apni hi nazar se girne ka muze koi dar na ho -Ziyaad Har shakhs ki yahaan muktalif muraad hai, Bas maangne waalon ki chaarsu tadaad hai Doob chuke hai saare, apne hi khayalat me Kahaan ye duniya ab qaabil-e-'Ziyaad' hai? -Ziyaad. |
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15th November 2006, 06:52 AM
Meri bazm-e-dil mein tum ho jao shareeq
ke abtak tumhe theek se dekha hi nahi, Pyar karna to ab aa gaya humein, par jataana to abhi seekha hi nahi. -Ziyaad Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. |
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15th November 2006, 07:00 AM
Jo kaam zubaan na kar paaye, karti wohi shayari,
darta hai zameer zamaane se, darti nahi hai shayari, Gar ek shama bhi ho dil mein, to julus-e-lafz aa jayega, jab dil mein nahi ho aag to, banti nahi hai shayari. -Ziyaad. Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. |
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15th November 2006, 11:40 PM
Ae khuda, bhala hota, gar tu sirf ghum hi deta
Use khushi ke saath jodne ki kya zarurat thi.. Bana deta muze uski zulfon ka koi gesu, Aashiq ya dost bananeki, kya zarurat thi.. -Ziyaad. Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. |
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15th November 2006, 11:42 PM
ye sher thoda galat post hua tha but main delete nahi kar paaya. so phir se correct kar ke post karta hoon.
Jo kaam zubaan na kar paaye, karti wohi hai shayari, darta hai zameer zamaane se, darti nahi hai shayari, Gar ek shama bhi ho dil mein, to julus-e-lafz aa jayega, jab dil mein nahi ho aag to, banti nahi hai shayari. -Ziyaad. Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. |
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21st November 2006, 08:15 PM
Aaaj mere internet connection ki problem ke wajah se; meri kisise chatting nahi ho paa rahi thi. To us waqt muze ye chaar line suuzi.. thodi comic hi sahi but post kar raha hoon.
Ghanti bajaayi speaker ne jab login mera yaar hua Saare kaam chhodke main chatting ko tayyar hua Par na uska msg muze mila, na mera msg paar hua, Duniya to farebi hai; ab yahoo bhi gaddaar hua.. -Ziyaad. Copyright @ Ziyaad, Infinity. |
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22nd November 2006, 04:50 PM
Jiye hai jabtak, to jaana hai bahut
jaana hai kya, ye jaante nahi, Jabtak jiyenge, ladte rahenge, zindagi se haar, hum maante nahi -Ziyaad. Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. |
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23rd November 2006, 09:51 PM
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24th November 2006, 01:51 AM
shukriyaa janaab. shukriya.
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24th November 2006, 01:52 AM
Hum tanhaa hue to kya hua;
teri yaad se dil behlaayenge tere mehboob nahi to kya hua tere aashiq zarur kehlaayenge -Ziyaad Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. http://apurvaoka.blogspot.com http://houndingtheworld.blogspot.com |
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24th November 2006, 01:53 AM
Main teraa na hua haqeeqat me
ek fasaana magar chaahunga jhooth hi kehde ke tu meri hai taa-umr meri jee jaaunga -Ziyaad Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. http://apurvaoka.blogspot.com http://houndingtheworld.blogspot.com |
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25th November 2006, 01:03 PM
aapne bahut bahut aacha likha hai,hum umeed karte hain ki yun hi sda likhte rahenge
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26th November 2006, 04:33 AM
Zarur likhenge priya ji..
shukriya aap ka. Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. http://apurvaoka.blogspot.com http://houndingtheworld.blogspot.com |
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26th November 2006, 04:34 AM
Chahhahati dhun me mobile mera shor kare
Button dabaaun main aur aankhe meri gaur kare Message to aaye, par jo chaahu wo na mile, Main sochta rahu tuze, aur message koi aur kare -Ziyaad Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. http://apurvaoka.blogspot.com http://houndingtheworld.blogspot.com |
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26th November 2006, 04:40 AM
ek naya sher haajir hai donston; gaur farmaaiyega
Ajeeb nuskhe sikha rahi hai zindagi khwaab-e-dildaar ki parchaai me raho Ek sadak ki tarah jaa rahi hai zindagi Mod lo; ya khaai me giro Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. http://apurvaoka.blogspot.com http://houndingtheworld.blogspot.com |
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26th November 2006, 04:45 AM
aur ek sher arz hai;
Hajam nahi hota, agar koi behad pyaar kare; Barsaat bhi agar had se gujre; barsaat nahi rehti Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. http://apurvaoka.blogspot.com http://houndingtheworld.blogspot.com |
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3rd December 2006, 07:01 AM
Hajam nahi hota agar koi behad pyaar kare,
barsaat bhi agar had se guzre; barsaat nahi rehti.. tod sake jo laathi ko, na tod sake gucchha, aawaam bhi agar ek na ho; aabad nahi rehti... Faasla gar dilon me ho to mitata nahi aasaani se Arson tak rehtaa hai saath; mulaqaat nahi rehti.. Gar dil se dil ka rishta ho, to tod nahi sakta koi.. Phir Maut ki bhi utni auqaat nahi rehti.. Socho kya hoga Ziyaad, gar khudsehi koi haar gaya, Khuda bhi sath nahi rehta aur Khudii bhi saath nahi rehti. Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. http://apurvaoka.blogspot.com http://houndingtheworld.blogspot.com |
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3rd December 2006, 07:07 AM
Ek chhoti si rachna pesh hai doston.. reply kijiyega..
Ghar the apne jahaan pe wo wahi khade hain, bas apne qadam aaj kahii aur badhe hain, khud se bhi paar hum jaa hi rahe hain, kya haqeeqat mein aaj, hum jee rahe hain? Kya jo main karta hun wo main chaahata hun? Kya chaahata hun main wo main kar sakta hun? Kya jaam mein bharaa hai aur kya pee rahe hain? Kya haqeeqat mein aaj, hum jee rahe hain? Kuchh sapne honge sach, ye hum jaante hain, Kaii sach hai jinko sapna, hum maante hain, Kya neend mein hain hum, kya soo rahe hain? Kya haqeeqat mein aaj hum jee rahe hain? Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. http://apurvaoka.blogspot.com http://houndingtheworld.blogspot.com |
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6th December 2006, 09:58 PM
Zamee pe nahi yaar, dilon pe raaj kar
Har soorat-e-wafaa ka hardam riyaaz kar naa paa sakaa muhabbat iska na gham banaa jo de saka muhabbat uspe tu naaz kar.. Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. http://apurvaoka.blogspot.com http://houndingtheworld.blogspot.com |
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6th December 2006, 10:00 PM
Jo gham hai mere dil mein, kaise bayaa karu
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6th December 2006, 10:01 PM
Ek khalbali machi hai mere andar hi andar,
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6th December 2006, 10:02 PM
Tadpaa na yu kisiko, ae khuda ye hai kharaab
chahe khushi to mile gham, chahe gham to mile sharaab Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. http://apurvaoka.blogspot.com http://houndingtheworld.blogspot.com |
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6th December 2006, 10:03 PM
Nazre bhi kya cheez hai ye aaj dekh liya,
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6th December 2006, 10:05 PM
Jaan chuke hum aaj, ke kyu khote rahe muhabbat ko,
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8th December 2006, 11:51 PM
Lafz;
sukoon hota hai jo koi aap ke ek lafz ko, dastaan ki tarah samazta hain, aur dard bhi hota hai jo ek lafz hi har kahaani bigaad deta hai zindagi; ek lafz jo kisi ke liye sapna hai, to kisi ke liye hai haqeeqat, haqeeqat to khair apnaani padti hai; magar sapne ki hoti hai qeemat insaaf; yahaa kanoon ko haath mein lete hai insaan, kyu ki insaaf denewale jaanwar hai, jagahe aisi bhi hai jahaa jaanwaron ke apne haq hai, kyu ki insaaf denewale insaan hai, Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. http://apurvaoka.blogspot.com http://houndingtheworld.blogspot.com |
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9th December 2006, 01:10 AM
Ziyaad Ji!
Aapkey likhey huvey sarey kalam padhey aur tajub sa huva ki ees young age mey aap itni khubsurat shairi ker saktey ho! Umeed hai aapka naam bhi ek deen badhey aur mashhoor shairon mey liya jainga!! Faasla gar dilon me ho to mitata nahi aasaani se Arson tak rehtaa hai saath; mulaqaat nahi rehti.. Wah!! Rajan!! |
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9th December 2006, 10:48 PM
shukriya rajan ji...
shukriya. young age ki baat nahi hai.. bas dil mein kuch na kuch khalbali rehni chahiye.. usse shayri ki lehre aati hai. Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. http://apurvaoka.blogspot.com http://houndingtheworld.blogspot.com |
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10th December 2006, 12:24 PM
Muhabbat ke paath saare humne bhi padhe hai,
Aajmaayein kaise ye koi to bataaye Manaane ko hum dil-o-jaan lutaa denge sataane ka haq koi to jataaye.. Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. http://apurvaoka.blogspot.com http://houndingtheworld.blogspot.com |
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10th December 2006, 03:16 PM
'Haq' pe ek aur sher pesh karta hun,
Dosti ya muhabbat se haq kitno pe hai hamara Hum bhala nahi jaante, haq hum pe magar hai kiska Kaii log base hai iss dil mein, hai thikana ye kitnon ka Hum bhala nahi jaante hai kahaa thikaana iska.. Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. http://apurvaoka.blogspot.com http://houndingtheworld.blogspot.com |
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10th December 2006, 03:28 PM
Main SMS isliye nahi karta ke muze aadat hai iski
Meri koi icchha nahi tere Inbox ko stress karne ki Baat ye hai ke mere mobile ko tere mobile se ishq hai, Aur ye iski koshish hai use impress karne ki.. Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. http://apurvaoka.blogspot.com http://houndingtheworld.blogspot.com |
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12th December 2006, 10:06 PM
Wo har ek pal mein muhabbat ka naya paath sikha deti hai,
gusaa bhi hoti hai to khubsurti ka naya rang dikha deti hai. Ek hi nazar mein woh qayaamat bhi dhaa deti hai, Aur dusre hi pal mein saare gile mitaa deti hai, Wo kehne ko hoti hain dil ki baat apni; aur neend hai kambakht ke sapna bigad deti hai. Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. http://apurvaoka.blogspot.com http://houndingtheworld.blogspot.com |
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12th December 2006, 10:07 PM
Maane na maane ye aage ki baat hai
Par kabhi apni baat koi sun to le jaane ye naa jaane ye alag baat hai par kabhi koi humko chun to le Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. http://apurvaoka.blogspot.com http://houndingtheworld.blogspot.com |
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