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10th September 2014, 04:51 PM
hamaare interview ke dauraan, Sunita dii ne arz kiya tha ki hum hamaare yahaaN maujud dostoN ke baare meN kuchh pesh kare... toH aaj yahaaN hum aap sabhii kii taarif meN ye ruba'yaat pesh kar rahe haiN..
Ummeed hai aapko pasand aayegii.... zaraa sun lo maiN laayaa hooN mere dil ka jo nazraanaa ~ Adilsar-e-mehfil-e-shayri ke sitaaroN kaa hai afsaanaa zaraa dil thaam ke baiTHo sabhii kii baateN karnii hai yahaaN har shaks hai apnaa nahiN koii hai begaanaa yahaaN ek shakhsiyat aisii jo hum sab kii dulaarii hai sabhii sammaan dete haiN bulaate pyaar se dii hai ye Sunita hai jinko hum sabhii dil meN basaate haiN hameshaa khush rehnaa tum duaa tumko hamaarii hai hai jauhar apne vaalid kii ye kaun hai hum bataate haiN ye un meN se hi ek aisii jo ye mehfil sajaate haiN hai Zainy naam uskaa jo naginaa bazm-e-shayri kaa hamaaraa saath hai tumko ye hum vishvaas dilaate haiN sabhii hum bazm daaroN meN hai ek apnaa dil-o-jaanaa jo KHud ko kehte adnaa par samandar hai wo irfaaN* kaa na jaao naam pe unke ye Zarraa ansh hamaaraa hai hamaari hai duaa purii tumharii ho manokaamnaa (*knowledge, wisdom) kanval saa khiltaa jheel meN kanval saa naam jinka hai bahot kam boltaa lekin pate kii baat kartaa hai kahe Aru magar hai naam Arvind jo khile dil meN hameshaa yuN rahe dil meN sabhii ke jaise rehtaa hai rahe benaam sa lekin kare sirkat jo mehfil meN machaaye dhoom kuchh aisii banaa le jaa sabhii dil meN kahe Anjaan khud ko par ilmoN kaa khazaanaa wo zaraa rakhnaa meri khaatir jagah apne baRe dil meN agar likhooN koii tehriir magar unkii na taarif ho lage aise zaraa humse unhe ruswaaii hai kuchh to sharaarat unkii baatoN meN rahe wo Shaad hi hardam duaa itnii KHudaa se wo hameshaa shaad rakhe tujhko uDaaneN unchii hai jiskii jise paane ko chalde hum vahaaN kaise koii pahunche jahaaN koii nahi aalam Ufaq kehte haiN sab jisko falak se arsh mile jaise sabhii kaa pyaar paanaa ye duaa meri tumhe hardam kahaaN tu aa gayii leke zamiin pe aasmaaN jaise sitaaraa bhii chalaa aayaa tera majnooN bane jaise Parii KHud ko tu kehtii hai Ananth meN khoii rehtii hai duaa dono ko khush rehna hameshaa aaj ke jaise jo mastaanii kahe KHud ko wo divaanii bhii rehtii hai magar wo hai jo divaanii to apne Mast kii kehtii hai banaaii kya hai joRi aur naam bhi Mast aur Masti kaa raho taa-umr tum yuN hi ye mehfil tumse kehtii hai karo unse savaal koii javaab unkaa rahe sachchaa kisii bhii uljhanoN kaa unse mil jaayega hal achchhaa isii fitrat pe rakhkhaa hai unhoN ne naam Zidd yaaroN merii arzoo rahe apnaa hameshaa hi hunar pakkaa hamaari bazm meN hai ek phool aisaa khilaa yaaroN jahaaN jaaye wo muskaaye machaaye dhuum kya yaaroN hamaari naak hai wo to hamaari Naaz hai wo to zaraa bachke hi rehnaa kab karegii kya pataa yaaroN KHuda kaa wo parastaar hai khuda ka naam letaa wo ibaadat hi muhabbat aur muhabbat meN ibaadat ho Hassan bandaa hai parvar kaa hamaarii aaNkh ka taaraa hai hameshaa khush rahe tu aur KHuda kii rehmateN bhii ho sitaaroN kii ye mehfil meN kaii aise bhii taare haiN chamakte haiN magar gumnaam se phir bhii hamaare haiN sabhii ke kuchh apne bhii yagaane se thikaane haiN sabhii se bantii ye dunya sabhii yaa-rab hamaare haiN Ki hamdam ho Ki mujeeb ho Ki Ahmed ho Ki sukanya Naresh bhi aur harash bhii hai harek naam meN hai bas maayaa sabhii kii hai jagah dil meN kisii ko bhuul nahi paauuN rubaaii ke hi avval aur aakhir meN bayaaN aayaa ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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10th September 2014, 05:00 PM
WAH WAH ! ....Bohat khoob...super duper ruba'yaat of the year!........
 Per jinke naam nahi unse pitne ke liye tayyar rahiye... Kidding!..  Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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10th September 2014, 05:03 PM
waah waah adil jee......kya adbhut kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne.....kya adayegi aur kya bayangi hai......sach me padkar maja aa gaya.....dil se nikke jajbaat.....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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10th September 2014, 05:21 PM
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aap sabhi kaa teh-e-dil se shukr guzaar hooN... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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10th September 2014, 05:40 PM
Adil bhai, sacch meiN aap ne aaj aik karishma kar dikhaya.... dil ki gehraaiyoN se bas wah wah hi nikal rahi aur aap ne jiss mohabbat se nawaaza hai apne dostooN ko uss liye bas duayeN hi nikal rahi haiN mann se.... Ishq hi ishq hai kalaam meiN ... pyar hi pyar hai alfaazoN meN.... bas bhai Allah se dua hai ke aap hamesha khush raheN aabaad raheN (ameen).. aur aap ne mujhe jo izzat bakhshi hai maiN aap ka qarz-daar ho gaya hooN... waqt aane pe zaroor yeH qarz chukaoN ga insha Allah.. Reps pending. apna khayaal rakhiye ga! duaooN ke saath, Khaaksaar, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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Kya baat hai , aap ki koshosh kabile tareef hai... Arz kiya hai .. Aap ka ye dilchasp andaaz humein bahut bhaya: Naraz hai aapse ki humara naam nahi aya. shayad hum aap ke tareef ke kaabil na.thhe ya phir aap doston ko kojne mein uljhe hue the. Jaate jaate bus aap se guzarish karte hain Agli kaavish mein pehle no hone ki umeed rakhte hai Vaise aap ne akhri pehre mein Chamakte gumnaam taaron mein humara naam likh diya hai khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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10th September 2014, 07:51 PM
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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10th September 2014, 08:04 PM
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Aap bus aap hi hain .. itna prompt jawab aa gaya aapka , main aapka mushkoor ho gaya .... regds Sanjay Sehgal |
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11th September 2014, 01:50 AM
Bohat bohat shukriya Aadeil sahab is izzat affzaayi aur duaon k liye....thanx a lot
Stay happy n blessed Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the *pari* |
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11th September 2014, 09:06 AM
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.............................Naaz, I am touched by this gesture...... bahot hi khub rubaa'i likhii hai...... I accept this invaluable gift of yours.. ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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Wow! what a pleasant surprise, this is so touching adil....u r just amazing mere dost...well done |
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11th September 2014, 09:10 AM
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apne aap ko karz-daar keh kar hameN sharmindaa na kareN.... bas aap logoN kaa pyaar aur dostoN se jo izzat milii hai wo hamaare liye sabse baRaa nazraanaa hai aap hameshaa khush raheN, yehi duaa hai ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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11th September 2014, 09:12 AM
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bas yuN hi aapki duaa hamaare saath banii rahe...... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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........................ .....Thanks Ananthji for such nice words..... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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dil se shukriya bhai -
11th September 2014, 09:58 AM
Aadeil bhai
muje lafz nahi mil rhe, ki kaun se lafzoN se aapke en ehsaasoN ki tareef karuN, aik aik lafz apne-pan aur pyar se bharpoor hai, sacchi keh rhi hu...muje lafzoN ki kami mehsoos ho rhi hai...!aap reps deserve karte hai reps added +++kya kahuN aapke bare meiN, muje to kuch samaj nahi aata hai, SDC par aakar sabse jud jata, koi na koi rishta nata hai, aap neik-dil ensaan ho, sabse rishta nibhana aapko aata hai, aap jaise shayroN se hi SDC ka gulshan harpal mehkata hai Aadil bhai...aapne kuch dosto ke bare meiN apne ehsaas alag post meiN likhe hai, agar aap manjoori de to maiN unko maiN rubaye meiN add karna chahti hu, taaki usko bhi sab dost pad sake. DuaoN ke saath .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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11th September 2014, 01:33 PM
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aap iise ehsaan na kahiye... ye to aap sabhii kii mohabbat hai..... aur hamaaraa farz hai........... duaaoN ke saath........ Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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11th September 2014, 01:35 PM
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ye toh bahot hi achchhaa hoga agar aap mere alag se likhe misroN ko bhii original post meN shaamil kar deN......aapka teh-e-dil se shukr guzaar hooN..... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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11th September 2014, 03:04 PM
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 .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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First I would like to clap for the breathless poetry you have composed.I know its really tough.Chalo abb Rachna ki baat karein.I would like to convey my big thanks to you for giving me place in your poetry.Kitni khoobsurti se sab ka varnan kiya hay.Sada Kush Raho |
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12th September 2014, 01:32 AM
Aadeil bhai
aap ke khoosburat aur hairat anghez qalaam par daad doon, ki aap ke beinteha khuloos ka shukriya ada karoon, ki aap ne jo itni dariyadilee se pazeeraayee ki hai us le liye ehsaanmand ho jaaoon !!! to main n sirf ye sab bhi hoon, balki in se bhi kaheen zyada mashqoor o mamnoon hoon. Aur saath mein is qadar hairaan bhi hoon ki ek hi dil mein itna hunar aur itni mohabbat ek saath kaise bas rahi hai !!! to bas aap ki shaan mein kuchh misre kehne ki koshish kar raha hoon, ye jaante huwe bhi ki aap ki shakhsiyat itni vishaal hai, ki ye misre suraj ko diya dikhaane ke jaise hain ... kaho shaahon ka shah us ko faqeeron ka faqeer us ko adab ki maano sargoshi ke aawaaz-e-zameer us ko kamaan-e-ilm meiN jaane n teer-e-fiqr kitne haiN nichhaavar jis pe ahl-e-bazm kehte haiN "Safeer" us ko tah e dil se dheron daad ke saath aap ka dost zarraa mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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12th September 2014, 11:04 AM
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Sorry Sorry! Dii.... jii maine jaldbaazi meN galat paRH liya ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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12th September 2014, 11:06 AM
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These lines are really touching... And also thanks for the REPS...... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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12th September 2014, 11:07 AM
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aapka bahot bahot shukriya...... bas yuN hi aap sab ke dil meN hamaari jagah banii rahe ....duaaoN ke saath, ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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12th September 2014, 11:12 AM
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I am left speechless with all the love and respect that you have showered on me... aapke misroN ne hamaare dil ko chhuu liya hai........ yuN hi aapke dil meN hameN jagah dete rahiyegaa.... duaaoN ke saath................ ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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