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Mujhko thaam lena tum.. - 17th December 2015, 07:16 PM

meri zulfon ki chaa.nv me zara araam lena tum.
Meri ankho.n ki masti ko chura har shaam lena tum

Tumhari in nigaho.n se sanam maine bahut pi hai.
Agar jo ladkhadau.n mai.n to mujhko thaam lena tum

Tumhari baho.n me kho jau.n , gir jau.n..ya so jau.n..
nahi ye bhi zaroori hosh se fir kaam lena tum..

na ashko.n ki fikar karna inhe bah jane dena bas.
Mita do pyaas dil ki ab labo.n se jaam lena tum.

Hamari nee.nd poori ho tumhe bhi chain aa jaye.
Mere nazdeek aana aur apna naam lena tum.

Mujhe ruswaiya.n bhi kyu.n badi lagti hai.n ye pyari
Samajh jaoge apne sar koii ilzaam lena tum.




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bhut khub madhu g lagta h ek do achi ladkiyan bachiN haiN aaj bhi


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sach me bhut pyara likhaaaa h likhte rahiye....
bhut pyari gajleN hotin haiN aapki


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bhut khub madhu g lagta h ek do achi ladkiyan bachiN haiN aaj bhi




Shukriya ghazal ko pasand karne ka salman ji....

Aapki doosri baat ka matlab nahi samajh payi main....par jo mujhe samajh aaya usme itna zaroor kahna chahoongi..ki
Achchai aur burai ki har ek ki nazar me alag paribhasha hai..zaroori nhi jo ek ko achcha lage vo doosron ko bhi achcha hee lage aur aisa hee burai ke sath bhi hai...halaat bhi kai baar bahut kuch badal dete hain..to isko ladkiyon ya ladkon se jod kar nahi dekhna chahiye aisa mujhe lagta hai........

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Aate rahein...

Hausla afzai ka shukriya..

Khush rahiye..



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19th December 2015, 03:40 AM

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Namaste

Aik achchhi koshish ke liye dil se daad aur muqaabarqbaad...koshish ke ehsaas khoob rahen...yuunhi bazm ki raunaq badhaate rahiye aage bhee.

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waahh madhu ji kyaa baat hai kyaa andaaz hai....

bahut ummdah peshkash rahi apki is baar bhii.. aur waaqai ise padh kar ke main kah sakta hoon ke itna roomani kalaam 100 fee sadee fit baithta hai is forum me...

behad aashiqaana aur jazbaataon se bharaa hua kalaam laga mujhe.... dil se daad aur mubaarakbaad aapko is pahal ke liye.....

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Madhu....... Bohut hi pyari Ghazal hai.

Pehla sher kuch jyada pasand aaya...
Tumhaari in nigaahon se.......

Each kahu to ab sdc Ki tum raunak ban gayi Ho.

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meri zulfon ki chaa.nv me zara araam lena tum.
Meri ankho.n ki masti ko chura har shaam lena tum

Tumhari in nigaho.n se sanam maine bahut pi hai.
Agar jo ladkhadau.n mai.n to mujhko thaam lena tum

Tumhari baho.n me kho jau.n , gir jau.n..ya so jau.n..
nahi ye bhi zaroori hosh se fir kaam lena tum..

na ashko.n ki fikar karna inhe bah jane dena bas.
Mita do pyaas dil ki ab labo.n se jaam lena tum.

Hamari nee.nd poori ho tumhe bhi chain aa jaye.
Mere nazdeek aana aur apna naam lena tum.

Mujhe ruswaiya.n bhi kyu.n badi lagti hai.n ye pyari
Samajh jaoge apne sar koii ilzaam lena tum.

Tumhari baho.n me kho jau.n , gir jau.n..ya so jau.n..
nahi ye bhi zaroori hosh se fir kaam lena tum..

Itna zulm na kijiye huzoor ki alfaaz bhi sharma jaaye.....Bahut umdaa bahut dil se likhi hui ghazal hai, aapke ehsaas ko nacheez ka salaam, yunhi zor-e-kalam badhtaa rahe is umeed mein dua go...........



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bahut sundar likha hai madhu jee wah
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Namaste

Aik achchhi koshish ke liye dil se daad aur muqaabarqbaad...koshish ke ehsaas khoob rahen...yuunhi bazm ki raunaq badhaate rahiye aage bhee.

duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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aapne aakar hausla afzai ki achcha laga....

aate rahiyega..

takecare
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waahh madhu ji kyaa baat hai kyaa andaaz hai....

bahut ummdah peshkash rahi apki is baar bhii.. aur waaqai ise padh kar ke main kah sakta hoon ke itna roomani kalaam 100 fee sadee fit baithta hai is forum me...

behad aashiqaana aur jazbaataon se bharaa hua kalaam laga mujhe.... dil se daad aur mubaarakbaad aapko is pahal ke liye.....

likhtii rahen, khush rahen....

Shaad....

shukriya shaad ji.....

aapko bazm me dekhkar khushi huyi...daad ka tah edil se shukriya...

aate rahiyega.....

takecare
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Pehla sher kuch jyada pasand aaya...
Tumhaari in nigaahon se.......

Each kahu to ab sdc Ki tum raunak ban gayi Ho.

Bohut bohut Mubarakbaad....m
Raunak to aap sab ke aane se hai sarika....

Sabko pasand aaye to khushi milti hai....
Bahut shukriya.....

Aise hee sath deti rahna....

Aur jaldi hee apna likha kuch post karo....

Khush raho...

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meri zulfon ki chaa.nv me zara araam lena tum.
Meri ankho.n ki masti ko chura har shaam lena tum

tumhari in nigaho.n se sanam maine bahut pi hai.
Agar jo ladkhadau.n mai.n to mujhko thaam lena tum

tumhari baho.n me kho jau.n , gir jau.n..ya so jau.n..
Nahi ye bhi zaroori hosh se fir kaam lena tum..

Na ashko.n ki fikar karna inhe bah jane dena bas.
Mita do pyaas dil ki ab labo.n se jaam lena tum.

Hamari nee.nd poori ho tumhe bhi chain aa jaye.
Mere nazdeek aana aur apna naam lena tum.

Mujhe ruswaiya.n bhi kyu.n badi lagti hai.n ye pyari
samajh jaoge apne sar koii ilzaam lena tum.

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nahi ye bhi zaroori hosh se fir kaam lena tum..

Itna zulm na kijiye huzoor ki alfaaz bhi sharma jaaye.....Bahut umdaa bahut dil se likhi hui ghazal hai, aapke ehsaas ko nacheez ka salaam, yunhi zor-e-kalam badhtaa rahe is umeed mein dua go...........

..bas ek chhoti si koshish hai ye bhi hamesha ki tarah...khushi huyi ki jitne dil se likhi gayi utne hee man se aapne padhi bhi......aapki duaon aur sath ki hamesha zaroorat rahegi mujhe......

Dil se shukraguzar hoon...

Aate rahiyega.....

Apna khayaal rakhein...

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Behad shukriya...

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Mujhe ruswaiya.n bhi kyu.n badi lagti hai.n ye pyari
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meri zulfon ki chaa.nv me zara araam lena tum.
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Tumhari in nigaho.n se sanam maine bahut pi hai.
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Tumhari baho.n me kho jau.n , gir jau.n..ya so jau.n..
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na ashko.n ki fikar karna inhe bah jane dena bas.
Mita do pyaas dil ki ab labo.n se jaam lena tum.

Hamari nee.nd poori ho tumhe bhi chain aa jaye.
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Bahut achchi Ghazal kahi hai aapne......hame bahut pasand aayi.......dhero mubarakbaad.....
Aapko pasand aayi..bahut khushi huyi hame..

Aate rahiyega....

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Madhu ji..

aap ki yeh ghazal ka har sher roomani hai.... par ek sher main ashkoN ki baat na karti toh yeh ghazal ki rounak aur badh jaati !!! itne jhan-jhanahat paida krne wale sher k beech ashKoN ki kya jarurat..??


halaki yeh meri apni raay hai.... buri lage to mauf karna

aap ki dost

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Madhu ji..

aap ki yeh ghazal ka har sher roomani hai.... par ek sher main ashkoN ki baat na karti toh yeh ghazal ki rounak aur badh jaati !!! itne jhan-jhanahat paida krne wale sher k beech ashKoN ki kya jarurat..??


halaki yeh meri apni raay hai.... buri lage to mauf karna

aap ki dost

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Purvi dear....aapka bahut shukriya aapne ghazal ko itni tawajjo fi..itne pyaar se padha aur mahsoos kiya....

Bahut achcha laga mujhe..ye ashq kabhi kabhi yun hee aa jate hain bina vaqt aur vajah ke bas aise hee is sher me bhi aa gaye....

Maafi ki koi baat nahi.. aapki rai ka aage bhi intzaar rahega..

Aati rahna...

Takecare

Madhu..



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