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Lightbulb suno! tum mujhe kitna pyaar karte ho? - 16th June 2005, 05:08 PM

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tumhaari har hansi ka intzaar hota hai mujhe,,
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is muskkaan se har baar nayi zindgi mili hai..
jaane kyon ruk jaati hu aur kehti hu....
suno! .... mujhe tum kitna pyaar karte ho???

thak jaata hu rozmarra ki zindgi se..
to yaad karta hu in aankho ko,,
har pal ek nayi shararat si bhari hai jinme,,
fir bahut masti mein rokti hu unhe, kehti hu fir,,
suno! .... tum mujhe kitna pyaar karte ho???

ek taazgi hai hontho mein tumhaare,,
ye sunke sharmaati hu,,halke se muskuraati hu,,
ufffffff.... karke vo bass hanste chale jaate hain,,
achaanak fir yaad aata hai kuchh mujhe, kehti hu,,
achha suno! .. tum mujhe kitna pyaar karte ho???

nahi yakeen aata mujhe mere hi baare mein,,
ghoom aati hu mast titli si duniyaa bhar mein,,
shayad chot khaati hu kisi se fir,
aur gir padti hu fir se un baaho mein,
aur vo,bass bina koi shikwa liye,
sirf pyaar hota hai un aankho me,
na mujhe chah hai kisi suboot ki,
bass zindgi ho tum meri,
aaj jana hai maine sachmuch,
oh meri jaan!...tum mujhe itnaaaaaa pyaar karte ho.....

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Re: suno! tum mujhe kitna pyaar karte ho? - 16th June 2005, 07:05 PM

Wowwwwwwww thats was gr8 . Keep it up . I`ll wait for yr next post


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pyar bahut hai ye chalak raha hai

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Re: Re: suno! tum mujhe kitna pyaar karte ho? - 17th June 2005, 01:06 PM

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Wowwwwwwww thats was gr8 . Keep it up . I`ll wait for yr next post
hehehhee. thanxx angel for itneeeee bade woww ke liye....&. for aprreciating... i think first time i meeting u .. welcome here * thanx again
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pyar bahut hai ye chalak raha hai

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hello sonal... hope u r fine.. & shukriya.. is chhalakte pyaar ko samjhne ke liye...
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Re: suno! tum mujhe kitna pyaar karte ho? - 17th June 2005, 05:35 PM

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tumhaari har hansi ka intzaar hota hai mujhe,,
suna hai maine bhi bahut unse,,
is muskkaan se har baar nayi zindgi mili hai..
jaane kyon ruk jaati hu aur kehti hu....
suno! .... mujhe tum kitna pyaar karte ho???

thak jaata hu rozmarra ki zindgi se..
to yaad karta hu in aankho ko,,
har pal ek nayi shararat si bhari hai jinme,,
fir bahut masti mein rokti hu unhe, kehti hu fir,,
suno! .... tum mujhe kitna pyaar karte ho???

ek taazgi hai hontho mein tumhaare,,
ye sunke sharmaati hu,,halke se muskuraati hu,,
ufffffff.... karke vo bass hanste chale jaate hain,,
achaanak fir yaad aata hai kuchh mujhe, kehti hu,,
achha suno! .. tum mujhe kitna pyaar karte ho???

nahi yakeen aata mujhe mere hi baare mein,,
ghoom aati hu mast titli si duniyaa bhar mein,,
shayad chot khaati hu kisi se fir,
aur gir padti hu fir se un baaho mein,
aur vo,bass bina koi shikwa liye,
sirf pyaar hota hai un aankho me,
na mujhe chah hai kisi suboot ki,
bass zindgi ho tum meri,
aaj jana hai maine sachmuch,
oh meri jaan!...tum mujhe itnaaaaaa pyaar karte ho.....

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hi pallo,
wah bahut khoob. u know what i really cant express anything in love but wen i read writers on ishq , i feel that i shud learn to write on it. well well cuming to the point, its wonderfully expreesed. techniaclly i dont know but i love jo bhi dil se likha ho n yes i can say tht i loved reading this. khush raho. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.



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na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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17th June 2005, 07:08 PM

dear jasleen... lots of thanx for reading & appreciating it .... aur ye technically nahi likhi gayi hai dear.. these are just thoughts came to my mind last day.. aur bass 5 min me likhi gayi baat me kya tech........hehehhee isliye ye poem nahi thi bass khayal the.. kuchh feelings ek ladki ki... uska ye sawaal apne husband se ya lover se... ki suno! tum mujhe kitna pyaar karte ho.... vo 1000 baar kahe ki i love u a lot... lolzzzz fir bhi ye sawaal khatam nahi hota... she still wants to ask aur yahaan aap sabhi logo ne samjha.. thats greatt & more than enough for me..
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dilkashi ka aalam hota hai jab,
kuchh nihaarte hain vo humme sajte huye,
kuchh pyaar se kuchh sharm se,
sachhi hum gulnaar huye jaate hain,
fir se aankho. ko jhapjhapaate hain....
ahaaa.n ....mujhse tum kitna pyaar karte ho......

aksar sharma jaati hu subeh naha ke aane per,
jab saamna hota hai un suroor bhari nazro ka,
geele geysuo.n ko sehlaate se, vo muskuraate se,
us kashish bhari chhuan se humme sharmaate se,
aur hum achanak poochte hain ithlaate se,
hehehhe..kaho jara, mujhe tum kitna pyaar karte ho.....

vo madhosh si tanhaayiaa.n,
vo raat ki gehraaiyaa.n,
vo dil ki bechainiyaa.n,
vo baato.n ki sargoshiyaa.n,
vo taazi si lagti har shokh raat,
vo hosh khona unka, aur..
nasheman ho mehekna hamara,
behekne se pehle chehekna hamaara..
kaano me unke sargoshi si karna....suno na!
band karte vo aankheeee...shhhhhhhh........
main tumse kitna pyaar karta hu.....
vo silna hontho.n ka,
unka jawab kahin ghul jaaye rooh me meri,
kahin kho gaye ye lafz us junoon me, kuchh pal ko...
"suno...mujhe tum kitna pyaar karte ho...."


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pallo dd kaafi ahcha kalaam hai,kaafi alag hai aur padh kar bahut hi ahcha laga.khayalat bhi bahut ahche hain jo aapne pesh kiya.bas yunhi likhte rahiyega.



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meri subah ka suraj ban kar ...
jab tum mujhe uthathi ho,,,
aur maiN palkeN jhapkata hua
tumhe dekhta reh jata huN..
mere baloN maiN hathon ko pherte hue...
jab tum mera deedar karti ho ..
ankhoN se tab maiN ek hi baat kehta huN
Suno! maiN tumse bohat pyar karta huN

num bistar pe tumhare nishaN milte hai...
jinme mera bhi aks hai kahiN na kahiN..
jinhe dekh ke maiN kho jata hun...
kabhi sochta huN kabhi muskata huN...
tumhari sanseN phir mere seene se lagti haii
maiN madhoshi ke aalam maiN gungunata hun
Suno maiN tumse bohat pyar karta huN...

daftar ki tayari maiN kameez jab pehnu
mere kareeb use band karte hue...
mujhe jab hasrat se dekhti ho ...
nazreN phir madhoshi ka jaam pee leti hai...
dhadhkan ruk si jati hai..
bekraari badh hi jati hai...
nabz tham si jati hai...
palat jati ho tum keh kar ... jao!...
par maiN but sa bana reh jata huN...
tum phir kehti ho jao dair na ho jao kahiN...
ek pal ruk kehta huN! chutti hai aaj..
aur kas ke bahoN maiN tumhe bharta huN...
phir sargoshi ke safar pe badhte kehta huN
Suno! maiN tumse bohat pyar karta huN




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jab tumne ye link diya tha padhne ko .. tab padh ke ek hi baat dhyn maiN aayi thi ki maiN isse mehroom kaise raha .. aur soca .. jawaab thoda soch samajh ke dounga ... to bas likhne ki koshish ki hai .. tumhare jitna accha to nahi ... par umeed hai tumhe pasanad aayega ,,... nahi aaya to muafi

apna khayal rakhna

aur yuN hi likhte rehna

tumhara apna

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pallo dd kaafi ahcha kalaam hai,kaafi alag hai aur padh kar bahut hi ahcha laga.khayalat bhi bahut ahche hain jo aapne pesh kiya.bas yunhi likhte rahiyega.



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thank u so much for liking it.. ye to bahut purana hai... isme abhi kuchh add kiya tha tabhi ye fir se uper aa gaya tha... tumne padha aur tumne achha bhi laga... nice to knw... bass yu hi saath rehna
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meri subah ka suraj ban kar ...
jab tum mujhe uthathi ho,,,
aur maiN palkeN jhapkata hua
tumhe dekhta reh jata huN..
mere baloN maiN hathon ko pherte hue...
jab tum mera deedar karti ho ..
ankhoN se tab maiN ek hi baat kehta huN
Suno! maiN tumse bohat pyar karta huN

num bistar pe tumhare nishaN milte hai...
jinme mera bhi aks hai kahiN na kahiN..
jinhe dekh ke maiN kho jata hun...
kabhi sochta huN kabhi muskata huN...
tumhari sanseN phir mere seene se lagti haii
maiN madhoshi ke aalam maiN gungunata hun
Suno maiN tumse bohat pyar karta huN...

daftar ki tayari maiN kameez jab pehnu
mere kareeb use band karte hue...
mujhe jab hasrat se dekhti ho ...
nazreN phir madhoshi ka jaam pee leti hai...
dhadhkan ruk si jati hai..
bekraari badh hi jati hai...
nabz tham si jati hai...
palat jati ho tum keh kar ... jao!...
par maiN but sa bana reh jata huN...
tum phir kehti ho jao dair na ho jao kahiN...
ek pal ruk kehta huN! chutti hai aaj..
aur kas ke bahoN maiN tumhe bharta huN...
phir sargoshi ke safar pe badhte kehta huN
Suno! maiN tumse bohat pyar karta huN




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jab tumne ye link diya tha padhne ko .. tab padh ke ek hi baat dhyn maiN aayi thi ki maiN isse mehroom kaise raha .. aur soca .. jawaab thoda soch samajh ke dounga ... to bas likhne ki koshish ki hai .. tumhare jitna accha to nahi ... par umeed hai tumhe pasanad aayega ,,... nahi aaya to muafi

apna khayal rakhna

aur yuN hi likhte rehna

tumhara apna

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ye padh ke sachhi me , jaise ek ladki ke sawaalo ka sahi jawaab diya ho aapne...aisa laga.. bahut bahutt intimate, bahut pyaar se aapne reply kiya... jaise ekpal ke liye khud ko ussi jageh pe rakha ho... main aksar yu hi karti hu... lekin aaj jab aapko padha ..to laga ki aapne khud ko us frame me fit kiya ho jab tak ye likhte rahe....very intimate ,, very romantic & lovely u wrote...hehehehe.. sharam ke saath hansi bhi aa rahi thi... but bahut pyaara hai ye...
thanx for answering..
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29th September 2005, 09:35 PM

hi pallavi...very well written.....i loved it dear...keep it up!!!!
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hi pallavi...very well written.....i loved it dear...keep it up!!!!
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Re : suno! tum mujhe kitna pyaar karte ho? - 9th January 2006, 07:01 PM

Hi pallavi,

Wow, its great
Kya baat hai aapke andaaj ki, i like it.
Hum to fan ho gaye aapke, aapki agli post ka intazaar karange.

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Re: Re : suno! tum mujhe kitna pyaar karte ho? - 20th January 2006, 12:27 AM

[QUOTE]Originally posted by Love But Alone
[B]Hi pallavi,

Wow, its great
Kya baat hai aapke andaaj ki, i like it.
Hum to fan ho gaye aapke, aapki agli post ka intazaar karange.

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heheheh naam kya hai aapka... yu hi hi love bolti rahi to lolzzz.. aur post ko pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shuriya... yahi koshish hoti hai ki dard ko apnao to poore zor se gale lagao aur ishk me jao to hadd paar kar jao lolzz.. heheh jaada to ne hua na.... hehehe
anyways nice to meet u ..
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