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17th August 2006, 12:45 PM
dosto. aaj pata nahi kyoun mere kisi gumnaam dost ki mujhe yaad aa gayee. or jab kuch likhne baitha to achanak ye nagma taiyar ho gaya. pata nahi kaisa lagega aapko . per dil ki baat kagaz per utar gayee hai. ab aapke samne hai.
kaise kahoon tumse ki main tumhe kitna chahta hoon. kaise kahoon tumse ki jheel si aankhon me doob marna chahta hoon kaise kahoon ki main tumse iskq karna chahta hoon. bas gayee hai dil main tu mere kuch is tarah seepi ke pet main koi moti ho jis tarah main manta hoo.n ki tu meri manzin nahi hai shayad per dil me teri mohhabt ke chirag jalana chahta hoo.n ek baar chupke se dekha tha thujhe aaine main maine deewangi meri thujhko fir us aaine main doondti hai main nahi kahta ki tu mujhe na mili to mar jaunga main haan agar bhula dogi tum mujhe to jinda rahna mushkil hoga o sitamgar mat dhaa mere dil pe sitam ithna ki toot jaun. tootne ko taiyar hoon gr bahon me samhale tu mujhko. mar raha hoon main ab jeene ki aas banki na rahi chain se mar jaunga gar ek baar tu milne aa jaye. aapka dost |
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17th August 2006, 12:57 PM
dilip bhai kaise ho......yaar tum to chha gaye ho achi nazam likhi hai......ehsaas bhut pyare hai lafzon ko bhee bakhubi istemaal kiya hai......meri daad kabool karna.........raj.........
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17th August 2006, 02:13 PM
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main manta hoo.n ki tu meri manzin nahi hai shayad per dil me teri mohhabt ke chirag jalana chahta hoo.n main nahi kahta ki tu mujhe na mili to mar jaunga main haan agar bhula dogi tum mujhe to jinda rahna mushkil hoga o sitamgar mat dhaa mere dil pe sitam ithna ki toot jaun. tootne ko taiyar hoon gr bahon me samhale tu mujhko. bahut pyari koshish hai, dil se mubrakbaad kabool karna aur aaggey bhi aise hi likhtey rahna. tumari didi  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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19th August 2006, 11:19 AM
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thankyou for giving me this wonderful words................... aapki daad mere sar aankhon per hai.................. aap jaisa mashhoor shayar meri post par aakar tarif kar raha hai. isse bada kya ho sakta hai. ......................... such poochiye aaj mera kad or bad gaya hai. ....... ...................age bhi aap ase hi meri post per aa kar mera kad badate rahiyega. aapka adna sa dost dilip |
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26th August 2006, 01:24 PM
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sorry didi pata nahi kaise aapka reply meri nazaro se chook gaya or main reply bhi nahi kar saka aap khud itna khoob surat likhti hain ki main to waise hi aapka kayal hoo.n fir aapne meri is post ka jaw3ab de kar mujhe apna gulam bana liya................... shukriya.. aapka bhaiya dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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26th August 2006, 02:09 PM
main nahi kahta ki tu mujhe na mili to mar jaunga main
haan agar bhula dogi tum mujhe to jinda rahna mushkil hoga o sitamgar mat dhaa mere dil pe sitam ithna ki toot jaun. tootne ko taiyar hoon gr bahon me samhale tu mujhko dilip ji,acha laga aapko padhkar.yeh do sher ache lage likhte rahiye. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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28th August 2006, 11:14 AM
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shukriya sorry aapka naam to mujhe nahi maloom magar accha laga ki aap meri post per aayi or aapne reply diya............ jab bhi kisi thread ko reply milta hai to dil bag bag hojata hai of fir agli bar ke liye or gahrais e koshish ki jati hai............. ase hi aap mera housal badate rahiyega or aate rahiyega. aapke reply ka mujhe sada intzar rahega. aapka dost dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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28th August 2006, 11:39 AM
bahot khub dost bahot hi badhiya likha hai tumne mujhe tumse zarur kuch sikhne ko milega ........keep writing dost ...............tumhara dost dhaval
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28th August 2006, 01:57 PM
dilip ji..
kehne ke shabd hi nahi hai.. dhawal ji ne humse poocha tha ki log pyaar kyu chupate hain.. aapne apne pyar ka khula izhaar kar diya.. sach hai ki apne pyaar ko pa kar uske saath zindagi beetana khushkismati hai..par usi pyaar ke kho jane par bhi uska intzaar karte karte palko ko moond lena BANDAGI par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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28th August 2006, 01:58 PM
dilip ji..
kehne ke shabd hi nahi hai.. dhawal ji ne humse poocha tha ki log pyaar kyu chupate hain.. aapne apne pyar ka khula izhaar kar diya.. sach hai ki apne pyaar ko pa kar uske saath zindagi beetana khushkismati hai..par usi pyaar ke kho jane par bhi uska intzaar karte karte palko ko moond lena BANDAGI kehlati hai.. aapki is bandagi ko mera salaam.. aapki dost nisha (sorry pehle galti se adha hi post hua) par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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29th August 2006, 07:48 AM
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dhaval mere bhai tum to khud hi itna khoob surat likhte ho ki main kya kahoon tumse .. ase mein tumhara meri is thread per aana or meri tarif karna ......................... bus yun samajh lo ki mere per lag gaye.............. shukriya mere yaar... isi prakar apna pyar tum mujher lutate rahana....................... tumhara dost dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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29th August 2006, 09:29 AM
hi dilip kaisa hai dost?
yaar tum jaise dost hai mere isiliye main kuch likh pata hu tum sab ka sath aur pyaar mujhe achhe se acha likhne ki himmat deta hai dost ... dhaval |
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1st September 2006, 11:44 AM
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tumhare in golden word ke liye jo tumne kahe hai.n tum mujhe dost mante ho ye mere liye bahut hai...... meri dosti tumhare liye sada meri jaan se badkar rahegi ye wada raha..... or tm hamesha accha likhte raho ye khuda se main dua karoonga... tumhara dost dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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na jane kahan kahan se aapke kalam meri nazro-n ke samne aa rahe hai. ab aap kahenge ki '' to mei kya karu'' fir mein kahungi ki ab aapka likha samne ayega to reply to karna padega na. chaliye ji koi baat nahi aapne bahot achha likha hai. ab jyada mujhe bolna nahi aata. si liye itna hi likh rahi hu ki aapka likha laajavab hai. ummid hai ki unhi aap likhte rahenge bass likhte rahenge. ok ji. meri shubhkamnaye to lete jaiye ji ok bye take care aapki dost pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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10th September 2006, 01:20 AM
hello dost,
aapki shayri padhi ... jayada theek nahi hain ... ek tarannum nahi hain .... means ek lay nahi hain pehle aapne lines mein 'chahta hoon' use kiya ... phir 'dhoondta hu' means aap ' ... ta hu' use kar rahe the ... phir aapne alag shabd use kerne shuru kar diye ... sher achhhe hain ... but not related to each other. but u hav good words. shayar achhe ho par shayri mein .. tarannum lao... shabdo ki achhi pehchaan hain aapko ... ise aur achhee se istemaal karo ... likhte raho ... prashant |
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accha laga aapko yahan dekha kar... bhai kahan rahti ho aaj kal dikahi hi nahi deti.n........... pyar ki jo paribhasa aapne di hai.n kamal hain ek payr karne wala hi ese golden wprd kah sakta hai.n aapka salam hame dil se sweekar hai... aap ase hi hamara housla badate rahiyega or haa.n apna khayal rakhana.... aapka dost dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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10th September 2006, 01:09 PM
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aaj jab main idhar ko aayi to maine aapki is peshkash ko dekha accha laga padkar bus jee u.N maniye ki dil khush ho gaya... pahle jab maine aapko pada tha aap kuch khas nahi likh pate the per aaj aapko padkar sacchi lag raha hai ki aap bahut mehnat kar rahe hain main to aapki dost hoo.n per lag raha hai ki aap mujhe bhool chuke hain na koi pm na koi ......... khair chodo ab jab dubara se is paribar main aa gaye hai.n to aapke or mere sab gilesikabe door ho jaye.nge or bataiyega kya naya chal raha hai.. aapki is behad khoobsurat peshkas per sonia ki daad hazir hai hazoor dil se ise kbool farmaiye aapki dost SONIA |
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accha laga aapko yahan dekha kar...ab aapne jab reply de hi diya hai to mujhe bhi shukriya kahna hi padega na....  ....................... aap ase hi hamara housla badate rahiyega or haa.n apna khayal rakhana....aapka dost dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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aap ne yahan aakar jo mere kalam ko izzat afazai hai uske liye main aapka shukarguzar hoo.n............ aapne sahi kaha ki isme koi tarrnum nahi hai... koi lay nahi hai main bhi nahi kahta ki isme koi tarrnum hai.... ye sirf mere man ke bhav hain jo kagaz per utar gaye or sher ho gaye main to inhe sher bhe nahi manta......... wanki main aage se koshish karoonga ki aapko koi shiyakat ka mouka na doo.n........ agli baar bhi aap suggession jaroor digiyega jisse main kuch behatar likh sakoo.n aapka ekbegana sa dost dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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13th September 2006, 09:29 AM
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hi sonia kaisi ho bhia bada accha laga tumhara ye reply padkar dil ko badi thandak pahunchai hai isne..... sach main soniya tumne mujhe hamesha sahara diya hai... mujhe suggession diye hain jiski badoulat main ab kuch sekh raha hoo.n tum hamesha ase hi mera housla badate rahna begana sa dost nahi kahoonga tumse tumhara dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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hi sonia kaisi ho bhia bada accha laga tumhara ye reply padkar dil ko badi thandak pahunchai hai isne..... sach main soniya tumne mujhe hamesha sahara diya hai... mujhe suggession diye hain jiski badoulat main ab kuch sekh raha hoo.n tum hamesha ase hi mera housla badate rahna begana sa dost nahi kahoonga tumse tumhara dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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14th September 2006, 12:56 PM
Dilip ji,
aapko padha.. aur aapke emotion ko mahsus kiya.. sach mujhe bahut achchha laga... laga ki kaisi udhenbun rahati hai jin paristhityo ko aapne jeevant kiya hai.. beshak technical dristi se esmein kuchh kahmiya hai.. dil ke dristi mein ekdam durust hai... likhate rahiye... Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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shukriya janab jo aap mere is post per aaye or aapne ise saraha.,.... or aapne ye bhi ek dam durust farmaya ki isme kuch technicali problem hai per kya karoo.n janab main abhi seekh hi raha hoo.n aage se main koshish karoo.nga ki aapko shikayat ka koi mouka na doo.n ummid karta hoo.n aap ese hi aakar mujhe margdarshan dete rahenge....... shukriya ek begana sa dost dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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