~**Maangi thi ik duaa**~

[sameer'shaad']

maangii thi ik duaa ke tujhe bhool jaaen ham,
honTon pe bhool ke bhi teraa naam laaen ham.

jo band kareN aankh tujhe khwaab me dekhen,
kholen jo aankh tujh ko hi pahloo me paaen ham.

duniyaa se teraa aaj bhii charchaa kiyaa karen,
ghazlon me teraa zikr hi padh ke sunaaen ham.

chaahenge bhalaa aur kisii naazneeN ko kyaa,
ye hi bahot hai tujh ko agar bhool paaen ham.

aye shaad yahaan kon sunegaa terii aaheN,
ik din udaas shahar se chal louT jaaen ham.

Shaad....

[sukanya]

Shaad

Hamesha ki taranh behtarein rachna.Keep up the good work.

[sabaa kiyani]

buhet acha,a likha,a hai aa,p ne shaad saheb

[Madhu 14]

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'

maangii thi ik duaa ke tujhe bhool jaaen ham,
honTon pe tere apnaa kabhii naam laaen ham.

jo band kareN aankh tujhe khwaab me dekhen,
kholen jo aankh tujh ko hi pahloo me paaen ham.

duniyaa se teraa aaj bhii charchaa kiyaa karen,
ghazlon me teraa zikr hi padh ke sunaaen ham.

chaahenge bhalaa aur kisii naazneeN ko kyaa,
ye hi bahot hai tujh ko agar bhool paaen ham.

aye shaad yahaan kon sunegaa terii aaheN,
ik din udaas shahar se chal louT jaaen ham.

Shaad....

waaahhh waaahh!!!ishq ka ye andaaz e bayaan bhi khoob raha shaad sahab.........

Badi masoomiyat se sher kahe hain..bahut lutf aaya.....

Daad qubool kijiye......

Salamat rahein...likhte rahein. ....

[sameer'shaad']

Originally Posted by sukanya

Shaad

Hamesha ki taranh behtarein rachna.Keep up the good work.

bahut bahut shukriyaa aapka sukanya dee......................... aatii raha karen.....


shaad.........

[sameer'shaad']

Originally Posted by sabaa kiyani

buhet acha,a likha,a hai aa,p ne shaad saheb

behad mashkoor hoon aapka saba saahiba.. khaak lafzon ko tavajjoh dene ka bahut shukriyyaaa.................

[Mujahid Ali]

Bohat ba-kamaal ghazal hai aapki

Bohat hi munfarid andaaz hai aapka

Daad qabool karey
Dua mai yaad rakhey

[sameer'shaad']

Originally Posted by Madhu 14

waaahhh waaahh!!!ishq ka ye andaaz e bayaan bhi khoob raha shaad sahab.........

Badi masoomiyat se sher kahe hain..bahut lutf aaya.....

Daad qubool kijiye......

Salamat rahein...likhte rahein. ....

behad shukriyaa aapka madhu ji.....................................

[sameer'shaad']

Originally Posted by Mujahid Ali

Bohat ba-kamaal ghazal hai aapki

Bohat hi munfarid andaaz hai aapka

Daad qabool karey
Dua mai yaad rakhey

inaayat hai aapki janaab Mujaahid saahab..........................

[Purvi]

Shaad Sahab,


Aadaab,

ek lambe arse k baad shayri.com par lauti hoon... aap ki yeh rachna dekhi aur bina taarif k rahe na saki.... bahetarin koshish par dil o daal kabool karein..

1 sher bahot hee pasand aaya :

chaahenge bhalaa aur kisii naazneeN ko kyaa,
ye hi bahot hai tujh ko agar bhool paaen ham.

[Pulkit_gupta]

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'

maangii thi ik duaa ke tujhe bhool jaaen ham,
honTon pe tere apnaa kabhii naam laaen ham.

jo band kareN aankh tujhe khwaab me dekhen,
kholen jo aankh tujh ko hi pahloo me paaen ham.

duniyaa se teraa aaj bhii charchaa kiyaa karen,
ghazlon me teraa zikr hi padh ke sunaaen ham.

chaahenge bhalaa aur kisii naazneeN ko kyaa,
ye hi bahot hai tujh ko agar bhool paaen ham.

aye shaad yahaan kon sunegaa terii aaheN,
ik din udaas shahar se chal louT jaaen ham.

Shaad....

Bahut khoob shoaib miyaan,

Dil ke ehsaas behad saadgi se piroye hain is baar... Dil ko yeh do sher bahut pasand aaye:

jo band kareN aankh tujhe khwaab me dekhen,
kholen jo aankh tujh ko hi pahloo me paaen ham.

duniyaa se teraa aaj bhii charchaa kiyaa karen,
ghazlon me teraa zikr hi padh ke sunaaen ham.


Aapki ghazal me pehla misra baaki ki ghazal se alag ehsaas me laga... Us me aap bhool jaane ki baat kar rahe hain aur baaki me paas laane ki... Kya main sahi samajh paaya hoon? Raushni daaliyega.

Har baar ki tarah dil se dheron daad. Likhte rahen aur apna khayal rakhen.

[sameer'shaad']

Originally Posted by Purvi

Shaad Sahab,


Aadaab,

ek lambe arse k baad shayri.com par lauti hoon... aap ki yeh rachna dekhi aur bina taarif k rahe na saki.... bahetarin koshish par dil o daal kabool karein..

1 sher bahot hee pasand aaya :

chaahenge bhalaa aur kisii naazneeN ko kyaa,
ye hi bahot hai tujh ko agar bhool paaen ham.

Purvi ji aadaab.....

awwal to aapko bazm me maujood dekh kar khushi ka jo aalam hai usey bayaan nahi kiyaa jaa saktaa.... aise hamaare kitne hi puraane dost hain sdc ke jo ab nazar nahi aate, aur yakaayak kisii se mulaaqaat hojaae to dil jhoom uthtaa hai....

aap sab hain to SDC ki shaan hai..... aate raha kijiye....

ab derii se aane ke liye main aapse muaafii ka arzmand hoon... ummeed karta hoon aapne maaaf kar diya hoga....

behad shukrguzaar hoon jo aap bazm me kuch der ko thahrin aur apne alfaazon se hame nawaazaa..... tahe dil se aapka istaqbaal karta hoon aur iltijaa bhi ke ab aapka aana jana bana rahegaa...

khush rahiye , aur apna kahyaal rakhiye....

Shaad....

[sameer'shaad']

Originally Posted by Pulkit_gupta

Bahut khoob shoaib miyaan,

Dil ke ehsaas behad saadgi se piroye hain is baar... Dil ko yeh do sher bahut pasand aaye:

jo band kareN aankh tujhe khwaab me dekhen,
kholen jo aankh tujh ko hi pahloo me paaen ham.

duniyaa se teraa aaj bhii charchaa kiyaa karen,
ghazlon me teraa zikr hi padh ke sunaaen ham.


Aapki ghazal me pehla misra baaki ki ghazal se alag ehsaas me laga... Us me aap bhool jaane ki baat kar rahe hain aur baaki me paas laane ki... Kya main sahi samajh paaya hoon? Raushni daaliyega.

Har baar ki tarah dil se dheron daad. Likhte rahen aur apna khayal rakhen.

Pulkit bhai ko shaad ka salaam pahuche......

ek muddat ke baad aapse mahfil me rabt ho rahaa hai.... behad khushi hui aapko yahan dekh ke, aur ye jaan ke ke khaak lafz aapko pasand aa sake..

bhai pyaar me dard hai, tadap hai iltija hai to naraazgii bhi hai, bas ek koshihs ki thi ke har rang ka istemaal kar sakoon jisse ke dil ka gubaar thodaa sa kamm ho jaae...

shukriyaa jo aapne apna waqt diyaa, aate raha kijiye aur apna khayaal rakhiye....

Shaad.............