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Khud Bhi roye Hame Rula ke wo ( Qadeertoopchi ) - 7th July 2010, 11:37 PM

yarane Bazm Adaab o Tasleemath , eak adna si koshish liye bazm me tashreef farma hon , ap ki qeemti aara ka muntazir ..




Khud na aaye hame bula ke wo !!
Uspe haste hain dil jala ke wo!!

Unki aankhein yahi to kehti hain!!
Raat poori jagge, jaga ke wo !!

Chaid ke daastan mohabbt ki !!
Khud bhi roye bhut rula ke wo!!

Yaad ata hai unka sharmana !!
Hunt katre the khuch bata ke wo !!

Chand kya hoga ab ayan dekho !!
Chath pe aye hain saj saja ke wo..!!

Kya mahubbath hai unki aye qadir !!
Mujh se rothe, mujhe mana ke wo !!


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yarane Bazm Adaab o Tasleemath , eak adna si koshish liye bazm me tashreef farma hon , ap ki qeemti aara ka muntazir ..




Khud na aaye hame bula ke wo !!
Uspe haste hain dil jala ke wo!!

Unki aankhein yahi to kehti hain!!
Raat poori jagge, jaga ke wo !!

Chaid ke daastan mohabbt ki !!
Khud bhi roye bhut rula ke wo!!

Yaad ata hai unka sharmana !!
Hunt katre the khuch bata ke wo !!

Chand kya hoga ab ayan dekho !!
Chath pe aye hain saj saja ke wo..!!

Kya mahubbath hai unki aye qadir !!
Mujh se rothe, mujhe mana ke wo !!


Qadeertoopchi

Chaid ke daastan mohabbt ki !!
Khud bhi roye bhut rula ke wo!!

Kya mahubbath hai unki aye qadir !!
Mujh se rothe, mujhe mana ke wo !!

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yarane Bazm Adaab o Tasleemath , eak adna si koshish liye bazm me tashreef farma hon , ap ki qeemti aara ka muntazir ..




Khud na aaye hame bula ke wo !!
Uspe haste hain dil jala ke wo!!

Unki aankhein yahi to kehti hain!!
Raat poori jagge, jaga ke wo !!

Chaid ke daastan mohabbt ki !!
Khud bhi roye bhut rula ke wo!!

Yaad ata hai unka sharmana !!
Hunt katre the khuch bata ke wo !!

Chand kya hoga ab ayan dekho !!
Chath pe aye hain saj saja ke wo..!!

Kya mahubbath hai unki aye qadir !!
Mujh se rothe, mujhe mana ke wo !!


Qadeertoopchi

hahahahhhahaha..............qadeer sahab bahut khoob

ye bhi khoob kahi

Yaad ata hai unka sharmana !!
Hunt katre the khuch bata ke wo !!

ek meri taraf se suno....

leke meri wafa ka imtihaan
thak gaye mujko aazma ke vo..............

ye jawaab de dena aap un ko
aapki taraf se jab bhi milen wo

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yarane Bazm Adaab o Tasleemath , eak adna si koshish liye bazm me tashreef farma hon , ap ki qeemti aara ka muntazir ..





Khud na aaye hame bula ke wo !!
Uspe haste hain dil jala ke wo!!

Unki aankhein yahi to kehti hain!!
Raat poori jagge, jaga ke wo !!

Chaid ke daastan mohabbt ki !!
Khud bhi roye bhut rula ke wo!!

Yaad ata hai unka sharmana !!
Hunt katre the khuch bata ke wo !!

Chand kya hoga ab ayan dekho !!
Chath pe aye hain saj saja ke wo..!!

Kya mahubbath hai unki aye qadir !!
Mujh se rothe, mujhe mana ke wo !!



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Unki aankhein yahi to kehti hain!!
Raat poori jagge, jaga ke wo !!



Chaid ke daastan mohabbt ki !!
Khud bhi roye bhut rula ke wo!!


kya baat hai bhut hi dilfaraib ghazal janaab khaas karke ye aashaar bhut hi khoob rahe daad hazir hai qubool keejiye likhte rahiye aur mehfil mai aate rahiye


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Chaid ke daastan mohabbt ki !!

Khud bhi roye bhut rula ke wo!!

Kya mahubbath hai unki aye qadir !!
Mujh se rothe, mujhe mana ke wo !!

These two are awesome sir

Keep sharing gud work


Apki mahubbaton ka behad shurkriya .. Amma yaar ye sir kiska naam hai .. Hamara naam to Abdulqadeertoopchi hai ,, ha ha ,

umid hai aage bhi issi tarhan hausla afazai hoti rahegi ..


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Apki mahubbaton ka behad shurkriya .. Amma yaar ye sir kiska naam hai .. Hamara naam to Abdulqadeertoopchi hai ,, ha ha ,

umid hai aage bhi issi tarhan hausla afazai hoti rahegi ..


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hahahahhhahaha..............qadeer sahab bahut khoob

ye bhi khoob kahi

Yaad ata hai unka sharmana !!
Hunt katre the khuch bata ke wo !!

ek meri taraf se suno....

leke meri wafa ka imtihaan
thak gaye mujko aazma ke vo..............

ye jawaab de dena aap un ko
aapki taraf se jab bhi milen wo

Zidd sahab aadab ,,

apki mahubbaton ka behad shukriya sahab ,, Tashakkur ke liye alfazon se qasir hon .. allah apko khush rakhe ..

Bhai abhi tak wo thake nahi hain ..ha ha lol.. Apka sher sanbhal ke rakhonga ..


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Makhta lajawab raha mere bhai......

Kya mahubbath hai unki aye qadir !!
Mujh se rothe, mujhe mana ke wo !!


Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

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13th July 2010, 05:03 AM

Chand kya hoga ab ayan dekho !!
Chath pe aye hain saj saja ke wo..!!



Kya mahubbath hai unki aye qadir !!
Mujh se rothe, mujhe mana ke wo !!



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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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19th July 2010, 06:37 PM

Wa alikumassalam warehmatullaahi wabarakatuhu..

yooN to poori ki poori ghazal tareef ki haQdaar hai !

par maqta ...


Kya mahubbath hai unki aye qadir !!

Mujh se rothe, mujhe mana ke wo !!


bahut khoob tamaam ashaar aat meiN hume ye behad khoobsorat laga !

ummeed hai aage bhi aapki Qalam se aise kalaam padhne ko milte rahenge !

Daad ke saath !

DuoaN ke saath





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yarane Bazm Adaab o Tasleemath , eak adna si koshish liye bazm me tashreef farma hon , ap ki qeemti aara ka muntazir ..




Khud na aaye hame bula ke wo !!
Uspe haste hain dil jala ke wo!!

Unki aankhein yahi to kehti hain!!
Raat poori jagge, jaga ke wo !!

Chaid ke daastan mohabbt ki !!
Khud bhi roye bhut rula ke wo!!

Yaad ata hai unka sharmana !!
Hunt katre the khuch bata ke wo !!

Chand kya hoga ab ayan dekho !!
Chath pe aye hain saj saja ke wo..!!

Kya mahubbath hai unki aye qadir !!
Mujh se rothe, mujhe mana ke wo !!


Qadeertoopchi


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Wa alikumassalam warehmatullaahi wabarakatuhu..

yooN to poori ki poori ghazal tareef ki haQdaar hai !

par maqta ...


Kya mahubbath hai unki aye qadir !!
Mujh se rothe, mujhe mana ke wo !!


bahut khoob tamaam ashaar aat meiN hume ye behad khoobsorat laga !

ummeed hai aage bhi aapki Qalam se aise kalaam padhne ko milte rahenge !

Daad ke saath !

DuoaN ke saath

Zainy Saheba Aadab ,,


Apne kaha hai to shayad Ghazal thik thak hi hogi ,, Apki dad paakar dil bagh bagh ho gaya .. issi tarhan apni tasurath zahir karte rahen .. ap jaisi shukhan shinaas ki dad mere liye faqr ka Baaic hai ,, Apne bhi qaaas taur se maqte ko pasand faramaya .. shayad ye bahoth se logon ke zaati tajrube pe Mabni hai .. Apki duan ke liye azhd mashkoor o mumnoo hon .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..


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