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3rd May 2005, 08:24 PM
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at night I have the courage to dream of you. I look at the sky and I think that you are also doing the same... Only at night I have the courage to think of you. When holding me in your arms You said… “it’s forever.” Only at night I have the courage to remember you. when while drying your wet hair by the fire you said: “anywhere I will be I will always remember your poetry…” Only at night I have the courage to regret you. Even living thousand years I can never forget That night…that moment in which Hugging me tightly you told me… “I will return no more…”. Only at night I have the courage to wait for you. To see you arriving again…to hear you Calling my name… as in those times… Only at night I have the courage to shed my tears… Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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3rd May 2005, 08:38 PM
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at night I have the courage to dream of you. I look at the sky and I think that you are also doing the same... Beautiful Thot!! Only at night I have the courage to think of you. When holding me in your arms You said… “it’s forever.” Wow.... so touching.... Loved it!! Only at night I have the courage to remember you. when while drying your wet hair by the fire you said: “anywhere I will be I will always remember your poetry…” Who wud not? creating such classics evryday.... Only at night I have the courage to regret you. Even living thousand years I can never forget That night…that moment in which Hugging me tightly you told me… “I will return no more…”. Aaaaaah... that touch of pain... beautifully expressed!! Only at night I have the courage to wait for you. To see you arriving again…to hear you Calling my name… as in those times… Only at night I have the courage to shed my tears… Waaaaaaaaah! Bhaiya! This one is a classic... So so so beautiful.. so touching...Not a better way to put ur feelings on paper... I just loved it...Mere paas to taareef ke bhi shabd nahin hain... just keep wrting these caassics bro.. meri dil se daad aapke saath hai!!! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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3rd May 2005, 08:45 PM
Hi Amanush bhai,
Wonderful....truly a wonderful work... I really liked the way you expressed it... Thanks Rohin |
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3rd May 2005, 09:43 PM
Chote Bhai...
Toum ne aaj phir hamari koshish ko itna maan diya ki bahout kouch aur likhne ka prerna mila... Bas itni hi aasha rahegi ki hamare kalaamon ko paDte paDte toum thak na jaao... Rohin Bhai... Posting any of my creations...I really look forward to receive a reply from you...Seeing your comment is a gem of privilege...agar kabhi koyi galti bhi ho to bata diya karna...I would like to improve... Thanks to both of you! Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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9th May 2005, 11:20 PM
hi amanush
MAsterpeice i can call this  beautifully expressed....in a mix of pain.. i loved these words... Only at night I have the courage to regret you. Even living thousand years I can never forget That night…that moment in which Hugging me tightly you told me… “I will return no more…”. Only at night I have the courage to shed my tears… keep writing ...this is beautifully expressed....masterpeice i would say again!! Regards Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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10th May 2005, 07:00 PM
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at night I have the courage to dream of you. I look at the sky and I think that you are also doing the same... Only at night I have the courage to think of you. When holding me in your arms You said… “it’s forever.” Only at night I have the courage to remember you. when while drying your wet hair by the fire you said: “anywhere I will be I will always remember your poetry…” Only at night I have the courage to regret you. Even living thousand years I can never forget That night…that moment in which Hugging me tightly you told me… “I will return no more…”. Only at night I have the courage to wait for you. To see you arriving again…to hear you Calling my name… as in those times… Only at night I have the courage to shed my tears… Amanush... Kya baat hai mere yaar ....kya likh gaye ho aap...kuchh apna sa hi fasaana shaayad. YooNhi likhte raho. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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10th May 2005, 08:37 PM
amanush bhai
bohat hi kamaal ka likha hai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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11th May 2005, 01:57 PM
hi amanush
MAsterpeice i can call this beautifully expressed....in a mix of pain.. i loved these words... Only at night I have the courage to regret you. Even living thousand years I can never forget That night…that moment in which Hugging me tightly you told me… “I will return no more…”. Only at night I have the courage to shed my tears… keep writing ...this is beautifully expressed....masterpeice i would say again!! Regards Priya Priya ji... So nice to see you here...and thanks so much for appreciating these lines... Take care... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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11th May 2005, 02:05 PM
Kya baat hai mere yaar ....kya likh gaye ho aap...kuchh apna sa hi fasaana shaayad.
YooNhi likhte raho. Chaand Dear Chaand Bhai... Aap hi ka fasaana to hai... aap ke kitne hi ache kalaampadkar aap ke dil hamare saamne ek khoula kitaab sa hai... so aapke rang main apne hi rang mila kar dekhiya kya kouch nikal aaya... Aate rahiyega aur younhi apne comments dete rahiye...acha lagta hai... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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11th May 2005, 02:13 PM
amanush bhai
bohat hi kamaal ka likha hai kunal Kunnu Bhai...(Kunnu kehne ka ijaazat hai na?) Aap ko yahan dekhkar hum bahout khoush houe...aap jahan par bhi post karte hein...hum wahan bhouke sher ki tarah aap ke kalaam par tout parte hein... Waqt nikaal kar hamare kavita ko daad dene ka bahout shukriya... Aate rahiyega aur apne khayaal rakhiye... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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11th May 2005, 03:08 PM
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aap pyar se kuch bhi kahenge chalega ,.... aur kunnu to mujhe kayi log kehte hai ... aur khushi hai mujhe ki aapki post par mera aana aapko accha laga.. aapko jyadatar yahaN paat anhi to shayad rabta ho nahi pata .. aur ye jaan kar bohat hi jyada khushi hui ki .. humare kalaam aapke bhi dil azeez hai ... kabhi aapko apni postoN pe paya nahi ... shayad hi ek ya do baar aap aaye ho.. socha tha na jane kuch pasand nahi aa raha aapko.. par aapke is reply ne dil ki ye uljhan bhisuljha di.. ab kam se kam pata to hai .. ki amanush bhai bhi humeN padhte hai ... bade maan ki bat hai mere liye ye ... aapse rabta bana hi rahega .. bas umeed hai aap bhi nayi nayi rachnaoN ke sath aate raheNge... aap bhi apna khayal behad acche se rakhiye ... aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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27th May 2005, 11:04 PM
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awesome!!!very nice sonal There would come a time when we have to stop loving a person not because that person started hating us ..... but because we found out that they'd be happier if we let me go..... |
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28th May 2005, 10:46 PM
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Aap ne hamein Amanush Bhaiya kehkar hamari izzat baDha di hai...bahout acha laga!Aur ye jaan kar bhi khoushi houi ki aap ki aashangka door houi...Aap apna khayaal thik se rakhiye...Thik hai? Amanush Bhaiya... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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28th May 2005, 10:50 PM
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Thanks!!!Do keep coming... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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28th May 2005, 11:17 PM
hello amanush bhai
u hav written very well.....i jus luved it.... woww...tht was really beautiful keep writin n i'll keep readin them take care bye |
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28th May 2005, 11:42 PM
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So nice of you to appreciate "Only at night"...! Keep reading and I'll surely keep writing...ok? Take care... Amanush Bhai... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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30th May 2005, 10:29 AM
Hi Amanush
hhm i like this poem coz it reminds me a lot of what i have felt-- the pain, etc--dont wanna get into it. what touched me the most was ur last lines i think “Only at night I have the courage to shed my tears…” I have no idea if u write from experience or imagination—if it’s the latter then u have a fantastic imagination to get into the core of the emotions. im happy to read ur poems and i hope u keep then coming I will get back to yuo when i do get around to writing my poem-but dont expect it anytime soon coz the inspiration has to strike again and im sure it will happen in the middle of the nite again. let us both wait in hope  take care Munnia |
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