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yaad e yaar ka aalaam..... - 30th December 2009, 12:04 PM
palkon men chipe ansu
rukhaasron pe bikhar jate hein
Eik tees se uthtee hie dil men aise
sar ta paa hum laraz jatae hain
bojhal hotee hoee saans ukhar jatee hei
lahu kee ravanee thithar jate hei
Dum ghutaa sa lagta hai
apna aap luta sa lagta hai
seene ko hathelee tale dabatae hein
ghabra ke kabhi siyah hote chehre ko
anchal men chupatae hein
zabt toot jata hai aksar jo kabhi
tanha goshae men jaa ke ansu bahaatae hein
thartharatae badan ko sambhalte hein kabhi
kabhi khud ko khud hee pyar se samjhatae hain
Toot ke yaad jab kabhi apkee atee hei hamae
apkee qasam sajan jeetae jee mar jatae hain

ye dil soye hoay jazbon ka hei aisa mehal jis mein
kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana
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31st December 2009, 05:35 PM
shayed ehbaab ki nigah se ojhal rahee ye tehreer
so mukarar hazir hei...

ye dil soye hoay jazbon ka hei aisa mehal jis mein
kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana
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eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska
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31st December 2009, 06:47 PM
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shayed ehbaab ki nigah se ojhal rahee ye tehreer
so mukarar hazir hei...
Maham Jii,,

Waqai janab,,, yeh tehreer hamari nazrooN se ohjal
hui..... humain yakeen nahi ho raha,,

Yeh to achaa hua k aap ne issey reply de dia...
warna itni achi tehreer hamari nazrooN ko dekhni
naseeb na hoti......

Kia baat hai janab.... dard hi dard... ishq hi ishq...
sab dikh raha hai aap ki nazm mein....
jitni daad di jaye kam hai......

Likhte rahiye aur humain mehzooz karte rahiye,,

Regardz,,,

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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
   
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3rd January 2010, 11:35 AM
Maham ki adnaa tehreerain is laiq nai hoteen ke koi un pe waqt zaya kare magar haan aap se hasas qaari inko parh ke gehrayee se mehsus kar lete hien yehe kafi hei maham kel ye ...

behud nav azish hazrat...

ye dil soye hoay jazbon ka hei aisa mehal jis mein
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Maham ki adnaa tehreerain is laiq nai hoteen ke koi un pe waqt zaya kare magar haan aap se hasas qaari inko parh ke gehrayee se mehsus kar lete hien yehe kafi hei maham kel ye ...

behud nav azish hazrat...

Hmmm....

Majrooh Sultaanpuri Sahib ne sahi likha
aur
Ustaad Nusrat Fateh Ali Khan Sahib ne sahi Gayaa hai:-

"ISHQ ka rutbaa ISHQ hi jaanay.......!"

Regardz,,

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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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Laaraib sach hie yeh!!!!!
Beshak...

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palkon men chipe ansu
rukhaasron pe bikhar jate hein
Eik tees se uthtee hie dil men aise
sar ta paa hum laraz jatae hain
bojhal hotee hoee saans ukhar jatee hei
lahu kee ravanee thithar jate hei
Dum ghutaa sa lagta hai
apna aap luta sa lagta hai
seene ko hathelee tale dabatae hein
ghabra ke kabhi siyah hote chehre ko
anchal men chupatae hein
zabt toot jata hai aksar jo kabhi
tanha goshae men jaa ke ansu bahaatae hein
thartharatae badan ko sambhalte hein kabhi
kabhi khud ko khud hee pyar se samjhatae hain
Toot ke yaad jab kabhi apkee atee hei hamae
apkee qasam sajan jeetae jee mar jatae hain
Maham Saheba Ji....Aadaab ! aapki yeh nazm Shuru se aakhir tak bahut dilkash rahi....ek khubsurat manzar banati lagi mujhe....sabhi panktiyon mai kashish nazar aati hai....yuhi likhte rahiye....dil se daad hazir hai.....khush rahiye....

apna khayal rakhiyega...
duaaon ke saath....



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Mohterma Maham Ji Aadaab,

Naye saal ki mubarakbaad aapko. Aapki tehriir achhi lagi. Aapke ehsasaat bahot umda hote haiN aur aap ki bayani meiN bhi rawaani hoti hai. HumeN yaqiiN hai ke aap agar koshish kareN to beh'r meiN bhi aasani se likh sakeNgii. Behar'al aapki kavish par daad qubuul farmayeN.

Khush rahiye,
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HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
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Azmi janaab bahut khoobsurati aur saadgi se mano dil ki baat ek hi saans me keh dali ho aur sara dard ni**** dala ho...bahut khoobsurat andaaz seedhe dil ki baat dil tak pahuchane ka..badhayi.

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Maham Saheba Ji....Aadaab ! aapki yeh nazm Shuru se aakhir tak bahut dilkash rahi....ek khubsurat manzar banati lagi mujhe....sabhi panktiyon mai kashish nazar aati hai....yuhi likhte rahiye....dil se daad hazir hai.....khush rahiye....

apna khayal rakhiyega...
duaaon ke saath....

navazish karam meharbani hazrat
ap sada hee meri tehreeron ko gehrayee se mehsus karte hien
behud shukriya is karamfarmaye kel ye...

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Mohterma Maham Ji Aadaab,

Naye saal ki mubarakbaad aapko. Aapki tehriir achhi lagi. Aapke ehsasaat bahot umda hote haiN aur aap ki bayani meiN bhi rawaani hoti hai. HumeN yaqiiN hai ke aap agar koshish kareN to beh'r meiN bhi aasani se likh sakeNgii. Behar'al aapki kavish par daad qubuul farmayeN.

Khush rahiye,
Aadaab
Naadaan

Behud shukriya mohtaram hazrat ke ap ne na sirf is adnaa kaavish ko waqt diya balke is ki islaah ke lye bhi socha

GHAZAL ke section mein kuch behar mein kehne ki koishsih ki thee do baar....ho sake tou dkehiye ga aur tanqeed zaroor kijiye ga

bauhaat shukriya hzrat

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