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Lightbulb Aur vo kho gaye mujhse........... - 4th June 2007, 09:53 PM

kai dino ke baad kuch ahsaas saja laya hu yakin karta hu aap logon ko pasand aayega................

kuch hum bhi khatabaar the,kuch berukhe vo bhi,
anjaam ye hua,ki vo kho gaye mujhse.

hum rate par likhne chale toofaan aa gaya,
likhe the harf unohone vo mit gaye mujhse.

jab unse kahi,unki khata, tab vo ro diye,
phir na milo tum mujhse kabhi, kah gaye mujhse.

anjaam-e-judai pe hairaan hu yaaron,
kuch the darakht chhav ke vo kat gaye mujhse,

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Thumbs up frnd 4 ever - 4th June 2007, 10:40 PM

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kai dino ke baad kuch ahsaas saja laya hu yakin karta hu aap logon ko pasand aayega................

kuch hum bhi khatabaar the,kuch berukhe vo bhi,
anjaam ye hua,ki vo kho gaye mujhse.

hum rate par likhne chale toofaan aa gaya,
likhe the harf unohone vo mit gaye mujhse.

jab unse kahi,unki khata, tab vo ro diye,
phir na milo tum mujhse kabhi, kah gaye mujhse.

anjaam-e-judai pe hairaan hu yaaron,
kuch the darakht chhav ke vo kat gaye mujhse,

--Aryan
Aadab aryan ji,
kese hain aap?
WAH ,kya baat hain,
apki yeh nazm wakayi kabile tarif hain,

aapka ek_ek ashaar apne aap me mukammal hai,

bohot hi achha laga aapko padhkar,
bohot hi achhi koshish rahi aapki,
Aallah apko aur achha likhne ki taufiq ata kare,AAMIN

hamesha khush rahiye.
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ALLAH HAFIZ

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5th June 2007, 03:39 AM

Very nice Aryan ji, Ehsaas bahot gahra hai...


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5th June 2007, 09:39 PM

hello arya ji appne bhot acha likha hai

appki je nazam dil me ghir ho ghy
hamari daab hazir hai
aise hi likhte rehna

khush rehiye
apna khiyal rakhna

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5th June 2007, 10:17 PM

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hello arya ji appne bhot acha likha hai

appki je nazam dil me ghir ho ghy
hamari daab hazir hai
aise hi likhte rehna

khush rehiye
apna khiyal rakhna

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ek baat batao kya jo log dusron ko hasate hai, unhe bhi kabhi aansu aate hai kya?
aapki khubsurat is review ke liye tah-e-dil se sukriya.........

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5th June 2007, 10:20 PM

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kai dino ke baad kuch ahsaas saja laya hu yakin karta hu aap logon ko pasand aayega................

kuch hum bhi khatabaar the,kuch berukhe vo bhi,
anjaam ye hua,ki vo kho gaye mujhse.

hum rate par likhne chale toofaan aa gaya,
likhe the harf unohone vo mit gaye mujhse.

jab unse kahi,unki khata, tab vo ro diye,
phir na milo tum mujhse kabhi, kah gaye mujhse.

anjaam-e-judai pe hairaan hu yaaron,
kuch the darakht chhav ke vo kat gaye mujhse,

--Aryan
aryan jii,
achii koshish thii...padh ke achaa lagaa..likhte rahiye uhii..

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6th June 2007, 10:01 PM

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hi kamal preet

ek baat batao kya jo log dusron ko hasate hai, unhe bhi kabhi aansu aate hai kya?
aapki khubsurat is review ke liye tah-e-dil se sukriya.........

--Aryan
hello aryan ji
kaise hai app?

appne sawal bhot acha kiya hai
chalo me appko khudh ki baat bata deti hoon me sabh ko hasati hoon magar zindghy me aisa ek pal nahi aata jabh meri ankhon me ansu na ho

is ka matval dosro ko hasati hoon magar khuhd har pal rohti hoon
dosro ko ahsana achi bata hoti hai isliye je koshish hamesesha rehnti hai ki koi meri wajjah se dhukhi na hoe khuhd kya hai chahe hum har pal kyon na roe to kuch nahi badalta

aur koi sawal ho to bataye jarror?

khush rehiye

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6th June 2007, 10:19 PM

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hello aryan ji
kaise hai app?

appne sawal bhot acha kiya hai
chalo me appko khudh ki baat bata deti hoon me sabh ko hasati hoon magar zindghy me aisa ek pal nahi aata jabh meri ankhon me ansu na ho

is ka matval dosro ko hasati hoon magar khuhd har pal rohti hoon
dosro ko ahsana achi bata hoti hai isliye je koshish hamesesha rehnti hai ki koi meri wajjah se dhukhi na hoe khuhd kya hai chahe hum har pal kyon na roe to kuch nahi badalta

aur koi sawal ho to bataye jarror?

khush rehiye

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Namaskar dost........

Ab kya sawal karna "ab to khud hi aap ek sawal ho gaye ho", jabab ki talaash karooga........
sukriya aapki reply ka........

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6th June 2007, 10:36 PM

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Namaskar dost........

Ab kya sawal karna "ab to khud hi aap ek sawal ho gaye ho", jabab ki talaash karooga........
sukriya aapki reply ka........

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aryan ji agar jawab mil jae to jarror batana aur vaise kaun sa sawal hai jisme app ek sawal ho gaye ho???????

sukhria dost me nahi akrte aryan ji jo mere dil me tha meine appko bata diya appko agar burra algga to maffi chahti hoon


khush rehiye

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aryan ji agar jawab mil jae to jarror batana aur vaise kaun sa sawal hai jisme app ek sawal ho gaye ho???????

sukhria dost me nahi akrte aryan ji jo mere dil me tha meine appko bata diya appko agar burra algga to maffi chahti hoon


khush rehiye

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aji nahi hujur, mai rootha to nahi aap jaisi dost se roothga bhi kaun..........................meri ye baat ki" aap hi ek sawal ho" sayed kuch galat massege de gayi aapko...................

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