Shayri.com  

Go Back   Shayri.com > Shayri > Ghazal Section

Reply
 
Thread Tools Rate Thread Display Modes
Mujhko afsurdah kar gaya koi
Old
  (#1)
mujib66
Registered User
mujib66 is a splendid one to beholdmujib66 is a splendid one to beholdmujib66 is a splendid one to beholdmujib66 is a splendid one to beholdmujib66 is a splendid one to beholdmujib66 is a splendid one to beholdmujib66 is a splendid one to behold
 
Offline
Posts: 373
Join Date: Nov 2006
Rep Power: 23
Mujhko afsurdah kar gaya koi - 12th April 2020, 07:40 AM

Mujh ko afsurdah kar gaya koi
Ashk ankhon men bhar gaya koi

Main to dil deke khoob pachtaya
Ley ke dil jab mukar gaya koi

Aake chahat ki basti se meri
Chupke chupke guzar gaya koi

Pyar ki pyas jaagi ankhon men
Deke aisa asar gaya koi

Shehd kehna use nahin tha theek
Eh mujhe bol kar gaya koi

Apne dardo alam ka bhari bojh
Laad kar mere sar gaya koi

Eh teri nazron ki nashili sharab
Pii ke gham se ubhar gaya koi

Justuju banke meri aankhon ki
Mere dil men utar gaya koi

Isse bhi achhi baat kya hogi
Gar wafa men sanwar gaya koi

Iska afsos mujh ko bhi hoga
Raahe ulfat se gar gaya koi

Logon ne usko dekha aur kaha
Husn ka jadugar gaya koi

Zindegi men eh hota hai Parwaaz
Door noore nazar gaya koi

Some meanings
Afsurdah- Glumy/ Deactivated
Ashk - Tears
Shehd- Honey
Alam- Sigh/ Sorrow
Justuju- Search
Ulfat- Love
Husn-Beauty

Mujeeb Parwaaz

Last edited by mujib66; 12th April 2020 at 07:48 AM..
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#2)
Qasid
Super Mod
Qasid has a brilliant futureQasid has a brilliant futureQasid has a brilliant futureQasid has a brilliant futureQasid has a brilliant futureQasid has a brilliant futureQasid has a brilliant futureQasid has a brilliant futureQasid has a brilliant futureQasid has a brilliant futureQasid has a brilliant future
 
Qasid's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,890
Join Date: Aug 2001
Location: Mumbai
Rep Power: 42
19th April 2020, 05:21 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by mujib66 View Post
Mujh ko afsurdah kar gaya koi
Ashk ankhon men bhar gaya koi

Main to dil deke khoob pachtaya
Ley ke dil jab mukar gaya koi

Aake chahat ki basti se meri
Chupke chupke guzar gaya koi

Pyar ki pyas jaagi ankhon men
Deke aisa asar gaya koi

Shehd kehna use nahin tha theek
Eh mujhe bol kar gaya koi

Apne dardo alam ka bhari bojh
Laad kar mere sar gaya koi

Eh teri nazron ki nashili sharab
Pii ke gham se ubhar gaya koi

Justuju banke meri aankhon ki
Mere dil men utar gaya koi

Isse bhi achhi baat kya hogi
Gar wafa men sanwar gaya koi

Iska afsos mujh ko bhi hoga
Raahe ulfat se gar gaya koi

Logon ne usko dekha aur kaha
Husn ka jadugar gaya koi

Zindegi men eh hota hai Parwaaz
Door noore nazar gaya koi

Some meanings
Afsurdah- Glumy/ Deactivated
Ashk - Tears
Shehd- Honey
Alam- Sigh/ Sorrow
Justuju- Search
Ulfat- Love
Husn-Beauty

Mujeeb Parwaaz
waah Mujeeb bhai kamaal behad umdaa ghazal huyi..likhte rahiye



Qasid


___________________________________________

नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं
क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ

रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें
  Send a message via Yahoo to Qasid Send a message via AIM to Qasid  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#3)
Madhu 14
Moderator
Madhu 14 has much to be proud ofMadhu 14 has much to be proud ofMadhu 14 has much to be proud ofMadhu 14 has much to be proud ofMadhu 14 has much to be proud ofMadhu 14 has much to be proud ofMadhu 14 has much to be proud ofMadhu 14 has much to be proud ofMadhu 14 has much to be proud ofMadhu 14 has much to be proud of
 
Madhu 14's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 5,206
Join Date: Jul 2014
Rep Power: 25
22nd April 2020, 04:24 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by mujib66 View Post
Mujh ko afsurdah kar gaya koi
Ashk ankhon men bhar gaya koi

Main to dil deke khoob pachtaya
Ley ke dil jab mukar gaya koi

Aake chahat ki basti se meri
Chupke chupke guzar gaya koi

Pyar ki pyas jaagi ankhon men
Deke aisa asar gaya koi

Shehd kehna use nahin tha theek
Eh mujhe bol kar gaya koi

Apne dardo alam ka bhari bojh
Laad kar mere sar gaya koi

Eh teri nazron ki nashili sharab
Pii ke gham se ubhar gaya koi

Justuju banke meri aankhon ki
Mere dil men utar gaya koi

Isse bhi achhi baat kya hogi
Gar wafa men sanwar gaya koi

Iska afsos mujh ko bhi hoga
Raahe ulfat se gar gaya koi

Logon ne usko dekha aur kaha
Husn ka jadugar gaya koi

Zindegi men eh hota hai Parwaaz
Door noore nazar gaya koi

Some meanings
Afsurdah- Glumy/ Deactivated
Ashk - Tears
Shehd- Honey
Alam- Sigh/ Sorrow
Justuju- Search
Ulfat- Love
Husn-Beauty

Mujeeb Parwaaz
Behad khubsurat....

Bahot dino baad padha aapko..
Likhte rahiye
Khayaal rakhiye...



अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#4)
mujib66
Registered User
mujib66 is a splendid one to beholdmujib66 is a splendid one to beholdmujib66 is a splendid one to beholdmujib66 is a splendid one to beholdmujib66 is a splendid one to beholdmujib66 is a splendid one to beholdmujib66 is a splendid one to behold
 
Offline
Posts: 373
Join Date: Nov 2006
Rep Power: 23
12th May 2020, 05:59 PM

Bohut bohut shukriya Qasid Sb.

Stay safe and blessed.

Bye

Last edited by mujib66; 12th May 2020 at 06:07 PM..
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#5)
mujib66
Registered User
mujib66 is a splendid one to beholdmujib66 is a splendid one to beholdmujib66 is a splendid one to beholdmujib66 is a splendid one to beholdmujib66 is a splendid one to beholdmujib66 is a splendid one to beholdmujib66 is a splendid one to behold
 
Offline
Posts: 373
Join Date: Nov 2006
Rep Power: 23
12th May 2020, 06:01 PM

Aap ka teh dil se dhanyabaad karta hun Madhu Saheba.

Pl take care and stay safe.
Bye

Last edited by mujib66; 12th May 2020 at 06:05 PM..
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#6)
zarraa
Registered User
zarraa is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzarraa is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzarraa is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzarraa is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzarraa is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzarraa is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzarraa is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzarraa is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzarraa is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzarraa is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzarraa is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
zarraa's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,577
Join Date: Dec 2010
Rep Power: 33
3rd October 2020, 07:47 PM

Waaahhhh .... waaahhhh .... bahaut hi khoob


maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
   
Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes Rate This Thread
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2020, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com