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क्या कहूँ बस बेवजाह हूँ मैं - 6th November 2011, 09:06 AM

Doston,

Ek khayaal jo bas dil mein hai aapke aage rakh raha hoon...

क्यूँ हूँ और अब क्या हूँ मैं
दिल की एक सदा हूँ मैं

कभी हूँ मैं दास्ताँ-ए-मोहब्बत
कभी रंजिशों की वजह हूँ मैं

जो मिल के है बिछड़ी न फिर से मिली जो
ऐसी ही मंजिलों का पता हूँ मैं

खबर तो है मशहूर तेरे शहर में
की अरसों से खुद से जुदा हूँ मैं

दफन हूँ कही मैं सन्नाटे जैसा
कहीं राख से उठता धुँआ हूँ मैं

क्यूँ हूँ और अब क्या हूँ मैं
क्या कहूँ बस बेवजाह हूँ मैं


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Dil ki ek sadaa hooN MaiN

kabhi hooN MaiN daastaan-e-mohabbhat
kabhi ranjishon ki wajah hooN MaiN

Jo mil ke hai bichhadi na phir se mili jo
Aisi hi manzilon ka pata hooN MaiN

khabar to hai mashhoor tere shehar mein
ki arson se khud se judaa hooN MaiN

dafn hooN kahiN sannaate jaisa
kahin raakh se uthtaa dhuaa hooN MaiN

kyuuN hooN aur aab kya hooN MaiN
kya kahun bas bewajah hooN MaiN



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6th November 2011, 04:50 PM

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Doston,

Ek khayaal jo bas dil mein hai aapke aage rakh raha hoon...

क्यूँ हूँ और अब क्या हूँ मैं
दिल की एक सदा हूँ मैं

कभी हूँ मैं दास्ताँ-ए-मोहब्बत
कभी रंजिशों की वजह हूँ मैं

जो मिल के है बिछड़ी न फिर से मिली जो
ऐसी ही मंजिलों का पता हूँ मैं

खबर तो है मशहूर तेरे शहर में
की अरसों से खुद से जुदा हूँ मैं

दफन हूँ कही मैं सन्नाटे जैसा
कहीं राख से उठता धुँआ हूँ मैं

क्यूँ हूँ और अब क्या हूँ मैं
क्या कहूँ बस बेवजाह हूँ मैं


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kyuuN hooN aur aab kya hooN MaiN
Dil ki ek sadaa hooN MaiN

kabhi hooN MaiN daastaan-e-mohabbhat
kabhi ranjishon ki wajah hooN MaiN

Jo mil ke hai bichhadi na phir se mili jo
Aisi hi manzilon ka pata hooN MaiN

khabar to hai mashhoor tere shehar mein
ki arson se khud se judaa hooN MaiN

dafn hooN kahiN sannaate jaisa
kahin raakh se uthtaa dhuaa hooN MaiN

kyuuN hooN aur aab kya hooN MaiN
kya kahun bas bewajah hooN MaiN
mast saheb achha likha hai...khayaalaat aur soch bahut pasand aayee mujhe...daad qubuul kijiyega...


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
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6th November 2011, 11:00 PM

Loved reading... And your display pic matches with the themes so very much

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Doston,

Ek khayaal jo bas dil mein hai aapke aage rakh raha hoon...

क्यूँ हूँ और अब क्या हूँ मैं
दिल की एक सदा हूँ मैं

कभी हूँ मैं दास्ताँ-ए-मोहब्बत
कभी रंजिशों की वजह हूँ मैं

जो मिल के है बिछड़ी न फिर से मिली जो
ऐसी ही मंजिलों का पता हूँ मैं

खबर तो है मशहूर तेरे शहर में
की अरसों से खुद से जुदा हूँ मैं

दफन हूँ कही मैं सन्नाटे जैसा
कहीं राख से उठता धुँआ हूँ मैं

क्यूँ हूँ और अब क्या हूँ मैं
क्या कहूँ बस बेवजाह हूँ मैं


================================================== ========

kyuuN hooN aur aab kya hooN MaiN
Dil ki ek sadaa hooN MaiN

kabhi hooN MaiN daastaan-e-mohabbhat
kabhi ranjishon ki wajah hooN MaiN

Jo mil ke hai bichhadi na phir se mili jo
Aisi hi manzilon ka pata hooN MaiN

khabar to hai mashhoor tere shehar mein
ki arson se khud se judaa hooN MaiN

dafn hooN kahiN sannaate jaisa
kahin raakh se uthtaa dhuaa hooN MaiN

kyuuN hooN aur aab kya hooN MaiN
kya kahun bas bewajah hooN MaiN


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दफन हूँ कही मैं सन्नाटे जैसा
कहीं राख से उठता धुँआ हूँ मैं


bade arse bad padha apko acha laga.....ye sher bhaut khub kaha


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mast saheb achha likha hai...khayaalaat aur soch bahut pasand aayee mujhe...daad qubuul kijiyega...
vikram bhai, behad aacha laga ki aapne samay nikaal kar padha. Aapke atoot saath aur saath ke saath rehne waali daad ka shukrguzaar hooN

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Loved reading... And your display pic matches with the themes so very much

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shukriya..aapke bataane ke baad gaur kiya is nazm aur avtaar ke beech ki nazdikiyon ka...good catch...

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aage bhi yunhi saath ki umeed mein

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bade arse bad padha apko acha laga.....ye sher bhaut khub kaha
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mast bhaa'ii:

namaste!

aik behterin koShiSh..!! nafeez aur dil-kaSh andaaz-e-bayaan par mere dil se daad aur duaaeN

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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namaste!

aik behterin koShiSh..!! nafeez aur dil-kaSh andaaz-e-bayaan par mere dil se daad aur duaaeN

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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Khoobsurat Ehsaasaat Kahe HaiN ... Mast Ji !

Umdaa Aur BehtreeN ... !

AchChhi Koshish ... !

Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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kabhi hooN MaiN daastaan-e-mohabbhat
kabhi ranjishon ki wajah hooN MaiN


dafn hooN kahiN sannaate jaisa
kahin raakh se uthtaa dhuaa hooN MaiN


Waah waah waah.. bahot khoob, bahot khooB.. kamaal ke aashar hai bhai.. padhkar bahot Mazaa aaya.... Daad qubool kijiyega.. Upar mentioned sher ne to jaan hi nikaal di thii... Mashallah...

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Ek khayaal jo bas dil mein hai aapke aage rakh raha hoon...

क्यूँ हूँ और अब क्या हूँ मैं
दिल की एक सदा हूँ मैं

कभी हूँ मैं दास्ताँ-ए-मोहब्बत
कभी रंजिशों की वजह हूँ मैं

जो मिल के है बिछड़ी न फिर से मिली जो
ऐसी ही मंजिलों का पता हूँ मैं

खबर तो है मशहूर तेरे शहर में
की अरसों से खुद से जुदा हूँ मैं

दफन हूँ कही मैं सन्नाटे जैसा
कहीं राख से उठता धुँआ हूँ मैं

क्यूँ हूँ और अब क्या हूँ मैं
क्या कहूँ बस बेवजाह हूँ मैं


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kyuuN hooN aur aab kya hooN MaiN
Dil ki ek sadaa hooN MaiN

kabhi hooN MaiN daastaan-e-mohabbhat
kabhi ranjishon ki wajah hooN MaiN

Jo mil ke hai bichhadi na phir se mili jo
Aisi hi manzilon ka pata hooN MaiN

khabar to hai mashhoor tere shehar mein
ki arson se khud se judaa hooN MaiN

dafn hooN kahiN sannaate jaisa
kahin raakh se uthtaa dhuaa hooN MaiN

kyuuN hooN aur aab kya hooN MaiN
kya kahun bas bewajah hooN MaiN

Wah!!............................................. ........




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Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!
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जो मिल के है बिछड़ी न फिर से मिली जो
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की अरसों से खुद से जुदा हूँ मैं

दफन हूँ कही मैं सन्नाटे जैसा
कहीं राख से उठता धुँआ हूँ मैं

क्यूँ हूँ और अब क्या हूँ मैं
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very nice poetry .................... !
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kya baat hai waah...bahut purani post hai aaj hamari nazar me aayi to...daad diye bagair aage nahi badha jayega ab ....bahut khoob...waah!!

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जो मिल के है बिछड़ी न फिर से मिली जो
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kyuuN hooN aur aab kya hooN MaiN
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Behad asardaar kalaam
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18th September 2020, 08:52 PM

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Doston,

Ek khayaal jo bas dil mein hai aapke aage rakh raha hoon...

क्यूँ हूँ और अब क्या हूँ मैं
दिल की एक सदा हूँ मैं

कभी हूँ मैं दास्ताँ-ए-मोहब्बत
कभी रंजिशों की वजह हूँ मैं

जो मिल के है बिछड़ी न फिर से मिली जो
ऐसी ही मंजिलों का पता हूँ मैं

खबर तो है मशहूर तेरे शहर में
की अरसों से खुद से जुदा हूँ मैं

दफन हूँ कही मैं सन्नाटे जैसा
कहीं राख से उठता धुँआ हूँ मैं

क्यूँ हूँ और अब क्या हूँ मैं
क्या कहूँ बस बेवजाह हूँ मैं


================================================== ========

kyuuN hooN aur aab kya hooN MaiN
Dil ki ek sadaa hooN MaiN

kabhi hooN MaiN daastaan-e-mohabbhat
kabhi ranjishon ki wajah hooN MaiN

Jo mil ke hai bichhadi na phir se mili jo
Aisi hi manzilon ka pata hooN MaiN

khabar to hai mashhoor tere shehar mein
ki arson se khud se judaa hooN MaiN

dafn hooN kahiN sannaate jaisa
kahin raakh se uthtaa dhuaa hooN MaiN

kyuuN hooN aur aab kya hooN MaiN
kya kahun bas bewajah hooN MaiN
Bewajah nahi khaas ho tum,
Dosti ka ehsaas ho tum

Priya



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