kal ek shakhs se mulaqaat ho gai...

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by kwahish

Kya baat hai bahenaa......... Dear now Im sure yeh tumne hi likha hai...

Bahut achcha likha and realy sabhi sher bahut achche rahe..... Mindblowing...... And touchi thought's ... Kafi achcha likhane lagi ho ab keep writting ....... daad daad .....

Aise hi likhati raho khush raho.......
Khuda hafez........

Bhaiyya,
bahut bahut bahut shukriya ke aap yaha aaye aur mere is kalaam ko saraha... aapki daad mere sar-aankho par... aap yuhi apna saath aur pyaar apni is bahen pe banaye rakhiyega.... Allah aapko hamesha khush rakhe...aameen

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by shipra

kya baat hai lamha..
this is really sweet..
kis sher ki jyada tareef karu samsjh nahi aa raha...
fantastic thoughts..
keep writin..

Shipra,
ye aapka badappan hai ke aapko mera ye kalaam itna zayada pasand aaya... aapne yaha aakar muje izzat bakshi hai... tahe dil se shukra-guzaar hu... yuhi apna saath banaye rakhiye... khush rahiye...

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by dayanand

Ek Dost Ka Salam Kabool Farmaie ga Lamha Ji...

Aap Ki Har Gazal Me Ek Ajab Si Kasis Hoti Ha,Jab Bhi Mujhe waqt Milta Hai Me Aap Ki Gazale jaroor Padhata Hoo,Har Gajal Me Ek Naya Andaz Rahata Hai Aap Ka Lekin Hume Aap Ka Dil Ki Har Baat Kalam Se Khoobsurati Se Baya.n Karne ka Andaz Pasand Hai................

Hamari Taraf Se 2 Line Aap Ke Liye.......

Kisi Se Milne Ki Chahat Me Gun-Gunane Lagi Hai,
Apne Har Gum Ko Bhul Kar "Lamha" Ab Muskurne Lagi Hai....

So Keep Smiling Always..........

Anant ji,
tahe dil se aapki shukra guzaar hu ke aapne muj naa-cheez ko itni izzat bakshi... mai to sirf apne kuch ehsaas pesh karti hu ..aap sab dost un ehsaason ko sarah kar unhe anmol bana dete hai... is khubsoorat sher ka bahut bahut shukriya... yuhi apna saath banaye rakhiye... khush rahiye...

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by parveen komal

baar baar padhna achha lagta hai;;;;

Komal ji,
baar baar tarif sun'na muje bhi achcha lagta hai...
khush rahiye......

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by noor_noor

Lamha jii aapki dilkash aur romaani takhleeq bhut achi lagi, kaafi achay andaaz mai baat ko kaha hai aapne, aapki khidmat mai daad hazir hai quool keejiye likhti rahiye



aslam

Aslam ji,
aapko meri ye koshish pasand aayi uske liye tahe dil se shukra guzaar hu...aapki daad mere sar-aankho par.... aap yuhi mera hausla badhate rahiyega... aate rahiye.... khush rahiye....

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by Dhaval

Lamha:

namaste!

koShiSh bahot Khoob rahii.n.. aage bhee liKhate rahe.n! bazm ki Shaan baRhaate rahe.n.. daad!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~Dhaval

Namaste Bhaiyya,

shukriya aapko meri koshish pasand aayi.... aapki daad aur Dua'en mere sar-aankho par... aap bhi apna bahut sara khayaal rakhiyega... khush rahiye.....

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by aasefa_4u

Subhanallah!!! subhanallah!!! subhanallah!!! Kiya baat hai Lamha.....very nyc i cnt help readin agen n agen....har soch bht khubsurat hai....i love da way u hav played bout with da words.....ese hi likhte rahiye......

Aasefa,
tahe dil se shukra guzaar hu ke aapne apna kimati waqt meri is koshish ko diya aur ise saraha... yuhi apna saath banaye rakhiye.... khush rahiye....

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by shayari

FaNtastic creatioN......................


Pawan(shayari)

Pawan,

bahut bahut shukriya.... aate rahiye..... khush rahiye.......

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by Harash Mahajan

Lamha ji ek nihaayat hi khoobsoorat takhleeq pesh kee hai aapne.....ahsaason ko chhed diya aapne.... iske liye tah-e-dil se daad qabool farmaaiyega...


Harash

Harash ji,

aap yaha aaye aur meri is adnaa si koshish ko saraha uske liye tahe dil se mai aapki shukra guzaar hu... aapki daad mere sar-aankho par... yuhi saath dete rahiye.... khush rahiye.....

[parveen komal]

subah ka dilkash manzar cheda
kab na jaane haseen raat ho gai


Khuda bhi the shayad meherbaan humpe
chaha tha bheegna or barsaat ho gai

ye gazal desi sharaab ki tarah hai. jitni purani ho rahi hai,nasha barh raha hai.

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by parveen komal

subah ka dilkash manzar cheda
kab na jaane haseen raat ho gai


Khuda bhi the shayad meherbaan humpe
chaha tha bheegna or barsaat ho gai

ye gazal desi sharaab ki tarah hai. jitni purani ho rahi hai,nasha barh raha hai.

Shukriya Komal ji,
aapki baatein aur aapke comments bhi sharaab ke nashe se kam nahi...
wo "Faraz" sahaab ne kaha hai na ke.....
" nasha badhta hai sharabein jab sharabon me mile"

aapke comments ki wajah se mere is kalaam ka nasha aur bhi badh gaya..... thanx a lot.... aate rahiye... khush rahiye...