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Love intezaar ke mausam...... - 7th January 2010, 07:41 PM
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aaj kuch purani GTM ki post chaan rahi thi to meri nazar Jan'2009 ki GTM me post ki gayi meri ik ghazal pe padi... to socha purani yaadein fir se tazaa ki jaye... aap sab ke saath apni ye INTEZAAR pe likhi ghazal share karne chahungi... apni kimati raay zaroor dijiyega...

Tere wajood se the tere iqraar ke mousam
gaya jo tu to dai gaya intezaar ke mousam


Meri aankho ko khabo.n ka dhuwaa.n baant gaye
mere naaseeb mai wo tere ikhteyaar ke mousam


Bhichad ke tujhse ab kahan koi beqaraar raha
guzar gaye wo tere mere pyaar ke mousam


Khuli jo aankh to phir aaina choor choor hua
mohabbaton mai mile mujhko haar ke mousam


Usse mai ‘lamha’ kabhi bhool hi na paungi
mere gharoor the wo mere yaar ke mousam

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7th January 2010, 08:19 PM
Bohat Umda Lamha jee..........

Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...

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7th January 2010, 10:53 PM
Lamha Ji.....Aadaab ! aapki tamaam Ghazal achi lagi mujhe.....aakhir ke teen sher dil ke jiyada kareeb rahe.....

Bhichad ke tujhse ab kahan koi beqaraar raha
guzar gaye wo tere mere pyaar ke mousam

Khuli jo aankh to phir aaina choor choor hua
mohabbaton mai mile mujhko haar ke mousam

Usse mai ‘lamha’ kabhi bhool hi na paungi
mere gharoor the wo mere yaar ke mousam

yuhi likhte rhiye....dil se daad hazir hai....

apna khayal rakhiyega...
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8th January 2010, 02:52 PM
Lamha dear,

Yeh aapki sabse best gazal lagi mujhe, aur aisa laga dil se ke yeh aapne hi likhi hai
To daad bhi dil se dunga, sabhi ashaar behad khoob lage, aapne behad khubsurtai se gazal ko bayan kiya hai very nice dear........

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8th January 2010, 08:36 PM
Lamha jii...aadaab...

behad achhi ghazal pesh ki hai aapne,
khayal aur byaani dono khoobsurat....maza
aa gaya padh kar....
daad haazir hai....qubuul kijiye....aur yeh neeche wale sher
bahut pasand aaye....


Meri aankho ko khabo.n ka dhuwaa.n baant gaye
mere naaseeb mai wo tere ikhteyaar ke mousam

Khuli jo aankh to phir aaina choor choor hua
mohabbaton mai mile mujhko haar ke mousam

aise hi likhti rahiye....
aapna khayal rakhiye...

aapka dost,
vikram...

'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
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8th January 2010, 09:13 PM
lamha sweety ,
tab bhi yeh ghazal tumhari mujhe bahut pasand thi aur aaj bhi...
kaii bar padh chuki hun main is ghazal ko
ehesaas se bharpoor hai ghazal

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sach yeh mausam anginat si tasveeren dil ko de jaata hai..kuch hasti kuch ghabraati kuch roti aur kuch muskuraati...aapke har sher mein ek lazmi tasveer nazar ayi....

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Bohat Umda Lamha jee..........


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aapne apna kimati waqt meri is adnaa si koshish ko diya iske liye mai tahe dil se shukra-guzaar hu... yuhi apna saath banaye rakhiyega.... khush rahiye....

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Meri aankho ko khabo.n ka dhuwaa.n baant gaye
mere naaseeb mai wo tere ikhteyaar ke mousam


Khuli jo aankh to phir aaina choor choor hua
mohabbaton mai mile mujhko haar ke mousam


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25th January 2010, 09:25 PM
Hello niceeeeeee ghazal ,,,,,,keep it up....bye take care

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26th January 2010, 09:27 PM
hehhehe shall i post the link for above posted ghazal

namashkar lamha ji behtar hoga ap confess karle kis site se churayi hai yeh gazal ya main link du is bar khud confess karo dear lamha ji hehehehe sari gazlo ke link post karunga wait n watch jitni post ki in 2009 & 2010 hehehehe
   
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aaj kuch purani GTM ki post chaan rahi thi to meri nazar Jan'2009 ki GTM me post ki gayi meri ik ghazal pe padi... to socha purani yaadein fir se tazaa ki jaye... aap sab ke saath apni ye INTEZAAR pe likhi ghazal share karne chahungi... apni kimati raay zaroor dijiyega...

Tere wajood se the tere iqraar ke mousam
gaya jo tu to dai gaya intezaar ke mousam


Meri aankho ko khabo.n ka dhuwaa.n baant gaye
mere naaseeb mai wo tere ikhteyaar ke mousam


Bhichad ke tujhse ab kahan koi beqaraar raha
guzar gaye wo tere mere pyaar ke mousam


Khuli jo aankh to phir aaina choor choor hua
mohabbaton mai mile mujhko haar ke mousam


Usse mai ‘lamha’ kabhi bhool hi na paungi
mere gharoor the wo mere yaar ke mousam

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badi sundar ghazal hai har sher apne aap me sundar hai..aise hi likhti rahen..duaon ke saath

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Doston,
aaj kuch purani GTM ki post chaan rahi thi to meri nazar Jan'2009 ki GTM me post ki gayi meri ik ghazal pe padi... to socha purani yaadein fir se tazaa ki jaye... aap sab ke saath apni ye INTEZAAR pe likhi ghazal share karne chahungi... apni kimati raay zaroor dijiyega...

Tere wajood se the tere iqraar ke mousam
gaya jo tu to dai gaya intezaar ke mousam


Meri aankho ko khabo.n ka dhuwaa.n baant gaye
mere naaseeb mai wo tere ikhteyaar ke mousam


Bhichad ke tujhse ab kahan koi beqaraar raha
guzar gaye wo tere mere pyaar ke mousam


Khuli jo aankh to phir aaina choor choor hua
mohabbaton mai mile mujhko haar ke mousam


Usse mai ‘lamha’ kabhi bhool hi na paungi
mere gharoor the wo mere yaar ke mousam

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Beautiful ghazal....my dear frnd whr r u....i hope u r in good health....pls do come back dear i miss u
Lamha dear... waaaaaaaah! bohat khooob.....

Please come back, if possible.....

Take care,

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Doston,
aaj kuch purani GTM ki post chaan rahi thi to meri nazar Jan'2009 ki GTM me post ki gayi meri ik ghazal pe padi... to socha purani yaadein fir se tazaa ki jaye... aap sab ke saath apni ye INTEZAAR pe likhi ghazal share karne chahungi... apni kimati raay zaroor dijiyega...

Tere wajood se the tere iqraar ke mousam
gaya jo tu to dai gaya intezaar ke mousam


Meri aankho ko khabo.n ka dhuwaa.n baant gaye
mere naaseeb mai wo tere ikhteyaar ke mousam


Bhichad ke tujhse ab kahan koi beqaraar raha
guzar gaye wo tere mere pyaar ke mousam


Khuli jo aankh to phir aaina choor choor hua
mohabbaton mai mile mujhko haar ke mousam


Usse mai ‘lamha’ kabhi bhool hi na paungi
mere gharoor the wo mere yaar ke mousam

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hope you are doing fine...

keep coming dear. ....



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16th September 2014, 03:32 PM
Lamha ji,

Bhut badiya Ghazal. Ek ajib c kashmkash mehsoos huyi isey pdkr. Behtrin andaz aur khubsoorat peshkash.

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