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Dar Lagta Hai.....! - 23rd July 2010, 01:29 PM
Kisi ke maan mai chupe dar ke ehsaas ko kehen ki koishish ki hai.... !


Jism Ki Parchhai Se
Bichhad Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Aaj Phir
Halaat Ke Saamne
Toot Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Rakhe They
Jo Sapne Dil Me
SanjoN Kar
Unke Bikhar Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Koi Purana Haadsa
Yaad Kar
Woh Naam
Daurahane Se
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Duniya Ki
Bheed Me
Tanhaa
Un Ghoorti Nighaahon Se
Cheekh Nikal Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !


Radhika

Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
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Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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23rd July 2010, 01:46 PM
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Kisi ke maan mai chupe dar ke ehsaas ko kehen ki koishish ki hai.... !


Jism Ki Parchhai Se
Bichhad Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Aaj Phir
Halaat Ke Saamne
Toot Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Rakhe They
Jo Sapne Dil Me
SanjoN Kar
Unke Bikhar Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Koi Purana Haadsa
Yaad Kar
Woh Naam
Daurahane Se
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Duniya Ki
Bheed Me
Tanhaa
Un Ghoorti Nighaahon Se
Cheekh Nikal Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !
Ahsas achche lage radhika.... good one... bus u hi likhte rahe...

"Sakht Rasto me bhi aasan safar lagta hai...
Yah meri MAA ki duaon ka asar lagta hai...

Ek muddat se meri MAA nahi soyi jab..
Maine ik bar kaha tha "MAA Muje dar lagta hai...." !!!

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Kisi ke maan mai chupe dar ke ehsaas ko kehen ki koishish ki hai.... !


Jism Ki Parchhai Se
Bichhad Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Aaj Phir
Halaat Ke Saamne
Toot Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Rakhe They
Jo Sapne Dil Me
SanjoN Kar
Unke Bikhar Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Koi Purana Haadsa
Yaad Kar
Woh Naam
Daurahane Se
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Duniya Ki
Bheed Me
Tanhaa
Un Ghoorti Nighaahon Se
Cheekh Nikal Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !
radhika jii
radhe radhe

kavita bahut sundar hai achha laga padhkar yun hi likhti raho
duaon ke saath

Aapka Apna
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24th July 2010, 03:25 AM
Radhika jee AadaaB!

Aapki kavita ke bhav achche hai...... sparshi vichar hai.... Achche lage likhati rahiye......
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24th July 2010, 07:45 PM
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Jism Ki Parchhai Se
Bichhad Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Aaj Phir
Halaat Ke Saamne
Toot Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Rakhe They
Jo Sapne Dil Me
SanjoN Kar
Unke Bikhar Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Koi Purana Haadsa
Yaad Kar
Woh Naam
Daurahane Se
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Duniya Ki
Bheed Me
Tanhaa
Un Ghoorti Nighaahon Se
Cheekh Nikal Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !
Nice poetry.........Radhika Ji ! excellent work !



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Ahsas achche lage radhika.... good one... bus u hi likhte rahe...

"Sakht Rasto me bhi aasan safar lagta hai...
Yah meri MAA ki duaon ka asar lagta hai...

Ek muddat se meri MAA nahi soyi jab..
Maine ik bar kaha tha "MAA Muje dar lagta hai...." !!!
Ji...........taariif ka bahut bahut shukriya


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25th July 2010, 09:11 AM
Jism Ki Parchhai Se
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Aaj Phir
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Toot Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

achha hai , bahut achha, bahut bahut achha, yunhi likhte rahie, dar apne aap nikal jaega, beautiful poem, good job. silwar daad kabool keejie.
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radhika jii
radhe radhe

kavita bahut sundar hai achha laga padhkar yun hi likhti raho
duaon ke saath
ji bhaut bhaut shukriya...................


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very nice Radhika
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Radhika jee AadaaB!

Aapki kavita ke bhav achche hai...... sparshi vichar hai.... Achche lage likhati rahiye......
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez.......
ji bhaut bhaut shukriya.......................


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27th July 2010, 04:44 PM
Dil Ki Gehraaio Main Kahin dard Chupa Hai Aapke..

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27th July 2010, 04:56 PM
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Kisi ke maan mai chupe dar ke ehsaas ko kehen ki koishish ki hai.... !


Jism Ki Parchhai Se
Bichhad Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Aaj Phir
Halaat Ke Saamne
Toot Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Rakhe They
Jo Sapne Dil Me
SanjoN Kar
Unke Bikhar Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Koi Purana Haadsa
Yaad Kar
Woh Naam
Daurahane Se
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Duniya Ki
Bheed Me
Tanhaa
Un Ghoorti Nighaahon Se
Cheekh Nikal Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !
nice one radhika ji..
keep writin..

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Nice poetry.........Radhika Ji ! excellent work !
Ji........taariif aur hausla dene ka shukriya ........


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yun hi likhte rahna
ji bhaut bhaut shukriya....................


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very nice Radhika
yun hi likhte rahna
ji bhaut bhaut shukriya........................


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Dar Lagta Hai .. Sahi Main...

Bless you

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ji bhaut bhaut shukriya..........................


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Kisi ke maan mai chupe dar ke ehsaas ko kehen ki koishish ki hai.... !


Jism Ki Parchhai Se
Bichhad Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Aaj Phir
Halaat Ke Saamne
Toot Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Rakhe They
Jo Sapne Dil Me
SanjoN Kar
Unke Bikhar Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Koi Purana Haadsa
Yaad Kar
Woh Naam
Daurahane Se
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Duniya Ki
Bheed Me
Tanhaa
Un Ghoorti Nighaahon Se
Cheekh Nikal Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !
achha likha hai aapne radhika ji, ehsaas behad achhe lage....
daad qubuul kijiyega...

'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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nice one radhika ji..
keep writin..

take care..
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Kisi ke maan mai chupe dar ke ehsaas ko kehen ki koishish ki hai.... !


Jism Ki Parchhai Se
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Dar Lagta Hai... !

Aaj Phir
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Toot Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Rakhe They
Jo Sapne Dil Me
SanjoN Kar
Unke Bikhar Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Koi Purana Haadsa
Yaad Kar
Woh Naam
Daurahane Se
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Duniya Ki
Bheed Me
Tanhaa
Un Ghoorti Nighaahon Se
Cheekh Nikal Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !
Radhika ji,
Ehsaas ache aur sache lge...... Aise hi likhti rahiye.....!!! Dil se daad haizir hai.......!!!

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achha likha hai aapne radhika ji, ehsaas behad achhe lage....
daad qubuul kijiyega...
ji bhaut bhaut shukriya ...................


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Kisi ke maan mai chupe dar ke ehsaas ko kehen ki koishish ki hai.... !


Jism Ki Parchhai Se
Bichhad Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Aaj Phir
Halaat Ke Saamne
Toot Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Rakhe They
Jo Sapne Dil Me
SanjoN Kar
Unke Bikhar Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Koi Purana Haadsa
Yaad Kar
Woh Naam
Daurahane Se
Dar Lagta Hai... !

Duniya Ki
Bheed Me
Tanhaa
Un Ghoorti Nighaahon Se
Cheekh Nikal Jane Ka
Dar Lagta Hai... !

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