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tera sath mere sath nahi - 9th September 2008, 01:03 AM

kaise guzre woh pal yaad nahi
Abb tera sath mere sath nahi

Tujhko yaad karoon ya rooan apni bebasi pe
Abb to en kandhoon ko honsla dete woh hath nahi

Har pal tera chera rehta hai en ankhaon mai
Abb to noore mojasim mai bhi lagti woh baat nahi

Sochta hoon kaash tu vapas ajayee ek karishme ki tarah
Per lade fitrat se ya khud se hume to karishme pe kabhi etimaad nahi

Sunta hoon woh shoor samnder ka jise sunte the sath hum
Abb to us analbaher mai dekhte lahroon ke jazbaat nahi

Ansoon to behte nahi per rooh ander hi roti hai
Apne pyaar ka mere pass koi isbaat nahi

Har arzoo ki kasak dil mai dabtii hai
Hayaat ho ya wafaat abb to kisi baat ki ihtiyaat nahi

Kaise bhooloon woh raza-ae-ada teri zaat ki
abb to tere siva kisiko zarbaat karne ki taa'aat nahi

kaise jaoon anjuman-ae-aakhir mai ae 'yasir'
abb to meri wafaaat ke baad ansoon-ae-barsaat nahi





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9th September 2008, 10:59 PM

ek bhi rply nhi
well kaam se kaam yahi batadete bekar to delete kar doon


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10th September 2008, 02:18 PM

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kaise guzre woh pal yaad nahi
Abb tera sath mere sath nahi

Tujhko yaad karoon ya rooan apni bebasi pe
Abb to en kandhoon ko honsla dete woh hath nahi

Har pal tera chera rehta hai en ankhaon mai
Abb to noore mojasim mai bhi lagti woh baat nahi

Sochta hoon kaash tu vapas ajayee ek karishme ki tarah
Per lade fitrat se ya khud se hume to karishme pe kabhi etimaad nahi

Sunta hoon woh shoor samnder ka jise sunte the sath hum
Abb to us analbaher mai dekhte lahroon ke jazbaat nahi

Ansoon to behte nahi per rooh ander hi roti hai
Apne pyaar ka mere pass koi isbaat nahi

Har arzoo ki kasak dil mai dabtii hai
Hayaat ho ya wafaat abb to kisi baat ki ihtiyaat nahi

Kaise bhooloon woh raza-ae-ada teri zaat ki
abb to tere siva kisiko zarbaat karne ki taa'aat nahi

kaise jaoon anjuman-ae-aakhir mai ae 'yasir'
abb to meri wafaaat ke baad ansoon-ae-barsaat nahi



Yasir ji aap bahot umda likhte ho....Humne aap ke kuchh Gazal dekhe hain Realy touchy........Aise likhte rahiye ...........



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10th September 2008, 02:44 PM

ahsaas acche lage.....aapki koshiah behtar hai....likhtey rahiye


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Yasir ji aap bahot umda likhte ho....Humne aap ke kuchh Gazal dekhe hain Realy touchy........Aise likhte rahiye ...........

thanx very much
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fir bhi app logon ki taarif ke liye bahut bahut shukriya


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ahsaas acche lage.....aapki koshiah behtar hai....likhtey rahiye
thanx so much jo app logon ne reply kiya i knw u ppl replied bcoz of ma reply to the post "if it is bad thn i may delete it "

ap log bhut achchi shyaari likhte hain no doubt i knw i cnt b good like u but still if u can thn plz tell wht i m lacking so tht i may try to enhance otherwise i leave writing craps

thnx so much
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thanx very much
waise mai applogon ke samne kanhi bhi stand nahi karta hoon
fir bhi app logon ki taarif ke liye bahut bahut shukriya
Sukriya .......

Yasir ji hum aapke sare Post dekhe hain sab achhe hain...sabdon ke saath khelne ka Hunar hai aap main isiliye delete karne ki baat mat kijiye ..aur likhte rahiye .........



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Sukriya .......

Yasir ji hum aapke sare Post dekhe hain sab achhe hain...sabdon ke saath khelne ka Hunar hai aap main isiliye delete karne ki baat mat kijiye ..aur likhte rahiye .........
bahut bahut shukriya
ill try to b better
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