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Arrow Yeh baat alag hai kabhi charcha nahi kertay - 15th September 2008, 07:04 AM

Salam

main apni nayi ghazal ap se yahan share kerna chahoonga..... plz apni raye se nawaziyega...khaas thor per koi kami lagay kisi bhi hawalay se plzzzzzzzzz meri rehnumayi farmayega
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Yeh baat alag hai kabhi charcha nahi kertay
Ham shoq maiN ajaayeiN tho kya kya nahi kertay

KantoN se jo kertay haiN wafaa unn se zaraa pooCH
Woh phool ke bister pe bhi soya nahi kertay

Chorra bhi yuN tum ne mujay thi jab barri mushkil
Mushkil maiN kisi ko kabhi chorra nahi kertay

Ham ap ke apnay haiN tho kioN itni hijabaiN
ApnoN se kabhi apnay tho parda nahi kertay

BaataiN tu bohot kertay haiN teray gali ke loG
Per ham kisi ki baat ki parva nahi kertay

Ham khelthay haiN apnay hi dil se magar ihsan
LogoN ke diloN se kabhi khela nahi kertay




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15th September 2008, 09:32 AM

salam
ihsanji aap ne ghazal bhut achi hai.

hum doston ko ****te nahi hai
per ye baat jatate nahi hai
doston ko hamesha rakhte hai dil me
hum ****ne ke liye dost banate nahi hain.


manzeel unhi ko milti hai jinke hawsle buland hotehain
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15th September 2008, 09:42 AM

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aap aise hi likhte raho.humesha haste raho ye hamari dil se dua hai.


manzeel unhi ko milti hai jinke hawsle buland hotehain
pankho se kuch nahi hota hawslo se udan hoti hai.
   
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15th September 2008, 02:29 PM

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Salam

main apni nayi ghazal ap se yahan share kerna chahoonga..... plz apni raye se nawaziyega...khaas thor per koi kami lagay kisi bhi hawalay se plzzzzzzzzz meri rehnumayi farmayega
thnx


Yeh baat alag hai kabhi charcha nahi kertay
Ham shoq maiN ajaayeiN tho kya kya nahi kertay

KantoN se jo kertay haiN wafaa unn se zaraa pooCH
Woh phool ke bister pe bhi soya nahi kertay

Chorra bhi yuN tum ne mujay thi jab barri mushkil
Mushkil maiN kisi ko kabhi chorra nahi kertay

Ham ap ke apnay haiN tho kioN itni hijabaiN
ApnoN se kabhi apnay tho parda nahi kertay

BaataiN tu bohot kertay haiN teray gali ke loG
Per ham kisi ki baat ki parva nahi kertay

Ham khelthay haiN apnay hi dil se magar ihsan
LogoN ke diloN se kabhi khela nahi kertay
Bahot khoob ...Hume aap ke Gazal bahot pasand aayi aap youn hi mahfil roshan karte rahiye ....dil se daad kabool kijiye ..........



Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai


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15th September 2008, 02:36 PM

ihsan sahib !

kaise haiN janaab aap ?

shayad pehli martabaa aapse rubaru ho raha huN ! aaj aapki ghazal padhi to kadam khud ba khud aapki gully me chalte chale aaye !

behad dilkash lagi aapki ye kashmakash hameiN !

Yeh baat alag hai kabhi charcha nahi kertay
Ham shoq maiN ajaayeiN tho kya kya nahi kertay

Ham ap ke apnay haiN tho kioN itni hijabaiN
ApnoN se kabhi apnay tho parda nahi kertay

BaataiN tu bohot kertay haiN teray gali ke loG
Per ham kisi ki baat ki parva nahi kertay

Ham khelthay haiN apnay hi dil se magar ihsan
LogoN ke diloN se kabhi khela nahi kertey

yuN to sarapa ghazal kabil e tareef hai magar matlaa se maQtaa tak ye kuch ashaar rooh me paibast ho gaye !

aap meiN likhne kaa hunar bahut shiddat se hai !

malik aapka ye Qaif barQaraar rakhe !

apna khyaal rakhiye !


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Bohot shukriya - 15th September 2008, 11:23 PM

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aap aise hi likhte raho.humesha haste raho ye hamari dil se dua hai.

salam

Bohot shukriya fairy, ghazal ko pasand kernay ka
ap is isi tarah kholoos se hamain dua dengi tu insha allah aur bhi likhengay

ap ka msg parhtay hi muje andaza hogya that ****mean chorrte

bohot bohot khush rahiyega


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15th September 2008, 11:26 PM

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Bahot khoob ...Hume aap ke Gazal bahot pasand aayi aap youn hi mahfil roshan karte rahiye ....dil se daad kabool kijiye ..........
salam
bohot shukriya ghazal pasand krnay ka
Allah apko hamesha khush rahkhay


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15th September 2008, 11:31 PM

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ihsan sahib !

kaise haiN janaab aap ?

shayad pehli martabaa aapse rubaru ho raha huN ! aaj aapki ghazal padhi to kadam khud ba khud aapki gully me chalte chale aaye !

behad dilkash lagi aapki ye kashmakash hameiN !

Yeh baat alag hai kabhi charcha nahi kertay
Ham shoq maiN ajaayeiN tho kya kya nahi kertay

Ham ap ke apnay haiN tho kioN itni hijabaiN
ApnoN se kabhi apnay tho parda nahi kertay

BaataiN tu bohot kertay haiN teray gali ke loG
Per ham kisi ki baat ki parva nahi kertay

Ham khelthay haiN apnay hi dil se magar ihsan
LogoN ke diloN se kabhi khela nahi kertey

yuN to sarapa ghazal kabil e tareef hai magar matlaa se maQtaa tak ye kuch ashaar rooh me paibast ho gaye !

aap meiN likhne kaa hunar bahut shiddat se hai !

malik aapka ye Qaif barQaraar rakhe !

apna khyaal rakhiye !

salam

main bilkul teek hoon aur allah se apki kheriyat ki dua kerta hoon
ji bilkul ap se pehli baar mulaqat hovi hai,,,inshallah,,,, bohot acha time guzrega
apki itni pur-kholoos tareef ka main nihayat mamnoon hoon
allah apko hamesha apne saye main rakhay

bohot shukriya


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29th September 2008, 02:09 PM

Ham khelthay haiN apnay hi dil se magar ihsan
LogoN ke diloN se kabhi khela nahi kertay


bahut achchi gajal hai apki ye sher bahut achcha laga,aate rahe,share karte rahen.


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8th October 2008, 04:39 PM

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Ham khelthay haiN apnay hi dil se magar ihsan
LogoN ke diloN se kabhi khela nahi kertay

bahut achchi gajal hai apki ye sher bahut achcha laga,aate rahe,share karte rahen.

bohot shukriya baagi
thnx a lot for liking dis ghazal
bohot bohot khush rahiye


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8th October 2008, 06:03 PM

Aadaab or tasleemaat !

moHteram iHsaan saheb appko peRhna ajj pehli baar naseeb howa hai , yaQeen maaniye is baat ko lay ker preshan hoN keh kish shai'r ki tareef keroN aur kis ki naa keroN , her aik shai'r behad acha hai , app ki yeh ghazal peRh ker lagta hai ab appka koi kalaam mis nahi kerna chahiye , khush rahieN


ALLAH appka haami aur naasir ho

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Aadaab or tasleemaat !

moHteram iHsaan saheb appko peRhna ajj pehli baar naseeb howa hai , yaQeen maaniye is baat ko lay ker preshan hoN keh kish shai'r ki tareef keroN aur kis ki naa keroN , her aik shai'r behad acha hai , app ki yeh ghazal peRh ker lagta hai ab appka koi kalaam mis nahi kerna chahiye , khush rahieN


ALLAH appka haami aur naasir ho

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Ap ne jese tareef ki mere paas alfaz nahi hain shukriya kehne keliye
Allah apko hamesha khush rakhay


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