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Love ----"meri chahat ibadat ho gaye he"--- - 14th June 2007, 12:52 PM
salam doston,
aj phir ek nazm apke samne pesh kar raha hoon ummid he apko pasan aayegi, ek dukhi dil ki awaz ko suniye...


mujhe tumse muhabbat ho gayee he,
ye duniya khoobsurat ho gayee he.

khuda se roz tumko mangta hoon,
meri chahat ibadat ho gayee he.

wo chehra chand he ankhen sitare,
zamin phoolon ki jannat ho gayee he.

bahut din se tumhe dekha nahi he,
chale bhi aao muddat ho gayee he..


apke zawabon ka muntazir...

apka dost aadi
bye doston.
take care



agar hum ek ansu hote,
to apki ankhon se hokar apke hothon
par marna pasand karte.
agar ap meri ankhon ke ansu hote,
to vaada he jaan hum zindgi bhar N rote...
Merii subah terii muriid hai merii shaam tere hii naam se
Tere dar se nahii main jaau.Ngaa ye Khayaal dil se nikal de
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14th June 2007, 01:49 PM
Arey, Jawaab kya? Aadi sahab aap ke ye ashaar to kaabil-e-tareef hai. Waah, janaab, kya peshkash hai! Daad kubul kijiyegaa. Likhtey rahiyegaa.

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15th June 2007, 03:05 PM

salam satishji, dad kabul ki or shukriya ki apne meri nazm ko pasand kiya or is ki taref ki. bas aplogon ka sath chahiye or acha likhne ke liye. koi kami ho to zaroor batayein...

"tum agar saath dene ka wada karo,
mein yunhi mast nagme sunata rahoon".



agar hum ek ansu hote,
to apki ankhon se hokar apke hothon
par marna pasand karte.
agar ap meri ankhon ke ansu hote,
to vaada he jaan hum zindgi bhar N rote...
Merii subah terii muriid hai merii shaam tere hii naam se
Tere dar se nahii main jaau.Ngaa ye Khayaal dil se nikal de
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16th June 2007, 02:59 PM
Huzuur....


agar aap ne likha hai yeh Ghazal to bahot khuub likha hai.....khuub hii rawaaN-dawaan hai har sher qaabiil-e-daad hai, ..... meri dili daad qubool keejiye aur yuuN hii likhate raheN....

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Huzuur....


agar aap ne likha hai yeh Ghazal to bahot khuub likha hai.....khuub hii rawaaN-dawaan hai har sher qaabiil-e-daad hai, ..... meri dili daad qubool keejiye aur yuuN hii likhate raheN....

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hello mayank ji, taref karne ke liye shukriya, aplog bas unhi sath dete rahiye or acha likhne ki koshisk karoonga.


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agar hum ek ansu hote,
to apki ankhon se hokar apke hothon
par marna pasand karte.
agar ap meri ankhon ke ansu hote,
to vaada he jaan hum zindgi bhar N rote...
Merii subah terii muriid hai merii shaam tere hii naam se
Tere dar se nahii main jaau.Ngaa ye Khayaal dil se nikal de
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salam doston,
aj phir ek nazm apke samne pesh kar raha hoon ummid he apko pasan aayegi, ek dukhi dil ki awaz ko suniye...


mujhe tumse muhabbat ho gayee he,
ye duniya khoobsurat ho gayee he.

khuda se roz tumko mangta hoon,
meri chahat ibadat ho gayee he.

wo chehra chand he ankhen sitare,
zamin phoolon ki jannat ho gayee he.

bahut din se tumhe dekha nahi he,
chale bhi aao muddat ho gayee he..


apke zawabon ka muntazir...

apka dost aadi
bye doston.
take care
addi ji ko raj ka adaab........janaab aapse ek baat kehna chahta hoon umeed hai aapko bura nahi lagega.......kisi doosre ki gazal ko apne naam se post karna achi baat nahi hai......shayad ab tak jisne bhii aapko parha unko maloom nahi hai ki ye gazal jagjit singh ji ki gayii huyii hai......main aapko bata dunga kisne likhi hai........aage se khyaal rakhiyega ki jo aapka likha na ho uske saath NOT MINE zaroor likhe.....or uska cradit uske writer ko hi de.......aapka dost ............raj..........

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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17th June 2007, 02:27 PM
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addi ji ko raj ka adaab........janaab aapse ek baat kehna chahta hoon umeed hai aapko bura nahi lagega.......kisi doosre ki gazal ko apne naam se post karna achi baat nahi hai......shayad ab tak jisne bhii aapko parha unko maloom nahi hai ki ye gazal jagjit singh ji ki gayii huyii hai......main aapko bata dunga kisne likhi hai........aage se khyaal rakhiyega ki jo aapka likha na ho uske saath NOT MINE zaroor likhe.....or uska cradit uske writer ko hi de.......aapka dost ............raj..........

Thanks Rajveer jee:

jaise kii Yeh Ghazal beHr.e.hazaj, musaddas, meHzoof meiN hai, aur jab maiN ne isay pehli baar paRha tabhii mujhe aisa laga thaa, kii shaayad yeh kisii aur kii ho.... kyuN kii Ghazal meiN saadgii ke saath kaafi achchhe ehsaas haiN.... aur koii ham jaise hii nau-shaayar ess tarah kii Ghazal likhe ta'azuub kii baat hai... par chuN kii Ghazal maiN ne pehli nahiiN sunii thii, ess liye kuchh kahna Theek nahiiN laga.. ..... ess liye maiN ne "aadi jee" se kaha kii "agar aap ne likha hai yeh Ghazal to bahot khuub likha hai...."

Aap ka tah-e-dil se Shukriyah jo aap ne ess baare meiN bataaya.... yuuN hii RoShnaii daalte raheN...

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18th June 2007, 05:21 AM
bahut din se tumhe dekha nahi he,
chale bhi aao muddat ho gayee he..

Bahut khoob Aadi ji.. Daad Hazir hai..
   
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18th June 2007, 09:26 AM
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salam doston,
aj phir ek nazm apke samne pesh kar raha hoon ummid he apko pasan aayegi, ek dukhi dil ki awaz ko suniye...


mujhe tumse muhabbat ho gayee he,
ye duniya khoobsurat ho gayee he.

khuda se roz tumko mangta hoon,
meri chahat ibadat ho gayee he.

wo chehra chand he ankhen sitare,
zamin phoolon ki jannat ho gayee he.

bahut din se tumhe dekha nahi he,
chale bhi aao muddat ho gayee he..


apke zawabon ka muntazir...

apka dost aadi
bye doston.
take care
Kya baat hai aadi ji;

aap bhot hi aacha likhte hai.. thode se shab mein bhot khuch bayan kar dete hai....

Mitali...

Tere har zakham seh jayenge haste haste,
Teri yaad me jeeye jayenge haste haste,
Gilana hoga khabhi aapko humse,
KYUNKI
Aap ka har waada nibha jayenge haste haste.....

TERE PYAR MEIN EK TUTA HUA KHWAB HU MEIN
JO AAB KHABHI JUD NAHI PAYEGA...
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18th June 2007, 10:55 AM

hello rajji, theek pehchana apne ki ye gazal jagjit singh ji ki gayee huye he but apne shayad ye nahi pada ki mene likha ki me ek nazm pesh kar raha hoon, ye nahi likha ki ye meri likhi hui he. but bataneke liye thanks ki esi situation me not mine likhte hein thanks for it....

bye dost...



agar hum ek ansu hote,
to apki ankhon se hokar apke hothon
par marna pasand karte.
agar ap meri ankhon ke ansu hote,
to vaada he jaan hum zindgi bhar N rote...
Merii subah terii muriid hai merii shaam tere hii naam se
Tere dar se nahii main jaau.Ngaa ye Khayaal dil se nikal de
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18th June 2007, 10:59 AM

hello mitaliji adab, daad dene ke liye shukriya but daad denahe to use do jo iska original writer he. mujhey to ye achi lagi is liye likh di..i dont no ki ka original writer kon he agar apko pata ho to bata dena..

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agar hum ek ansu hote,
to apki ankhon se hokar apke hothon
par marna pasand karte.
agar ap meri ankhon ke ansu hote,
to vaada he jaan hum zindgi bhar N rote...
Merii subah terii muriid hai merii shaam tere hii naam se
Tere dar se nahii main jaau.Ngaa ye Khayaal dil se nikal de
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