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29th January 2008, 11:16 PM
doston,
ek nayi ghazal lekar fir haazir hui hoo....ye ghazal tanhai aur dard ki wo daastan hai jo har tute hue dil se uthti hai...jab dil ko apne hi mehboob se chot milti hai to shayad us dard ke aalam me har dil se yehi baddua nikalti hai.... aap ki raay ki muntazir............ Tu Bhi Kisi Ka Pyar Na Paye Khuda Kare, Tujh Ko Bhi Tera Naseeb Rulaye Khuda Kare ..... Raaton Mein Tujh Ko Neend Na Aaye Khuda Kare, Tu Bhi Dar-Ba-Dar Ki Thokre Khaye Khuda Kare ..... Aaye Bahaar Tere Gulistaan Me Baar Baar, Tujh Par Kabhi Nikhaar Na Aaye Khuda Kare ..... Meri Tarah Tujhe Bhi Jawani Me Gum Mile, Tu Bhi Dua Ke Liye Haath Uthaaye Khuda Kare ..... Tujh Par Shab-Visaal Ki Raatein Haraam Ho, Shammein Jal Jal Kar Bujh Jaye Khuda Kare ..... Ho Jaye Sab Bad-Duaaein "LAMHA" Ki Galat, Us Bewafaa Pe Koi Harf Na Aaye Khuda Kare !!!!!!!!  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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29th January 2008, 11:28 PM
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 kis ke bhaagya phoot gaye hai,kaun hai vo badnaseeb......   kaun hai vo bichaaree aatmaa . vaise likhaa bahut achha aur kamal ka hai,daad haaziir hai yunhee likahtee raho keep it up regards manu |
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29th January 2008, 11:50 PM
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wel writen.... keep it up... kaayan... |
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30th January 2008, 02:14 AM
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wah lamha bahut hi achha likha hai pahele itni sari bad dua di aur bad me khuda se kaha ki sari bad dua galat ho jaye sach me bahut hi achha likha hai bas aage bhi aise hi likhte rahena aapka dost krenil |
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30th January 2008, 10:37 PM
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har baddua ke piche dua karege hum apke liye humari sari khusiya dekar bhi mannat karege hum apke liye aur abhi acha likh sako app yahi dua humesha karege hum apke liye AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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beautiful moment.........
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30th January 2008, 11:09 PM
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hey MANU.........thank u sooooo much ki aap ne time nikaal kar muje reply kiya.....aur aap ki dad sar aankho par...uhi saath dete rehna................ "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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30th January 2008, 11:13 PM
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hey KAAYAN, thanx a lot.....jab koi kisi se bewafaai karta hai tab sirf zubaan se hi us bewafaa ke liye baddua nikalti hai , dil to kuch aur hi kehta hai....hum chahe lakh koshishen kar le,hum kabhi apne dilbar ko baddua nahi de pate...shayad yahi sachcha pyaar hai.....hai na????? aap ka bahut bahut shukriya is koshish ko pasand karne ke liye............. "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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31st January 2008, 02:26 AM
good one lamha,
regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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beautiful moment.........
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31st January 2008, 07:48 PM
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thanx a lot AARYA........keep coming..... "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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31st January 2008, 08:43 PM
Lamha ji kya baat bahut baddoaen de di is gazal mein kisi ko...........wwh bahut khoob likha hai aapne har sher dil azeez raha meri daad kubool kijiye
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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31st January 2008, 09:01 PM
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shukriya KASHIF, aap ne yaha aakar muje padha aur is ghazal ko pasand kiya yehi bahut badi baat hai....uhi saath dete rehna...ek baar fir aap ka shukriya adaa karti hoo...aap ki dad sar-aankho par......thanx.... "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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1st February 2008, 06:00 PM
Ho Jaye Sab Bad-Duaaein "LAMHA" Ki Galat,
Us Bewafaa Pe Koi Harf Na Aaye Khuda Kare !!!!!!! Ek khubsurat aur paak-saaf Dil hi ye likh sakta he itni sari bad-duua ke baad bahut khub. Teiro mat........... Baho (Dont Sweem..... Just Flow) |
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1st February 2008, 07:12 PM
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thank u sooo much RAJ....tum yaha aaye aur meri is choti si koshish ko padha ye hi bahut badi baat hai mere liye....keep coming....tc... "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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~~Reshma ke Dil ki~~
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1st February 2008, 09:50 PM
Very good Lamha ji!
Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi, Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
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2nd February 2008, 03:22 AM
Dard kitna bhi ho , Sanam ko kosa nahi karte
phool kitne bhi ho chaman mein , sare khila nahi karte... |
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