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Aye ghazal ............... - 25th September 2015, 08:48 PM
aye ghazal tu meri humnawa bhi meri humraz bhi ,
her roz tujh se hoti nayi soch ki aghaz bhi.

tujh meiN dhoondta huN apni khushiyaN aur gamee,
tujh se roobaru rehte mere sab andaz bhi

teri gehrayee meiN akser doob jaata huN agar,
tere ehsaason meiN payee ek bulund parwaz bhi

teri maujoN meiN mili mujhko sagar si hulchal,
jo kinare pe takra ker ho jati sarfaraz bhi

waqt ke chalte badal jaate haiN tere ashiq sada,
likne walon ke likhne ka badalta raha riwaz bhi.

tujh meiN mohabbat aur usse judi ruswaee chupi,
tu hi meri badagi aur tu meri mumtaaz bhi




khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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26th September 2015, 09:30 PM
tujh meiN dhoondta huN apni khushiyaN aur gamee,
tujh se roobaru rehte mere sab andaz bhi

Waah!..ghazal se guftguu bahut khoob huyi hai..bahut achchi koshish hai sanjay ji...dil ke ehsaas bahut achchi tarah pesh kiye hain aapne..

Dher sari daad qubool kijiyega...

Aate rahiye..
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26th September 2015, 10:54 PM
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aye ghazal tu meri humnawa bhi meri humraz bhi ,
her roz tujh se hoti nayi soch ki aghaz bhi.

tujh meiN dhoondta huN apni khushiyaN aur gamee,
tujh se roobaru rehte mere sab andaz bhi

teri gehrayee meiN akser doob jaata huN agar,
tere ehsaason meiN payee ek bulund parwaz bhi

teri maujoN meiN mili mujhko sagar si hulchal,
jo kinare pe takra ker ho jati sarfaraz bhi

waqt ke chalte badal jaate haiN tere ashiq sada,
likne walon ke likhne ka badalta raha riwaz bhi.

tujh meiN mohabbat aur usse judi ruswaee chupi,
tu hi meri badagi aur tu meri mumtaaz bhi
Bahut khoob Sanjay Ji - Is baar kya gazab ki peshkash rahi hai aapki kaaamal ki bayaani aur rawangi hai mazaa aa gaya khaaskar is sher par....

teri gehrayee meiN akser doob jaata huN agar,
tere ehsaason meiN payee ek bulund parwaz bhi

Daad qubool farmaiYeGaa


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28th September 2015, 10:59 AM
bahut hi khoob peshkashhai aapki sanjay ji is baar bhi.............
apni ghazal se hame milwaane eliye tahe dil se shukriyaa aapkaa... aate rahiyega

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