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Love My First And Last Composition(gazal) - 25th June 2008, 11:43 PM
TERI HI NIGHAHON KA HAR SIMT ISHARA HAI.
BEHTA HUA DARIYA HAI KHAMOSH KINARA HAI.

EK DIN CHURAKE TUJHKO DUNIYA KI NIGHAHON SE.
PALKON PE SAJAUNGA ARMAAN YE HAMARA HAI.

WO ZAKHM TUMHE DUNGA TAA UMR RAHEGA YAAD.
NA TEER NA NASHTAR LAFZON KA SAHARA HAI.

DUNIYA KI NAZAR MEIN WO PEHCHAAN BANAUNGA.
DUNIYA YE PUKAREGI DEEWANA TUMHARA HAI.

AASAN NAHIN HAI ZAALIM HARKI KO BHOOL JANA.
KAL WAQT TUMHARA THA AB WAQT HAMARA HAI.






Ye gazal maine college mein likha tha TARAHI GAZAL COMPETITION mein aur 3rd prize bhi mila tha.HARKI mera TAKHALLUS hai.
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25th June 2008, 11:56 PM
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Bohat bohat SHUKRIYA MUJEEB BHAI.Bas DUA kijiye aage bhi kuch na kuch sunata rahoonga.INSHALLAH
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26th June 2008, 03:42 PM
Aapki ghazal to bohat umda hai lekin yeh sub-forum mashahoor shayeron ki shayri ke liye hai .




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26th June 2008, 08:12 PM
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Aapki ghazal to bohat umda hai lekin yeh sub-forum mashahoor shayeron ki shayri ke liye hai .
ZISHAN BHAI bohat bohat shukriya ki aapko meri gazal umda lagi aur reh gayi baat galat sub-forum mein meri ghazal post karne ki to main yahan naya hoon aur mujhe pata nahin hai ki kahan post karna chahiye.aainda khayal rakhoonga.aapki badi meherbaani hogi agar aap mujhe batayenge ki agar mujhe kisi shayar ki ghazal ki request karni hoto kahan karoon?

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27th June 2008, 02:52 AM
subhaan allah.........shafi sahab..................aaj kuch 2 saal baad waapas aaya hoon aur yakeen maniye aab ki ghazal ne mera aana kaamyaab kar diya.

my angel lost her wings.......
   
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subhaan allah.........shafi sahab..................aaj kuch 2 saal baad waapas aaya hoon aur yakeen maniye aab ki ghazal ne mera aana kaamyaab kar diya.
Majnu bhai aajtak bohat daad mili lekin aapke alfaaz ne to mera dil khush kar diya.THANKS
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" NA TO KUCH INTEZAAM ZADAA HAI.
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[quote=DR SHAFI;294137]TERI HI NIGHAHON KA HAR SIMT ISHARA HAI.
BEHTA HUA DARIYA HAI KHAMOSH KINARA HAI.

EK DIN CHURAKE TUJHKO DUNIYA KI NIGHAHON SE.
PALKON PE SAJAUNGA ARMAAN YE HAMARA HAI.

WO ZAKHM TUMHE DUNGA TAA UMR RAHEGA YAAD.
NA TEER NA NASHTAR LAFZON KA SAHARA HAI.

DUNIYA KI NAZAR MEIN WO PEHCHAAN BANAUNGA.
DUNIYA YE PUKAREGI DEEWANA TUMHARA HAI.

AASAN NAHIN HAI ZAALIM HARKI KO BHOOL JANA.
KAL WAQT TUMHARA THA AB WAQT HAMARA HAI.






EK BEHETREEN GHAZAL KE LIYE HAMARI TARAF SE DAAD QUBOOL KIJIYE...WAKAY BAHUT ACCHE EHSAAS HAIN...LEKIN FIRST AND LAST COMPOSITION KYU....???...KEEP WRITING..


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