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Tu kithe ja ke beh gaya - 24th August 2007, 10:42 AM
Das tu kithe ja ke beh gaya, ve mai raaha takka
gaya vi na mainu das ke, das ki hosla rakha

mere nain kavare ronde ve, das tainu kitho labha
mil jave je tu sohneya, mai eh duniya chhada

roz manga teri kheir ve, hor koi dua na manga
mai chardi jawani sohiya, tere rang ch ranga

odasi mainu mar mukave, tere bin ji na saka
na din laghe, na raat bite, kive waqt mai kata

jind namani kumla gayi, kihra veid hun sadda
meri kismat ch os nu likh de, Rabba mai jholi aada






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nice - 24th August 2007, 11:08 AM
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Das tu kithe ja ke beh gaya, ve mai raaha takka
gaya vi na mainu das ke, das ki hosla rakha

mere nain kavare ronde ve, das tainu kitho labha
mil jave je tu sohneya, hor ki dua mai manga

odasi mainu mar mukave, tere bin ji na saka
na din laghe, na raat bite, kive waqt mai kata

jind namani kumla gayi, kihra veid hun sadda
meri kismat ch os nu likh de, Rabba mai jholi aada
heer ji bhut bhut bhut wadhia.......really speechless.......raj........

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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24th August 2007, 11:15 AM
Thank u RAJVEER ji
Apna time spend karan liye ate iss poem nu read karan liye, vese poem eni sohni nahi hundi
Poem tuahde varge dosta de ans naal sohni bandi hai,




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sat ari akal HEER, tuhadi poem lai je mai koi lafz tareef karan lai likha ta, mere lafaz sharminda ho jange.
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27th August 2007, 08:56 AM
Thank u BABBU ji ena pyara ans den liye, par tusi tareef jiada kar rahe ho, iss mai kabil nahi hai dost




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jind namani kumla gayi, kihra veid hun sadda
meri kismat ch os nu likh de, Rabba mai jholi aada

Heer Ji Sat-Sri-Akal.

Mainu bahutan punjabi tan ni aundi par tuhade aena alfazan vicho chipe hoye "Ehsaas" nu zaroor samajh sakdan...

Tuhada aabhari ravanga, tusi mainu aine sone "Ehsaas" padan da mauka dita.


Tuhada Shub-Chintak..

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27th August 2007, 08:40 PM
Sat shri akal Widhani ji

tusi punjabi wich likhi poem nu understand kar gaye,
sachi mere liye barri khusi di gal hai, Mai tuhadi aabhri rahagi ke tusi mainu ena maan jo de rahe ho,

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17th May 2008, 10:09 AM
Mainu ta pata hi nahi lag raha HEER ji ke tuhadi keharri poem read kara, sariya hi ek dute to vad ke sohniya han ji, asi ta tuhade fan ho gaye,

Jihdi mitro bhaal ch dil
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bahut sohna likheya heerji, ik-2 line da matlab niklda.........rabb tuhadi kalam nu sada salamat rakhe..raj sydney
   
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17th May 2008, 08:09 PM
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Mainu ta pata hi nahi lag raha HEER ji ke tuhadi keharri poem read kara, sariya hi ek dute to vad ke sohniya han ji, asi ta tuhade fan ho gaye,
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bahut sohna likheya heerji, ik-2 line da matlab niklda.........rabb tuhadi kalam nu sada salamat rakhe..raj sydney
Thanks Balraj ji, iss poem nu read karan liye and aaapna time mere iss poem liye spend karan layi



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19th May 2008, 10:09 AM
Aakri line bahut shaandaar si. Par wich wich kujh average poetry.

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Das tu kithe ja ke beh gaya, ve mai raaha takka
gaya vi na mainu das ke, das ki hosla rakha

mere nain kavare ronde ve, das tainu kitho labha
mil jave je tu sohneya, mai eh duniya chhada

roz manga teri kheir ve, hor koi dua na manga
mai chardi jawani sohiya, tere rang ch ranga

odasi mainu mar mukave, tere bin ji na saka
na din laghe, na raat bite, kive waqt mai kata

jind namani kumla gayi, kihra veid hun sadda
meri kismat ch os nu likh de, Rabba mai jholi aada
aeh vali ta ji dil nu chu gi mere. boht sohni aa ji.
   
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