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suggest the title of the story plz - 23rd May 2005, 11:54 AM

There was a young boy who used to one for regular practice but always played

in the reserves and never made it to the soccer eleven. While he was practicing,

his father used to sit at the far end, waiting for him. The matched had started

and for four days, he didn't show up for practice or the quarter or semifinals.

All of a sudden he showed up for the finals, went to the coach and

said," Coach, you have always kept me in the reserves and never let me play

in the finals. But today, please let me play." The coach said, "Son, I'm sorry,

I can't let you. There are better players than you and besides, it is the finals,

the reputation of the school is at stake and I cannot take a chance." The boy

pleaded, "Coach, I promise I will not let you down. I beg of you, please let me

play." The coach had never seen the boy plead like this before. He said, "OK,

son, go, play. But remember, I am going against my better judgment and the

reputation of the school is at stake. Don't let me down."



The game started and the boy played like a house on fire. Every time he got the ball,

he shot a goal. Needless to say, he was the best player and the star of the game.

His team had a spectacular win.



When the game finished, the coach went up to him and said, "Son, how could I have

been so wrong in my life. I have never seen you play like this before. What happened?

How did you play so well?" The boy replied, "Coach, my father is watching me today."

The coach turned around and looked at the place where the boy's father used to sit.

There was no one there. He said, "Son, your father used to sit there when you came for

practice, but I don't see anyone there today."



The boy replied, "Coach, there is something I never told you. My father was blind.

Just four days ago, he died.

Today is the first day he is watching me from above


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23rd May 2005, 12:07 PM

Hi Brother...

In my view the title of the story should be

"First day"

becoz this line attracts my all attention "Today is the first day he is watching me from above"


very nice and inspiring story .. thanks for it


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24th May 2005, 10:18 AM

thnks sis to suggest a beautiful title "FIRST DAY" great title.






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2nd June 2005, 06:37 PM

nice one mehul ,
i think i've read it before....ne ways.....thanks for sharin with us
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3rd June 2005, 10:00 PM

u may have jeard karthik ji bcoz i too have heard this story


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8th June 2005, 12:58 PM

Mehul ji,

i too have read it somewhere.

Thanks for sharing

i couln't think of a befitting title.

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