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Love Badnaseebi Ki Lakeer Ab Tak Mita Rahe Hai Hum - 6th May 2010, 01:43 PM
apni barbaadi ka jashan yu mana rahe hai hum
tute hue rishte ko ab bhi nibha rahe hai hum

bhul chuke hai sara alaam unki mohabaat mein
khudgarz par apni chahatein luta rahe hai hum

meri wafao ka janaza nikle toh ik zamana hua
phir kyu is jhute pyaar ko nibha rahe hai hum

vo samajh na paye kabhi mere dil ki jazbaaton ko
unse hi ab apni jazbaaton ko chupa rahe hai hum

aye khuda kis fursat mein likhi tune meri kismat
badnaseebi ki lakeer ab tak mita rahe hai hum

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apni barbaadi ka jashan yu mana rahe hai hum
tute hue rishte ko ab bhi nibha rahe hai hum

bhul chuke hai sara alaam unki mohabaat mein
khudgarz par apni chahatein luta rahe hai hum

meri wafao ka janaza nikle toh ik zamana hua
phir kyu is jhute pyaar ko nibha rahe hai hum

vo samajh na paye kabhi mere dil ki jazbaaton ko
unse hi ab apni jazbaaton ko chupa rahe hai hum

aye khuda kis fursat mein likhi tune meri kismat
badnaseebi ki lakeer ab tak mita rahe hai hum

praneeta jee
radhe radhe

bahut khoob ahsaas hai pasand aaye sabhi ashar achhe hai daad dil se
aise hi likhti rahen
duaon ke saath

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apni barbaadi ka jashan yu mana rahe hai hum
tute hue rishte ko ab bhi nibha rahe hai hum

bhul chuke hai sara alaam unki mohabaat mein
khudgarz par apni chahatein luta rahe hai hum

meri wafao ka janaza nikle toh ik zamana hua
phir kyu is jhute pyaar ko nibha rahe hai hum

vo samajh na paye kabhi mere dil ki jazbaaton ko
unse hi ab apni jazbaaton ko chupa rahe hai hum

aye khuda kis fursat mein likhi tune meri kismat
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very nice pareentaa

badnaseebi ki lakeer ab tak mita rahe hai hum

this one is outstanding

meri wafao ka janaza nikle toh ik zamana hua
phir kyu is jhute pyaar ko nibha rahe hai hum

and this one also

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apni barbaadi ka jashan yu mana rahe hai hum
tute hue rishte ko ab bhi nibha rahe hai hum

bhul chuke hai sara alaam unki mohabaat mein
khudgarz par apni chahatein luta rahe hai hum

meri wafao ka janaza nikle toh ik zamana hua
phir kyu is jhute pyaar ko nibha rahe hai hum

vo samajh na paye kabhi mere dil ki jazbaaton ko
unse hi ab apni jazbaaton ko chupa rahe hai hum

aye khuda kis fursat mein likhi tune meri kismat
badnaseebi ki lakeer ab tak mita rahe hai hum

very nice pareentaa

badnaseebi ki lakeer ab tak mita rahe hai hum

this one is outstanding

meri wafao ka janaza nikle toh ik zamana hua
phir kyu is jhute pyaar ko nibha rahe hai hum

and this one also

keep it up
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6th May 2010, 05:38 PM
Parineeta je aadaab!

Bae dino bad aapne kuch likha hai.....
Aur bahut khoob likha hai.....

sabhi sher achche lage.....

Likhate rhaiye,
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Praneeta Ji....Namaste ! aapki arse baad nayi ghazal padhi.....bahut accha laga.....magar shaadi ke baad itna dard.....sab theek toh hai na......bas yeh dard sirf ghazal tak rahe...aapke jeevan me nahi......yahi duaa hai....

itne din baad bhi .....aapki ghazal me woh hi gehraai aur purasar adaayegi kaayam hai....saaf bayaani ghazal me khaas nazar aai....har ashaar me be-intaaha dard .....dil ko bahut gehre tak chhu gaya.....

yeh do sheyr toh mujhe bahut kamaal ke lage.....

meri wafao ka janaza nikle toh ik zamana hua
phir kyu is jhute pyaar ko nibha rahe hai hum

aye khuda kis fursat mein likhi tune meri kismat
badnaseebi ki lakeer ab tak mita rahe hai hum

dil se daad hazir hai....qubuul farmaayen....

yunhi behtar kalaam ke saath humesha aati rahiye....khush rahen....

apna theek se khayal rakhen....
duaaon ke saath.....



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ji.....Very nice lines...... !


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praneeta jee
radhe radhe

bahut khoob ahsaas hai pasand aaye sabhi ashar achhe hai daad dil se
aise hi likhti rahen
duaon ke saath

shukriya Ishq sahab
aap ko pasand aayi meri poetry mujhe khushi hai

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apni barbaadi ka jashan yu mana rahe hai hum
tute hue rishte ko ab bhi nibha rahe hai hum

bhul chuke hai sara alaam unki mohabaat mein
khudgarz par apni chahatein luta rahe hai hum

meri wafao ka janaza nikle toh ik zamana hua
phir kyu is jhute pyaar ko nibha rahe hai hum

vo samajh na paye kabhi mere dil ki jazbaaton ko
unse hi ab apni jazbaaton ko chupa rahe hai hum

aye khuda kis fursat mein likhi tune meri kismat
badnaseebi ki lakeer ab tak mita rahe hai hum

very nice pareentaa

badnaseebi ki lakeer ab tak mita rahe hai hum

this one is outstanding

meri wafao ka janaza nikle toh ik zamana hua
phir kyu is jhute pyaar ko nibha rahe hai hum

and this one also

keep it up
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keep reading n giving ur invaluable opinion

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badnaseebi ki lakeer ab tak mita rahe hai hum

this one is outstanding

meri wafao ka janaza nikle toh ik zamana hua
phir kyu is jhute pyaar ko nibha rahe hai hum

and this one also

keep it up



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Parineeta je aadaab!

Bae dino bad aapne kuch likha hai.....
Aur bahut khoob likha hai.....

sabhi sher achche lage.....

Likhate rhaiye,
Khush rahiye
khuda Hafez....

shukriya kwahish sahab
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apni barbaadi ka jashan yu mana rahe hai hum
tute hue rishte ko ab bhi nibha rahe hai hum

bhul chuke hai sara alaam unki mohabaat mein
khudgarz par apni chahatein luta rahe hai hum

meri wafao ka janaza nikle toh ik zamana hua
phir kyu is jhute pyaar ko nibha rahe hai hum

vo samajh na paye kabhi mere dil ki jazbaaton ko
unse hi ab apni jazbaaton ko chupa rahe hai hum

aye khuda kis fursat mein likhi tune meri kismat
badnaseebi ki lakeer ab tak mita rahe hai hum
ye sher aapka praneeta ji
aye khuda kis fursat mein likhi tune meri kismat
badnaseebi ki lakeer ab tak mita rahe hai hum

itna dhakad raha ki kya batauu...
bahut khoob
aur
tamaam ghazal acchi lagi aapki

dad hazir hai

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Praneeta Ji....Namaste ! aapki arse baad nayi ghazal padhi.....bahut accha laga.....magar shaadi ke baad itna dard.....sab theek toh hai na......bas yeh dard sirf ghazal tak rahe...aapke jeevan me nahi......yahi duaa hai....

itne din baad bhi .....aapki ghazal me woh hi gehraai aur purasar adaayegi kaayam hai....saaf bayaani ghazal me khaas nazar aai....har ashaar me be-intaaha dard .....dil ko bahut gehre tak chhu gaya.....

yeh do sheyr toh mujhe bahut kamaal ke lage.....

meri wafao ka janaza nikle toh ik zamana hua
phir kyu is jhute pyaar ko nibha rahe hai hum

aye khuda kis fursat mein likhi tune meri kismat
badnaseebi ki lakeer ab tak mita rahe hai hum

dil se daad hazir hai....qubuul farmaayen....

yunhi behtar kalaam ke saath humesha aati rahiye....khush rahen....

apna theek se khayal rakhen....
duaaon ke saath.....
shukriya naresh ji
aap ke response ka shukriya
daad qabul ki maine dil se
yuhi saath banaye rakhiyen

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ji.....Very nice lines...... !

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Simple but effective word........Nice work Praneeta jee

meri wafao ka janaza nikle toh ik zamana hua
phir kyu is jhute pyaar ko nibha rahe hai hum

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Good one praneeta...keep writing.....



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ye sher aapka praneeta ji
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itna dhakad raha ki kya batauu...
bahut khoob
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Simple but effective word........Nice work Praneeta jee

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Good one praneeta...keep writing.....

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