" Sharab Sath Deti Hai........"

Dhaval · **" Sharab Sath Deti Hai........" -** 21st August 2006, 10:49 PM

JAB DIL TUTTA HAI TO SHARAB SATH DETI HAI

JAB KOI YAAD AATA HAI TO SHARAB SATH DETI HAI.....

JAB ANKHO ME AA JATE HAI AANSU TO SHARAB SATH DETI HAI....

YE SHARAB BHI AJIB HOTI HAI YAARO ...JISKE SINE ME DARD HO USIKA YE SATH DETI HAI...........................MY.HEART

pooja_d · **dost saath deta hai -** 24th August 2006, 11:04 PM

sachi dosti ki dastan..........

Jab dil tutta hai to dost saath deta hai,

Jab koi yaad aata hai to dost saharaa deta hai,

Jab aankhon me aa jate hai aansu to dost ponch deta hai,

Ye dosti bhi ajeeb hoti hai e dost...dard hai mere seene me dost se milkar.......... dard bhi muskura deta hai.

sorry dhaval ji aapki shayri ko naya roop de diya hai meine. lekin jo sochte hai ki sharaab sahara hai galat sochte hai sharaab to sachai se mooh modne ka bahana hoti hai. jo sach se darte hai vo sharaab ka sahara lete hai. lekin agar sharab sahara hai to dosti kinara hai.

bytheway aapne achha likha hai. janti hu ki buri baat hai kisi ke sher ko badal dena lekin ye to aapka sher hai isi liye ye gustakhi ki hai meine. kisi aur ka hota to kabhi na karti. lekin fir bhi agar aapko bura laga to i m sorry.

aapki dost
pooja

Dhaval · 24th August 2006, 11:17 PM

ARE YUMNE KHUB LIKHA POOJA AUR MAIN KABHI BURA NAHI LAGATA , MUJHE BAHOT HI PASAND AAYA JO TUMNE LIKHA HAI WO , ISILIYE HAR BAR MAIN TUMSEYEHI KEHTA HU K TUM MUJSE JYADA ACHHA LIKHTI HO,,,MAIN SHARAB TO NAHI PITA PAR DOSTO K HALAT PESE LIKH ZARROR LETA HU....SHARAB KO CHAKHTA NAHI PAR USE PINE WALO KO SAMAJHNE KI KOSIS KARTA HU..........

pooja_d · **ops -** 24th August 2006, 11:22 PM

dhaval ji meine kab kaha ki aap sharab peete hai meine to un logon ke bare me bataya hai jo dard me sharab ko sathi samajhte hai.

aapki dost
pooja

Dhaval · 24th August 2006, 11:54 PM

POOJA JAB DARD NASIB HOTA HAI TO KABHI KABHI HAMSAFAR BHI SATH CHHOD JAYA KARTE HAI..BAS SHARAB UN LOGO KA SATH DE DETI HAI

san198422 · **dost -** 7th October 2006, 06:44 PM

Mujhe kya pata tha ki is tarah se log mujhe dga denge mere marne
ke bad meri lash ko wh lakar badi beddardi se jala denge
aur jab udegi khakh meri
ye us ko bhi hawa denge
aur agar ye lag gai tere daman se us ko bhi dholwa denge

bhigi palko ke sang muskurane ki, dil ko aadat si hogayi hai chot
khane ki,
kash anjaam hum pehle se jaan jate,
toh koshish bhi naa karte dil lagane ki.

Taraste they jo milne ko humse kabhi, aaj woh kyun mere saaye se katrate hain. Hum bhi wah
i hain, dil bhi wahi hai, na jane kyu log badal jate hai

Dhaval · 7th October 2006, 09:44 PM

Mujhe kya pata tha ki is tarah se log mujhe dga denge mere marne
ke bad meri lash ko wh lakar badi beddardi se jala denge
aur jab udegi khakh meri
ye us ko bhi hawa denge
aur agar ye lag gai tere daman se us ko bhi dholwa denge

bhigi palko ke sang muskurane ki, dil ko aadat si hogayi hai chot
khane ki,
kash anjaam hum pehle se jaan jate,
toh koshish bhi naa karte dil lagane ki.

Taraste they jo milne ko humse kabhi, aaj woh kyun mere saaye se katrate hain. Hum bhi wah
i hain, dil bhi wahi hai, na jane kyu log badal jate hai

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hi friends

jiye ap ki pot hai ya mujhe reply bheja hai aur ye jawab bhi achha hai pasand aaya mujhe

ye meri puarani shayri hai jab main yaha naya naya aaya tha tab ki hai aapnepadha achha laga mujhe
aise hi padhte rahiyega

aapka dost
dhaval

sahil_ludhiana · 22nd February 2008, 04:00 PM

Apke Khayal Bhut Ache Hai

brokenhearts · 23rd February 2008, 09:39 AM

Taraste they jo milne ko humse kabhi, aaj woh kyun mere saaye se katrate hain. Hum bhi wah
i hain, dil bhi wahi hai, na jane kyu log badal jate hai[/quote]
wow you wrote really nice.keepit up

mohammed zahed · 24th February 2008, 11:07 AM

Shaam Hote Hi Chiragon Ko Bujha Deta Hoon
Yeh Dil Hi Kaafi Hai Teri Yaad Main Jalne Ke Liye
Yeh Teri Bhi Aankhon Ka Qusur Hai
Main Tanha Gunahgar To Nahi
Tu Is Tarah Se Mere Dil Main Shamil Hai
Jahan Bhi Jaoon Lagta Hai Teri Mahfil Hai
Duniya bhar ki khushiyan hamare saath chali
Qadam mila ke jo hamare saath aap chali
Haath deewane ke de allah kuch aisi qalam,
Aasman par likh ke jaoon hai unhi se pyaar hai

taqdeer.786 · 25th February 2008, 04:38 PM

nice very nice

mohammed zahed · 26th February 2008, 02:06 PM

Chand par kaali ghata chaati to hogi,
Sitaron mein Chamak aati to hogi.
Tum lakh chupao Duniya se, magar akeley mein
tumhe apni shakal pe hansi aati to Hogi

Dhaval · 26th February 2008, 04:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sahil_ludhiana

Apke Khayal Bhut Ache Hai

.. aaj baRe dinoN baad apnii pooraanii koShiSh pe aayaa.. to aapka jawaab paRhaa.. ShuKriyaaH ees Khayaal ko pasaNd karne ke liYe...!

KhuSh raheN.. duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval

Dhaval · 26th February 2008, 04:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by brokenhearts

Taraste they jo milne ko humse kabhi, aaj woh kyun mere saaye se katrate hain. Hum bhi wah
i hain, dil bhi wahi hai, na jane kyu log badal jate hai

wow you wrote really nice.keepit up[/QUOTE]

dost aapka bahot bahot SHuKriyaaH...!

bas YuuNhi paRhte rahiye aage bhee..!

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval

Dhaval · 26th February 2008, 04:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mohammed zahed

Shaam Hote Hi Chiragon Ko Bujha Deta Hoon
Yeh Dil Hi Kaafi Hai Teri Yaad Main Jalne Ke Liye
Yeh Teri Bhi Aankhon Ka Qusur Hai
Main Tanha Gunahgar To Nahi
Tu Is Tarah Se Mere Dil Main Shamil Hai
Jahan Bhi Jaoon Lagta Hai Teri Mahfil Hai
Duniya bhar ki khushiyan hamare saath chali
Qadam mila ke jo hamare saath aap chali
Haath deewane ke de allah kuch aisi qalam,
Aasman par likh ke jaoon hai unhi se pyaar hai

ShuKriyaaH zahed BHaa'ii

Dhaval · 26th February 2008, 04:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by taqdeer.786

nice very nice

maiN aapka be-Had mamnuun huuN BHaa'ii..! bas YuuNhi paRhte rahiYeNgaa..!

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval

mohammed zahed · 27th February 2008, 08:38 AM

Tum Routh Jao Mujhse~*~
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~*~Tum Kuch Jawab Na Do~*~
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~*~Mujhse Hi Mil K Hansna~*~
~*~Mujhse Hi Mil K Rona~*~

~*~Mujhse Bicher K Jee Lo~*~
~*~Aisa Kabhi Na Kerna~*~

~*~Tum Chand Ban K Rehna~*~
~*~Main Dekhta Rahoon Ga~*~

~*~Kisi Roz Tum Na Niklo~*~
~*~Aisa Kabhi Na Kerna~*~

~*~Tum Chalay Jao Jab Bhi~*~
~*~Tu Dekhoon Tumhara Rasta~*~
~*~Tum Loat K Na Aao~*~
~*~Aisa Kabhi Na Karna

alone anum · 3rd March 2008, 07:43 PM

i am a new member dear friends
Tere Ishq Ko Lafjo Mein Likhu Bhi To Kaise
Logo K Lakho Savalaat Sunu Bhi To Kaise

Mohobbat Mein Mukammal Meri Jindagi U Hui
A Jindagi Bataa Ab Maut Se Daru Bhi To Kaise

Pyaar Ka Parinda Jo Par Pasaare Paas Aaya
Aasmaan K Sapne Sabhi Sirhane Tale Rakhu Bhi To Kaise

Tu Jo Har Sheh Mein Mujhe Dhoondhta Firta Hai
Ek Pal Bhi Najaro Se Door Rahu Bhi To Kaise

E Mere Naaj- Nakhro Per Naaj Kerne Vale
In Aankho Mein Dardila Dariya Dekhu Bhi To Kaise

Tu Jo Mere Ashk Hothho Pe Sajaaye Baithha Hai
Muskaan Tujhe Diye Bina Hansu Bhi To Kaise

Janti Houn Jaan Teri Mujhme Kahi Hai Jaanam
Tujhse Alag Jahaan Ye Sahu Bhi To Kaise

Kya Samjhenge Log Yahaa K Apni Prem Kahani Ko
Vafaao Ka Har Vo Vakaya Kahu Bhi To Kaise

mohammed zahed · 4th March 2008, 09:12 AM

salon bad jane kya samay hoga
ham dono me se kon kaha hoga
milna hua bhi to milenge kwabo me
jaise sukhe gulab mila karte hai kitabo me

jindagi se kabhi kuch chaha hi nhi
jise chaha use paya hi nhi
jise paya use kuch aise kho diya
jaise jindagi me kabhi koi aaya hi nhi

bahane banane se aapki baat karte he,
har pal aap ko mehsus kiya karte he,
itni baar to aap saas bhi nahi lete hoge…..
jitni baar ham aap ko yaad kiya karte he.

lamhe suhane saath ho na ho,
kal me aaj jaisi baat ho na ho,
aap ki dosti hamesha is dil me rahegi,
chahe puri umar mulaqat ho na ho.

Dhaval · 12th March 2008, 11:02 AM

Mere pyaare dostoN:

aap sab sey guzaariSh hay kii Gar aap apnii teHreer sabhee ke saath baaNTanaa chaahte haiN to apnii teHreer ke liYe aik alag sey Thread banaaYeN.. ShuKriyaaH..!

aapka

~ Dhaval