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Dard_E_Dil -
30th July 2008, 04:14 AM
Dekhna B hamain unhain Gawara na tha,
Bin un k hamra b ik pal guzara na tha,,,
Tamam Omer os Shaks ko poojtey rahey..
Jo Ik Pal ko b hamra na tha..........
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30th July 2008, 11:42 AM
samandar mein utarta hoon toh aankhay begh jati hai
teri aankhoo ko pharta hoon toh aankay beegh jati hai
tumhara naam likhnay ki ejazat chein gai jab se
loi bhi lafz likhta hoon toh aanaky beegh jati hai
mein haas k jhal lata hoon judai ki sabhi rasmay
galay jab us sy lagta hoon toh aankhy beegh jati hai
na janay hoogaye is qadar hassas mein kab se
kisi say baat karta hon toh aankhay beeghjati hai
woh sab ghuzay lamhay mujhy yaad aatay hai
tumharay khat jo pharta hoon toh aankahy beeghjati hai
mein sara din bohat masrooof rahata hoon magar juhi
qadam chokhat per rakhta hon toh aankahy beeghjati hai
teri yaddon ki khushboo khirkiyoon mein raks karti hai
tery gham mein sulagta hoon toh aankahy beeghjati hai
har ek muflis k matayhy per alam ki dastanay hai
koi cheera bhi pharta hoon toh aankahy beeghjati hai
tery kochay se ab mera taluk ab wajabi sa hai
magar jab bhi ghuzarta hoon toh aankahy beeghjati hai
hazaroo mosamoo ki hukmarani hai mery dil per
wasi mein jab bhi hasta hoon toh aanak beeghjati hai*
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30th July 2008, 10:48 PM
[QUOTE]irfan sahab u wrote suparbbbb,,,,,,,
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I m still Alone
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Yah Zidd -
31st July 2008, 08:17 PM
Yah Zidd, Yah Nakhray, Yah Aadain keb tak,,
Hamain Jala k Auron se Wafaain keb tak,,
Ab to ho gayi ho gi aap ki Dunya Roshan,
Ham iss Dil ko aur Jalain keb tak.......
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Aaj Phir Unhain -
31st July 2008, 08:22 PM
Aaj phir Unhain Bholne ka khud se Waada ker bethey,
Aye Khuda Anjane main Ham yah kaya ker bethay,,,,
Nahi jee sakain gey bin sochay unhain ik pal bhi..,,,,
Jante hoye b Kaisa yah ham Gunnah ker bethay.
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Aye Kaash -
2nd August 2008, 06:14 PM
Aye Kaash K Shayri Ham b ker paate,
Lafzon ka Khel Ham b khel kabhi pate,
Rooop ko os k Chandni bana deta,,,,
Zulf ko os ki kali Ghata kehta,,,,,,
Chaand ka Tukra to sab kehtey hain
Chaand ko os ka Tukra bana deta.
Yaad jo os ki kabhi mujhe Sata,ti
Khud ko ek Sher se Rule leta,,.
Paney ki Aarzu main Chahat ko oski,
Girr k Sajday main Khud ko rab se mila Leta.
Husn par os k Ik Shokh Ghazal kehta,
Kuch na kah ker bhi Sab kuch Suna deta,
Par Kaaash Ham yah Ker paaate....Kaaash......
To be Honest guys pehlay do shers kahin se perhay they maine, baqi sari ghazal khud meri apni banayi hui hai need ur precious comments.Thanks
Waqar Azeem
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Huii Sabse Paraayi
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4th August 2008, 02:38 PM
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Originally Posted by waqar451
Aye Kaash K Shayri Ham b ker paate,
Lafzon ka Khel Ham b khel kabhi pate,
Rooop ko os k Chandni bana deta,,,,
Zulf ko os ki kali Ghata kehta,,,,,,
Chaand ka Tukra to sab kehtey hain
Chaand ko os ka Tukra bana deta.
Yaad jo os ki kabhi mujhe Sata,ti
Khud ko ek Sher se Rule leta,,.
Paney ki Aarzu main Chahat ko oski,
Girr k Sajday main Khud ko rab se mila Leta.
Husn par os k Ik Shokh Ghazal kehta,
Kuch na kah ker bhi Sab kuch Suna deta,
Par Kaaash Ham yah Ker paaate....Kaaash......
To be Honest guys pehlay do shers kahin se perhay they maine, baqi sari ghazal khud meri apni banayi hui hai need ur precious comments.Thanks
Waqar Azeem
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bahat achha hai aapke nagme ....................
dil-e-barbaad se niklaa nahi ab tak koii
ek lute ghar ko DIYA karta hai dastak koii
aas jo chhut gayi phirse bandhataa kyoun hai
yehi duniyaa hai to aakhir aisi duniyaa kyoun hai ?????
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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4th August 2008, 06:47 PM
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Originally Posted by irfantak
samandar mein utarta hoon toh aankhay begh jati hai
teri aankhoo ko pharta hoon toh aankay beegh jati hai
tumhara naam likhnay ki ejazat chein gai jab se
loi bhi lafz likhta hoon toh aanaky beegh jati hai
mein haas k jhal lata hoon judai ki sabhi rasmay
galay jab us sy lagta hoon toh aankhy beegh jati hai
na janay hoogaye is qadar hassas mein kab se
kisi say baat karta hon toh aankhay beeghjati hai
woh sab ghuzay lamhay mujhy yaad aatay hai
tumharay khat jo pharta hoon toh aankahy beeghjati hai
mein sara din bohat masrooof rahata hoon magar juhi
qadam chokhat per rakhta hon toh aankahy beeghjati hai
teri yaddon ki khushboo khirkiyoon mein raks karti hai
tery gham mein sulagta hoon toh aankahy beeghjati hai
har ek muflis k matayhy per alam ki dastanay hai
koi cheera bhi pharta hoon toh aankahy beeghjati hai
tery kochay se ab mera taluk ab wajabi sa hai
magar jab bhi ghuzarta hoon toh aankahy beeghjati hai
hazaroo mosamoo ki hukmarani hai mery dil per
wasi mein jab bhi hasta hoon toh aanak beeghjati hai*
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bhai kitna accha likhte ho aap nayi thread bana kar post karen,aur aap ka likha hua kuch sahi samajh nahi aata i mean spelling,thoda spelling par dhyaan dege to accha rahega likhte rahe aur share karte rahen
ibadat bhi khuda hai,bagavat bhi khuda hai
khuda baagi kahi hai,kahi baagi khuda hai.
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Huii Sabse Paraayi
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5th August 2008, 01:50 PM
ALFAAZ NAHIN HAI KEHNE KO
TUMKO BATA RAHI HU
ALFAAZO SE DARD CHALAKTA HAI
TUMSE APNA DARD CHUPPA RAHI HU
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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5th August 2008, 05:45 PM
Toot ker
Zara dekho
Tum Ager bikhar
jao
Bebasi main Ghir jao
Dil se ik Sada
dena
Bus mujhay Bula laina
Main tumhain Sanbhalu ga!
Zindgi main chlnay ka,Rasta badalne ka
ik Hunar sikha donga
Tumko Hosla don ga!
Aur jab sanbhal jao
Roshni main dhal jao!
Mujh ko yun sila dena
Tum mujhe bhula dena!!
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5th August 2008, 05:53 PM
na reh payenge tumse door itna.....
ki tumhari khamoshi ko sun na sake........
dhadkne chalti rahe....
aur saans hum le na sake.......
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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5th August 2008, 05:57 PM
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na reh payenge tumse door itna.....
ki tumhari khamoshi ko sun na sake........
dhadkne chalti rahe....
aur saans hum le na sake.......
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Ajeeb Lagti Hai Sham Kabhi Kabhi,
Zindagi Lagti Hai Bayjaan Kabhi Kabhi.
Samajh Aaye To Humay Bhi Batana,
K Kyun Karti Hain Yadain Pareshan Kabhi Kabhi.
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5th August 2008, 06:23 PM
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Originally Posted by waqar451
Ajeeb Lagti Hai Sham Kabhi Kabhi,
Zindagi Lagti Hai Bayjaan Kabhi Kabhi.
Samajh Aaye To Humay Bhi Batana,
K Kyun Karti Hain Yadain Pareshan Kabhi Kabhi.
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Jab jab teri yaado ne mujhe hai sataya
Meri raato ko nasreen ki tarah mehkaya
Kaano main gungunane lagi fiza geet tere
Mere haatho ki chudiya khankaa gaya
Kehta man ki uud ke ajaoo teri baho main
Tab saanso ne meri aur shor hai machaya
Kitne khwab mere saje hai saajan tujhse
Kya jaano tum yaado ne teri hai kitna sataya
Aab to kaate nahi kaati ye chandni raate
Na tarsao hume itna ki bheeg jaaye akhiya NM
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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5th August 2008, 06:38 PM
Mujrim bhi tha Mohsin bhi mera lagta tha,
Dast-e-Qatil bhi mjhy
Dast-e-Hina lgta tha,
Arey daikhny waly to usy daikhty reh jaty thy,
Haan wo Shaks Mohabbat ka Khuda lgta tha,
Kanton bhari Shakh nazar ata tha kabi,
Phol lgta tha kabi
Baad-e-Saba lgta tha,
Ab logon sy pochta phirta hai mere Ghar ka pata,
Main jisy sare Zamany sy bura lgta tha,
Us ki batein thin Rivayat sy hat kar MOHSIN,
Sab main rehta tha magar sub sy Juda lgta tha.
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13th August 2008, 01:34 AM
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Mujrim bhi tha Mohsin bhi mera lagta tha,
Dast-e-Qatil bhi mjhy
Dast-e-Hina lgta tha,
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Bahut Khuub! Achchaa lagaa.
aaKhirii hichaki tere zaanoN pe aaye
maut bhi maiN shaayraana chaahtaa huuN
-Qateel Shifai
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27th August 2008, 03:56 PM
Mere Liye To Harf_e_Dua ho agya Wo Shaks,
Sare Dukhon ki jaise Dawa ho gaya wo Shaks.
Main Aasman pey tha to Zameen Ki kashish tha wo Shaks,
Utra Zameen per to Hawa ho gaya wo Shaks....
Sochoon bhi Ab Osay Takhiyal k Par jalain,
Mujh say Juda hoya to Khuda Ho gaya Wo Shaks.
Main os k Hath dekh raha tha k Dafatan,
Simat Simat k Rang_e-Hina ho gaya wo Shaks.
Phirta hai lay k Aankh k Kashol Dar Badar,
Dil ka Bharm Luta to Gada ho gaya wo shaks,
Parta tha main Namaz samjh k osey,
Phir youn hua k Mujh say Qaza ho gaya wo Shaks.
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