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Love aaj arse baad phir kalam uthaaii hai - 30th November 2009, 07:34 PM

aaj arse baad phir kalam uthaaii hai
aisa to nahi ki tu yaad nahi aaii' hai

tere milnee se ho gayi hai jaise jannat haasil
teri aankhon mein doobkar zindagi gavaaii' hai

teri zulfon ko hatakar jagaana woh mera
khuda ne isliyee shayad subhaa banaaii' hai

teri hasrat bhari nigaahen aur naazuk se yeh haath
chukhar jinko mujhko mili khudaaii' hai

khamoosh honthon bhari ghup-chup si baatein teri
kisi kaafir ne jaise bandaagi nibhaaii' hai

yeh janam to aye khudaaya hai mukammal mera
teri daulat se hoti kaha rusvaaii' hai

tamanna hai har janam ki mere seene mein
tu hai haazil aur 'mast' tera shaedaii hai ...



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30th November 2009, 11:32 PM

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aaj arse baad phir kalam uthaaii hai
aisa to nahi ki tu yaad nahi aaii' hai

tere milnee se ho gayi hai jaise jannat haasil
teri aankhon mein doobkar zindagi gavaaii' hai

teri zulfon ko hatakar jagaana woh mera
khuda ne isliyee shayad subhaa banaaii' hai

teri hasrat bhari nigaahen aur naazuk se yeh haath
chukhar jinko mujhko mili khudaaii' hai

khamoosh honthon bhari ghup-chup si baatein teri
kisi kaafir ne jaise bandaagi nibhaaii' hai

yeh janam to aye khudaaya hai mukammal mera
teri daulat se hoti kaha rusvaaii' hai

tamanna hai har janam ki mere seene mein
tu hai haazil aur 'mast' tera shaedaii hai ...

Maasha allah aapki ghazal dekh ke aaj
meri to jaan mai jaan laut aayi hai ...

Bohat hi accha likha hai.... har ek sher apni kahaani keh raha hai ... mujhe to ishq behta hua nahi barasta hua bhi nazar aaya ... gurudev aapne kamaal kar diya hai... bohat hi khoob.. meri aukaat nhai tab bhi daad dounga .. adhni see hi sahi...

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1st December 2009, 10:24 AM

Sabhi ashaar ache lage mujhe.....bahut umdaa likha hai...

aapka yeh maasoom sa sher mujhe....naya aur acha laga...

teri zulfon ko hatakar jagaana woh mera
khuda ne isliyee shayad subhaa banaaii' hai

dil se daad....hazir hai....

likhte rahiye....
khush rahiye...
duaaon ke saath.




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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1st December 2009, 06:48 PM

Kunaal bahut aacha laga aaj yeh rishtaa fir taaza hua hai...shukriya..humesha ki tarah hum wapas ek bandhan mein hai koshish karungaa ki hum yunhi ek dusree ki likhawat padhte rahe....

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Naresh Sahab...

Pehli baar aapse baat ho rahi hai..kaafi waqt baad lautaa hoon to kaafi kuch naya hai mere liye...aapke saath aur daad ka behad shukriyaa umeed hai aage bhi yunhi yeh rishtaa badeGaa...



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aaj arse baad phir kalam uthaaii hai
aisa to nahi ki tu yaad nahi aaii' hai

tere milnee se ho gayi hai jaise jannat haasil
teri aankhon mein doobkar zindagi gavaaii' hai

teri zulfon ko hatakar jagaana woh mera
khuda ne isliyee shayad subhaa banaaii' hai

teri hasrat bhari nigaahen aur naazuk se yeh haath
chukhar jinko mujhko mili khudaaii' hai

khamoosh honthon bhari ghup-chup si baatein teri
kisi kaafir ne jaise bandaagi nibhaaii' hai

yeh janam to aye khudaaya hai mukammal mera
teri daulat se hoti kaha rusvaaii' hai

tamanna hai har janam ki mere seene mein
tu hai haazil aur 'mast' tera shaedaii hai ...


wahhhhh.....bahut khoob...andaaz-e-bayaan bahut khoob raha...har ek sher pe daad hazir hai...keep it up...


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Shukriya ashu ji...

thanks for taking the time out to read & admire ... keep in touch



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lamha ji...

aapki daad sar aankhon par...yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa...



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tere milnee se ho gayi hai jaise jannat haasil
teri aankhon mein doobkar zindagi gavaaii' hai

teri zulfon ko hatakar jagaana woh mera
khuda ne isliyee shayad subhaa banaaii' hai

teri hasrat bhari nigaahen aur naazuk se yeh haath
chukhar jinko mujhko mili khudaaii' hai

khamoosh honthon bhari ghup-chup si baatein teri
kisi kaafir ne jaise bandaagi nibhaaii' hai

yeh janam to aye khudaaya hai mukammal mera
teri daulat se hoti kaha rusvaaii' hai

tamanna hai har janam ki mere seene mein
tu hai haazil aur 'mast' tera shaedaii hai ...


hmmmm...............MAST BHAI, kya mast mast likha hai aapne, dil kush ho gaya padkar
ishq ka kumaar peak par hai aur dua hai aise hi rahe, sabse phele to hume yeh bahut accha laga ki aap bazm meiN aaye aur us se bhi jayada accha yeh laga ki pyar se bharpoor ahsaas lekar aaye...bhagwaaN yeh khumaari hamesha rakhe aap par, aap har lamha yoon hi pyar bhare geet gungunate raheN...ameeN

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Sunita di shukriya..mujhe bhi behad aacha lag raha hai lautkar...ek apnepan ka ehsaas hai..aap logon ka saath hai bas yeh rishtaa yeh saath yunhi badhtaa rahe yahi dua hai

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wallaaah, janaab mastji.......
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Hi Anuji, what an amazing piece of work....har ek sher itna rumaani hai bas dil ko choo gaya.....am your fan now
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Daad ka behad shukriyaa...bas dil ke ashaar bayaaN kar paaya hooN..aapki zarra nawazi barqraar rahe iski puri koshish karunGaa..

Yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa..

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wallaaah, janaab mastji.......
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dilse daad.... Adil
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