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કેમ કહુ તારી પ્રીત મા થયા મારા શુ હાલ છે?? - 1st June 2009, 02:53 PM
દોસ્તો,

એક નવી ગઝલ લખવાની કોશીશ કરી છે. આપના પ્રતિભાવ નો મને ઇંતઝાર રહેશે.

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કેમ કહુ તારી પ્રીત મા થયા મારા શુ હાલ છે??
મારા દિલો- દિમાગ પર છાયા તારા જ ખયાલ છે.

તારી યાદોના સહારે વીતાવી, વિરહની ઘણી ઘડીઓ
તારા વગરનુ જીવન હવે, મને લાગે એક સવાલ છે

તારા–મારા પ્રેમ નુ બંધન હતુ અતીયે ગહેરુ તો
આ સંસાર, આ ધર્મ આજે બન્યા કેમ દીવાલ છે?

દર્દ મને થતુ'તુ જ્યારે, વેદના તુ પણ અનુભવતી
સર્જનહારે સર્જિ એ “ પ્રેમ" કરી જાણે કમાલ છે

“ગઝલ” ના રૂપે કહી દીધી મૈ બંધ હોઠ ની વાતો
વધુ શુ કહુ હવે, કેમ આ જીંદગી બેહાલ છે !!!

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wah didi, shu dil ni vaat kahi che??? i want to say Ghazal hoi to aavi hoi nahi to naa hoi............
really good written

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6th June 2009, 12:13 PM
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wah didi, shu dil ni vaat kahi che??? i want to say Ghazal hoi to aavi hoi nahi to naa hoi............
really good written
Glad to know that u liked this..

Thanks a lot for appriciation......

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19th August 2009, 12:06 PM
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દોસ્તો,

એક નવી ગઝલ લખવાની કોશીશ કરી છે. આપના પ્રતિભાવ નો મને ઇંતઝાર રહેશે.

આપની દોસ્ત

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કેમ કહુ તારી પ્રીત મા થયા મારા શુ હાલ છે??
મારા દિલો- દિમાગ પર છાયા તારા જ ખયાલ છે.

તારી યાદોના સહારે વીતાવી, વિરહની ઘણી ઘડીઓ
તારા વગરનુ જીવન હવે, મને લાગે એક સવાલ છે

તારા–મારા પ્રેમ નુ બંધન હતુ અતીયે ગહેરુ તો
આ સંસાર, આ ધર્મ આજે બન્યા કેમ દીવાલ છે?

દર્દ મને થતુ'તુ જ્યારે, વેદના તુ પણ અનુભવતી
સર્જનહારે સર્જિ એ “ પ્રેમ" કરી જાણે કમાલ છે

“ગઝલ” ના રૂપે કહી દીધી મૈ બંધ હોઠ ની વાતો
વધુ શુ કહુ હવે, કેમ આ જીંદગી બેહાલ છે !!!


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Smile ek farz - 17th September 2009, 07:58 AM
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didi shu waat che ? maja aavi gai
નિહાર,

મારી આ કોશિશ તને ગમી, એ જાણી ખુબ આનંદ થયો.. સાથ આપવા બદલ આભાર.

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Gujrati tou mujhe bilkul nahi aati...per Purvi ji aapne likha hai tou zarur accha hi hoga....btw aap ghayab kahaaN hai aajkal?...plz come back, we r all missing u......................



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namaste

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bare dinoN baad deKhaa KhuShii hu'ii!

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