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Aa!tere Ashkon Ko ... - 29th July 2007, 11:57 PM
AA!TERE ASHKON KO APNI AANKHON MAI UTAARDUN,
TERI ZINDAGI KO APNI KHUSHIYON SE SAWAANRDUN,

NA RAHE KOI GILA TUJHE MUJH SE KABHIE,
TERI CHAHAT KA TUJHE AISA UPHAARDUN,

MILE TERE HISSE KI BHI BEQARAARI MUJHE,
KHOKAR MAI APNA SUKOON TUJHKO QARAARDUN,

TERI HAR SOCH KA AGHAAZ-O-ANJAAM RAHUN MAI,
BHULADE TU ZAMAANA,TUJHE MAI ITNA PYAARDUN!!!

apni aara se zaroor navaaziyega,
aapki,
akelijaan...

yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
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bhut khub - 30th July 2007, 01:02 PM
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AA!TERE ASHKON KO APNI AANKHON MAI UTAARDUN,
TERI ZINDAGI KO APNI KHUSHIYON SE SAWAANRDUN,

NA RAHE KOI GILA TUJHE MUJH SE KABHIE,
TERI CHAHAT KA TUJHE AISA UPHAARDUN,

MILE TERE HISSE KI BHI BEQARAARI MUJHE,
KHOKAR MAI APNA SUKOON TUJHKO QARAARDUN,

TERI HAR SOCH KA AGHAAZ-O-ANJAAM RAHUN MAI,
BHULADE TU ZAMAANA,TUJHE MAI ITNA PYAARDUN!!!

apni aara se zaroor navaaziyega,
aapki,
akelijaan...

sara ji ko raj ka adaab......aap sachi kamaal ka likhti ho.....aap aati to bhut der baad ho lakin jab bhi aati ho apne saath bhut pyare or gehre ehsaason ka zikar laati ho.....yun hi likhti rahiyega.......raj.......

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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31st July 2007, 12:36 PM
bahut khub sara ji

bahut hi pyaare alfaaz ko pesh kiya hai aapne rachan ke zariyeee

bahut achchha laga padhte padhte hamein

yuhi likhte rahiyega
aapka dost
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AA!TERE ASHKON KO APNI AANKHON MAI UTAARDUN,
TERI ZINDAGI KO APNI KHUSHIYON SE SAWAANRDUN,

NA RAHE KOI GILA TUJHE MUJH SE KABHIE,
TERI CHAHAT KA TUJHE AISA UPHAARDUN,

MILE TERE HISSE KI BHI BEQARAARI MUJHE,
KHOKAR MAI APNA SUKOON TUJHKO QARAARDUN,

TERI HAR SOCH KA AGHAAZ-O-ANJAAM RAHUN MAI,
BHULADE TU ZAMAANA,TUJHE MAI ITNA PYAARDUN!!!

apni aara se zaroor navaaziyega,
aapki,
akelijaan...

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Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
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31st July 2007, 03:29 PM
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bahut khub sara ji

bahut hi pyaare alfaaz ko pesh kiya hai aapne rachan ke zariyeee

bahut achchha laga padhte padhte hamein

yuhi likhte rahiyega
aapka dost
Merul

Namaste Akelijaan ji,
Aap ki iss rachna parh kar mujhe qaraar zarur mila,
yu hi likhte rahiye,

Reshma,

Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi,
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31st July 2007, 11:10 PM
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AA!TERE ASHKON KO APNI AANKHON MAI UTAARDUN,
TERI ZINDAGI KO APNI KHUSHIYON SE SAWAANRDUN,

NA RAHE KOI GILA TUJHE MUJH SE KABHIE,
TERI CHAHAT KA TUJHE AISA UPHAARDUN,

MILE TERE HISSE KI BHI BEQARAARI MUJHE,
KHOKAR MAI APNA SUKOON TUJHKO QARAARDUN,

TERI HAR SOCH KA AGHAAZ-O-ANJAAM RAHUN MAI,
BHULADE TU ZAMAANA,TUJHE MAI ITNA PYAARDUN!!!

apni aara se zaroor navaaziyega,
aapki,
akelijaan...

waah wah bohat bohat khubsurat khayalat ko shayri kishakal main utara aapne aur itna gehra pyar dikh raha hai yunhi likhti rahiye ga khush rahiye

Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
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1st August 2007, 10:12 PM
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aapko baRe dino baad paRhaa... KhuShii hu'ii bazm meiN aapkii teHreer deKh ke... aapne baRii ahcchhii kosiSh peSh kii hay...

ye Sher Bahot Khuub rahaa...
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YuuN hii bazm meiN aate raheN aur apniii kosiShoN ke zar'iiye ess bazm ko sajaate rahiYe...

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sara ji ko raj ka adaab......aap sachi kamaal ka likhti ho.....aap aati to bhut der baad ho lakin jab bhi aati ho apne saath bhut pyare or gehre ehsaason ka zikar laati ho.....yun hi likhti rahiyega.......raj.......
adaab raj ji,kaise hain aap?
bahut bahut shukriya meri post per ane ka.kaisa bhi likha hai raj ji per aap ke kalaamon se to kamtar hi hia..aapke andaaz-e-bayan ka koi jawaab nahi..
umed karti hun is nacheez ko aapka saath hamesha milta rahga

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bahut khub sara ji

bahut hi pyaare alfaaz ko pesh kiya hai aapne rachan ke zariyeee

bahut achchha laga padhte padhte hamein

yuhi likhte rahiyega
aapka dost
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adaab merul ji..
shukriya aapne mere liye waqt nikala mujhe saraha..yunhin saath dete rahiyega.

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Namaste Akelijaan ji,
Aap ki iss rachna parh kar mujhe qaraar zarur mila,
yu hi likhte rahiye,

Reshma,
bahut bahut shukriya reshma ji meri post per aap aaye mujhe bahut khushi hui.bahut acha laga jankar ke aapko yeh rachna itni pasand aayi..yunhin saath deti rahiyega..

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Smile frnd 4 ever - 30th August 2007, 01:40 PM
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AA!TERE ASHKON KO APNI AANKHON MAI UTAARDUN,
TERI ZINDAGI KO APNI KHUSHIYON SE SAWAANRDUN,

NA RAHE KOI GILA TUJHE MUJH SE KABHIE,
TERI CHAHAT KA TUJHE AISA UPHAARDUN,

MILE TERE HISSE KI BHI BEQARAARI MUJHE,
KHOKAR MAI APNA SUKOON TUJHKO QARAARDUN,

TERI HAR SOCH KA AGHAAZ-O-ANJAAM RAHUN MAI,
BHULADE TU ZAMAANA,TUJHE MAI ITNA PYAARDUN!!!

apni aara se zaroor navaaziyega,
aapki,
akelijaan...

Aadab sara ji,
kaise hai aap?

wah wah .
MASHA ALLAH,kya baat hai.
Aapki is nazam ko padhkar,dil khush hogaya.

ALLAH APKO AUR TARAKKI DE,AAMIN
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apna khayal rakhiye,
KHUSH RAHIYE,
ALLAH HAFIZ

Apki dost
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thnks so much koi to ho ji,apko yahan dekh bahut khushi hui.yunhin saath deti rahiyega

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thanks so much dhaval ji for giving me time.bahut khushi hui jaankar aapko mera likha pasand aaya.yunhin saath dete rhaioyega

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aapko pehli baarapni post per paya hai chota sa dil ji..bahut khushi hui aapko yahan dekh..yunhin saath dete rahiyega

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hi Sara
Main aaj bahut dino baad forum par aaya hoon.Aur aate hi itni pyaari likhawat dekh kar dil khush ho gaya.Aise hi likhte rahiye

Gam ki dukaan kholkar baitha hua hai "Saifee"
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adaab kashiif ji,
bahut khushi hui aapko yahan dekh.aapko mera likha pasand aaya yeh khush naseebi meri,yunhin saath dete rahiyega

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Aadab sara ji,
kaise hai aap?

wah wah .
MASHA ALLAH,kya baat hai.
Aapki is nazam ko padhkar,dil khush hogaya.

ALLAH APKO AUR TARAKKI DE,AAMIN
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apna khayal rakhiye,
KHUSH RAHIYE,
ALLAH HAFIZ

Apki dost
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aapko apni posts per dekh bahut khushi hoti hia,aapko akser paaya hai apni posts per maine.bas is nacheez ka sath yunhin deti rahiyega.
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hi Sara
Main aaj bahut dino baad forum par aaya hoon.Aur aate hi itni pyaari likhawat dekh kar dil khush ho gaya.Aise hi likhte rahiye

hello zainab ji,
aaj pehli baar paaya hai aapko apni post per,behad khushi hui jaanker ke aapko mera likha bahut pasand aaya,umeed karti hun aap meri baaki posts per bhi zaror aayengi.yunhin saath deti rahiyega,khush rahen

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AA!TERE ASHKON KO APNI AANKHON MAI UTAARDUN,
TERI ZINDAGI KO APNI KHUSHIYON SE SAWAANRDUN,

NA RAHE KOI GILA TUJHE MUJH SE KABHIE,
TERI CHAHAT KA TUJHE AISA UPHAARDUN,

MILE TERE HISSE KI BHI BEQARAARI MUJHE,
KHOKAR MAI APNA SUKOON TUJHKO QARAARDUN,

TERI HAR SOCH KA AGHAAZ-O-ANJAAM RAHUN MAI,
BHULADE TU ZAMAANA,TUJHE MAI ITNA PYAARDUN!!!

apni aara se zaroor navaaziyega,
aapki,
akelijaan...

Pyari Sara!!!

Tumhe bahut dino baad aaj padha!!! Bahut hi khoobsoorti se tumne apne ehsaason ko pesh kiya hai... har baar ki tarah!!!!

Yunhi hasti raho, muskuraati raho!

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Pyari Sara!!!

Tumhe bahut dino baad aaj padha!!! Bahut hi khoobsoorti se tumne apne ehsaason ko pesh kiya hai... har baar ki tarah!!!!

Yunhi hasti raho, muskuraati raho!

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hello priya,
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AA!TERE ASHKON KO APNI AANKHON MAI UTAARDUN,
TERI ZINDAGI KO APNI KHUSHIYON SE SAWAANRDUN,

NA RAHE KOI GILA TUJHE MUJH SE KABHIE,
TERI CHAHAT KA TUJHE AISA UPHAARDUN,

MILE TERE HISSE KI BHI BEQARAARI MUJHE,
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Thnx For Yr Appreciation Mirza Ji..
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AA!TERE ASHKON KO APNI AANKHON MAI UTAARDUN,
TERI ZINDAGI KO APNI KHUSHIYON SE SAWAANRDUN,

NA RAHE KOI GILA TUJHE MUJH SE KABHIE,
TERI CHAHAT KA TUJHE AISA UPHAARDUN,

MILE TERE HISSE KI BHI BEQARAARI MUJHE,
KHOKAR MAI APNA SUKOON TUJHKO QARAARDUN,

TERI HAR SOCH KA AGHAAZ-O-ANJAAM RAHUN MAI,
BHULADE TU ZAMAANA,TUJHE MAI ITNA PYAARDUN!!!

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AA!TERE ASHKON KO APNI AANKHON MAI UTAARDUN,
TERI ZINDAGI KO APNI KHUSHIYON SE SAWAANRDUN,

NA RAHE KOI GILA TUJHE MUJH SE KABHIE,
TERI CHAHAT KA TUJHE AISA UPHAARDUN,

MILE TERE HISSE KI BHI BEQARAARI MUJHE,
KHOKAR MAI APNA SUKOON TUJHKO QARAARDUN,

TERI HAR SOCH KA AGHAAZ-O-ANJAAM RAHUN MAI,
BHULADE TU ZAMAANA,TUJHE MAI ITNA PYAARDUN!!!

apni aara se zaroor navaaziyega,
aapki,
akelijaan...

Appka Kalam acha laga ...

keep it up ...

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keep it up ...

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