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Dhaval Ji Ka Interview - 1st February 2009, 11:17 AM

Doston chaliye interviews ka daur aagay badhate hain...is mahine hum interview karenge is site ke ek bahut acche shayer aur dost se, waise to hum inke baare me zyada nahi jaante, chaliye inke baare me inki hi zubaani sunenge..

Dhaval ji,aayiye aapka yahan swaagat hai..

sawalon ka daur shuru karte hain:

1..Sabse pehle to aap apne baare me kuch bataiye,aapki family, friends, education,interests,etc

2.Shayri ka shauq aapko kabse hai...??

3.Padhai aur shayri ka alawa aap aur kya karte hain..??

Filhaal itna hi,kuch aur sawalon ke saath hum dubaara hazir honge ..

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Thumbs up Best of luck - 1st February 2009, 11:19 PM

hmmmmm...............ab mera chottu fas gaya es kathgare meiN.......chottu main tujse kya poochuN sab jaanti hoon tere bare meiN, chalo phir bhi sochti hoon ki kya poochna hai.....

mujhe yakeen hai tum sabke sawaaloN ke jawaab bahut acchey se dogey.

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1st February 2009, 11:25 PM

wah ji wah..dhavalll u got famus yaar.mera no. kab aayega sdc peeeeee....waiting yaar.....dono saath me aaye thhe sdc pe to intro bhi saath me hi hona chaahiye...ahhaha...i m just joking...very happy to see u like a star in the sky(sdc)...make roshan all the world(sdc)

So r u ready to ans. me:..think think....

1. ''Khud se haaraa hua''...ye simbol apne khud ko kyu diya..matlab apne avatar pe kyu ye sign up kiya hai?

2. Zindagi me apne koi galti ki hai...?...jiska afsos ho..ya bura lagta ho ke vo kyu kiya ?

3. Kabhi apko kisine hurt kiya hai bole to chhan se jo toote koi sapna...aisa hua hai ?

4. Zindagi ka sabse bura din ?

5. Zindai ka sabse achha din ?

6. Udaipur me hostel se kitni baar bung mara ?

7. Shaitaani kaha se sikhi ?

8. Apne paatthako ko koi mashvaraa dena chaahenge logo ko tang karne ka ya maamu banane ka ?

Abhi itna hi...

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2nd February 2009, 11:32 AM

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Doston chaliye interviews ka daur aagay badhate hain...is mahine hum interview karenge is site ke ek bahut acche shayer aur dost se, waise to hum inke baare me zyada nahi jaante, chaliye inke baare me inki hi zubaani sunenge..
sab se pehle to Zainy jee aur Shayri Parivaar ke sabhee sadasyoN ko meraa namaskaaR aur aadaab..! Hmm ... Zainy jee ne interview kaa silsilaa aage baRhaayaa aur mujhe kaThGhare meiN faNSaayaa!!

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Dhaval ji,aayiye aapka yahan swaagat hai..
ShuKriyaaH Zainy jee!!

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sawalon ka daur shuru karte hain:
zaruur zaruur!!

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1..Sabse pehle to aap apne baare me kuch bataiye,aapki family, friends, education,interests,etc
maiN apne baare meiN itanaa hi kahuuNgaa ki maiN mazaakiyaa iNsaaN huuN..! Shaayad hi kabhee kabaar serious hotaa huuN... haMeShaa se ziNdgee ko biNdaas jeene meN maaNtaa huuN..ziNdagee baRii anmol haii aur guzraa huaa waQt kabhee waapis aataa naheeN.. yeh baat sabhee dost baRe achchhe se jaante haiN..to ise Khul ke kyuuN nah jeeyaa jaaye!!

>> Family meiN mere pitaa ji haii .. merii maa.N aur merii chhoTi behan aur haaN maiN bhee..

>> merii Frineds list bahot baDii haiii.. kyuuN kii mujhse juRne waale har iNsaan ko maiN apnaa dost hi samjhtaa huuN.. Shaa'iiree parivaar meiN aake mujhe bahot hi achhe riShte aur dost mile haiN.. jiNhe maiN kabhee bhee bhulaa naheeN paauNgaa..!

>> education: maiNe Diploma in Mechanical engg.kiyaa hai uske baad Diploma in computer integrated manufacturing kiyaa.. fir computer aided Design Related softwares seeKheN... aur abhee maiN Bachelor of Technology (B.Tech.) Mechanical Engg. kar rahaa huuN!! deKhaa kauN kehtaa hai ki maiN paDhaakuu naheeN... maiN bahot hi paDhaakuu huuN... Hahaha

>> interests: dostoN ke saath Ghumnaa firnaa pasaNd haii... nayi nayi jaGah pe jaanaa..


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2.Shayri ka shauq aapko kabse hai...??
Shaa'iiree kaa Shauq jab se maiN ees Parivaar se juRaa tabhee se maiN Shaa'iiree kar rahaa huuN... Shaa'iiree Pairvaar ke kuch sadasya jaaNte haiN kii maiN yahaaN kaise aayaa.. dar-aSal maiN ees site par SMS DhooNDhne aayaa thaa... maiN jab ees site par aayaa to mujhe lagaa thaa ki arre bhaa'ii yahaaN to sms kaa Khazaanaa haii.!! mujhe yeh naheeN pataa thaa ki yahaaN log Khud apne dil ke ehsaas lafzoN ke Zar'iiYe bayaaN karte haiN.. kyuuNki uss waQt mujhe Shaa'iiree ke bare meN zaraa saa bhee ilm naheeN thaa.. ki Shaa'iiree hotee kyaa haii!!... fir mujhe lagaa maiN bhee yahaaN SMS post kar ke deKhtaa huuN to maiNe apne cell ke iNbox meiN se kuch msgs yahaaN post kiye the..[ aap deKh sakte haiN mere pooraane Threads!! haha.] fir mere thread par replies aane Shuru huye.. aur Shaa'iiree Parivaar ke ek sadasya ne mujhse kahaa ki tum Khud kyuuN naheeN liKhate.. Khud try kar ke deKho... to maiNe uss din pehli koShiSh kii thee apne aap kuch liKhane kii.. aur wo sadasya jiNhone meraa housilaah baRhaayaa thaa wo ko'ii aur naheeN "Sunita virender singh" the.. jiNhe aap sab baRe achchhe se jaante hain..! bas usii din se maiN aaj tak liKhataa aa rahaa huuN!! aayaa thaa SMS DhooNDhne aur ab Khud liKh rahaa huuN..

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3.Padhai aur shayri ka alawa aap aur kya karte hain..??
paRhaa'ii Hmm.. ab iske baare meN ab maiN yahaaN kuch liKhuNgaa to yahaaN pe kuch dost huNgaamaa KhaRaa kar deNgee.. paRhaa'ii aur Shaa'iiree ke alaawaa maiiN Painting kartaa huuNjo meraa bachpan se Shauq haii.. aur Bike racing jo ab bahot waQt se baNDh kar dii haii kuch dostoN ke kehne par..!!
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Filhaal itna hi,kuch aur sawalon ke saath hum dubaara hazir honge ..
arre filhaal itnaa hi!!! matlab kuch baaqee hai ab bhee..

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bahot bahot SHuKriyaaH Zainy jee

ummid kartaa huuN maiNe aapke sabhee sawaaloN ke sahi sahi jawaab diye hoNge... KhuShii hu'ii!!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal rakheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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hmmmmm...............ab mera chottu fas gaya es kathgare meiN.......chottu main tujse kya poochuN sab jaanti hoon tere bare meiN, chalo phir bhi sochti hoon ki kya poochna hai.....

mujhe yakeen hai tum sabke sawaaloN ke jawaab bahut acchey se dogey.

All d best
ashirwaad aur bahut sare pyar ke saath
tumhari sister
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Pranaam!!

mujhe jab Zainy jee ne interview ke baare meN bataayaa thaa ... tou Khayaal aaya thaa ki yeh interview aapke liye baRaa muShkil bharaa hoNgaa... kyuuNki maiN aapke liye aik Khuli hu'ii kitaab huuN... jisske har panne aapko maalUm haii.. tou aapke liye sawaal DhooNDhnaa hii bahot muShkil kaam haii .. par fir bhee aap koShiSh zaruur keejiYeNgaa ... mujhe pataa hai aap ko'ii nah ko'ii sawaal DhooNDh hi leNge

Shaa'iiree ke safar meN mere Shuruaat ke dinoN meN aapne jo saath diyaa thaa aur wo sath aaj tak mil rahaa hai.. aik aise iNsaan ko aapne Shaa'iiree seeKhaa'ii jissko Shaa'iiree kaa zaraa saa bhee ilm naheeN thaa... jaise ek chhoTaa bachchaa apni maa.N ki uNgli pakaD kar chalnaa seeKhtaa haii.. waise hi aapne mujhe uss waQt Shaa'iiree ke safar meiN chalnaa seeKhaayaa haii.. warnaah maiN kuch SMS DhooNDh ke chalaa hi jaataa!! aur mujhe yeh kabhee bhee pataa naheeN chal paataa ki mere aNdar ik Shaayar bhee chhipaa haii!! maiN eeske liye ShuKriyaaH naheeN kahuuNgaa.. kyuuNki aapne jo diyaa hai wo mere liye bahot hi anmol haii..! bas aaKhir meN itanaa hi kahuuNgaa ki ziNdagee aur Shaa'iiree ke safar meiN chaahe maiN kitnaa bhee aage baRh jaauN.. par maiN aapke liye wo hi chhoTaa sa bachchaa baNke rehnaa chaahtaa huuN haMeShaa ke liye !! jissne aapke sahaare bahot kuch seeKhaa haii.. aur sadaa seeKhtaa raheNgaa!!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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3rd February 2009, 04:18 PM

hummmmm

to miyaa.n dhaval ji aap bhii fans hi gaye katghare main.
chaliye accha hai. kam se kam ab aapke un anchuye pahuluon se bhii hume rubaroo hone ka mauka milega jinke bare main hum kuch nahi jante.
baise to aapke bare me main bahut kuch janta hoon . per fir bhii esa bahut kuch hai jise janana banki hai.....

(1 ) is baare main aapka kya kahna hai ki shayri aur dard ka bada gahra nata hai... kya dard ke bina shayri main jaan nahi aa pati.

(2) gazal ke lihaz hi ise meter main hona kahan tak jaroorii hai....

(3) aap jo bhii gazal likhte hain wo kya aapki dil ki aawaz ya jindgii ke kareeb bhii hoti hai ya sirf sahyri ke lihaz se hi usme dard daalne ki koshish karte hain....


Bus itna hii

aapka dost

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Dear Dhawal Ji,

Log kehte hai ki Shayri yaa koi bhi art kisi inspiration se shuru hoti hai--

Q.1. Kyaa aap isse sahmat hai ?
Q.2. If yes, Aapki inspiration kyaa hai

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wah ji wah..dhavalll u got famus yaar.mera no. kab aayega sdc peeeeee....waiting yaar.....dono saath me aaye thhe sdc pe to intro bhi saath me hi hona chaahiye...ahhaha...i m just joking...very happy to see u like a star in the sky(sdc)...make roshan all the world(sdc)
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kaisii ho?

haaN mujhe achchhe se maalUm haii Parivaar meiN hum donoN saath meN aayeN the... mere liye baRe hi garv ki baat haii kii sabhee dostoN ne mujhe aur merii koShiShoN ko apne dil meN jaGah dee... mere liye yahee sab se baRii baat hay!!

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So r u ready to ans. me:..think think....
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2. Zindagi me apne koi galti ki hai...?...jiska afsos ho..ya bura lagta ho ke vo kyu kiya ?
har iNsaaN kabhee nah kabhee ko'ii nah ko'ii Ghalti to zaruur kartaa haii... mujhse bhee huii haii kuch ..par maiN kisii bhee baat kaa kabhee bhee afsos naheeN kartaa .kyuuNki maiN maaNtaa huuN ki jo hotaa hai achchhe ke liye hi hotaa hai.. !

. aur Ghalti ho jaayeN to uskaa afsos karne se kuch miltaa naheeN.. par hame apni GhaltiyoN se seeKhnaa chaahiye taa.k fir se afsos lafz kaa saamnaa naa karnaa paReN..!

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3. Kabhi apko kisine hurt kiya hai bole to chhan se jo toote koi sapna...aisa hua hai ?
>> aisaa aaj tak kiisii ne hurt naheeN kiyaa ki mere sapne TooT gaye hoN..

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4. Zindagi ka sabse bura din ?
>> aisaa din aayaa naheeN abhee tak...

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5. Zindai ka sabse achha din ?
>> maiN jiss din ees parivaar se juRaa thaa uss din ko maiN apni ab tak ki ziNdagee kaa sab se achchhaa din maaNtaa huuN kyuuNki Shaa'iiree Parivaar ne mujhe bahot kuch diyaa hai jissko maiN kabhee bhee lafzoN meiN bayaaN naheeN kar saktaa..!

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6. Udaipur me hostel se kitni baar bung mara ?
>> poojaa buNk hostel se naheeN clg se buNk maarte haiN..
aur maiN zeyaadaahtar Hostel meiN hi rehtaa huun.. clg baar-baar buNk lagaane ki zaruurat naheeN paRtii.. !
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7. Shaitaani kaha se sikhi ?
>> Shaitaani kahiiN se seeKhi naheeN maiNe.. maiN mazaakiyaa huuN.. bas dostoN se mazaak masti kartaa rehtaa huuN.. KhuShii milti hai dostoN ko bhee aur mujhe bhee.. !

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8. Apne paatthako ko koi mashvaraa dena chaahenge logo ko tang karne ka ya maamu banane ka ?
>> filhaal to maiN Khud hi aise tareeke DhooNDh rahaa huuN.. aapke paas ho to mujhe bhee de deejiYengaa..
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Grazie

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mujhe baRii KhuShii hu'ii ki aap yahaaN aayiiN.. ummid kartaa huuN maiNe aapke sabhee sawaaloN ke sahi jawaab diye hoNge.. !

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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hummmmm

to miyaa.n dhaval ji aap bhii fans hi gaye katghare main.
chaliye accha hai. kam se kam ab aapke un anchuye pahuluon se bhii hume rubaroo hone ka mauka milega jinke bare main hum kuch nahi jante.
baise to aapke bare me main bahut kuch janta hoon . per fir bhii esa bahut kuch hai jise janana banki hai.....
Dilip bhaa'ii:

namaste!!

aapko yahaaN deKh kar bahot hi KhuShii hu'ii..!!

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>> dilip bhaa'ii ... jee haaN Shaa'iiree aur dard kaa riShtaa baRaa hi gehraa hotaa haii... har Shaks kii ziNdagee meN ko'ii nah ko'ii dard to zaruur hotaa hai .. yeh baat Shaa'iiree liKhane waale sabhee dostoN par laagu hotee haiN meraa yeh maannna haii..!

maiN maaNtaa huuN ki hum sabhee ziNdagee meiN kisii naa kisi Ghum ke ShiKaar haii .. aur hum sab uss ehsaas ko lafzoN ke zar'iiye ek doosre ke saath baaNTte haiN..! jiss se aik sukuuN miltaa haii..!

KhuShii aur dard kaa ziNdagee meN aanaa jaanaa lagaa rehtaa haii... ko'ii yahaaN KhuShii meN Shaa'iiiree kartaa haii to ko'ii dard meiN... iShq waale apne pyaar se Shaa'iiree meN jaan bhar dete haiN.. aur Ghum ke maare log ... apne Ghum se..!

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>> agar aap Ghazal ko Technical rules ke mutaabiq liKh rahe hoN to meter kaa honaa bahot hi zaruuree haii... iss sey Ghazal kii rawaanii baRhtee hay.. [ kuch log sirf Shauq ke liye liKhate haiN.. uNhe iN Technical baatoN se ko'ii lenaa denaa naheeN hotaa... meraa maanna haii kii ehsaas ko baaNDhnaa naheeN chaahiYe.. aap jaisaa liKhnaa chaaheN waise liKheN . yeh baat liKhane waale par depend haii ki wo apne dil ke ehsaas ko kis tarha bayaaN karnaa chaahtaa hai..!] Gar scooter kaa pehlaa wheel chhoTaa hoN aur doosraa baRaa hoN to kaisaa lagegaa bhaa'ii? Theek waise hi Ghazal meiN donoN miSre balance meN honaa zaruuree haii.. ek miSraa chhoTaa hoN aur aap doosraa miSraa laMbaa liKhte haiN to woh waajeeb naheeN..! ees liye Ghazal ko liKhate waQt hame meter ko zeh'n meiN raKhanaa chaahiYe!


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(3) aap jo bhii gazal likhte hain wo kya aapki dil ki aawaz ya jindgii ke kareeb bhii hoti hai ya sirf sahyri ke lihaz se hi usme dard daalne ki koshish karte hain....
>> merii zeyaadaahtar GhazaleN maiNe Khud ke ehsaas par hi liKhi haii. maiNe wo hi liKhaa hai jo maiN mehsoos kartaa huuN .. kuch koShiSheN maine doosroN ke ehsaas par bhee liKhi haii jaise ki merii kuch naZmeN ..!

Gar maiN kisii doosre ke ehsaas ko apnii Shaa'iiree meN liKhtaa huuN to maiN apne aap ko uss jaGah par raKh detaa huuN.. aur fir sochtaa huuN ki ab maiN kyaa mehsoos kar rahaa huuN... jaise ki maine aik hiran ke bachche par naZm liKhi thee to maine apne aap ko hiran kaa bachcha banaa liyaa thaa.. bas fir liKhnaa baRaa aasaan ho jaataa haii!


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Log kehte hai ki Shayri yaa koi bhi art kisi inspiration se shuru hoti hai--

Q.1. Kyaa aap isse sahmat hai ?
Rashid jee:

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Khudaa ne har iNsaan ke aNdar aik hunar diyaa haii.., wo chhupaa huaa hunar kabhee apne aap baahar aa jaataa hai yaa kisii inspiration ke zar'iiYe.. yaa Shaayad kabhee baahar aa hi naheeN paataa... isiliye maiN sabhee kaa to keh naheeN saktaa par baat karuuN merii to meraa jawaab haaN haii!

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merii inspiration do thee.. mere sister " sunita virender singh" ..uNhi se inspire hoke maiNe Shaa'iiree seeKhi haii.. uNhe maiN apnaa "Guru" maaNtaa huuN...! aur doosraa wo ShaKs jisske liye maiN liKhtaa thaa.. par ab Khud ke liye hi liKhtaa huuN!!

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jai matadi dhaval!!!

chaliye ab hum bhi aa gaye..apne kuch sawaal leke.....

1)Dhaval tumhara fav shayar kaun hain????

2)Apni ab tak ki sabse toofani harkat batao??jismein bahut maar padi ho??nahin padi ho to daat to padi hi ho??

3)kuch lafzon mein zindagi ko bayan kiya jaaye??

4) padhai ko tum seriously kab loge?????iska jawab aise na uda dena??

5) sunitadi tumhe birthday reminder ki kya tankhwa deti hain????agar nahi deti to woh job **** dena.........


chalo ab main jyada pareshan nahin karungi.............

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ahem ahem!!!koi bahut oonchi udaan ud raha haiiii!!!!
hehehe..so gud to see u here little bro..i wish u all the very best in life..
kya poochun ???kuch samajh hi nahi aaraha hai..sab ke sawaalat mai mere sawaal bhi shaamil hai..to jawaab mil hi jaate hian..
keep it up..khush raho


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jai matadi dhaval!!!

chaliye ab hum bhi aa gaye..apne kuch sawaal leke.....
Mausam didi :

Jai maataa di!!

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1)Dhaval tumhara fav shayar kaun hain????
>> Mere sab se pasaNdeedaa Shaayar hai " Mirza Ghalib " aur " daag dehlvi" .. waise aur bhee haii .. dr. baShir badr, Parveen Shakir, Faiz ahmed Faiz, aur Saahir ludhianvi ..!

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2)Apni ab tak ki sabse toofani harkat batao??jismein bahut maar padi ho??nahin padi ho to daat to padi hi ho??
>> maiN school ke dinoN baRaa hi Shaitaan thaa.. ab Shaitaani kam kar dee haii thoRii.. waise to aisii bahot sii baateN haii ..jise aaj bhee yaad karke maiN bahot haNstaa huuN... aik baar mujhe bahot DaaNT paRii thee Teacher kii..

baat kuch YuuN thee.. maiN 6th std meiN thaa... school meiN Break time chal rahaa thaa... maiN aur mere kuch dost classroom ke bahaar KhaRe masti-mazaak kar raheN the.. aur aNdar kuch laRkiyaaN Khel rahee thee.. wo classroom ki beNch ke ooper yahaaN se wahaaN bhaagam-bhaag kar rahee thee... uN meiN se aik laRki ka pair merii school bag ke ooper aa gayaa.. maiN deKh gayaa wo.. maiN aNdar gayaa aur uss laRki ko warn kiya ki beNch par mat Khelo agli baar aisaa naheeN honaa chaahiye.. uss laRki ne sorry bolaa.. aur waapis saari laRkiyaaN fir se Khelne lagii beNch par wo naheeN maanii ... kuch waQt baad usii laRki kaa pair merii school bag ke ooper aayaa [ maiN mauqaa DhooNDh hi rahaa thaa ki kab fir se aisa ho aur maiN use maZaa chaKhaauuN].. maiN bahot hi gusse meN thaa.. aNdar jaake usse chaaNTaa marne hi waalaa thaa ki wo bhaag gaii classroom ke baahar.. maiN bhee uske pichhe bhaagne lagaa.. saath meN mere 3 dost bhee the... bhaagte huye wo laRki school ke baahar nikal gaii hum sab bhee usske pichhe bhaag raheN the... hum sab usse bhagaa bhagaa ke Daraanaa chaahte the.. hehe... bhaagte huye school se bahot door aa gaye the hum sab.. Break bhee Khatam hone waalaa thaa.. maine aur mere dostoN ne waapis jaane ka faislaa kiyaa... wo laRki itni Dar gaii thee ki wo bhaagtee hi rahee.. hum sab waapis aaye school pe.. social study ki class Shuru ho gaii thee.. maiN aur mere dost class meiN aayeN to madam ne poochhaa kahaaN gaye the tum sab... humne bahaanaa banaa diyaa ki sir ne bulaayaa thaa to uNse milne gaye the.. hum class meiN baiTh gaye.. class ki saari laRkiyaaN hum sab ke saamne deKh rahee thee.. social study ki class Khatam hone waali thee wo laRki abhee tak naheeN aa'ii thee.. fir achaanak se wo laRkii aur usski mummy aur hamaare class Teacher.. class meN aayeN... uss laRki ne saaraa maamlaa bataa diya thaa.. uss laRki ki mummy keh rahee thee teacher ko ki deKhiye merii beTii kitani Dar gaii haii .. kitnaa bhagaayaa iN laRkoN ne..... class Teacher ne mujhe aur mere teen dostoN ko KhaRaa kiyaa aur bahot DaaNTaa . jab Teacher DaaNT raheN the to maiN uss laRki ko Ghoorr rahaa thaa.. wo bichaarii Dar ke maare mere saamne naheeN deKh rahee thee.. uss diN bahot DaaNT paRii thee...! haaN par 7th std. meiN wo laRki dost ban ga'ii thee !

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3)kuch lafzon mein zindagi ko bayan kiya jaaye??
>> maiN ziNdagee ke baare meN kyaa sochtaa huuN yeh zainy jee ko diye gaye jawaab meiN bhee kahaa hai didi.. mere liye ziNdagee Khudaa ka diyaa huaa anmol tohfaa haii... jo hame suKh-duKh kaa ehsaas karaatii haii.. kabhee DheroN saarii KhuShiyaaN deke haNsaatii hai to kabhee aaNkhoN meiN dard ke aaNSu bhee dilaatee haii... bahot kuch seeKhane ko miltaa haii.. bahot kuch paate haiN hum aur bahot kuch Khoonaa bhee paRtaa haii.. !

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>> maiN paRhaa'ii ko seriously hi letaa huuN didi.. maiN paRhaa'ii ke waQt paRhaa'ii kar letaa huuN aur masti ke time masti...haaN yeh baat zaruur hai ki maiN rozaanaa paRhaa'ii naheeN kartaa ]jaise paDhaaku log kar sakte haiN] par ab study ke maamle meiN pehle se zeyaadaah serious huuN...! sudhar gayaa huuN thoRaa...!

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5) sunitadi tumhe birthday reminder ki kya tankhwa deti hain????agar nahi deti to woh job **** dena.........
>> Hehehe.. kyaa mausam didi aap bhee nah.. maiN sister ko birthday iss liye yaad dilaataa huuN
kyuuNki wo bhool jaate haiN. uNki aadat hai bhool jaane kii...! badle meiN taNKhwaa bhee miltii hai.. taNkhwaa meiN uNki haNSii sunne kaa mauqaa miltaa haii..! to job chhoRne kaa to ko'ii sawaal hi nahiiN uThtaa !

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aapke sawaaloN ke jawaab dene meiN bahot hi mazaa aayaa.. aur bahot hi KhuShii milii.. ummid kartaa huuN maiNe Theek-Thaak jawaab diye hoNge..!

ShuKriyaaH!!

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dhaval best wishes ans all super dupper questions....


tumari di ko kuch nahi puchhna hai bas i will enjoy reading your ans
Taru didi:

namaste!!

Hmm..aapne baKSh diyaa mujhe ShuKriyaaH..

Thanks for your lovely wishes didi..!

jSk..!

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ahem ahem!!!koi bahut oonchi udaan ud raha haiiii!!!!
hehehe..so gud to see u here little bro..i wish u all the very best in life..
kya poochun ???kuch samajh hi nahi aaraha hai..sab ke sawaalat mai mere sawaal bhi shaamil hai..to jawaab mil hi jaate hian..
keep it up..khush raho
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aadaab!!

kaise haiN aap? sab se pehle to yahaaN aane ke liye maiN aapka bahot ShukraGuzaar huuN.. saaraa didi aap sab ke saath aur pyaar se hi to maiN itanaa kuch seeKhaa huuN.. aur yahaaN tak pahuuNchaa huuN... aapse aur Parivaar sabhee sadasyoN se darKhaaSt yahee haii kii YuuNhi saath dete raheN.. taa.K maiN aur bhee kuch seeKh sakuuN.. aur ees safar meiN aage baRh sakuuN...!

apnaa Khayaal raKhiyeNgaa.. KhuSh raheN...!

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meri buraaiya...sabke saamne..pooja type savaal....angreeeeeeeee

Q. ye bataao ke aap SDC pe aaye tab aapka sabse pahala dost kon thha...sunita di ka naam mat lenaa...samjhe...mera naam lena...agar nahi liya to aapki khair nahi....

Q. SDC pe aapke sabse achhe dosto ki list bataaiye to...mera naam sabse pahale likhna..nahi likhaa to aapki fir se khair nahi

Inkaa ans. to mujhe aaj chaahiye hi...mausam di ne to nahi diya....aapko to dena hi hoga...agar nahi diya to main bahot bura maan jaaungi.......
maine is thread ke rules nahi padhe..lekin shaayad ek rule to hoga hi ki member ko ans. dene ke liye insist na kiya jaaye...lekin main to karungi

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Fir or Q. bhi puchhune hai na.......u dont laugh ok

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meri buraaiya...sabke saamne..pooja type savaal....angreeeeeeeee
juthi kaha ki dhaval ne teri burai........ladaku insaan.....

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Q. SDC pe aapke sabse achhe dosto ki list bataaiye to...mera naam sabse pahale likhna..nahi likhaa to aapki fir se khair nahi
Le jabarjasti hain kya ki tera naam likhe..dhaval bilkul mat darna.....koi jaroorat nahin dhamkiyon se darne ki.....

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Inkaa ans. to mujhe aaj chaahiye hi...mausam di ne to nahi diya....aapko to dena hi hoga...agar nahi diya to main bahot bura maan jaaungi.......
acchaa bura manke naa ek glass barf ka pani pee lena....bas tang karne ke alawa aata hain kya kuch bhi....bas logo ko emotionally blackmail karo

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nahin milenge to kya hogaa????????????????

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Fir or Q. bhi puchhune hai na.......u dont laugh ok

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juthi kaha ki dhaval ne teri burai........ladaku insaan.....



Dhaval daro mat kuch nahin karegi



Le jabarjasti hain kya ki tera naam likhe..dhaval bilkul mat darna.....koi jaroorat nahin dhamkiyon se darne ki.....



acchaa bura manke naa ek glass barf ka pani pee lena....bas tang karne ke alawa aata hain kya kuch bhi....bas logo ko emotionally blackmail karo



member "NO COMMENTS" kar sakte hain heeeeeeeeeeeeee



nahin milenge to kya hogaa????????????????



kyun hanse kyun nahin....dhaval zor zor se hansna...............
dhaval ko ans. dene do....main to daadagiri samaaj se hu...vo mera kaam hai...dhaval ko daraao mat dekho bechaare dar ke maare aaye hi nahi....

dhaval, bacche...aajaao haaa...

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Mere pyarey CHOTTU......sabhi ke sawaal aur tere jawaab padey hain maine....sach kahun to bahut accha lag raha hai, yakeen nahi hota ki yeh wahi DHAVAL hai.... tum kahte ho ki sister kuch poocho aap bhi, main kya poochuN, kuch aisa hai hi nahi jo muj se chippa ho....!

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10th February 2009, 12:09 PM

Dhaval bhai,

interview ke katGhare me.n aap ka swaagat hai!

ab interview lene aaye hai.n to aisa kaise ho ki bina sawaal puuchhe chale jaaye.n , lekin ibtida me.n kaafi sawaal members ne puch liye hai.n to hame bhi saare sawaalo.n ke jawaab mil gaye hai.n!

phir bhi ek sawaal ab bhii bachaa huaa hai

aap bataaiye kii aap se kabhi hamaare chachi jaan ne puuchha ki aap kis ke liye shayri karte hai.n

ya phir kabhi dosto.n ne to puuchh hi liya hoga, to kya bataaya aap ne un ko....

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meri buraaiya...sabke saamne..pooja type savaal....angreeeeeeeee
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maiNe kahaaN burA'ii kii haii aapki?

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>> SDC se jab maiN juRaa thaa to sab se pehli dost aap hi thii... yeh ees liye naheeN keh rahaa kyuuNki aapne kehne ko bolaa mujhe... par yahee sach hai ..!
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Inkaa ans. to mujhe aaj chaahiye hi...mausam di ne to nahi diya....aapko to dena hi hoga...agar nahi diya to main bahot bura maan jaaungi.......
maine is thread ke rules nahi padhe..lekin shaayad ek rule to hoga hi ki member ko ans. dene ke liye insist na kiya jaaye...lekin main to karungi
>> Poojaa.. maiNe pehle bhee kahaa thaa ki merii ziNdagee se juRne waale har ShaKs ko maiN apnaa dost hi maantaa huuN.. sdc ne mujhe bahot se dost diye haiN... yahaaN koi'ii meraa duShman naheeN... maiN to sabhee sadasya ko apnaa dost maantaa huuN..!

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Fir or Q. bhi puchhune hai na.......u dont laugh ok

Grazie

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maiNe aapke poojaa type Q ke jawaab dene ki apni taraf se poorii koShiSh kii haii... aur bhee sawaalaat hoN to most welcome!!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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juthi kaha ki dhaval ne teri burai........ladaku insaan.....



Dhaval daro mat kuch nahin karegi



Le jabarjasti hain kya ki tera naam likhe..dhaval bilkul mat darna.....koi jaroorat nahin dhamkiyon se darne ki.....



acchaa bura manke naa ek glass barf ka pani pee lena....bas tang karne ke alawa aata hain kya kuch bhi....bas logo ko emotionally blackmail karo



member "NO COMMENTS" kar sakte hain heeeeeeeeeeeeee



nahin milenge to kya hogaa????????????????



kyun hanse kyun nahin....dhaval zor zor se hansna...............


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dhaval ko ans. dene do....main to daadagiri samaaj se hu...vo mera kaam hai...dhaval ko daraao mat dekho bechaare dar ke maare aaye hi nahi....

dhaval, bacche...aajaao haaa...

GRazie

Pooja

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aapke sawaaloN ke jawaab maiNe Ooper de diye haiN...

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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Well may be m new for everyone here, but let me ask some question too !

So, first of all tell me, wat was ur first shayri?

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Mere pyarey CHOTTU......sabhi ke sawaal aur tere jawaab padey hain maine....sach kahun to bahut accha lag raha hai, yakeen nahi hota ki yeh wahi DHAVAL hai.... tum kahte ho ki sister kuch poocho aap bhi, main kya poochuN, kuch aisa hai hi nahi jo muj se chippa ho....!

bahut koshish ke baad yehi poochne ka faisla kiya hai ki Zindgi mein sabse jayada ahmiyat kisko dete ho......Paise ko, Shohrat ko ya apne Rishto.n ko ???

pyar aur duao.n ke saath

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Pranaam!!

mujhe KhuShii hu'ii kii aapne aik sawaal DhooNDh hi liyaa!!

Sister.. paisaa yaa Shohrat kaa saath iNsaan ko haMeShaa ke liye naheeN miltaa.. aaj hai kal naheeN... iNsaaN jab dunyaa meiN paidaa hotaa hai to use sab se pehle riShtaa miltaa haii... Shohrat aur paisaa baad meiN miltaa haii... ya yuuN kaheN kii uss waQt paise yaa Shohrat ke baare meN use zaraa saa bhee ilm naheeN hotaa. wo bas samajh saktaa hai riShtoN ko... bhagvaan ne iNsaan ko wo anmol cheez dee hai jisske liye Khud bhagvaan ne bhee ees dunyaa meN baar-baar janam liyaa hai aur woh hai riShtaa ..riShte wo hai jo aaKhiri pal tak saath dete haiN.. to merii ziNdagee meN paise yaa Shohrat maa'iine naheeN raKhate.. merii ziNdagee meiN riShtoN ki ehmiyat zeyaadaah haii..!

maiN ummid kartaa huuN kii meraa yeh jawaab sahi hoNgaa..!!

apnaa Khayaal raKhiyeNgaa.. KhuSh raheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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Sister:

Pranaam!!

mujhe KhuShii hu'ii kii aapne aik sawaal DhooNDh hi liyaa!!

Sister.. paisaa yaa Shohrat kaa saath iNsaan ko haMeShaa ke liye naheeN miltaa.. aaj hai kal naheeN... iNsaaN jab dunyaa meiN paidaa hotaa hai to use sab se pehle riShtaa miltaa haii... Shohrat aur paisaa baad meiN miltaa haii... ya yuuN kaheN kii uss waQt paise yaa Shohrat ke baare meN use zaraa saa bhee ilm naheeN hotaa. wo bas samajh saktaa hai riShtoN ko... bhagvaan ne iNsaan ko wo anmol cheez dee hai jisske liye Khud bhagvaan ne bhee ees dunyaa meN baar-baar janam liyaa hai aur woh hai riShtaa ..riShte wo hai jo aaKhiri pal tak saath dete haiN.. to merii ziNdagee meN paise yaa Shohrat maa'iine naheeN raKhate.. merii ziNdagee meiN riShtoN ki ehmiyat zeyaadaah haii..!

maiN ummid kartaa huuN kii meraa yeh jawaab sahi hoNgaa..!!

apnaa Khayaal raKhiyeNgaa.. KhuSh raheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka chhoTu

~ Dhaval


mere pyarey Chhotu...............mujhe tumse aise hi jawaab ki umeed thi.....shukriya.

pyar aur duao.n ke saath
sister


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Sister:

Pranaam!!

mujhe KhuShii hu'ii kii aapne aik sawaal DhooNDh hi liyaa!!

Sister.. paisaa yaa Shohrat kaa saath iNsaan ko haMeShaa ke liye naheeN miltaa.. aaj hai kal naheeN... iNsaaN jab dunyaa meiN paidaa hotaa hai to use sab se pehle riShtaa miltaa haii... Shohrat aur paisaa baad meiN miltaa haii... ya yuuN kaheN kii uss waQt paise yaa Shohrat ke baare meN use zaraa saa bhee ilm naheeN hotaa. wo bas samajh saktaa hai riShtoN ko... bhagvaan ne iNsaan ko wo anmol cheez dee hai jisske liye Khud bhagvaan ne bhee ees dunyaa meN baar-baar janam liyaa hai aur woh hai riShtaa ..riShte wo hai jo aaKhiri pal tak saath dete haiN.. to merii ziNdagee meN paise yaa Shohrat maa'iine naheeN raKhate.. merii ziNdagee meiN riShtoN ki ehmiyat zeyaadaah haii..!

maiN ummid kartaa huuN kii meraa yeh jawaab sahi hoNgaa..!!

apnaa Khayaal raKhiyeNgaa.. KhuSh raheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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Mere bhai ko pareshaan kar rakha hai... hehehhee main peeche kyun rahun..

Dear dhaval.. mera to ek hi sawal, beta kabse colgate use kar rahe ho.. tumhare daanton me koi farak hi naza nahi aata.... peele ke peele hi reh gaye... kuch to karo.... ab next kya karne vaalo ho... Salt and Sodium ka use.. hehehhehee

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@ How would u spent 1 crores rupees in a day?


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Dilip bhaa'ii:

namaste!!

aapko yahaaN deKh kar bahot hi KhuShii hu'ii..!!



>> dilip bhaa'ii ... jee haaN Shaa'iiree aur dard kaa riShtaa baRaa hi gehraa hotaa haii... har Shaks kii ziNdagee meN ko'ii nah ko'ii dard to zaruur hotaa hai .. yeh baat Shaa'iiree liKhane waale sabhee dostoN par laagu hotee haiN meraa yeh maannna haii..!

maiN maaNtaa huuN ki hum sabhee ziNdagee meiN kisii naa kisi Ghum ke ShiKaar haii .. aur hum sab uss ehsaas ko lafzoN ke zar'iiye ek doosre ke saath baaNTte haiN..! jiss se aik sukuuN miltaa haii..!

KhuShii aur dard kaa ziNdagee meN aanaa jaanaa lagaa rehtaa haii... ko'ii yahaaN KhuShii meN Shaa'iiiree kartaa haii to ko'ii dard meiN... iShq waale apne pyaar se Shaa'iiree meN jaan bhar dete haiN.. aur Ghum ke maare log ... apne Ghum se..!



>> agar aap Ghazal ko Technical rules ke mutaabiq liKh rahe hoN to meter kaa honaa bahot hi zaruuree haii... iss sey Ghazal kii rawaanii baRhtee hay.. [ kuch log sirf Shauq ke liye liKhate haiN.. uNhe iN Technical baatoN se ko'ii lenaa denaa naheeN hotaa... meraa maanna haii kii ehsaas ko baaNDhnaa naheeN chaahiYe.. aap jaisaa liKhnaa chaaheN waise liKheN . yeh baat liKhane waale par depend haii ki wo apne dil ke ehsaas ko kis tarha bayaaN karnaa chaahtaa hai..!] Gar scooter kaa pehlaa wheel chhoTaa hoN aur doosraa baRaa hoN to kaisaa lagegaa bhaa'ii? Theek waise hi Ghazal meiN donoN miSre balance meN honaa zaruuree haii.. ek miSraa chhoTaa hoN aur aap doosraa miSraa laMbaa liKhte haiN to woh waajeeb naheeN..! ees liye Ghazal ko liKhate waQt hame meter ko zeh'n meiN raKhanaa chaahiYe!




>> merii zeyaadaahtar GhazaleN maiNe Khud ke ehsaas par hi liKhi haii. maiNe wo hi liKhaa hai jo maiN mehsoos kartaa huuN .. kuch koShiSheN maine doosroN ke ehsaas par bhee liKhi haii jaise ki merii kuch naZmeN ..!

Gar maiN kisii doosre ke ehsaas ko apnii Shaa'iiree meN liKhtaa huuN to maiN apne aap ko uss jaGah par raKh detaa huuN.. aur fir sochtaa huuN ki ab maiN kyaa mehsoos kar rahaa huuN... jaise ki maine aik hiran ke bachche par naZm liKhi thee to maine apne aap ko hiran kaa bachcha banaa liyaa thaa.. bas fir liKhnaa baRaa aasaan ho jaataa haii!




dilip bhaa'ii..

aapke sawaaloN ke jawaab dene meiN mujhe bahot hi Khushii hu'ii.. ummid kartaa huun ki maiNe aapke sawaaloN ke jawaab Theek tarah se diye hoNge.. maiNe apnii taraf se poorii koShiSh kii hai !! Ghalat huuN to mwaafii !!

Khush rahiYe.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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dearest dhaval

sach main bahut hi acche jawab diye hain tumne..
ans pad ke accha laga.... good
apna khyaal rakhna..

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Dhaval bhai,

interview ke katGhare me.n aap ka swaagat hai!
MayaNk bhaiya:

namaste!!

pyaar bhare swaagat aur itanii izzat afzA'ii ke liye maiN aapkaa be-Had mamnuun huuN...!
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Mayank


Bhaiyaa... mere Shaa'iiree ke Shauq ke baare meiN uNhe maalUm hi naheeN... uNhe pataa hi naheeN ki uNkaa beTaa TooTi fooTii Shaa'iiree kar letaa haii... to aaj tak ees sawaal kaa saamnaa karnaa naheeN paRaa mujhe...

haaN par mere kuch dostoN ko mere ees Shauq ke baare meN Zaruur pataa haii.. uNhone mujhse aik baar poochhaa bhee thaa " ki bhaa'ii aisii Shaa'iiree kis liye liKhi ?? "

meraa jawaab yahee thaa ki yeh Shaa'iiree Khud ke liye liKhataa huuN... apne dil ke sukuuN ke liye bas....! liKhane se mujhe sukuuN miltaa hai.. Khudaa ne dil to aik hi diyaa haii.. par Ghum haZaaroN diye haiN...!

aapne apni Signature meiN jo filhaal Sher raKhaa hai wo yaad aa gayaa!!

Meri qismat me Gham gar itna thaa
Dil bhii yaa rab ka'ii diye hote !!!


ShuKriyaaH MayaNk bhaiyaa..! aap yahaaN aayeN bahot hi KhuShii hu'ii..!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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Well may be m new for everyone here, but let me ask some question too !

So, first of all tell me, wat was ur first shayri?

whom did u inspired when u wrote ur first shayri?
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>> Shaa'iiree Parivaar se jab maiN juRaa thaa... to uN dinoN meiN maiN sabhee sadasyoN ki koShiShoN ko paRhtaa rehtaa thaa...[ abhee bhee paRtaa huuN.. ] aik din maiNe bhee apne ehsaas bayaaN kiye the.. maiNe apnii pehli Shaa'iiree Parivaar meiN juRne ke baad hi liKhi thee... jahaaN tak mujhe yaad haii merii sab se pehli Shaa'iiree haii " merii pehli mulaaQaat "

>> jab maiN apnii pehli koShiSh liKh rahaa thaa to tab ek to mere sister sunita virendersingh ne hausilaah baRhaayaa thaa,,,! tabhee mumkin huaa thaa meraa kuch liKh paanaa ..! aur doosraa woh ShaKs jiske liye maiN liKh rahaa thaa.. uski waj'h se mujhe wo aSh'aar mileN the.. jiNko maiN lafzoN meiN bayaaN kar paayaa thaa..!

ShuKriyaaH!!

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12th February 2009, 10:23 PM

Ek savaal.....

>>Agar aapko gujraati thhali me khichdi ki bajaaye italian pizza dediya jaaye to aap use kaise khanaa pasand karenge? chakku chhurriyo se ya chammach se


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13th February 2009, 10:52 AM

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Mere bhai ko pareshaan kar rakha hai... hehehhee main peeche kyun rahun..

Dear dhaval.. mera to ek hi sawal, beta kabse colgate use kar rahe ho.. tumhare daanton me koi farak hi naza nahi aata.... peele ke peele hi reh gaye... kuch to karo.... ab next kya karne vaalo ho... Salt and Sodium ka use.. hehehhehee

love u dear! TC
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namaste .. namsate!!

haaN... aa gaye aap!! Haha.. mujhe maalUm hi thaa kii aap aayeNge yahaaN to aapka sawaal kyaa hone waalaa haii

arre didi maiN to bahot waQt se colgate use kar rahaa huuN.. aapko to pataa hai... aap kahiye aapke daaNtoN meiN ko'ii farQ paRaa ki nahiiN.. wo iNdia waali colgate hi use kar rahiiN haii nah aap?? maine kahaa thaa bahaar ki colgate use na kareN.. agar aapko mere jaise safed chamkile daaNt chaahiye to ! mere daaNt to safed hi hai aap ne sapna deKhaa hoNgaa yaa neeNd meiN yeh sawaal kiyaa haii Hahahaha ... ko'ii baat nahiiN aapka chhoTaa bhaa'ii aapke dil ki baat samajh saktaa haii.. aap chiNtaa nah kareN.. rozaanaa daaNtoN ki safaa'ii zaaree raKheN iNidaa waali colgate se.. samasya kaa samaadhaan zaruur hoNgaa jaldi jaldi... kabhee kabhee Guru jee ko chele ki baat maan leeni chaahiye didi..!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

<<<------- aise safed daaNt chaahiye?? to use keejiye... iNdia waali colgate .. samjhe aap!!

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13th February 2009, 11:01 AM

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@ How would u spent 1 crores rupees in a day?
Faithomless saaHeb:

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baRaa haTke sawaal poochaa bhaa'ii aapne to... 1 Crore ! din meiN kaise uRaauNgaa aap to kauN banega crorepati Khel raheN hai .. options bhee de diye hote!!

1 Crore mil jaayeN to ... deSh meN chunaav aa raheN haii... Shaayad maiN bhee chunaav jeet jaauN aurroN ki t'arH.. aur netaa ban jaauN ... Kyaa Khayaal hai bhaa'ii


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Ek savaal.....

>>Agar aapko gujraati thhali me khichdi ki bajaaye italian pizza dediya jaaye to aap use kaise khanaa pasand karenge? chakku chhurriyo se ya chammach se
>> Poojaa.. Gujarati thaali meiN mujhe KhichDii ki jaGah iTalian pizza de diyaa jaaye to use maiN chakku chhuriyoN yaa chammach se naheeN apne haath se hi Khaanaa pasaNd karuuNgaa... maiN seedhaa saadaa aam iNsaaN huuN [yeh mausam didi ne kahaa thaa ]... ab kyaa kareN zeyaadaahtar Gujarati log chakku chhuriyoN ya chammach ki jaGah apne haathoN se hi Khaanaa pasaNd karte haiN.. maiN bhee..!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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>> Poojaa.. Gujarati thaali meiN mujhe KhichDii ki jaGah iTalian pizza de diyaa jaaye to use maiN chakku chhuriyoN yaa chammach se naheeN apne haath se hi Khaanaa pasaNd karuuNgaa... maiN seedhaa saadaa aam iNsaaN huuN [yeh mausam didi ne kahaa thaa ]... ab kyaa kareN zeyaadaahtar Gujarati log chakku chhuriyoN ya chammach ki jaGah apne haathoN se hi Khaanaa pasaNd karte haiN.. maiN bhee..!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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abe dusht....main bhi haath se hi khaati hu....chirkut mausam di kaha se bich me aa gai....apko kya hum sabh tedhe insaan lagte hain...oe chirkut pizza haath se nahi muh se khayaa jaata hai....

Achha agla savaal....chalo maaf kiya apne inn savaalo se...abhi mahina pura nahi hua...fir aaungi...
take care

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Faithomless saaHeb:

namaste!!

baRaa haTke sawaal poochaa bhaa'ii aapne to... 1 Crore ! din meiN kaise uRaauNgaa aap to kauN banega crorepati Khel raheN hai .. options bhee de diye hote!!

1 Crore mil jaayeN to ... deSh meN chunaav aa raheN haii... Shaayad maiN bhee chunaav jeet jaauN aurroN ki t'arH.. aur netaa ban jaauN ... Kyaa Khayaal hai bhaa'ii


aapka

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Khayal koi khass bura nahi,

but hum netaoo ko galiyan dete, agar aapko manzoor to shauk se padharne ka kast karen !

anyways.

Wats ur age?


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13th February 2009, 06:20 PM

Could u define your subtitle "Khuda se haara hua"

kya aap kabhi kisi aise shaks se mile hain jo "Khuda se jeeta ho'


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