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Adaab... hazreen-e-mehfil-e-ishQ...
pesh-e-nazar hain kuch ishQiya khiyaal:- tum khata karo, hum wafa karieN aise tujhe hum chaha karieN tu hi zindagi, tu hi bandagi sir aankon pe tujhe rakha karieN tu jo soche woh muyassar ho.. bin kahe tujhe sab diyaa karieN teri ik hansi humaiN naseeb ho! hur khwaaish ko jab poora karieN kahiN chhoot na jaye saath tera us waqt se hum darra karieN utheN haath jab dua meiN ‘hSn’ khuda se tujhe bas maanga karieN tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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13th July 2014, 04:39 AM
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AS SALAMU ALAIKUM HASAN SHAHAB whaaa kya kahe Tareef k liye alfaz nahi mere paas dil se dher saari daad qubool kijiye bohat pyaari gazal likhi hai aapne har line sidhe dil me utarti hai khas kar aakhri ki lines utheN haath jab dua meiN ‘hSn’ khuda se tujhe bas maanga karieN is pe kuch arz karne ki nakaam si koshish kar raha hu gustakhi maaf suna hai sab kuch milta hai dua se ay sanam tum milte ho ya maangen ham khuda se?? aapki nazam k ehal ye kuch waqat nahi rakhti bs ek nakaam koshish hai yun hi likhte rahe....... safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake....... 
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13th July 2014, 04:57 AM
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beautiful lines dost ....thnx for sharing regards  _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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13th July 2014, 11:40 AM
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13th July 2014, 12:25 PM
waah waah hasan shahab........Har Line Touching Hai................Dil Se Deron Daad...........................................!!! !!
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13th July 2014, 12:44 PM
Bohat khoob Hassan sahab. ...............
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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13th July 2014, 06:21 PM
waah waah.......kya baat hai.......bahut hee sundar kalaam.....lazawaab.....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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13th July 2014, 07:17 PM
Waah kya baat hai !! Bahaut khoob Hasan ji !!
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13th July 2014, 09:40 PM
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ShukriyaaH aap ki pasandeedgi k liye... aur kia ghazab shair pesh kiya hai aap ne.. wahhh!! Aise hi saath dete rahiye,, DuaooN k saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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13th July 2014, 10:34 PM
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shukriya bhai aapko is kam zarf ka kalaam pasand aaya aise hi saath dete rahe hame bhi sikhne mile kuch safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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14th July 2014, 12:12 PM
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khaas kar yeh ashaar.. tum khata karo, hum wafa karieN aise tujhe hum chaha karieN kahiN chhoot na jaye saath tera us waqt se hum darra karieN utheN haath jab dua meiN ‘hSn’ khuda se tujhe bas maanga karieN daad aur mubaarakbaad.... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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14th July 2014, 08:35 PM
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Aise hi saath dete rahiye,, DuaooN ke saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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15th July 2014, 01:16 PM
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Aap ki daad mil gayi, hamari ghazal mukamal ho gayi... Aise hi miltay rahiye.. DuaooN k saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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Boht Khoob! |
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15th July 2014, 11:22 PM
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Miltay rahiye ga,, DuaooN k saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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16th July 2014, 01:25 PM
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Likhey ko pazeeraayi bakhshne k liye teh-e-dil se manooN hooN.. Younhi saath banaye rakhiye ga,, DuaooN k saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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16th July 2014, 11:24 PM
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Khaak alfaaz aap ko pasand aaye,, boht acha laga.... Younhi saath banaye rakhiye ga,, DuaooN k saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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17th July 2014, 09:24 PM
Hassan bhai
namaste badi hi oyaari Ghazal likhi hai aapne dil ko khushi hui duaaon ke saath ijaazat aapka Dhaval |
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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18th July 2014, 10:13 PM
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Aap ki daad sir aankhooN per... aise hi miltay rahiye ga,, DuaooN ke saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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24th July 2014, 10:00 AM
tum khata karo, hum wafa karieN
aise tujhe hum chaha karieN kahiN chhoot na jaye saath tera us waqt se hum darra karieN Wah wah wah |
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25th July 2014, 03:10 AM
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Naaz, Thanks a lot for appreciation and your valuable time! Regards, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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25th July 2014, 09:59 AM
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HSN bhai.....aapki pyar bhari shayri padkar ek sher yaad aaya...kisne likha hai nahi maloom...par hai bahut pyara. suna hai mil jati hai har shai dua meiN, aik din tujhe maang kar dekhenge khuda se .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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26th July 2014, 05:44 AM
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Daad aur pazeerayi ke liye behad shukerguzaar hon... Milte rahiye ga, DuaooN ke saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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7th August 2014, 12:13 AM
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Teh-e-dil se manooN hooN inayat k liye! Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga, DuaooN ke saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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13th August 2014, 02:11 AM
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Teh-e-dil se manooN hoN pasandeedgi ke liye! Aate rahiye, Apna khiyaal rakhiye, DuaooN ke saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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13th August 2014, 03:10 PM
Wah Hasan bhai Aapka kalame Ishq tau aaj sir pe char ke bol raha tha..
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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19th August 2014, 05:48 PM
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Pal pal milta hua aap ka saath, hur dam yaad rahe ga... bohat bohat shukriyaaH is pyar bharay saath ke liye! Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga, Milte rahiye ga, DuaooN ke saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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Likhe to pazeeraayi bakhshne ke liye teh-e-dil se manooN hooN! Younhi saath dete rahiye ga, DuaooN ke saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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21st August 2014, 10:26 PM
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Be-had shukarguzaar hooN ke aap ko mere alfaaz pasand aaye! DuaooN ke saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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22nd August 2014, 11:10 AM
Adab Hassan Saheb
Aap ke kalam ko padh kar maza agaya. rumaniyat se bhar pur Ghazal sachhe pyar ka izhar karti hai. Mubarak ho Likhte rahiye |
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22nd August 2014, 10:32 PM
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Awwal din se milta hua aap ka saath, bohat khaas hai mere liye... Aise hi saath dete rahiye ga, Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga, DuaooN ke saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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25th August 2014, 10:58 PM
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Be-had mashkoor-o-manooN hooN, aap ke inayatoN ke liye.. Milte rahiye ga, DuaooN ke saath, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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25th August 2014, 11:01 PM
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Mujib saheb, Daad aur pazeeraayi ke liye aap ka bohat bohat shukriyaaH! Milte rahiye ga,, DuaooN ke saath, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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