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1st April 2006, 06:06 PM
Hi Friends,
As the summer is on the way and flowers on the trees. I thought it would make sense fo rthis thought though the topic maybe a bit weird at this time. Autumn!!! Flowers blooming fast, Leaves falling slow, Trees standing tall, And breeze blowing through... No leaves on trees, Yet the beauty of flowers, Makes the tree a living beauty, Transcended from the skies... The sun gleaming out of the skies, So soft and so warm, Everything is so beautiful and fine, Like a virtual garden on earth... So oh my friend, Enjoy moments of life, For no one knows, What is in store for us, The next day or minute... Destiny is what you make off, Be the creator of your destiny, For all have the force within.... Regards, Balaji Nagarajan |
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2nd April 2006, 11:18 AM
cool buddy...this was really nice...
assuming tht u don really mind...i am postin my poem...tht i wrote on autumn...in this very post... Drenching in showers of pain With hopes shattered by the cold winds I weep on the banks of a river. Maturing sun casts its magic on me Adamant in chasing away my fears To bestow me from darkness to light Sky along side the dark clouds conspire… Plucking away the felicity of my soul Leaving me in solitude with a lot to ponder Hopes have turned in to a nightmare As I mistook for a desert to be a mirage My soul mourns at my own grief… Rain comes to my rescue hiding the tears As if to suggest me to cry my heart out I wonder if it could end my pain… Soft petals of the daffodils fell at my feet With droplets of water like diamonds of a jewel The sight of those beautiful flowers brought a smile Sight of the flowers falling down refreshed my soul The pain has vanished and the place looks gorgeous Those rising tides…flowers falling…drops of rain And I can also see the rainbow coming over… A new life has come along with the new season Autumn has come… Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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2nd April 2006, 11:58 AM
both thepoems are mind blasting......................good work balaji bhai and karthik bro
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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2nd April 2006, 07:42 PM
agaian ur on diffrent topic
u r really gr8 well done supreb shrdh 
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4th April 2006, 06:40 AM
Hey Karthik,
First thanx for liking the small thought, and it's my honour that you have posted one of your valuable writings in my post, it's just superb.... Destiny is what you make off, Be the creator of your destiny, For all have the force within.... Regards, Balaji Nagarajan |
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4th April 2006, 06:42 AM
Hey mehul,
Thnx a lot for liking the small thought, and ya karthik's poem is mind blowing....... Destiny is what you make off, Be the creator of your destiny, For all have the force within.... Regards, Balaji Nagarajan |
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4th April 2006, 06:43 AM
Hey Shraddha,
Very happy to see you here.... Thnx for liking it...... Destiny is what you make off, Be the creator of your destiny, For all have the force within.... Regards, Balaji Nagarajan |
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5th April 2006, 01:13 AM
both the poems are awesome ...
biji very nice dear ... i like ur poem ... kep wriring like this bye TC Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki, Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi, Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm) *(`'·.¸(`'·.¸*¤*¸.·'´)¸.·'´)* .....«´¨`·..ASHU...·´¨`»...... *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* ------------------------------------------------ |
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5th April 2006, 04:52 AM
thank you ashu...
Destiny is what you make off, Be the creator of your destiny, For all have the force within.... Regards, Balaji Nagarajan |
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