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GHAZAL : Lafz Kaa Wazan ... - 17th October 2015, 07:39 PM

Lafz Kaa ........ Wazan ToDh Kar Dekho
Ghazal MeN ....... Asal JoDh Kar Dekho ...

Jab .... Aaye'N.. Mushkile Saamne Toh
Haath Se PatThar ..... ToDh Kar Dekho ...

Dard Saaraa ....... Baahar Aa Jayegaa
Aankh Ka Paani ... NichoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kitni.... Dushmani Hai Tumhare Andar
Apne ...... Dil Ko JhanjhoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kuch Bhi NahiN BigDhaa Hai ....... Abhi
Pair , Chaadar MeN SukoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kitne Maze Se ToDh Li .. PeDh Ki Tahni
Zara .. Apni Kalaaii MaroDh Kar Dekho ...

Intnaa Kamaao'N Ke Phir Tum YahaaN
Um'r Ki Ginti .. Sau KaroDh Kar Dekho ...

YuuN .NahiN Rukenge Qadam "Naresh"
Apni ... Aarzuuye'N ChhoDh Kar Dekho ...

...................... Naresh Mehra .................
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YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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18th October 2015, 10:11 AM

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Lafz Kaa ........ Wazan ToDh Kar Dekho
Ghazal MeN ....... Asal JoDh Kar Dekho ...

Jab .... Aaye'N.. Mushkile Saamne Toh
Haath Se PatThar ..... ToDh Kar Dekho ...

Dard Saaraa ....... Baahar Aa Jayegaa
Aankh Ka Paani ... NichoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kitni.... Dushmani Hai Tumhare Andar
Apne ...... Dil Ko JhanjhoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kuch Bhi NahiN BigDhaa Hai ....... Abhi
Pair , Chaadar MeN SukoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kitne Maze Se ToDh Li .. PeDh Ki Tahni
Zara .. Apni Kalaaii MaroDh Kar Dekho ...

Intnaa Kamaao'N Ke Phir Tum YahaaN
Um'r Ki Ginti .. Saur KaroDh Kar Dekho ...

YuuN .NahiN Rukenge Qadam "Naresh"
Apni ... Aarzuuye'N ChhoDh Kar Dekho ...

...................... Naresh Mehra .................
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Kya khoob alfaaz piroye hain aapne har sher behad khoobsoorat aur utna hee gahra...bahut bahut pasand aayi aapki ye ghazal....

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namaskaar naresh ji....
Kya khoob alfaaz piroye hain aapne har sher behad khoobsoorat aur utna hee gahra...bahut bahut pasand aayi aapki ye ghazal....

Dil se dher sari daad qubool kijiyega...
Yun hee likhte rahiye aate rahiye.....
bahut shukriyaah ... Madhu ji ! Nawaazish !!!!!!!!!




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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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GHAZAL : Lafz Kaa Wazan ... - 17th October 2015, 07:39 PM
Lafz Kaa ........ Wazan ToDh Kar Dekho
Ghazal MeN ....... Asal JoDh Kar Dekho ...

Jab .... Aaye'N.. Mushkile Saamne Toh
Haath Se PatThar ..... ToDh Kar Dekho ...

Dard Saaraa ....... Baahar Aa Jayegaa
Aankh Ka Paani ... NichoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kitni.... Dushmani Hai Tumhare Andar
Apne ...... Dil Ko JhanjhoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kuch Bhi NahiN BigDhaa Hai ....... Abhi
Pair , Chaadar MeN SukoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kitne Maze Se ToDh Li .. PeDh Ki Tahni
Zara .. Apni Kalaaii MaroDh Kar Dekho ...

Intnaa Kamaao'N Ke Phir Tum YahaaN
Um'r Ki Ginti .. Sau KaroDh Kar Dekho ...

YuuN .NahiN Rukenge Qadam "Naresh"
Apni ... Aarzuuye'N ChhoDh Kar Dekho ...

bahut khoob Mehra ji daad hazir hai

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bahut khoob mehra saahab....................
Bahut Shukriyaah ... Sameer Ji

Nawaazish Aap Kii ...........




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Bohut khoob Naresh ji.....

Ped ki tehni wala sher dil ko lag gaya....uske liye lag se mubarakbaad.

Second last sher samajh nahi aaya. Kabhi waqt mile to SamjhaiyegA.

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Lafz Kaa ........ Wazan ToDh Kar Dekho
Ghazal MeN ....... Asal JoDh Kar Dekho ...

Jab .... Aaye'N.. Mushkile Saamne Toh
Haath Se PatThar ..... ToDh Kar Dekho ...

Dard Saaraa ....... Baahar Aa Jayegaa
Aankh Ka Paani ... NichoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kitni.... Dushmani Hai Tumhare Andar
Apne ...... Dil Ko JhanjhoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kuch Bhi NahiN BigDhaa Hai ....... Abhi
Pair , Chaadar MeN SukoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kitne Maze Se ToDh Li .. PeDh Ki Tahni
Zara .. Apni Kalaaii MaroDh Kar Dekho ...

Intnaa Kamaao'N Ke Phir Tum YahaaN
Um'r Ki Ginti .. Sau KaroDh Kar Dekho ...

YuuN .NahiN Rukenge Qadam "Naresh"
Apni ... Aarzuuye'N ChhoDh Kar Dekho ...

...................... Naresh Mehra .................
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GHAZAL : Lafz Kaa Wazan ... - 17th October 2015, 07:39 PM
Lafz Kaa ........ Wazan ToDh Kar Dekho
Ghazal MeN ....... Asal JoDh Kar Dekho ...

Jab .... Aaye'N.. Mushkile Saamne Toh
Haath Se PatThar ..... ToDh Kar Dekho ...

Dard Saaraa ....... Baahar Aa Jayegaa
Aankh Ka Paani ... NichoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kitni.... Dushmani Hai Tumhare Andar
Apne ...... Dil Ko JhanjhoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kuch Bhi NahiN BigDhaa Hai ....... Abhi
Pair , Chaadar MeN SukoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kitne Maze Se ToDh Li .. PeDh Ki Tahni
Zara .. Apni Kalaaii MaroDh Kar Dekho ...

Intnaa Kamaao'N Ke Phir Tum YahaaN
Um'r Ki Ginti .. Sau KaroDh Kar Dekho ...

YuuN .NahiN Rukenge Qadam "Naresh"
Apni ... Aarzuuye'N ChhoDh Kar Dekho ...

bahut khoob Mehra ji daad hazir hai

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Inaayat Aap Ki .........




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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Lafz Kaa ........ Wazan ToDh Kar Dekho
Ghazal MeN ....... Asal JoDh Kar Dekho ...

Jab .... Aaye'N.. Mushkile Saamne Toh
Haath Se PatThar ..... ToDh Kar Dekho ...

Dard Saaraa ....... Baahar Aa Jayegaa
Aankh Ka Paani ... NichoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kitni.... Dushmani Hai Tumhare Andar
Apne ...... Dil Ko JhanjhoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kuch Bhi NahiN BigDhaa Hai ....... Abhi
Pair , Chaadar MeN SukoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kitne Maze Se ToDh Li .. PeDh Ki Tahni
Zara .. Apni Kalaaii MaroDh Kar Dekho ...

Intnaa Kamaao'N Ke Phir Tum YahaaN
Um'r Ki Ginti .. Sau KaroDh Kar Dekho ...

YuuN .NahiN Rukenge Qadam "Naresh"
Apni ... Aarzuuye'N ChhoDh Kar Dekho ...

...................... Naresh Mehra .................
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Lafz Kaa ........ Wazan ToDh Kar Dekho
Ghazal MeN ....... Asal JoDh Kar Dekho ...

Jab .... Aaye'N.. Mushkile Saamne Toh
Haath Se PatThar ..... ToDh Kar Dekho ...

Dard Saaraa ....... Baahar Aa Jayegaa
Aankh Ka Paani ... NichoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kitni.... Dushmani Hai Tumhare Andar
Apne ...... Dil Ko JhanjhoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kuch Bhi NahiN BigDhaa Hai ....... Abhi
Pair , Chaadar MeN SukoDh Kar Dekho ...

Kitne Maze Se ToDh Li .. PeDh Ki Tahni
Zara .. Apni Kalaaii MaroDh Kar Dekho ...

Intnaa Kamaao'N Ke Phir Tum YahaaN
Um'r Ki Ginti .. Sau KaroDh Kar Dekho ...

YuuN .NahiN Rukenge Qadam "Naresh"
Apni ... Aarzuuye'N ChhoDh Kar Dekho ...

...................... Naresh Mehra .................
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Bahot khub Nareshji.....

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wah bahut khoob naresh bhai..................................


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