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Love vo mulaqat guzri.... - 24th September 2014, 11:03 PM

[Sahi raah kya hai aur kya hai galat,
yahi sochne me vo kal raat guzri.
Maazi ke kissse purane sabhi vo,
ankho ke aage vo har baat guzri

Kai din bitaaye teri raah takte,
tassvur me tere kai raat guzri.
Meri saanson ko dekho mahka gayi vo ,
Tujhe chchooke jo ye saba paas guzri.

Kabhi barsa badal kabhi meri ankhein,
isi khel me hijr ki raat guzri.
Bhiga kar mujhe aag isne lagayi,
Badi beraham ye bhi barsaat guzri.

duaayein usi ke liye maangi barso,
Kiye Sajde Maine ki jis raah guzri
hua yaar ka Jake deedar tab ye
badi choti thi vo mulaqat guzri.



अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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25th September 2014, 07:58 AM

madhu jee... kya kehne....ek alag soch...ek alag andaaz....bahut hee khoob...likhte rahiye...



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waaahhhh Madhu ji...... kyaa baat hai , kya khoob rachnaa kahi hai aapne....

bahot ummdaa...... likhtii rahiye... bahot ssi daaad aapko.....

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26th September 2014, 12:10 PM

bahut hi khubsurat rachnaa..............
sabdoN ka tanaa-banaa bahut hi acchhaa lagaa....

likhte rahiyegaa......


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26th September 2014, 01:05 PM

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Aapki koshish achchhi lagiin

Dil se daad aur duaaen

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26th September 2014, 11:05 PM

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madhu jee... kya kehne....ek alag soch...ek alag andaaz....bahut hee khoob...likhte rahiye...
Bahu bahut shukriya aru ji...yoon hi sath dete rahein...



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kya baat hai
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13th October 2014, 07:12 PM

Beautifully said Madhu Ji..Khayal bhi aur andaaz bhi..
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[Sahi kya aur kya hai galat,
yahi sochne me kal raat guzri.
Maazi ke kissse purane sabhi,
ankho ke aage vo har baat guzri

Kai din gaye teri raah takte,
tassvur me tere kai raat guzri.
Meri bhi saanse mahka gayi vo ,
Tujhe chchookar saba jo mere paas guzri.

Kabhi barsa badal kabhi meri ankhein,
isi khel me hijr e raat guzri.
Bhiga kar mujhe aag isne lagayi,
Badi beraham ye barsaat guzri.

Uske liye dua maangi barso,
Sajde kiye hain jis raah guzri
Deedar e yaar tab ye hua,
choti si thi vo mulaqat guzri.


Madhu ji.......aapne raat ke dard tanhai ko jis tarah bayaan kiya hai...dil ko chu gye aapke ehsaas...hamari bhi kai raate aisi guzrati hai.

likhte rhiye aur bazm ki ronak banaye rakhiye


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15th October 2014, 05:45 PM

ek aur achhi nazm hai eh aap ki Madhuji.

eh stanza mujhe behad pasand aya....

Kabhi barsa badal kabhi meri ankhein,
isi khel me hijr e raat guzri.
Bhiga kar mujhe aag isne lagayi,
Badi beraham ye barsaat guzri.

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Sahi kya aur kya hai galat,yahi sochne me kal raat guzri.Maazi ke kissse purane sabhi,ankho ke aage vo har baat guzri

Kya baat hain madhu ji..nice one



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madhu jee... kya kehne....ek alag soch...ek alag andaaz....bahut hee khoob...likhte rahiye...
Bahut bahut shukriya aru ji ...yoon hi sath dete rahiye...



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Madhu jee Aadaab ... !

Waah jee waah kyaa khoobsurat nazm kahi hai aapne ...
Behad dilkash aur dilfareb ahsaas O khayaal umdaa lafzoN meiN piroye haiN ...

Is khoobsurat nazm par meri dheroN daad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye ... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez ...



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waaahhhh Madhu ji...... kyaa baat hai , kya khoob rachnaa kahi hai aapne....

bahot ummdaa...... likhtii rahiye... bahot ssi daaad aapko.....

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Nicely written.

Especially the lines:
"Bhiga kar mujhe aag isne lagayi,
Badi beraham ye barsaat guzri."

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[Sahi kya aur kya hai galat,
yahi sochne me kal raat guzri.
Maazi ke kissse purane sabhi,
ankho ke aage vo har baat guzri

Kai din gaye teri raah takte,
tassvur me tere kai raat guzri.
Meri bhi saanse mahka gayi vo ,
Tujhe chchookar saba jo mere paas guzri.

Kabhi barsa badal kabhi meri ankhein,
isi khel me hijr e raat guzri.
Bhiga kar mujhe aag isne lagayi,
Badi beraham ye barsaat guzri.

Uske liye dua maangi barso,
Sajde kiye hain jis raah guzri
Deedar e yaar tab ye hua,
choti si thi vo mulaqat guzri.

Waaaaaaah Madhu ji
Behad umdah peshkash.....ehsaaas behad khoobsurat.......aur andaz e bayan ke to kya kehne

Yoon hi likte rahiye.......daad hi daad
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Namaste

Aapki koshish achchhi lagiin

Dil se daad aur duaaen

Aapka

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Bahot khoobsurat nazm hui hai madhuji....quoted stanza is awesome...keep it up
Shukriya naz...wish to see u backk.....

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kya baat hai madhu jee bahut khoob rahe aapke yeh ehsaas
likhti rahen
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Beautifully said Madhu Ji..Khayal bhi aur andaaz bhi..
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Madhu ji ,

Kafi arse ke baad aapka ye kalam pera , jo shayad pehle miss ho gaya tha ..

bahut achche se piroya hai ehsason ko aapne ..

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Madhu ji.......aapne raat ke dard tanhai ko jis tarah bayaan kiya hai...dil ko chu gye aapke ehsaas...hamari bhi kai raate aisi guzrati hai.

likhte rhiye aur bazm ki ronak banaye rakhiye
Shukriya di....
Raat hoti hee kuch aisi hai...ki chahe khushi ho ya gam raat ka sath pakar har ehsaas ki shidddat aur badh jati hai....
Kalaam ko pasand kiya Aapne..bahut shukriya...
Duaon me yaad rakhiyega...
Aati rahiye....



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7th August 2015, 01:59 PM

Just Beautiful...... Apka andaz hamesha ki tarah Khubsurat hai madhuji....


Ek tere bagair hai Zindagi ki Gujar…..
Bata main kya karu….
Sare zamane ki Mohabbat leker…..

   
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23rd September 2015, 08:21 PM

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ek aur achhi nazm hai eh aap ki Madhuji.

eh stanza mujhe behad pasand aya....

Kabhi barsa badal kabhi meri ankhein,
isi khel me hijr e raat guzri.
Bhiga kar mujhe aag isne lagayi,
Badi beraham ye barsaat guzri.

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Shukriya.......ummeed hai aage bhi aapka sath milega...

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23rd September 2015, 08:22 PM

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Sahi kya aur kya hai galat,yahi sochne me kal raat guzri.Maazi ke kissse purane sabhi,ankho ke aage vo har baat guzri

Kya baat hain madhu ji..nice one
Bahut shukriya vinay ji......

Aate rahiye........
Duaon ke sath....
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31st October 2015, 08:19 PM

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Madhu jee Aadaab ... !

Waah jee waah kyaa khoobsurat nazm kahi hai aapne ...
Behad dilkash aur dilfareb ahsaas O khayaal umdaa lafzoN meiN piroye haiN ...

Is khoobsurat nazm par meri dheroN daad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye ... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez ...


Bahut bahut shukriya sameer ji....
Bahut achcha laga aapko ye nazm pasand aayi....

Aate rahiyega..

Khush rahein..



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31st October 2015, 08:20 PM

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Nicely written.

Especially the lines:
"Bhiga kar mujhe aag isne lagayi,
Badi beraham ye barsaat guzri."

Reminds us of the song "tip tip barsa paani, paani ne aag lagayi".
Bahut bahut shukriya. ..............

Aate rahiyega....



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21st December 2015, 01:37 PM

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Waaaaaaah Madhu ji
Behad umdah peshkash.....ehsaaas behad khoobsurat.......aur andaz e bayan ke to kya kehne

Yoon hi likte rahiye.......daad hi daad
Apka apna
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bhushan sahab..bahut shukriya aaoke sath aur daad ka...

busy zindgi se kuch pal nikal kar yun hee ham sab ko padhte rahiyega...aur hame bhi mauka dijiye ham aapko padh sakein...

aate rahiyega...

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kya baat hai madhu jee bahut khoob rahe aapke yeh ehsaas
likhti rahen
duaon ke saath
Shukriya rajinder ji....

Sath dete rahiyega ......

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Madhu ji ,

Kafi arse ke baad aapka ye kalam pera , jo shayad pehle miss ho gaya tha ..

bahut achche se piroya hai ehsason ko aapne ..

Hamdam
Shukriya sanjay ji.....

Aate rahiyega. .......

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24th February 2016, 01:44 PM

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Just Beautiful...... Apka andaz hamesha ki tarah Khubsurat hai madhuji....
thanku so much ruchika ji....

aapko yahaan dekhkar bahut khushi hoti hai

aati raha kariye...

aur hame padhne ka mauka bhi deti rahiyega,,,,


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