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baaNwara ye ma’n mera…! haazreen ko masttt… ka aadaab…! Kuchh bhatke se khayaal zehan meiN the aur likhne ka bhi dil kar raha tha, to yeh likha…takneek ke hisaab se to maloom nahi, shayad nazm hi kahenge I’se, chaliye job hi ho, padh kar bataaiyega ki kaisi rahi….aapki rae ka intzaar rahega… =_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_ =_=_=_=_= baaNwara ye ma’n mera baar-baar tujhko hi pukaare… jahaN bhi ho chale aao tum, to'd aao baNdhan saare… sooni tujh bin jeewan ki raaheN, pheeke saare nazaare… bhav-saagar hi tar jauN maiN jo ho tu sa'ng humaare…! saath tera hai khushboo jaisa, mehka de jo jeewan bagiya… mrig_trishna si bhatkan mujhko, aao ban jao mere sahaare…! kehte haiN jag maaya saari, tan ma’n naacheN iske ishaare… tujh se hoN gar maaya ke baNdhan, lagna chaahe kaun kinaare…? paaoN tere dho kar pee luN, ek saaNs meiN sadiyaaN jee luN… aisa karuN kya, batla to mujhko, le aauN kya to'd aMbar se tare…? chaNdar thaal me bhoj sajauN, apne haathoN tujhe khilaauN… tujh meiN hi rab dikhta hai mujhko, maiN balihaari jauN ti'haare…! le jaauN tujhe maiN aisi jagha, thaNdi chalti ho hawa jahaN… amaltaas ke pe'doN ke neeche behte hoN nadiyaa ke dhaare…! jo sun'ta ho kahiN tera khuda, wo aaj sun le baat humaari…! yaar bina nahi jeena hai humko, u's bin laageN sab sukh khaare…!!! =_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_ =_=_=_=_= Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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11th March 2010, 05:17 AM
originally posted by vikramjethi
baaNwara ye ma’n mera baar-baar tujhko hi pukaare… jahaN bhi ho chale aao tum, to'd aao baNdhan saare… sooni tujh bin jeewan ki raaheN, pheeke saare nazaare… bhav-saagar hi tar jauN maiN jo ho tu sa'ng humaare…! saath tera hai khushboo jaisa, mehka de jo jeewan bagiya… mrig_trishna si bhatkan mujhko, aao ban jao mere sahaare…! kehte haiN jag maaya saari, tan ma’n naacheN iske ishaare… tujh se hoN gar maaya ke baNdhan, lagna chaahe kaun kinaare…? paaoN tere dho kar pee luN, ek saaNs meiN sadiyaaN jee luN… aisa karuN kya, batla to mujhko, le aauN kya to'd aMbar se tare…? chaNdar thaal me bhoj sajauN, apne haathoN tujhe khilaauN… tujh meiN hi rab dikhta hai mujhko, maiN balihaari jauN ti'haare…! le jaauN tujhe maiN aisi jagha, thaNdi chalti ho hawa jahaN… amaltaas ke pe'doN ke neeche behte hoN nadiyaa ke dhaare…! jo sun'ta ho kahiN tera khuda, wo aaj sun le baat humaari…! yaar bina nahi jeena hai humko, u's bin laageN sab sukh khaare…!!! =_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_=_= vikram ji daad hi nahi vadhai kabool karein aisi sundar rachna k liay alfaaz nahi hein kuch bhi kehne ko. excellent 5 rated for this post. |
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11th March 2010, 07:56 AM
paaoN tere dho kar pee luN, ek saaNs meiN sadiyaaN jee luN…
aisa karuN kya, batla to mujhko, le aauN kya to'd aMbar se tare…? chaNdar thaal me bhoj sajauN, apne haathoN tujhe khilaauN… tujh meiN hi rab dikhta hai mujhko, maiN balihaari jauN ti'haare…! le jaauN tujhe maiN aisi jagha, thaNdi chalti ho hawa jahaN… amaltaas ke pe'doN ke neeche behte hoN nadiyaa ke dhaare…! Bahut maasoom lagi mujhe aapki ..........yeh panktiyaa......... Bahut khoob ........vikram Ji.... dil se daad hazir hai....yunhi likhte rahen.... khush rahen... apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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11th March 2010, 08:22 AM
paaoN tere dho kar pee luN, ek saaNs meiN sadiyaaN jee luN…
aisa karuN kya, batla to mujhko, le aauN kya to'd aMbar se tare…? vikram ji namste..... veru nice this line aap aese hi likhte raheN yhi duaa hai zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! ===========================  sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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11th March 2010, 11:08 AM
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Vikaram jii mashooka se pranay ko betab mashook ki ye panktiyaan wakai main kabile tareef hai.n......... kafi acche ehsason se sajaya hai aapne ise, ese main merii badhaaii bhii sweekar kigiye, halanki ye saarii kalpnayen atishyoktii hai lekin premika ke milan ko betab kavi hridya se niklii in panktiyon ki sundrata ko nakara nahi ja sakta kehte haiN jag maaya saari, tan ma’n naacheN iske ishaare… tujh se hoN gar maaya ke baNdhan, lagna chaahe kaun kinaare such hai ek dam........ ese me merii bhii ek rachna hai, ho raat ka samaN aur chandni raat ho, chhat per hon hum tum akele aur koi na paas ho bahon main bahen daale hum der tak baithe rahen aanko hi aankho main aur baat hoti rahe aur lavo ki khamoshi sab kah daale ese hii ek raat chaiye pal do pal ka tera sath chaiye....... Dilip aapkpo merii or se dheron daad Dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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11th March 2010, 05:34 PM
Bilkul kisi khoobsurat folkfore geet ki tarah mehsoos hua mujhe..........bohat khoobsurat peshkash Vikram saheb aap to bas kamaal hi kamaal ho.
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11th March 2010, 07:45 PM
बांवरा ये मन मेरा बार-बार तुझको ही पुकारे... जहाँ भी हो चले आओ तुम, तोड़ आओ बंधन सारे... सूनी तुझ बिन जीवन कि राहें, फीक़े सारे नज़ारे... भव-सागर ही तर जाऊं मैं जो हो तू संग हमारे..! साथ तेरा है खुशबू जैसा, महका दे जो जीवन बगिया... मृग-त्रिशना सी भटकन मुझको, आओ बन जाओ मेरे सहारे...! कहते हैं जग माया सारी, तन मन नाचें इसके इशारे... तुझ से हों ग़र माया के बंधन, लगना चाहे कौन किनारे...? पाँव तेरे धो कर पी लूँ, एक सांस में सदियाँ जी लूँ... ऐसा करूँ क्या, बतला तो मुझको, ले आऊं क्या तोड़ अम्बर से तारे...? चंद्र-थाल में भोज सजाऊं, अपने हाथों तुझे खिलाऊं... तुझ में ही रब दीखता है मुझको, मैं बलिहारी जाऊं तिहारे...! ले जाऊं तुझे मैं ऐसी जगह, ठंडी चलती हो हवा जहाँ... अमलतास के पेड़ों के नीचे, बहते हों नदिया के धारे...! जो सुनता हो कहीं तेरा ख़ुदा, वो आज सुन ले बात हमारी... यार बिना नही जीना है मुझको, उस बिन लागें सब सुख ख़ारे...!!! Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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11th March 2010, 08:23 PM
vikram ji daad hi nahi vadhai kabool karein aisi sundar rachna k liay
alfaaz nahi hein kuch bhi kehne ko. excellent 5 rated for this post.[/QUOTE] seep saheb aapki badhaai aur tareef ke liye behad shukriya.... i's post ko excellent bataane ke liye bhi aapka bahut bahut shukriya saheb...  Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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11th March 2010, 10:22 PM
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radhe radhe badhai ke paatr ho itne sundar kalaam ke liye maza aa gaya Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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12th March 2010, 09:32 PM
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13th March 2010, 06:18 PM
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padhne aur pasand karne ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya.... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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13th March 2010, 07:19 PM
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aapne padha iska bahut bahut shukriya... achha zyada yeh laga ki padhne ke saath saath aapne i'se mehsoos bhi kiya... shukriya dost..... ho raat ka samaN aur chandni raat ho, chhat per hon hum tum akele aur koi na paas ho bahon main bahen daale hum der tak baithe rahen aanko hi aankho main aur baat hoti rahe aur lavo ki khamoshi sab kah daale ese hii ek raat chaiye pal do pal ka tera sath chaiye....... Dilip aapki rachna atee uttam hai......ise post kijiye, naye thread meiN... meri duaeN aapke saath haiN.... aapka dost, masttt.... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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16th March 2010, 10:55 PM
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17th March 2010, 09:01 AM
paaoN tere dho kar pee luN, ek saaNs meiN sadiyaaN jee luN…
aisa karuN kya, batla to mujhko, le aauN kya to'd aMbar se tare…? Vikram Bhai,, Aap ka naya khiyaal aur soch boht hi ziyaada pasand aayii,, Oper quote kiya shair dil chuu giya... Younhi likhtay rahiye ,, DuaooN k saath,, Aap ka Bhai,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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17th March 2010, 12:08 PM
very well written vikram ji..
poori gazal bahut acchi hai.. sabhi ehsaas bahut khaas rahe.... keep writing... |
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19th March 2010, 07:52 PM
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tareef aur badhaai ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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21st March 2010, 04:29 PM
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21st March 2010, 04:47 PM
baaNwara ye ma’n mera baar-baar tujhko hi pukaare…
jahaN bhi ho chale aao tum, to'd aao baNdhan saare… sooni tujh bin jeewan ki raaheN, pheeke saare nazaare… bhav-saagar hi tar jauN maiN jo ho tu sa'ng humaare…! saath tera hai khushboo jaisa, mehka de jo jeewan bagiya… mrig_trishna si bhatkan mujhko, aao ban jao mere sahaare…! kehte haiN jag maaya saari, tan ma’n naacheN iske ishaare… tujh se hoN gar maaya ke baNdhan, lagna chaahe kaun kinaare…? paaoN tere dho kar pee luN, ek saaNs meiN sadiyaaN jee luN… aisa karuN kya, batla to mujhko, le aauN kya to'd aMbar se tare…? chaNdar thaal me bhoj sajauN, apne haathoN tujhe khilaauN… tujh meiN hi rab dikhta hai mujhko, maiN balihaari jauN ti'haare…! le jaauN tujhe maiN aisi jagha, thaNdi chalti ho hawa jahaN… amaltaas ke pe'doN ke neeche behte hoN nadiyaa ke dhaare…! jo sun'ta ho kahiN tera khuda, wo aaj sun le baat humaari…! yaar bina nahi jeena hai humko, u's bin laageN sab sukh khaare…!!! Kaise hein aap, Vikram Bhaiya...? Kayi baar parhaa hai humne aapki yaha shaayri aur har baar waah ke saath aah bhi nikla dil se...! Bhasha par aapki mastery bahut khoob raha...! Tah-e-dil se daad swikaar karein aur apna khayaal rakhein, ok...? Duaaon ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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24th March 2010, 08:17 PM
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25th March 2010, 12:54 AM
le jaauN tujhe maiN aisi jagha, thaNdi chalti ho hawa jahaN…
amaltaas ke pe'doN ke neeche behte hoN nadiyaa ke dhaare…! khoob aur bhut khoob ehsaas bhut acha likha hai Vikram aapne, daad hazir hai qubool keejiye, likhte rahiye aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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25th March 2010, 09:21 PM
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i'se padhne aur sarhaane ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya.....aap ki daad sar-maathe bhaiya..... aap bhi apna khoob achhi tarha khayal rakheN...... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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27th March 2010, 07:10 PM
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