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Love waada - 1st July 2010, 12:19 PM


karke ye waada lo main chali
khila ke man me ek pyari si kali
karke ab unko kuch dikhana hai
jinke aangan me main ab tak pali

jinho ne kia hai ehsaan ye mujhpe
bhar diya hai har pal me rang mere
un ehsaano ka badla naa de paun
jo diye beshumar pyar ke ghere

har pal karte pyar jo mujhse
dekhe mujhe pyar se har ghadi
karke kuch ab unko dikhana hai
jinke aangan me main ab tak pali

jo karke roshni dikhayen manzil
bahon k ghere me rakhe har dam
vo puri karen meri sari hasrate
vo lele hum se khud pe har gam

sang rhe mere har pal har ghadi

karke ye waada lo main chali
khila ke man me ek pyari si kali
karke ab unko kuch dikhana hai
jinke aangan me main ab tak pali




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wah ek beti ka apne ghawaaloN ke prati sneh bahut ahchi tarah chitrit kiya hai, bas yahi kahunga ehsashon ko lafz deti raheN, haaN jabardasti rhyming ki kosish kabhi mat kijiyega...!! bahut ahche, aage v yuNhi likhti rahiye....!!



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Bahut khubsurat
Daad hazir hai............................

shukriya g..............


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wah ek beti ka apne ghawaaloN ke prati sneh bahut ahchi tarah chitrit kiya hai, bas yahi kahunga ehsashon ko lafz deti raheN, haaN jabardasti rhyming ki kosish kabhi mat kijiyega...!! bahut ahche, aage v yuNhi likhti rahiye....!!


thanks ghayal ji...............


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thnxx taish ji.......................................


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very nice gazal......bahut acha likha tumne
   
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very nice gazal......bahut acha likha tumne

thnxx very much sister............................................ ...so aaj kal khan ho.......................


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karke ye waada lo main chali
khila ke man me ek pyari si kali
karke ab unko kuch dikhana hai
jinke aangan me main ab tak pali

jinho ne kia hai ehsaan ye mujhpe
bhar diya hai har pal me rang mere
un ehsaano ka badla naa de paun
jo diye beshumar pyar ke ghere

har pal karte pyar jo mujhse
dekhe mujhe pyar se har ghadi
karke kuch ab unko dikhana hai
jinke aangan me main ab tak pali

jo karke roshni dikhayen manzil
bahon k ghere me rakhe har dam
vo puri karen meri sari hasrate
vo lele hum se khud pe har gam

sang rhe mere har pal har ghadi

karke ye waada lo main chali
khila ke man me ek pyari si kali
karke ab unko kuch dikhana hai
jinke aangan me main ab tak pali


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