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Pyar apna bhi kuchh kam na tha -
2nd September 2004, 01:43 PM
Jamaane ko shikaayat hi rahi hamse
Or ham bhi inkaar na kar paaye… Ye sacch hai ke mohobbat to ki hamne Per uski had se, gujar na paaye… Log kis.se sunaate hi rahe hamko Majnu, RaaNjhoN ki mohobbat ke.. Apne hausle bhi kuchh kam na the lekin Ham bas unki khaatir, mar na paaye, Wo kehte hi rahe isko buzdili apni JubaaN se kuchh na kaha wo waqt na tha apna, Jigar tha chhalni or sard thi hawaaeiN bhi Khole ke apna jigar unki nazar,kar na paaye Haq or ummeed jata rakkhi thi har apne ne… Kasam hamne bhi, nibhane ki kha rakkhi thi, Unki raahoN se juda hoti rahi raaheiN apni Wo bhi jaldi me the, ham unko jakad na paaye. Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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2nd September 2004, 01:53 PM
Hi Chaand Ji,
Man that was a powerful nazm. I especially liked these lines Wo kehte hi rahe isko buzdili apni JubaaN se kuchh na kaha wo waqt na tha apna, Jigar tha chhalni or sard thi hawaaeiN bhi Khole ke apna jigar unki nazar,kar na paaye I truly luved it a lot. Thanx 4 postin such a beautiful nazm. Luvs Salim |
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2nd September 2004, 03:37 PM
Chand ji....wah kya shabdo me dhala hai aapne apne dil me chhupi rusvaiyo.n ko...
ab pachhtana kaisa...jab waqt nikal hi gaya.. ab mohobat ka rona kaisa..jab daman haat se chhoot hi gaya.. tab apno ke vado ko nibhane ki kasme thi... aaj samaj ke sang chalne ki mazboori.. tab darte hua man ki dabti mohobbat thi.. aaj umr k badhte daur ki kashmokash.. ab kya sochna ye sab...jab haath me kuchh na raha.. kya mohobat...kya ishq-e-mohobat ka malal jab vaqt hi tumara na raha..... anyways.......tareef kabool kare!! udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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shukriya dostoN -
2nd September 2004, 06:40 PM
ji....shukriya, salim ji...or Udas ji...aap donoN ka hi...sach bahut khusi hui aaplogoN se ye reply paakar...
Aap donoN ka hi tahe dil se shukrgujar hai ye Chaand Udas aapka reply sher bhi pasand aaya. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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2nd September 2004, 08:57 PM
Unki raahoN se juda hoti rahi raaheiN apni
Wo bhi jaldi me the, ham unko jakad na paaye. ------------ dil ko dhadkane kaa sabab to diya hota, naa hi to kahata mahboob, puchkar to dekha hota. .................................... it becomes more and more universal. |
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3rd September 2004, 12:12 AM
Chaand ji...
Bahut hi khoobsoorat nazm likhi hai aapne.. sach mein bahut achi lagi.. Woh dard woh ehsaas.. woh khaamoshi aapki... khaamosh reh kar bhi sab bayaan kar gayi yahan.. Apna khayal rakhiye.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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3rd September 2004, 05:17 PM
Chaand sahaab..
Bahoot khooB likha hai aap ne.. Hameshaa ki tarah.. Aaj fir aap ki kaabiliyat se rubaru hona pada.. Hamesha se aap ke qalam ka fan raha hooN mai.. Reply bhale hi na kar paaya hooN par jab bhi nazroN se gujara hai aap ki kabiliyat ko daad diye bina na rah saka.. Bahut hi khoobsoorati se aap ne apne ehsaas ko yahaan par utaara hai.. Wo kehte hi rahe isko buzdili apni JubaaN se kuchh na kaha wo waqt na tha apna, Jigar tha chhalni or sard thi hawaaeiN bhi Khole ke apna jigar unki nazar,kar na paaye HaalaaT! kitna bebas kar deta hai insaan ko.. Likhte rahiye… MayanK |
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3rd September 2004, 10:14 PM
mere chaand,
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4th September 2004, 10:02 AM
Chaand saahab aadaab!
Itne dino baad aapki ye rachna paR kar bohat achha laga.. dil ke jazbaat.. dil ki daastaan... wo kisse pyaar mohabbat ke.. majboori ke, judaii ke.. kitne saral lafzon me bayaan kar diye aapne.. har ek sher me ek kahaani simTi hui hai.. Jamaane ko shikaayat hi rahi hamse Or ham bhi inkaar na kar paaye… Ye sacch hai ke mohobbat to ki hamne Per uski had se, gujar na paaye… Aji pyaar ki koi hadh.. koi seema... hoti kahaan hain?? pyaar ki sarhad nahi hoti.. uska to kshitij hota hai.. Log kis.se sunaate hi rahe hamko Majnu, RaaNjhoN ki mohobbat ke.. Apne hausle bhi kuchh kam na the lekin Ham bas unki khaatir, mar na paaye, Hmmm.. mar kar amar hone ki baat?? Marrne ke liye jaan se jaana zaroori nahi.. kaii log mohabbat kikhaatir ji ji kar marte hain. Wo kehte hi rahe isko buzdili apni JubaaN se kuchh na kaha wo waqt na tha apna, Jigar tha chhalni or sard thi hawaaeiN bhi Khole ke apna jigar unki nazar,kar na paaye Waqt.. haalaat.. TooTne ka darr.. naa jaane kitni zanjeerein jakaRti hain is dil ko.. Haq or ummeed jata rakkhi thi har apne ne… Kasam hamne bhi, nibhane ki kha rakkhi thi, Unki raahoN se juda hoti rahi raaheiN apni Wo bhi jaldi me the, ham unko jakad na paaye. Aap unke liye mar nahi paaye...Wo aapke liye ruk nahi paaye.. ab aap bhi unse shikaayat kar sakte hain.. Mohabbat hai hi aisi shay... har rekha dhundhli si.. Bohat khoob chaand ji.. Yunhi likhte rahiyega!  |
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Shukriya dostoN -
4th September 2004, 12:21 PM
dil ko dhadkane kaa sabab to diya hota,
naa hi to kahata mahboob, puchkar to dekha hota. Paplupopat ji...aapke is reply ke liye tahe dil se shukriya....sahi kaha aapne....naa hi to kehte...poochhkar to dekha hota.... mai kuchh yooN kahooNga... Phir koi chehra na bhaya...Itni Nihara unko Mere Bachpan ne, jawani ne bhi..Pukara unko, Ik jamane ne nigaahoN me parhi...DaastaaN apni... Wo mere paas rehe phir bhi...nakara hamko. **** Ham apne haath bhi faila deta... Ye nazrieN bhi kuchh jhuka dete... Per unke iraade na the kuchh dene kei.. Tumhi kaho phir unhe, sab keise bata dete. Chaand Shukriya Priya....aap dost haiN na...so....hum.mat bani rehti hai dard sehne ki or muskuraate rehne ki..tahe dil se shukrgujaar. Chaand Anjana saahab....ye jo izaat bakshi hai na aapne mujhe mere liye bahut bada Iinaam hai...mai kuchh bhi nahi dostoN...ye aap sab ka pyar hai jo yaahaN milta hai so koshishieN karta rehta hooN....umeed rehegi aage bhi aapse...isi taraah saath rehne ki. Chaand Meena ji............... Aapka Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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Shukriya Afshan -
4th September 2004, 12:40 PM
Shukriya Afshan....tahe dil se shukriya....achchha laga...aapka ye achchhe se vyakhya(explained)kiya reply parhkar..
Sahi kaha hai aapne iski had nahi hoti....per hoti hai na...shaayad maut....jamaana to yahi maanta hai...or ham ise kabhi na maan paaye chaahe ye hamari buzdili ho ya kuchh or...yahaaN aap sahi haiN...ki....marne me kya rak.kha hai jeena badi baat hai... Aap unke liye mar nahi paaye...Wo aapke liye ruk nahi paaye.. ab aap bhi unse shikaayat kar sakte hain.. Mohabbat hai hi aisi shay... har rekha dhundhli si.. Shikaayat ...!....ab chhodiye ye shikwe gile...kuchh haasil na hoga..kyoNki hame to ye adhikaar bhi nahi diya unhone.. Aapka reply parha...bahut achchha laga...aap sath rahee mere in khayaalat me. ...ye badi baat hai...Shukriya. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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