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26th January 2008, 01:46 AM
Humesha muskarata hoon mai tab bhi,
Jab koi meri zindagi ka afsana jala deta hai.
Dard ko bhi seh leta hoon tab,
Jab koi dard dene ka bahana bana leta hai.
Os ki boonde girne mai aawaz to nahi hoti jab,
Chand ki judai mai Raat sisakti hai chupke chupke
Mai bhi thoda ro leta hoon tab,
Jab Koi apna hi begana bana deta hai.
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26th January 2008, 01:57 AM
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tu ful hai gulab ka aur
main aashiq hu tere shabab ka
teri tasveer mere dil me hai
kya fayda phir tere naqab ka
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Jis galti se mai zindagi bhar ki khushiya luta baitha.
Apne hathon se hi har niyamat thukra baitha.
Seher to pagal tha jisne ye galti ki thi.
Krenil bhi gum hua gulab aur naqab k shaba mai,
Kya ye pagal bhi yahi galti to nahi kar baitha
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26th January 2008, 02:58 PM
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This one is for Krenil
Jis galti se mai zindagi bhar ki khushiya luta baitha.
Apne hathon se hi har niyamat thukra baitha.
Seher to pagal tha jisne ye galti ki thi.
Krenil bhi gum hua gulab aur naqab k shaba mai,
Kya ye pagal bhi yahi galti to nahi kar baitha
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pyar karne wale galati se bhi kabhi galati nahi karte hai
dil me basne wale kabhi dil toda nahi karte hai
krenil ko bhi pyar huva hai
per use pyar karne wale krenil ko izhaar nahi karte hai
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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26th January 2008, 03:01 PM
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Humesha muskarata hoon mai tab bhi,
Jab koi meri zindagi ka afsana jala deta hai.
Dard ko bhi seh leta hoon tab,
Jab koi dard dene ka bahana bana leta hai.
Os ki boonde girne mai aawaz to nahi hoti jab,
Chand ki judai mai Raat sisakti hai chupke chupke
Mai bhi thoda ro leta hoon tab,
Jab Koi apna hi begana bana deta hai.
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jindagi me humesha sikyat rahi hai
logo ko humesha uski fariyad rahi hai
magar pyar karne walo ko kon samajta hai
isi liye to duniya me hum pyar karne walo ki humesha khami rahi
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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26th January 2008, 07:17 PM
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This one is for Krenil
Jis galti se mai zindagi bhar ki khushiya luta baitha.
Apne hathon se hi har niyamat thukra baitha.
Seher to pagal tha jisne ye galti ki thi.
Krenil bhi gum hua gulab aur naqab k shaba mai,
Kya ye pagal bhi yahi galti to nahi kar baitha
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wah wah wah dost kya kahi hai
khuda jane use uska jamir kya jawab de gaya
lagta hai khuda bhi use apni khudai de gaya
hum taraste rahe har lamha unki wafai ko
aur wo hame jaise har lamhe ki bewafai de gaya
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26th January 2008, 07:34 PM
Adab !!!
LAMHA jee k liye
Who aya tha kuch lainy mager kuch soghat day gya
jee loon mai us pal ko who akhri mulaqat day gya
meri zindagi thi jiasy bus whohi aik LAMHA ...
Khud to chala gya or mujhy andheri raat day gya
Regards
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26th January 2008, 08:02 PM
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Aaj tera naqab hat jayet o accha hai,
Aaj raaz ye khul jaye to accha hai,
bura mai kum hoon ya tere ilzaam jada hai,
Aaj ye beet pata chal jaye to accha hai.
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Quote:
Originally Posted by shab_seher
Humesha muskarata hoon mai tab bhi,
Jab koi meri zindagi ka afsana jala deta hai.
Dard ko bhi seh leta hoon tab,
Jab koi dard dene ka bahana bana leta hai.
Os ki boonde girne mai aawaz to nahi hoti jab,
Chand ki judai mai Raat sisakti hai chupke chupke
Mai bhi thoda ro leta hoon tab,
Jab Koi apna hi begana bana deta hai.
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Quote:
Originally Posted by shab_seher
This one is for Krenil
Jis galti se mai zindagi bhar ki khushiya luta baitha.
Apne hathon se hi har niyamat thukra baitha.
Seher to pagal tha jisne ye galti ki thi.
Krenil bhi gum hua gulab aur naqab k shaba mai,
Kya ye pagal bhi yahi galti to nahi kar baitha
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wahhhhhhhh SEHER.....acha likha hai aapne....
fizayein rukti hai un rahon par,jinse hum guzre,
ghatayein aaj bhi juk kar salaam karti hai,
har ek shab ye suna hai, falak se kuch pariyan,
wafaa ka chand hamare hi naam karti hai............
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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26th January 2008, 08:05 PM
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pyar karne wale galati se bhi kabhi galati nahi karte hai
dil me basne wale kabhi dil toda nahi karte hai
krenil ko bhi pyar huva hai
per use pyar karne wale krenil ko izhaar nahi karte hai
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Quote:
Originally Posted by dineshdharvi
jindagi me humesha sikyat rahi hai
logo ko humesha uski fariyad rahi hai
magar pyar karne walo ko kon samajta hai
isi liye to duniya me hum pyar karne walo ki humesha khami rahi
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bahut khub DINESH..........
pyaar chupta nahi aankhen jukane se,
dil rukta nahi kisi ke samjane se,
ruk jati hai saanse unhe bhul jane se,
hum unhe yaad karte hai jeene ke bahane se.......
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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26th January 2008, 08:11 PM
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wah wah wah dost kya kahi hai
khuda jane use uska jamir kya jawab de gaya
lagta hai khuda bhi use apni khudai de gaya
hum taraste rahe har lamha unki wafai ko
aur wo hame jaise har lamhe ki bewafai de gaya
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bahut khub KRENIL.............
YE RAHA AAP KA JAWAAB...........
ek khushi ki chah me har khushi se dur hue hum,
kisi se kuch keh bhi na sake itne majboor hue hum,
na aayi unhe nibhani pyaar me wafaa,
aur zamane ki nazar me bewafaa ke naam se mashhoor hue hum..............
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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26th January 2008, 08:16 PM
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Adab !!!
LAMHA jee k liye
Who aya tha kuch lainy mager kuch soghat day gya
jee loon mai us pal ko who akhri mulaqat day gya
meri zindagi thi jiasy bus whohi aik LAMHA ...
Khud to chala gya or mujhy andheri raat day gya
Regards
Mujeeb
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bahut acha likha hai MUJEEB...........
kaash koi hum pe bhi pyaar jatata,
hamari aankho ko apne hathon se chupata,
hum jab poochte ki "kaun ho tum?",
muskura kar wo apne aap ko hamari jaan batata.....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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26th January 2008, 08:48 PM
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bahut khub KRENIL.............
YE RAHA AAP KA JAWAAB...........
ek khushi ki chah me har khushi se dur hue hum,
kisi se kuch keh bhi na sake itne majboor hue hum,
na aayi unhe nibhani pyaar me wafaa,
aur zamane ki nazar me bewafaa ke naam se mashhoor hue hum..............
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kya baat hai lamha
ye dil nadan tujhe kya hua hai
aakhir is darde dil ki dawa kya hai
hum ko unse hai wafa ki ummid
jo nahi jante hai ki wafa kya hai
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26th January 2008, 09:29 PM
muaaf kerna hamien ! hum pyar ko jata na paey
ho ap jan hamari mager apko hi bata nhi paey
yad hai sherma ker apka nazer jhukata howa "LAMHA"
apki nazer na jhuky isliye hum apni nazer utha nhi paey
I hope you will like this
Regards
Mujeeb
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27th January 2008, 01:23 PM
Adab !!!
Dosto Dilon se Dil milaey rakhna
yadon ko seeny mai basay rakhna
hum rahien ya chor jaien mehfil apki
app mehfil-e-shama jalaey rakhna
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27th January 2008, 08:14 PM
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Adab !!!
Dosto Dilon se Dil milaey rakhna
yadon ko seeny mai basay rakhna
hum rahien ya chor jaien mehfil apki
app mehfil-e-shama jalaey rakhna
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wah yaar kya baat hai
kuch kahete hai pyaar barbad karta hai
kuch kahete hai pyaar me sukh milta hai
magar hum kahete hai pyaar sawar deta hai
pyaar janwar ko insaan bana deta hai
pyaar ke bina to ye duniya adhuri hai
jisne pyaar na kiya usne kuch na kiya hai
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27th January 2008, 10:50 PM
Adab !!!
Aslam u alaikum !
Sab se pehly mai app sab ka shukriya ada kerna chahta hoon k app sab ne mil ker is prewar ko acha banaya howa . agay bhi koshish kerty rahiye ga yeh privar juda rahy ga . mager intahai nadamat k saath mai app sab dosto ko Alvida keh ker jaa rha hoon janta hoon k yeh mehfil k adab mai nhi hai mager ab yahan rehna bhi bas mai nhi hai ager mujh se koi ghalti ho gai hoo to plz muaaf ker dijyee ga
yahan se jany ki koi wajah nhi hai mager ab yahan rukny ka koi sabab bhi to nhi hai. apni duao mai yad rakhiye ga .
Alvida Dostoo!
Dosto Dilon se Dil milaey rakhna
yadon ko seeny mai basay rakhna
hum rahien ya chor jaien mehfil apki
app mehfil-e-shama jalaey rakhna
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28th January 2008, 10:19 PM
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Adab !!!
Aslam u alaikum !
Sab se pehly mai app sab ka shukriya ada kerna chahta hoon k app sab ne mil ker is prewar ko acha banaya howa . agay bhi koshish kerty rahiye ga yeh privar juda rahy ga . mager intahai nadamat k saath mai app sab dosto ko Alvida keh ker jaa rha hoon janta hoon k yeh mehfil k adab mai nhi hai mager ab yahan rehna bhi bas mai nhi hai ager mujh se koi ghalti ho gai hoo to plz muaaf ker dijyee ga
yahan se jany ki koi wajah nhi hai mager ab yahan rukny ka koi sabab bhi to nhi hai. apni duao mai yad rakhiye ga .
Alvida Dostoo!
Dosto Dilon se Dil milaey rakhna
yadon ko seeny mai basay rakhna
hum rahien ya chor jaien mehfil apki
app mehfil-e-shama jalaey rakhna
Regards
Mujeeb
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dost humara koi hak bhi nahi hai jo hum apko wajah puch sakte ki app kyu jaa rahe ho per itna dost jarur kahuga apko ki app jaha bhi ho humesha khush raho. kash hum apki vajah jaan paate ke app kyu jaa rahe ho
Khuda na kare apko koi gam milay Khushiya or hasi har dum milay. Jab bhi kabhi gum apki aur badhay Khuda kare raastey mai usay hum milay.
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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29th January 2008, 01:04 AM
HI friends
i came after a long time and so happy read all of you i try to say something from my side i wish you all would like it.
Ajeeb si kashish hai hum dono ke dil mein,
Jo ek duje ke yaadon mein hum dono khoye rehate hai,
Dilon par to pyar se pyar ki huqumat hai,
Bas dur rehakar bhi yahi ek dastane zindagi ji rahe hai.
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29th January 2008, 09:28 PM
Bahut umda likha hai aapne
ek sher pesh karta hoon kabool kariyega
Koyi ruth jaye mujhse,uske liye bhi khata chaiye;
Zindagi jeene ke liye bhi mujhe wajah chahiye.
Seher bura nahi utna ,Jitna zamana sochta hai;
Ab mujhe bhi apne zakhmon ki dava chahiye.
Tu mujhse bewafa ho jaye,ye ho nahi sakta,
Naye zakhm se pehle jism pe bhi jagah chahiye.
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29th January 2008, 09:31 PM
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HI friends
i came after a long time and so happy read all of you i try to say something from my side i wish you all would like it.
Ajeeb si kashish hai hum dono ke dil mein,
Jo ek duje ke yaadon mein hum dono khoye rehate hai,
Dilon par to pyar se pyar ki huqumat hai,
Bas dur rehakar bhi yahi ek dastane zindagi ji rahe hai.
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wel come back to SDC........
bahut acha likha hai aap ne................
wo to paani ki bund hai ,jo aankhon se beh jaye,
aansoo to wo hai jo tadap ke aankhon me hi reh jaye,
wo pyaar hi kya jo lafzon me bayaan ho,
pyaar to wo hai jo aankhon me nazar aaye........
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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29th January 2008, 09:36 PM
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Originally Posted by Mushkan
HI friends
i came after a long time and so happy read all of you i try to say something from my side i wish you all would like it.
Ajeeb si kashish hai hum dono ke dil mein,
Jo ek duje ke yaadon mein hum dono khoye rehate hai,
Dilon par to pyar se pyar ki huqumat hai,
Bas dur rehakar bhi yahi ek dastane zindagi ji rahe hai.
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tumse dur hokar jiya nahi jayega
koi puche vajah to humse bataya nahi jayega
karte hai hum apse itna pyar
ki ab koi aur humari jindagi me aaya nahi jayega
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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29th January 2008, 09:40 PM
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Bahut umda likha hai aapne
ek sher pesh karta hoon kabool kariyega
Koyi ruth jaye mujhse,uske liye bhi khata chaiye;
Zindagi jeene ke liye bhi mujhe wajah chahiye.
Seher bura nahi utna ,Jitna zamana sochta hai;
Ab mujhe bhi apne zakhmon ki dava chahiye.
Tu mujhse bewafa ho jaye,ye ho nahi sakta,
Naye zakhm se pehle jism pe bhi jagah chahiye.
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wah dost bahut khub kafi acha likha hai appne
Kuch to baat hai jo aap hamse kahe nahi sakte,
Kuch to dard hai jo ap seh nahi sakte,
Hamein itna bhi paraya na samjo,
Jo ye bate hamse kar bhi nahi sakte.
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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29th January 2008, 11:49 PM
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wah dost bahut khub kafi acha likha hai appne
Kuch to baat hai jo aap hamse kahe nahi sakte,
Kuch to dard hai jo ap seh nahi sakte,
Hamein itna bhi paraya na samjo,
Jo ye bate hamse kar bhi nahi sakte.
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gulab ko bhi kamal bana dete
uski ek ada pe koi gazal bana dete
marti nahi hai muj par yaha ki ladkiya
varna usa me bhi "taj mahal" bana dete
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30th January 2008, 09:44 PM
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gulab ko bhi kamal bana dete
uski ek ada pe koi gazal bana dete
marti nahi hai muj par yaha ki ladkiya
varna usa me bhi "taj mahal" bana dete
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gulab ko kabhi kamal kehte nahi hai
kisi ki ada ko kabhi gazal kehte nahi hai
marti hai har kisi per ladkiya
per usko log kabhi pyar nahi kehte
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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31st January 2008, 09:10 PM
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gulab ko kabhi kamal kehte nahi hai
kisi ki ada ko kabhi gazal kehte nahi hai
marti hai har kisi per ladkiya
per usko log kabhi pyar nahi kehte
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bahut khub DINESH...................
apni aankhon ke samundar me utar jane de,
teri mujrim hoo mai,muje doob ke mar jane de,
zakham kitne teri chahat se mile hai mujko,
sochti hoo kahoon tuj se...magar jaane de.......
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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1st February 2008, 01:15 PM
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bahut khub DINESH...................
apni aankhon ke samundar me utar jane de,
teri mujrim hoo mai,muje doob ke mar jane de,
zakham kitne teri chahat se mile hai mujko,
sochti hoo kahoon tuj se...magar jaane de.......
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meri ankho ka samudar kaha itna gehra hai
jo app isme doob jaayenge,
humne kabhi nahi kaha apko ki app humare mujrim hai
fir appne kese soch liya ki hum apko bhool jaayenge
kya hai kasoor humara batado hume
taki wahi raah per hum fir se kabhi nahi jayenge
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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5th February 2008, 11:44 PM
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meri ankho ka samudar kaha itna gehra hai
jo app isme doob jaayenge,
humne kabhi nahi kaha apko ki app humare mujrim hai
fir appne kese soch liya ki hum apko bhool jaayenge
kya hai kasoor humara batado hume
taki wahi raah per hum fir se kabhi nahi jayenge
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wah dost kya khub kaha hai
ajib si kasis hai hum dono ke dil me
jo ek duje ki yaado me hum dono khoye rahete hai
dilo par to pyaar se pyaar ki hukumat hai
bas dur rahekar bhi yahi dastane zindagi ji rahe hai
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6th February 2008, 03:50 PM
[quote=krenil;268678]wah dost kya khub kaha hai
ajib si kasis hai hum dono ke dil me
jo ek duje ki yaado me hum dono khoye rahete hai
dilo par to pyaar se pyaar ki hukumat hai
bas dur rahekar bhi yahi dastane zindagi ji rahe hai
dosti karke dost ko khuda nahi kehte hai
pyar karke pyar ko khona nahi kehte hai
har ek ka dil tut jata hai pyar me
tabhi to hum dosti ko apna dost kehte hai
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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7th February 2008, 11:32 AM
Uljhan mai hon usy kya kahon ?
khizan kahon ya bahar kahon ?
poojta hon usy ibadat ki tereh
usy dost kahon ya Khuda kahon ?
I am back to SDC
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7th February 2008, 09:20 PM
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Uljhan mai hon usy kya kahon ?
khizan kahon ya bahar kahon ?
poojta hon usy ibadat ki tereh
usy dost kahon ya Khuda kahon ?
I am back to SDC
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uljan me hi apno aur prayo ki pahchan hoti hai
dil me rehne walo ki baat yaha per hi to bayan hoti hai
jise kehte hai hum dost se badhkar
dosti to humesha khuda se hi naseeb hoti hai
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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7th February 2008, 09:38 PM
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Uljhan mai hon usy kya kahon ?
khizan kahon ya bahar kahon ?
poojta hon usy ibadat ki tereh
usy dost kahon ya Khuda kahon ?
I am back to SDC
Regards
Mujeeb
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welcome back................
dil ki mehfil me wo mukaam hai tumhara,
ke KHUDA ke baad lub par naam hai tumhara......
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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7th February 2008, 09:40 PM
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uljan me hi apno aur prayo ki pahchan hoti hai
dil me rehne walo ki baat yaha per hi to bayan hoti hai
jise kehte hai hum dost se badhkar
dosti to humesha khuda se hi naseeb hoti hai
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bahut khub likha hai DINESH............
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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Sorry for being late -
8th February 2008, 04:31 PM
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Bahut umda likha hai aapne
ek sher pesh karta hoon kabool kariyega
Koyi ruth jaye mujhse,uske liye bhi khata chaiye;
Zindagi jeene ke liye bhi mujhe wajah chahiye.
Seher bura nahi utna ,Jitna zamana sochta hai;
Ab mujhe bhi apne zakhmon ki dava chahiye.
Tu mujhse bewafa ho jaye,ye ho nahi sakta,
Naye zakhm se pehle jism pe bhi jagah chahiye.
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Adab !
janab app ne to kamal ki shayri likhi hai ........sorry for being late mai waqt per dad na day saka , mager app k is sher ne mujhy lajawab ker diya hai .mai app ka muqabla ker hi nahi sakta mager aik choti se kavish app k samny hazir ker rha hon
who mujhse routh gai meri koi khata to na thi
chali gai door bahut mager dil se juda to na thi
ro ro k ghayal dil , ye tasli deta rha "Mujeeb"
zara soch pagly ! yeh uski koi ada to na thi ?
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yeh kya Ho gya -
8th February 2008, 04:55 PM
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welcome back................
dil ki mehfil me wo mukaam hai tumhara,
ke KHUDA ke baad lub par naam hai tumhara......
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Adab!!!
Shukriya LAMHA jee ...
ab is sher k bad mery pass koi jawab nhi hai k is ka taslasul jari rakhon.mager phir bhi koshsih kerta hon
sawaliya shayri hai shayad is liye pasand na aye mager mujh se jawab nhi likha ja rha
ya KHUDA mery chahny waly ko kya ho gya ?
mai uska hon naKhuda ! who mujhse juda ho gya?
aisi bhi kon se khata ker baitha hai "Mujeeb"
who ho gya sharab ka or gher uska maikda ho gya?
Regards
Mujeeb
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aik nadan koshish -
8th February 2008, 05:05 PM
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uljan me hi apno aur prayo ki pahchan hoti hai
dil me rehne walo ki baat yaha per hi to bayan hoti hai
jise kehte hai hum dost se badhkar
dosti to humesha khuda se hi naseeb hoti hai
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adab !!!
Denish mai app ko kabhi jawab nhi day paya mager aj koshish kerta hon
jaisa app ne likha k uljhan mai sab ki pehchan hoti hai is liye mai ne likha kon chahata hai apno ya piyaro mai pehchan . or dil mai rehny walo k bat ko bayan na kero
kisko apno or piyaroo ki pechan ho ?
dil mai rehny walon ki bat q bayan ho ?
mujhy to hai sirf aik hi khuwahish
mai uska poojari or who mera bhagwan ho .
regards
Mujeeb
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8th February 2008, 07:03 PM
opper likha ho hai "piyaro ki pehchan"
wo piyaroo nhi hai balkeh "Prayon " hai
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8th February 2008, 07:30 PM
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Adab !
janab app ne to kamal ki shayri likhi hai ........sorry for being late mai waqt per dad na day saka , mager app k is sher ne mujhy lajawab ker diya hai .mai app ka muqabla ker hi nahi sakta mager aik choti se kavish app k samny hazir ker rha hon
who mujhse routh gai meri koi khata to na thi
chali gai door bahut mager dil se juda to na thi
ro ro k ghayal dil , ye tasli deta rha "Mujeeb"
zara soch pagly ! yeh uski koi ada to na thi ?
Regards
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wahhhhhhhhh bahut khub likha hai MUJEEB....dad kabul farmaye...
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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8th February 2008, 07:46 PM
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Adab!!!
Shukriya LAMHA jee ...
ab is sher k bad mery pass koi jawab nhi hai k is ka taslasul jari rakhon.mager phir bhi koshsih kerta hon
sawaliya shayri hai shayad is liye pasand na aye mager mujh se jawab nhi likha ja rha
ya KHUDA mery chahny waly ko kya ho gya ?
mai uska hon naKhuda ! who mujhse juda ho gya?
aisi bhi kon se khata ker baitha hai "Mujeeb"
who ho gya sharab ka or gher uska maikda ho gya?
Regards
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bahut acha sher hai MUJEEB......
aap ke is sher ka jawaab dene ki koshish karungi.....
gaur farmaiye......
raat gumsum hai magar chand khamosh nahi,
kaise keh du ki aaj fir hosh nahi,
aisi dubi teri aankhon ki gehrai me,
haath me jaam hai magar pine ka hosh nahi........
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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8th February 2008, 07:49 PM
[quote=dineshdharvi;268794]
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wah dost kya khub kaha hai
ajib si kasis hai hum dono ke dil me
jo ek duje ki yaado me hum dono khoye rahete hai
dilo par to pyaar se pyaar ki hukumat hai
bas dur rahekar bhi yahi dastane zindagi ji rahe hai
dosti karke dost ko khuda nahi kehte hai
pyar karke pyar ko khona nahi kehte hai
har ek ka dil tut jata hai pyar me
tabhi to hum dosti ko apna dost kehte hai
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kabhi dost kahete hai kabhi dua dete hai
kabhi bewaqt neend se jaga dete hai
par jab bhi phone karte hai hame
khuda ki kasam zindagi ke sare gum bhula dete hai
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8th February 2008, 07:50 PM
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adab !!!
Denish mai app ko kabhi jawab nhi day paya mager aj koshish kerta hon
jaisa app ne likha k uljhan mai sab ki pehchan hoti hai is liye mai ne likha kon chahata hai apno ya piyaro mai pehchan . or dil mai rehny walo k bat ko bayan na kero
kisko apno or piyaroo ki pechan ho ?
dil mai rehny walon ki bat q bayan ho ?
mujhy to hai sirf aik hi khuwahish
mai uska poojari or who mera bhagwan ho .
regards
Mujeeb
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wahhhhhhhhhhhh
dard se dosti ho gayi yaaro,
zindagi be-dard ho gayi yaaro,
kya hua jo jal gaya aashiyan hamara,
dur tak roshni to gayi yaaro........(NM)
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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8th February 2008, 08:03 PM
[quote=krenil;269451]
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kabhi dost kahete hai kabhi dua dete hai
kabhi bewaqt neend se jaga dete hai
par jab bhi phone karte hai hame
khuda ki kasam zindagi ke sare gum bhula dete hai
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arey wahhhhhhhhh KRENIL.....kya baat hai yaar......
gunaah karke sazaa se darte hai,
zeher pee ke ab davaa se darte hai,
dushmano ke sitam ka khof nahi,
hum to doston ki wafaa se darte hai.........
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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