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Love wahi chand hai,wahi sitare - 6th July 2003, 05:36 PM

Wahi chand hai, wahi sitare
Simmat rahi hai raat unmein ,jo ban rahe hai nazare.
Badli hai nazar ya badle hai jazbaat hamare,
Ya badal diye jazbaat kisi ki nazar ne hamare.
Hai chandini se roshan yeh raat, ya hai unke khayalon ka saath.
Doob rahe hai unke saath bitaye palon mein,
Ya hai khwaish woh bhi hon hamare saath in haseen palon mein.
Shayad woh bhi mehsoos kar rahe hon,
Inhi khayalon ko aapne mann mein.
Aur maang rahe hon in haseen palon se,
kuch palon ke liye humein.






wahi chand hai ,wahi sitare
gawah hai hamare, kaise badle nazare.
   
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hi - 6th July 2003, 05:52 PM

VERY GOOD STUFF
CARRY ON

KON KEHTA HAI KI PYAAR PURA HOTA HAI
YAARON ISKA TO PEHLA ACHSHAR BHI ADHURAA HOTA HAI
   
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waah - 6th July 2003, 06:38 PM

surbhi,
bahot hi achhi rachna.....
   
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HI - 6th July 2003, 07:05 PM

MEENA AUNTI AAPNE MERE SHAYER PAR
KOI COMMENT NAHI DIYA
SEE "JUDAAI"
   
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thanks - 7th July 2003, 01:01 AM

hello meena ji,
i am very thankful to u for replying in such an encouraging manner. it feels good when i read ur replies
thanks again
   
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HI - 7th July 2003, 05:24 AM

OYE SURBHI JI
YAAR MAINE BHI TO COMMENT DIYA HAI
MERE KO AAP HI HEE BOL DETI
LAKIN AAPNE KUCH NAHI KHAA
YAAR YEH ACHHI BAAT NAHI HAI
ANYWAYS
ALWAYS BE HAPPY
   
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7th July 2003, 06:43 AM

hi surbhi great likha hai WAHI CHAND WAHI SITARE sahi kaha hai apne
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hi - 7th July 2003, 01:57 PM

hi mohit ji,
thanks for posting such a nice reply to wahi chand hai wahi sitare
and humein maaf kar dijiye .

aapne-aapne andaaz hote hai,
jaagti ankhon mein bhi khwaab hote hai,
zaroori nahin gum mein ansoo nikle,
muskurati aankhon min bhi sailab hote hai.

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7th July 2003, 08:11 PM

hi surbhi

that is marvolous!

aur mohitji aap ki do line

"KON KEHTA HAI KI PYAAR PURA HOTA HAI
YAARON ISKA TO PEHLA ACHSHAR BHI ADHURAA HOTA HAI"

apne aap mein puri philosphi boldeti bahut hi pyari line hain ye



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thanks - 9th July 2003, 10:46 PM

hello punnu ji and allahabadrptds
thanks for replying to my wahi chand hai wahi sitare,
in future also hoping similar encouraging responce from u


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good - 10th July 2003, 05:05 PM

Hello surbhi nicely written . keep it up


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kya andaaz hai - 10th July 2003, 08:42 PM

are Surbhi ji,

Aapki is shayari pe to hum fida ho gaye...

"aapne-aapne andaaz hote hai,
jaagti ankhon mein bhi khwaab hote hai,
zaroori nahin gum mein ansoo nikle,
muskurati aankhon min bhi sailab hote hai."

Wah kya likha hai... subhan allah!!


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thanks - 11th July 2003, 02:49 PM

hello
mita ji and rastogi ji
thanks tarif karne ke liye.
thanks reply karne ke liye.


gumein zindagi mein aisa hota hai kabhi-kabhi
hasta hua dil bhi rota hai kabhi-kabhi
kehte hai gumon ko kar do waqt ke hawale
waqt bhi zakhmo ko dhota hai kabhi-kabhi
mil jate hai jazbaat do dilon ke
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ahi kaha tumne - 11th July 2003, 02:53 PM

surabhi,
dost sahi kaha tumne....
gumein zindagi mein aisa hota hai kabhi-kabhi
hasta hua dil bhi rota hai kabhi-kabhi
kehte hai gumon ko kar do waqt ke hawale
waqt bhi zakhmo ko dhota hai kabhi-kabhi
mil jate hai jazbaat do dilon ke
par aapna dil bhi dhokha deta hai kabhi-kabhi

maine bhi kabhi yahi jajbaat pash kiyae thhae jo yaad aa gaye...
kahi baar aisa bhi hota hai
khushi k sathh gum bhi hota hai
sara din aap bhid maie raho
aur apne aap ko akela paao
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Re: wahi chand hai,wahi sitare - 11th July 2003, 03:16 PM

wohi chad hai wohi sitare
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