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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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UFF!! tera-mera vo PYAR...!! -
17th December 2012, 10:11 PM
Wo ghaneri julfon ka sehra,
Raat-din tanhaiyon ka pehra.
Us par wo teri nadaan hansi,
Uff!! Tera wo masoom chehra.
Wo teri aankhon ka kehar,
Nashili meethi si ek zeher,
Uska dil ko cheer jana,
Uff!! Teri wo kaatil nazar.
Jisme ghuli amrit haala*,
Saare duniya ki chipi jwala,
Mera pee kar madhosh hona,
Uff!! Teri labon ka pyala.
*sharaab
Jis par ho gaya main fida,
Aur banaya tujhe apna khuda,
Ua par tera wo gale ko jhatakna,
Uff!! Teri kaatilana adaa.
Teri madsoh si jhalak,
Na zameen,na falak,
Us par teri sharmili aankhen,
Uff!! Teri wo jhuki palak.
Kar de jo “taish” ko behaal,
Andhere me ek akeli mashaal.
Us par tera wo kamar lachkana,
Uff!! Wo teri mastaani chaal.
Kabhi karta tha jo hume bekaraar,
Humara ek dooje ko kiya izhaar.
Us par wo tera hume bhulana’
Uff!! Tera-mera vo pyar.
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18th December 2012, 12:44 PM
osssummmmmmmmmm........... waahhhh badi romantic si post hai taish..... maza aaya padhkar... bahot achche flow mw chalti chali gai ye kavita......
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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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18th December 2012, 04:45 PM
shukriya mohtarmaa, jaan kar khushi hui ki aapko kavitaa pasnad aayi, bas yuNhi kosish rahegi ki aap logon ke dil ko lubhaane laayak likh sakuN.....
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18th December 2012, 07:16 PM
wooowww its realy nice... :P
nice tareef khush ho jaegi wo read krke
If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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18th December 2012, 11:21 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Taish
Wo ghaneri julfon ka sehra,
Raat-din tanhaiyon ka pehra.
Us par wo teri nadaan hansi,
Uff!! Tera wo masoom chehra.
Wo teri aankhon ka kehar,
Nashili meethi si ek zeher,
Uska dil ko cheer jana,
Uff!! Teri wo kaatil nazar.
Jisme ghuli amrit haala*,
Saare duniya ki chipi jwala,
Mera pee kar madhosh hona,
Uff!! Teri labon ka pyala.
*sharaab
Jis par ho gaya main fida,
Aur banaya tujhe apna khuda,
Ua par tera wo gale ko jhatakna,
Uff!! Teri kaatilana adaa.
Teri madsoh si jhalak,
Na zameen,na falak,
Us par teri sharmili aankhen,
Uff!! Teri wo jhuki palak.
Kar de jo “taish” ko behaal,
Andhere me ek akeli mashaal.
Us par tera wo kamar lachkana,
Uff!! Wo teri mastaani chaal.
Kabhi karta tha jo hume bekaraar,
Humara ek dooje ko kiya izhaar.
Us par wo tera hume bhulana’
Uff!! Tera-mera vo pyar.
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wow taish ji aa hi gaye aakhir taish mein or taish taish mein kya khoob likha hai khush raho or taish mein bhi
Rashmi Sharma
path par kaante bahut hain tere
par manjil par jaana too.ne
dar na jatilata se jeewan ki
isko saral banana too.ne
pasat na hone paye honsle
khud ka sahas khud hi juta le
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19th December 2012, 09:40 AM
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Originally Posted by gazzal
wooowww its realy nice... :P
nice tareef khush ho jaegi wo read krke
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gazzal ji tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya, par kyun badnaam kar rahi ho maidam ji...?? kaun hai jo padh ke khush ho jaayegi, mujhe bhi to batana jara sa, maiN bhi to miluN zara unse.... :P
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19th December 2012, 10:08 AM
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Originally Posted by Taish
gazzal ji tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya, par kyun badnaam kar rahi ho maidam ji...?? kaun hai jo padh ke khush ho jaayegi, mujhe bhi to batana jara sa, maiN bhi to miluN zara unse.... :P
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kisi k liye to likhi hogi na... :P
aese hi thodi ban gyi
If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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19th December 2012, 10:30 AM
sach bataauN to aise hi likhi hai, kaash jo koi hoti, koi ahcha si nazar men ho to dhund ke bataao ji aap log hi.....
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19th December 2012, 11:38 AM
hanji zarur ji...............................
If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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19th December 2012, 11:54 AM
Karde Taish ko jo behaal,
Lucky bhai jarA rakhna apna khayal,
Is kavita mein tune kar diya kamal,
Yehi dua karun tu rahe sada khushhaal.
Kavita per kar mera dil mantramughdh ho gaya
aur aap hamare REPS bhi kabool karen.
sanjay
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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21st December 2012, 08:14 AM
hahahah sanjay ji, aapka bahut bahut shukriya ki aapne is experimental kavita ko padha aur saraaha, umeed karta huN ki aage bhi aapka saath isi qadar milta rahegaa....
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