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apni palkon ke saye mere chehre per cha jane do..... - 16th July 2004, 02:25 PM
apni palkon ke saye mere chehre per cha jane do
anginat rang mere chehre per bikhar jane do

pyas kyun hai ab bhi teri khatir mere dilbar
banke may apne labon ke lab se takrane do

seeney se laga tujhko jee bhar ke pyar kareyin
agosh me mohabbat ki do ghari to pighal jane do

berdasht nahi hoti dermaya ye phasla ab to
behki sanson ko madhosh sans me ghul jane do

tujse milker jal jayegi ye shama jaagi raton ki "sona"
ek ek chahat ko perwane ki tapish me sama jane do

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Love Wah... - 16th July 2004, 03:14 PM
Aankhon se dil mein utarke tu meri saanson mein hain.......yeh gana younhi dil mein aa gaayi thi...ek aur jo subha yaad aayi: Kabhi main kahoun Kabhi tum kahon ke maine tumhein yeh dil dediya*Dard~e~Dil Dard~e~Jigar hum sehte rahe Ek dusre se yehi kehte rahe~maine tumhe yeh dil dediya.......ek aur: Dil dediya hain Jaan tumhein denge Daga nahin karenge sanam~ho Rab Dee Kasam yaara Rab Dee Kasam~insaaf kardou Mujhe mafh kardou itna hi kardou karam.......and the last one: Ab subha na aa paaye Aaon yeh Duwa mange~iss raat ke har pal se raatein hi ubhar jaaye*haalat ke teeron se chhalni hain badan aapne~paas aaon ke sinoke kuch zakm tou bharjaaye*simti houi yeh ghadiya phir se na bikhar jaaye*iss raat mein jiile hum iss raat mein maar jaaye...Bohot khub likhha hain aapne. Dilse nikli houi Daad kubool kijiyega...aur dilse shukriya bhi kubool kijiyega. Younhi likhte rahiyega. Khuda Kare aap ko har khushiya naseeb ho, Ameen. Khush rahiye yeh Duwaon ke sath ijaazat chahoungi. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.

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hi - 16th July 2004, 06:02 PM
tujse milker jal jayegi ye shama jaagi raton ki "sona"
ek ek chahat ko perwane ki tapish me sama jane do

wah swati ji...bahut hi pyar bhari rachna hai ye..padh kar dil khush ho gaya....sach pyar ka ehsaas hi dil mein ajab sa nasha
paida kar deta hai ki bas us mein doob jaane ko man karta hai..
aapki ye rachna bhi kuch aisa hi ehsaas karati hai...
keep it up..
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16th July 2004, 08:16 PM
Dear Swatiji,
kya kahe aap ke bare mai aur manojbhai ke bare mai. koi labz aap ko match nahi kerta. jitna bhi likhe aap do no ke liye utna hi kam hai. bahoot beautiful pyar bhari rachna aap ne likhi hai. plz keep it up.
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hi - 17th July 2004, 02:54 PM
dear shimul ji
hamesha ki tarah daad dene ka ye andaz bahut pasand aaya...aur jo song apne likhey..bahut hi payere aur haseen they,,,,
shukriya..apke in jazbaton ke liye..

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hi - 17th July 2004, 02:56 PM
dear pari...
itni khoobsoorti se ye jo reply diya hai,,uskey liye..bahut shukriya,,,sahi hai,,pyar me dil ke jazbaat bhi behakne aur mehakne lagtey hain,,un hi ehsason ke sath ye likhi thi...

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17th July 2004, 03:02 PM
hello pappu ji
aap ki ye tareef bahut jyada hai,,ab mere pass bhi shabd nahi hain,,ki main apki in bhavnaoo kop bayan ker sakoon,,,!!!han manoj ji ki baat aur hai,,wo is layak hain,,unko..wo mukam hasil ho chuka hai,,per main tto sirf abhi is rah per chalna seekh rahi hoon,,,
khair apne jo mujhe itna samman diya,,uske liye,,dil se shukriya..

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18th July 2004, 02:01 PM
Hello Swati ji,

Ek acchi rachna ke liye daad kubool kijiye. waise to poori rachna hi achhi hai lekin in shero.n ne to dil ko choo liya

seeney se laga tujhko jee bhar ke pyar kareyin
agosh me mohabbat ki do ghari to pighal jane do

berdasht nahi hoti dermaya ye phasla ab to
behki sanson ko madhosh sans me ghul jane do

well written..keep it up

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hi - 18th July 2004, 02:57 PM
hello kavvish ji
apko mere jazbaat pasand aye aur apne use samjha ye hi mere liye kafi hai,,,
apne apne keemti waqt me se jo waqt nikala uske liye apki dil se shukrguzar hoon....

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apni palkon ke saye mere chehre per cha jane do
anginat rang mere chehre per bikhar jane do

pyas kyun hai ab bhi teri khatir mere dilbar
banke may apne labon ke lab se takrane do

seeney se laga tujhko jee bhar ke pyar kareyin
agosh me mohabbat ki do ghari to pighal jane do

berdasht nahi hoti dermaya ye phasla ab to
behki sanson ko madhosh sans me ghul jane do

tujse milker jal jayegi ye shama jaagi raton ki "sona"
ek ek chahat ko perwane ki tapish me sama jane do


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apni palkon ke saye mere chehre per cha jane do
anginat rang mere chehre per bikhar jane do

pyas kyun hai ab bhi teri khatir mere dilbar
banke may apne labon ke lab se takrane do

seeney se laga tujhko jee bhar ke pyar kareyin
agosh me mohabbat ki do ghari to pighal jane do

berdasht nahi hoti dermaya ye phasla ab to
behki sanson ko madhosh sans me ghul jane do

tujse milker jal jayegi ye shama jaagi raton ki "sona"
ek ek chahat ko perwane ki tapish me sama jane do
bahut umda likha hai swati jee.........
aati rahiye..........


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