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1st March 2014, 08:43 AM
dear valuable SDC members.....
jaisa kee aap sabko pata hai aaj saturday hai aur competition ko start karne ka din hai to lijiye is week kee tasveer haazir hai....aap logon se guzarish hai kee apne man kee awwaaz ko shabdon mein piryoein....aur likh dein kuch aisa jaise ye tasveer kee hee aawaaz ho........... aap sab apne post thursday 11:59 pm tak kar sakte hain..... result friday ko announce kiya jayega.  एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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1st March 2014, 10:47 AM
Aru bhai... sabse pahle to main aapko mubaarakbaad denaa chahungaa is kadam ke liye....
bahot hi acchi shuruaat hui hai SDC meiN.... Sabhi members se merii guzaarish hai ke apne acche acche pyaare pyaare kalaam lekar haazir hoN aap sab...... sabko bahot bahot badhaaiyaaN... on behalf of, Team SDC.... |
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1st March 2014, 02:12 PM
nye silsiley ki shuruyaat ke liye dil se mubarakbaad....aur participate karne walo ko best wishes
 god bless u all .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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1st March 2014, 03:42 PM
nyi koshish ko salaam..............................
zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! ===========================  sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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1st March 2014, 08:29 PM
Dil ki gahraaiyon se aapka shukrguzaar hoon Suneeta dee aur Rajeev ji.......
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2nd March 2014, 01:58 PM
subhkaamnaayen. . .
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2nd March 2014, 04:56 PM
Aru bhai ,
Tasveer dekhi aur dil mein utri bhi ....thora clarify karein .. 1. Tasveer ko dekh ker humare dil ne kuch mehsoos kiya vo likhein.I mean tasveer mein bahut kuch hai ,ek larki , ek aansu Aur ladki ke mathe pe bindiya ?!!!!!!! 2. Tasveer humse kuch.kah rahi hai .... is tasveer mein ladki kya mehsoos kar rahi hai viz ..tanhai ,rusvai , ghum aur dard ,un sab ke bare mein likhein 3. Ek se zyada kalam pesh kar sakte hai ek picture per Batao bhai kis pe likhe 1 or 2 ya 1 and 2 both... sanjay sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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2nd March 2014, 05:08 PM
sanjay g.....ek kalaam hee hona chahiye....aur main aapka confusions door kar deta hoon... mujhe lagta hai jo aapka dil mehsoos kar raha hai vo hee tasveer bhi bol rahi hai.....jyada antar nahin hai.... to sochiye mat bas likh daaliye....
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2nd March 2014, 05:35 PM
jab jab sham dhali teri yaad ayi,
teri yaad mein ankh meri bhar ayi. Tanha mujh ko tum chor gaye , ek pal mein kar gaye yun parayi . main yaad karun vo sab shaamein, jo tere sang mil kar thi bitayi. Bin tere mera jiya ab lagta nahin , kaise sahun main itni lambi judai Tere sapno mein yun kho jati hun , jab bhi raat leti hai angrayi. Meri piya daras ki pyasi main , Ab mera dil.bhi ho gaya harjayee. khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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2nd March 2014, 05:48 PM
bahut hee sundar ehsaas sanjay jee..............
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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2nd March 2014, 05:54 PM
Competition ka aagaaz ho gaya hai....... to bhai logon jaldi se aap log bhi apni apni rachnayein post karein ...........
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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3rd March 2014, 10:40 AM
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3rd March 2014, 10:42 AM
ek sawaal mera bhi .......
kya hm yahan koi puraani rachnaa post kr sakte hai, jo pahle SDC pr post ki hui ho ? zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! =========================== sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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3rd March 2014, 10:43 AM
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Sanjay ji....bahut kuch hamare halaat se milta julta likh gye aap... bahut accha likha hai...kalam aapki aur ahsaas hamare lag rhe hai  gd luck .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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3rd March 2014, 11:12 AM
Aah nikaltee rahi aansoon behte rahe
unkee yaadon men armaan machalte rahe Yeh nami aankh bhar kee rahee ho magar gaalon se hoke gham bhee guzarte rahe har shab-e-gham muhabbat kee aisee rahee jaise zulfon ke saaye ho dhalte rahe jo fasaane chhipake rakhe dil men thartharaate labon se nikalte rahe khusiyon ke wo pal ab giraft men kahaan ret ke jaise haathon se girte rahe आह निकलती रही आंसूं बहते रहे उनकी यादों में अरमान मचलते रहे यह नमी आँख भर की रही हो मगर गालों से होके ग़म भी गुज़रते रहे हर शब्-ए-ग़म मुहब्बत की ऐसी रही जैसे ज़ुल्फ़ों के साये हो ढलते रहे जो फ़साने छिपाके रखे दिल में थरथराते लबों से निकलते रहे खुशियों के वो पल अब गिरफ्त में कहां रेट के जैसे हाथों से गिरते रहे ~ Adil "Safeer" ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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3rd March 2014, 11:14 AM
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waah waah.............. ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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Sanjay saahab aadaab... derii se aane ke liye maazrat chahta hoon... kuch kaam ki masruufyat me ulajh gayaa thaa.. ab aata hoon aapek kalaam par, waahhh kyaa bayaani ki hai aapne, aisaa lag raha hai ke tasweer ka saara dard aapne kaaagaz me utaar diyaa ho... bahot hi dil se likhi gai rachnaa hai ye... meri taraf se dher saari shubh kaamnaaeN aapko.... Shaad.... |
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Bhai aapka sawaal jaayaz hai, aapki tarah ye sawaal kai members ke dil me uThtaa hoga ke kyaa hum is pratiyogitaa me koi apna pahlaa likha hua kalaam psot kar deiN jo yahaan fit baithe yaa fir kalam ko dauDaaeN kisii nai kavitaa ki taraf... Dekhen bhai is baat ka jawaab main aapko zaraa tafseel me denaa chahungaa, ke aisaa koi niyam to nahi hai ke aapko nayaa hi kalaam likhnaa pade, agar bahot hi zyaada majboori na ho to meri aap sab se raay hai ke aap sab is nai shuruaat ke saath koi nai rachnaa prastut kareN... Agar puraani rachnaa prastut karte hain to ho saktaa hai uskaa attraction thodaa kam ho jaae, ye bhi ho sakta hai ke members us puraani rachna ko padh chuke hon aur unhe talaash kisii nai kavita ka ho aur wo ehsaas wo kisi aur kalaam me talaash kareN.... Doosrii baat ye pratiyogitaa tasweer ko madde nazar rakhte hue aayojit kii gayee hai, jisme likhne ki koi bandish bhi nahi hai bas kalaam ka matter us tasweer se mel khata huaa hona chahiye... jo ki tabhi aayega jab aap tasweer ke saamne baith kar apni kalam kaa jaadu chalaaenge... mujhe ummeed hai aap sab is paimaane me khare utrenge... aap sab ko meri jaanib se dher saari mubaarakbaad... koi bhi baat pareshan kare to khaadim ko yaad kijiyega.... shukriyaa Shaad.... |
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3rd March 2014, 04:56 PM
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3rd March 2014, 06:29 PM
Arvindji & Sameerbhai,
Aap dono ka teh-e-dil se shukriya........ ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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3rd March 2014, 06:45 PM
Ankahee baatein tumse, aankhon ko meri kehne do
Chalak pade hain aansoo, roko na, inhein behne do Kabse teri yaad ne tujhse, tanha, mujhe rehne na diya Mujhko meri tanhai mein chhoro, roko na, ab rehne do Kab tak teri raah niharun, kab tak jhuthe muskaoon, Mujhko mere dard mubaraq, roko na, bas sehne do Ranj tera, armaan tere, zakhm tera, ehsaan tere, Sab is aansoo mein simte hain, roko na, ise behne do |
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Kya khub naghma pesh kiya hai qabil e daad rahee ye peshkash Adil ka namaskaar ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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4th March 2014, 10:51 AM
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4th March 2014, 11:20 AM
we are waiting from ur side demonprince...
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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5th March 2014, 10:22 AM
Sunitaa dee.... bahot acchi acchii rachnaaeN shaamil ho rahi hain is pratiyogitaa meiN...
bahot acchii baat hai ye SDC ki safaltaa ke liye.... aur ye sab aap sab ki duaaoN ka nateejaa hai.... keep remember us in your prayers.... thanks Shaad... |
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5th March 2014, 11:10 AM
भगवान् अगले जन्म मुझे बेटी ना बनाना भगवान् अगले जन्म मुझे बेटी ना बनाना कुछ अपने घरों में हर साल कन्या पूजन करवाते हैं कुछ बेदर्दी कोख में बेटी मारने की दूकान चलाते हैं क्यों बेटों की चाह को हम, मन में पालते हैं ? अपनी बेटियों को क्यों नही हम संभालते हैं ? क्या बेटी होना पाप है ? कोई मुझे समझाना भगवान् अगले जन्म मुझे बेटी ना बनाना भगवान् अगले जन्म मुझे बेटी ना बनाना अगर बेटी जन्म ले ले, तो ताने सहती है बेटी घर का बोझ है, दुनिया ये कहती है अपने ही घर से निकलना भी दुश्वार है अपने ही माँ बाप का ये कैसा प्यार है ? बेटियाँ बोझ नही है, दुनियाँ को ये है बताना भगवान् अगले जन्म मुझे बेटी ना बनाना भगवान् अगले जन्म मुझे बेटी ना बनाना अपना ये कैसा नंगा संसार है ? जहां होती आबरू तार-तार है पूजा करें सरस्वती, काली, माता शेरोवाली की कस्मे खाते है सभी बेटियोँ की रखवाली की औरत को देखते ही, क्यों बदलता है ज़माना ? भगवान् अगले जन्म मुझे बेटी ना बनाना भगवान् अगले जन्म मुझे बेटी ना बनाना इस पत्थर दुनियाँ का नही कोई जवाब है बेटियोँ के लिए ये दुनियाँ बड़ी खराब है आज का इन्सान खुद को कहता भगवान् है बेटियों के लिए हर मन में शैतान है कब होगा बंद ? बेटियोँ पर ज़ुल्म ढाना भगवान् अगले जन्म मुझे बेटी ना बनाना भगवान् अगले जन्म मुझे बेटी ना बनाना धन- दौलत ना मेरे बाबुल के पास है ये सोच कर ससुराल में बेटी उदास है दहेज़ की नित नई-नई मांगे होती हैं अकेले में बैठी बेटी दिन-रात रोती है कब बंद दहेज़ होगा ? कब होगा बंद बेटियों को जलाना ? भगवान् अगले जन्म मुझे बेटी ना बनाना भगवान् अगले जन्म मुझे बेटी ना बनाना zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! =========================== sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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5th March 2014, 11:16 AM
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Aapka bahot bahot shukriya ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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5th March 2014, 12:01 PM
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Aap bhee kuch pesh kijiye.... Hamein intezaar rahega.................. Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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5th March 2014, 12:06 PM
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Bahot hi achchhee tarah se aapne eese pesh kiya hai... 2006 kee film umraao jaan se Javed Akhtar saab ne qalam kiya gaanaa, "agale janam mohe bitya naa kijo" kee yaad dila dee..... Adil ka namaskaar............. ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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5th March 2014, 12:23 PM
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bahot hi khoob aur samvedansheel kavitaa likhi hai aapne Rajeev ji.... samaaj ke muh par tamaacha hai ye kavitaa.... meri taraf se bahot bahot shubh kaamnaaeN aapko...... all the best Shaad.... |
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5th March 2014, 01:18 PM
rajeev g...bahut hee khoob likha hai.......ek marmik chitran....ehsaason ka..
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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6th March 2014, 08:12 PM
kuch alfaz mila to tujhe aawaz diya.,
kuch aahat mila to tujhe aawaz diya., itna utar gai teri muhbbt maine..! dard mila to bhi bus tujhe aawaz diya.. bhanak lagi kuch hat ke to tujhe aawaz diya.. hta dhire dhire naqb ka prda.. is bejuba is jaan ne phir tujhe aawaz diya.. khusiyo miane khikhilaye tum jo mai ne aawaz diya.. sath sath roye hum jab mani ne aakhiri aawaz diya.. tadp utha tera dil bhi jab dil se aawaz diya.. khamosh ho gya har ek lmha jab.. 'alvida' ka main ne akhiri aawaz diya.. Dard hua badan pe to tujhe aawaz diya.. hta jo sar dhad se dhire dhire.. is bejuba si jan ne phir tujhe aawaj diya.. dekhte dekhte masum najro ne tujhe aawaz diya.. aakhir bar tujhe khuch isara kar aawaz diya.. rok rakhe the tum bhi jab akhiri dum nikla.. stabdh ho gya teri palke jab 'alvida' ka mai ne aawaz diya.. kuch mangi dua to tujhe aawaz diya.. kuch muhbbt mili to tujhe aawaz diya.. itna utar tujhme.. nasib jo mila bhi to mujhe tujhe hi aawaz diya.. roye sisk sisk ke to tujhe aawaz diya.. bante rhe dhire dhire fasla tum.. is nachiz si abla ne phir tujhe aawaz diya.. man gaye jo tum mai ne aawaz diya.. sath lane waalid, mai ne aawaz diya.. walidah bhi roye walid bhi roye jab aawaj diya.. khamosh ho gya har lmha jab.. 'alvida' ka aawaz diya.. ek beti ne jab.. akhiri dua maine aapka nam diya.. ro pada katra katre., jab mai ne.. 'alvida' ka akhiri aawaz diya.. ~ : JYOTIBA ASHOK ''SULTAAN'' |
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7th March 2014, 02:12 AM
Shoaib bhai, pehle to meri daad qubool kijiye aapke is nayaab khayaal par...ek tasveer par kahani banana har shayar ka khwaab hota hai..afsoos ki mera der se aana hua par kehte hai na der aaye durust aaye..
pesh-e-qidmat hai mere qalam se likhi rachna jo aapki bataayi huyi tasveer par bana paaya hoon..Umeed hai pasand aayeGii.. ret par let kar teri aahat ka ehsaas hota hai bhul jaate hai har gham, tu jo paas hota hai kuch is tarah si ho gayi hai aadat apni behte paani se bhi ab 'ikhtilaat' hota hai Ikhtilaat = intimacy Bheegti hai palkein to lagta hai ki tum aaoge jaanti hooN mein ki mujhko na yun rulaaoge khuli palkein to ho jaate hai ojhal sapne tasveer-e-khwaab mein bhi kabhi 'kaaenaat' hota hai muskurahat ki mere ilm hoti nahi hai duniya ko teri furkat mein yeh bhi 'itefaaq' hota hai bhul jaate hai har gham, tu jo paas hota hai ret par let kar teri aahat ka ehsaas hota hai... Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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7th March 2014, 12:08 PM
sabhee doston ne bahot hi Khoob Likhaa hai... aap sab ko dil se mubaaraqbaad
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