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Love umar bhar - 14th July 2008, 10:19 PM

dekhya jashne bahar umar bhar
labheya dil da karar umar bhar
main tera birha handaia bath ke
dharti thale pairan bhar umar bhar
na koi alfaj ne jo kar sakan
terian siftain oo yarra umar bhar
kar batha itbar tera eh he mera gunah c
hun kinjh sahainga peed gam di umar bhar

   
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16th July 2008, 02:25 AM

bahut hi khoob sanamdeep ji, eh line ta bahut hi sohni aa

main tera birha handaia bath ke
dharti thale pairan bhar umar bhar


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16th July 2008, 07:14 PM

bahut sohna ji........vadia likhiya.....
peed teri jar laga umar bhar.
ho ske ta tu v kde yaad mainu kar.
meri ta zindgi naam tere bas.
ho ske ta kde kri mere muhre mera hi zikar.....
   
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16th July 2008, 09:39 PM

shukria y g lines bhejn layi bohat wadia ne g
   
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17th July 2008, 12:56 PM

Sanamdeep ji gazal bahut naam kamaaogey. It is very good.


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17th July 2008, 03:57 PM

[quote=sanamdeep;296937]dekhya jashne bahar umar bhar
labheya dil da karar umar bhar
main tera birha handaia bath ke
dharti thale pairan bhar umar bhar
na koi alfaj ne jo kar sakan
terian siftain oo yarra umar bhar
kar batha itbar tera eh he mera gunah c
hun kinjh sahainga peed gam di umar bhar
tusi bahut hi sohna likhde ho Sanamdeep ji
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11th April 2011, 05:29 PM

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dekhya jashne bahar umar bhar
labheya dil da karar umar bhar
main tera birha handaia bath ke
dharti thale pairan bhar umar bhar
na koi alfaj ne jo kar sakan
terian siftain oo yarra umar bhar
kar batha itbar tera eh he mera gunah c
hun kinjh sahainga peed gam di umar bhar
Good One ...... Sanamdeep Ji !

bahut asardaar lagi .. hume aapki rachnaa ... !
tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...

aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi .. khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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11th April 2011, 05:33 PM

thanx naresh g , bohat bohat shukria is nacheej ki rachna ko daad dene ka
   
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